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1、2022中考作文训练(Mia)2022 一模作文标题1 .呈贡 I tried to overcome it.盘龙 Hope in my heart2 .五华 A sweet memory. 2022 第一次模拟 My experience of helping others3 .昆三中 A special aftcr-school activity. 官渡 The person who influenced me deeply2021年二模作文标题.五华区二模 Warmth in my life1 .云师大适应性月考Pains in my life.盘龙区二模 A lucky thing2

2、.校际合作统一考试 The best things in my life.西山区二模 The person I respect3 .三校第二次联考 I am proud of myself.官渡区二 模后 Welcome to Kunming 2021 昆明市考 Life is full of love2020 昆明市考 My last winter vacation2019 昆明市考 On my parents birthday云大 I. A sweet Memory2. An unexpected and unusual thing3. A valuable lesson4. The mi

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7、里写哪里，使上下文无逻辑单词或短语错用，致使彻底改变想表达的含义，阅卷时读不懂想表达的含义正文段不分点，没有明确表明从几个角度来表达观点语言通顺拼写、用词、短语、书写错误，使句子不通顺句子结构乱用，写出来的不是句子，固然不能通顺盲目追求成分复杂，不按照句型结构书写，复合句多简单句少，逻辑不清标点符号乱用书写混乱,无法识别词意书写规范不打草稿随意涂改字迹潦草中考作文指导（改进建议）审题看清标题写人还是记事单数还是复数要表达的主旨是什么；形容词的含义是什么；这个含义如何体现用第几人称来写主要时态是什么列提纲第一段，开门见山（2-3句话，引入话题，明确要写的人或事，引起下文）第二段：典型事例直指主题

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9、卡上工整，不涂改按字母占格书写，注意大1号写人作文The most beautiful person in my heartNever will I forget my Chinese teacher who helped me when I got into trouble. She is like a beam of sunshine, illuminating me. She is the most beautiful person in my heart.That was in my Grade 7, when I was weak in Chinese. Staring at my

10、poor Chinese grade, I couldnt stop sobbing. After class, my teacher asked me to go to her office. To my surprise, she didnt criticize me, but told me how to leam Chinese well. Since then, I studied harder than any other student in my class. So I got better grade at the end of the term. What my teach

11、er said helped me a lot!It is my Chinese teacher who is (he most beautiful person in my heart. She is the best teacher that I have ever met!The most beautiful person in my heartAs the saying goes, A friend in need is a friend indeed. Never will I forget my best friend, Amy, who is (he most beautiful

12、 person in my heart.Look back at my Grade 7, when 1 was not confident in English. One day, I copied an essay as my homework. Unfortunately, iny teacher found it and criticized me in front of the whole class. When I sobbed in my arms, it was Amy who gave me encouragement. After that, she went out of

13、her way to help me so that my English has improved a lot.How warm and friendly she is! I think (he true beauty is not only the appearance of a person but also a kind heart of the person.The person I love mostAs we all know, life is full of love. My mother is just the person who I love most. If there

14、 is another life, i hope (o be moms son again.One evening, it was raining heavily outside. Unluckily, I got a bad headache. After touching my forehead, my mom took me on her back and ran to the nearby hospital without thinking twice. She held an umbrella to protect her son on her back from the heavy

15、 rain. When we got to the hospital, my mom was wet through. I burst into tears when seeing the rain dripping from her hair.There is no denying that my mom gives me all her love and the whole world. What she has done for me clearly shows she loves me far more than herself. In return, its time for me

16、to try my best to love and look after my beloved mother.The person I love mostIf you ask me who I love most, I will tell you “my ftnher“ without hesitation, not because of what he has done fbr me, but the positive attitude he gives to me.My father is very (hin and tall, which makes some people doubt

17、 that he will be blown away by (he strong wind in my hometown. However, in my memory, my father seldom fell ill, and it seems there is nothing that can trouble him, because he always smiles and tolerates everything happening to him. No matter who is in trouble, he must be the first person to give a

18、hand, so people around him always think highly of him. Meanwhile my father never blames me fbr my mistakes, instead, he encourages me to stand up and try again. He believes “Failure is the mother of success. It is my father who gives me the courage to overcome the difficulties.Thanks to my father, h

19、e sets a good example to me, which helps me grow into a happy and healthy person. How cant I love my father!The Hero in My HeartJust like Stan Lee once said, theres a hero in all of us. Maybe hes a great man, or maybe hes just a common man. In my heart, Zhong Nanshan is a hero. While facing the spre

20、ad of the novel coronavirus, he kept calm and spared no effort to save lives. He not only led but also took an active part in the battle against the disease.As we all know, the disease outbroke just before (he Spring Festival. Zhong Nanshan, an 84-year-old medical professor, strongly suggested peopl

21、e not to go to Wuhan to keep safe. However, he himself went there to help treat the patients. Since then, he has been working on the front line with other medical workers. Zhong also led an expert team to do research and tried to find better ways to deal with the disease. He and thousands of other m

22、edical workers are an inspiration to the whole nation. They encourage us to fight bravely against the disease and finally win this battle.I greatly admire Zhong Nanshan and regard him as a hero. I will learn from him and make an effort co do something meaningful for others.The Hero in My HeartJust l

23、ike Stan Lee once said, theres a hero in all of us. Maybe hes a great man, or maybe hes just a common man. In my heart, those who selflessly help people who are in need are definitely heroes. And I would like to introduce to you someone I hold as a hero in my heart - my uncle.My uncle has a very spe

24、cial job - a fire fighter. Being a fire fighter means that he puts his life on the line whenever he is called for duty. When he fights with a burning building, or takes risks to help those who are trapped in a fire, he puts his own safety aside and rushes into the dangerous area over and over again.

25、 He has saved a large number of lives.He buys toys and presents for me just like any other uncle, and even takes care of me when my parents are busy. I am really thankful for all that he has done, not just for me and my family, but also for the many families and lives he has saved and will save in t

26、he future. Ill try to be a person like him.【写事作文】一、审题(时态、人称、故事)1 .大家的问题：故事没有选好，不怎么感动，不怎么合理，所以一定先搭个框架再落笔开头有些啰嗦结尾没有扣题，写成了歌颂做这件事的人，让人觉得偏题语法错误多，时态乱，拼写错误多作文题目没誉写或答写错了.考前准备一个比较典型的人，和一个典型的事情，备用。考场上看到题目不要先想自己背了什么作文，先静下来 认真审题，再搜索是否储存了相应的作文，-味的套自己准备的作文容易偏题，这个比语法错误更严重。2 .备用故事：图漂亮不穿外衣，结果变天，绝望之际自己妈妈拿着外衣出现在面前跟妈妈赌

27、气跑出去，结果迷路了，慌忙回转之际发现妈妈一直默默跟在后面意外受伤，妈妈看到哭得比我伤心考前紧张奋斗，发现桌前总有一杯温度适中的水考试失败爸爸妈妈的鼓励演讲紧张之际老师带头鼓掌喊加油叔叔丢下刚出生的女儿去武汉做志愿者，因为医生的职责An Unforgettable ThingIt is (he thing which happened on the cold winter morning that teaches me an unforgettable lesson.One morning, as I stepped out of the warm restaurant after a qui

28、ck breakfast, I noticed an old lady begging on the street for food. I came to her and threw her some money and then rushed to the bus stop. Waiting for the bus, 1 saw niy friend Andrew taking the old lady into the restaurant. After I pushed myself into the bus successfully, looking out of the bus wi

29、ndow, I found (he old lady was eating something al the table. Andrew sat beside her patiently. I could see (he happiness on the old ladys face clearly.What an unforgettable experience and I felt a deep sense of shame. At that moment, I realized even if someone was really in need, he or she should be

30、 helped with dignity.An Unforgettable ThingEvery time when I pass by the road where my grandma once lived, the last day we met will appear in my mind.Hearing my grandma was terribly ill, I rushed to the hospital only to see a thin body lying on the bed peacefully. Holding her hands tightly, I cried

31、out “grandma“ again and again, but there wasnt any response. Suddenly, I found a photo on her pillow. Your grandma missed you so much and held the photo every moment, but she was afraid to disturb your work so she ordered us not to tell you! my aunt sobbed. I hugged my grandma with my shaking hands

32、and was nearly in flood of tears. How I regretted losing the chance to tell her my love!Ever since then, I have never hesitated to show my love to the ones I care.A moving experienceLooking back al the past three years, I had lots of special experiences. And here is the most moving one.Last year, ou

33、r basketball team has an important match. We were very close to the victory but still failed because of my fault, so I was angry with myself. I just sal alone and said nothing. I supposed everyone in (he team would feel disappointed at me. However, much (o my surprise, my (eammales sat by me and pas

34、sed me a bottle of water. They said we were the best team and I was the best player even though we lost the game (his time. My teammate and coach tried (heir best to cheer me up. I still remember my coach said, “Winning or losing is only half of a match and the other half is the teamwork. Youve pull

35、ed together to play. Thats enough. These words moved me deeply and I felt warm inside.As the saying goes, “One thread breaks easily, and ten thousand thread pull a boat. I finally understood the meaning of “teamwork”.The best memoryAs the old saying goes, 44It is better to travel ten thousand miles

36、than to read thousand books. The trip I went to Beijing is the best memory in my life.I went to Beijing with my classmates last winter vacation. Wc decided to visit the Great Wall first. Unfortunately, wc met a rainy day. The most terrible thing was that wc didnt bring umbrellas with us. While we we

37、re regretting not enjoying the beauty of the Great Wall, the sun appeared, smiling in the sky with a beautiful rainbow, which made the Great Wall grander. It was such a big surprise for us.Actually, rainbow always comes out after the storm, fantastic things always come out after waiting. What a grea

38、t memory it is!My dream jobThe happiest thing in the world is to struggle for the ideal. Being a doctor must be a dream job for me.This year, I was deeply moved by the doctors who went to Wuhan to save other peoples lives. I hope to be a person like them. To achieve my dream, I will study harder and

39、 harder. And I am thirsty to get into a good university to study more useful knowledge. Whats more, I will spare no effort to attend volunteers job to help the people in need.No one can predict the future, but I will hold on my dream and try my best. With my strong willing, Im sure iny dream will co

40、me true. As a saying goes, “Where there is a will, there is a way.”The most meaningful activityAs a Grade Nine student, although Im busy with my study, I take part in variety of activities at school. And the 1000-ine(er race is (he most meaningful one.I took part in this race last year. I tried my b

41、est and I believed I could hold on to the finishing line because I had practiced running very hard. I felt great for the first 400 meters, but my knees became weak when I began the final dash. I kept thinking to myself, Dont be knocked down! You can do it!” To my great joy, I made it! I brought hono

42、ur to not only myself, but also my class.Therefore, the 1000-meter race is the most meaningful activity (hat I have ever taken part in.A good beginningSpeaking of the most unforgettable thing that I have experienced, one small thing comes to my mind at once.1. In my memories, there were a lot of thi

43、ngs. Something was interesting, and something was unforgettable. I am eager to share my unforgettable thing with you.2. In my memory, there arc many things that moved me. But a little thing like the stars in the sky, shining in my heart, let me never forget.3. In my life, there were so many wonderfu

44、l memories that made me unforgettable. And I will never forget one thing (hat impressed me very much. I am eager to share my unforgettable thing with you.4. Everyone has a thing that he or she will never forget. It might be simple but meaningful. So do I. Today, I will share one with all of youEveryone has their own sweet middle school memories. One of my middle school memories is special for me. Td like to share it with all of you.5. During the proc