【课件】Unit+1Reading+for+writing高一英语人教版（2019）必修第一册.pptx

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1、 Unit1 Teenage lifeReading for Writing How to write a letter of advice2目录CONTENTSTeaching Objectives1.Study the organization and language features(语言特点语言特点)of a letter of advice;2.Master the method of writing a letter of advice.3.Practise writing a letter of advice.Game AddictionBullyingSmokingLack

2、of support from familyDepressionPeer-Pressure Teenagers may meet lots of proplems inside and outside school.Have you ever had such proplems?What did or will you do?Puppy lovelet it go/let it be任他去，放下/顺其自然turn to parentsask teahers for helpwrite to Agony Aunt/advisersself-regulate自我调节talk to friends知

3、心姐姐知心姐姐1.What is Worried Friends problem?2.What are Susan Luos suggestions?Worried Friend thinks that his friend plays computer games too often and spends too much time online.12Worried Friend can talk to his friend about his behaviour and encourage his friend to try new hobbies.Step1.ReadingGreetin

4、gClose Signature Main Body2).Get the structure(结构结构)of the letter.DateStep2.Pre-writingA.I know what the problem is.B.I understand how you feel.C.This is my advice and reason(s).D.I think my advice will help.3).Study the organisationA.Write the date and greet the reader.B.Show the reader that you kn

5、ow what the problem is.D.Tell the reader what you think he/she should do and explain your reasons.E.Tell the reader what you think will happen.F.Close and signature.C.Show the reader that you understand how he/she feels.A.Write the date and greet the reader.1.10 November 2019 November 10th 20192.Dea

6、r Bob,Dear worried friend,My dear friend，Dear Madam/Sir B.Show the reader that you know what the problem is.1.After I read your letter,I am sorry to know that you have the problem of how to make friends in high school.2.I am glad to hear that you want to join in your school football team.3.In your l

7、etter,you said you are not good at communicating with others.C.Show the reader that you understand how he/she feels.1.I understand quite well that you are anxious and feel terrible.2.I know that you are at a loss about what to choose.3.I understand that you always feel lonely after school.D.Tell the

8、 reader what you think he/she should do and explain your reasons.1.I feel that it would be beneficial if you talk about it with your friend because it can make him realize the problem.2.I would like to suggest/recommend that3.If I were you,I would4.You may consider doingbecause.E.Tell the reader wha

9、t you think will happen.1.I am sure hell listen to you,since you are his good friend.2.I hope youll soon get accustomed to the new life there.3.I believe everything will be better soon.F.Close and signature1.All the best.Best wishes.Best regards.2.Yours sincerely,Li Hua Lovingly yours，Li Hua Yours,L

10、i Hua4).Study the language features:What expressions does Ms Luo use to make suggestions?Circle them.I recommend that.I think you should.Why not.Some useful Some useful Some useful Some useful expressions for expressions for expressions for expressions for writingwritingwritingwritingAccording to th

11、e letter of advice，when we write a letter of advice,we can learn to use the following outline.（写作模板）(Greeting)Dear Mr Worried，(Tell the reader you know what the problem is.)I have received your letter asking me for advice about .(Tell the reader you know/understand how he/she feels.)I can well under

12、stand that you are feeling .(Tell the reader what you think he/she should do.)I recommend that you should .Besides,it is a good idea to .Why not？(Tell the reader what you think will happen.)I am sure that .(Close and sign the letter.)All the best.Yours，_Three problems that most Three problems that m

13、ost students in our class are facing.students in our class are facing.Im worried about keeping up with the other students in my study,feeling anxious and lack of confidence.I have trouble in learning English,especially remembering the new words.I always forget it the next day.Challenge yourselves -W

14、e are the advisers 我们是大顾问!Step 1 Discuss one of the problems .Step 2 Draft(起草起草)your letter according to the outline on Page19.Step 3 Exchange and revise(修改修改)your draft with your partner.Step 4 Share your writing.Write a letter of advice to your worried classmate.Step3.Discuss the Top1 problems wit

15、h teammates.Top1 ProblemIm worried about keeping up with the other students in my study,feeling anxious and lack of confidence.Suggestion1 Reason Suggestion2 Reason Suggestion3 Reason While discussing,do remember to use expressions of writing a letter of advice!_Dear_,You wrote that_(problem)(proble

16、m)_.I understand that _(understanding)understanding)_.I think _(suggetionsuggetion)_,because _(reason)(reason)_.I am sure that_(confidence)(confidence)_.Best wishes,_t the problemhe problemyour understandingyour understandingyour advice and your advice and the reasonsthe reasonsyour confidenceyour c

17、onfidencethe date and the date and the greetingthe greetingthe close and the close and the signaturethe signature Step4.Draft your letter according to the outline on P19.Step5.Exchange and revise your draft with your partner.Are all the parts of a letter included and organised in a good order?Does t

18、he writer give reasons for the advice?Does the writer use proper expressions to give suggestions?Does the writer use commas and stops correctly?Is the handwriting easy to read?The checklist may help you.The checklist may help you.The checklist may help you.The checklist may help you.写完之后，同伴之间或者小组成员之

19、间交换批改，找出习作中的不足或错误，然后再结合别人的反馈进行修改完善。批改的时候可以参考下表：项目项目角度角度具体评价具体评价(结合结合习作习作写写出具体内容出具体内容)文章结构文章结构是否结构清晰是否结构清晰,思路流畅思路流畅,符合学生简介符合学生简介的常用结构的常用结构主题词汇主题词汇是否充分有效运用了【素材积累】中的是否充分有效运用了【素材积累】中的主题词汇主题词汇(在右栏写出所用到的词汇在右栏写出所用到的词汇)主题句型主题句型是否充分有效运用了【素材积累】中的是否充分有效运用了【素材积累】中的主题句型主题句型(在右栏写出所用到的句型在右栏写出所用到的句型)知识错误知识错误单词拼写、语法

20、错误等单词拼写、语法错误等其他不足其他不足整体评价整体评价My try:14 September 2021,Dear worried classmate，Im sorry to hear that you are worried about keeping up with the other students in your study,feeling anxious and lack of confidence.However,the situation is easy to change if you take my advice.I recommend you to calm down

21、and adjust yourself,because being worried and anxious is not good for your health.Besides,you should believe in yourself.As we all know,confidence is a key to success.Confidence makes you happy and creative.Whats more,why not made a workable study plan.By doing this,you will catch up with others ste

22、p by step.In order not to make things worse,you had better talk to your friends,parents and teachers,who will offer you some helpful suggestions.In my opinion,a little stress can be beneficial.You need to worry too much.At last,I will be glad if you find my suggestions useful/helpful.Best wishes!Mis

23、s Wang Step6.Share your writing.Put up in the classroom宾语从句宾语从句 (Para1)You wrote that you are very worried about your friend,Chen Lei.(Para1)I understand quite well that you are anxious and feel terrible.(Para1)You think that your friend plays computer games too often and spends too much time online

24、.(Para2)I recommend that you talk to your friend about his behaviour.5).Advanced sentence pattern 高级句型高级句型(Para2)It is not unusual for teenagers of your generation to be attracted to computer games and the online world.(Para2)But is unhealthy and makes very difficult.(Para2)I think you should encour

25、age your friend to try new hobbies.(Para2)I am sure he will listen to you since you are his good friend.it做形式主语做形式主语不定式做真正主语不定式做真正主语宾语从句宾语从句learn how to write a letter of advice.建议信写作注意事项1、表明写信的原因、建议的内容、提出建议的理由，其中提出的理 由要合情合理，具有说服力。2、语气要诚恳/委婉，注意礼貌当先。3、内容简明扼要、目的明确。4、建议的角度要多样化，避免重复，而且要注意建议之间的衔接。5、基本时态多

26、用一般现在时和一般将来时。模板素材1、常用句型A.建议信开头时常用句式（呼应材料，表明写作意图）1.After I read your letter in the newspaper,I am sorry to know that.2.However,the situation is easy to change if you take my advice.Here are some tips to help you./Here are few suggestions.3.I am writing to express my views on/concerning.4.I am writing

27、 to share some advice/opinion with you.5.I am writing to you with the purpose of.6.I know you have trouble in.after reading your letter.7.Im glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on.8.Im sorry(that)you are having trouble/difficulty in.9.You have asked for some advice concerning.and I will

28、 try to give you my suggestions.10.Learning/Knowing that you have trouble in making friends，I am writing to give you some suggestions/offer you some advice.得知你在交友方面有困难，我写这封信的目的是给你一些建议/忠告。11.Im very glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to learn Chinese.Here are a few suggestions.很高

29、兴收到你询问我关于如何学习汉语的建议的来信，下面是我的一些建议。12.Now,Id like to share my study tips with you.现在，我想和你分享我的学习秘诀。13.The following are my suggestions./My suggestions are as follows.我的建议如下。B.提出建议时的常用句式1.First(ly),Secondly,Thirdly,2.Last but not least（最后但并不是最不重要的）3.If I were you,I would.4.In my opinion,it would be wise

30、to.5.In my opinion,the best way to solve the problem is.6.In my opinion,youd better.7.I strongly believe that.8.I suggest that you should.9.My tips are as follows.10.Only in this way can we.11.To solve the problem,we should.12.Why not do sth?/Why dont you do sth?2、中段常用句式1.Why not take part in some e

31、xtra-curricular activities？2.I strongly recommend/suggest/advise that you(should)listen to English every day.3.Youd better take exercise regularly so that you can build up your body.4.It would be a good idea if you could join in class discussions.5.How about joining a volunteer club so that you can

32、improve your ability？6.I think the most suitable solution for you is to combine your studies with relaxation.7.If I were you，I would sign up for the Summer Camp.34C.建议信结尾时的常用句式1.I believe you will take my advice into account/consideration.2.I feel that it would be better if you stick to it.3.I hope

33、whats mentioned above might be helpful.4.I hope you will find these ideas useful.5.In the end,I will be glad if you find my suggestions useful.6.I would be ready to discuss this matter to further details.7.I sincerely/do hope you will find these suggestions helpful./I sincerely/do hope my suggestion

34、s will be of benefit/use to you.8.I believe that you will take my suggestions into serious account.9.Whatever you decide to do,good luck with your studies/work!我相信你会认真考虑我的建议。无论你决定做什么，祝你学习/工作顺利！典例展示假设你是李华，你的好友Mary前不久去了英国留学。她写信告诉你她不适应英国的高中生活，感到很孤独。请你根据以下要点给她写一封建议信。内容包括：1.努力提高英语水平；2.广交朋友；3.多参加各种活动。注意：写

35、作词数应为80左右。范文赏读Dear Mary，Hearing that you have trouble adapting to your new school and meet some challenges，I feel sorry.Im willing to give you some advice.Firstly，I recommend that you sign up for advanced English classes，which can help you speak English fluently.Secondly，why not make more friends？They can help you forget your loneliness.Thirdly，it would be a good idea if you take an active part in after-class activities.I really hope that these suggestions are of great help to you.Yours，Li Hua