高中英语2024新高考读后续写指导（收尾技巧+万能结尾）.doc

《高中英语2024新高考读后续写指导（收尾技巧+万能结尾）.doc》由会员分享，可在线阅读，更多相关《高中英语2024新高考读后续写指导（收尾技巧+万能结尾）.doc（5页珍藏版）》请在淘文阁 - 分享文档赚钱的网站上搜索。

1、新高考英语读后续写指导一、精彩高分收尾技巧（一）画面定格这样的收尾引人入胜，给人无限想象空间，让人回味无穷。考生可以从人物动作的画面和具有特殊寓意的写景画面两个方面定格。1.人物动作的画面定格（2020杭州五校联考）They stood there for a moment, side by side, waiting for the rushing holiday current and for their place in it.Then the daughter glanced over and momentarily regarded her mother.And slowly, al

2、most reluctantly, she placed her arm with apparently unaccustomed affection around her mothers shoulders and gently guided her back into the deluge.她们并肩站在那里，等待着节日的浪潮，等待着她们在浪潮中的位置。然后女儿扫了一眼，立刻注视着她的母亲。慢慢地，几乎是不情愿地，带着明显不习惯的爱她把胳膊放在她母亲的肩膀上，轻轻地引导她回到洪水中。His hard work paid off! Holding the soda tin firmly, Re

3、uben rushed for the shop to buy the brooch.The moment he got the beautiful brooch, he burst through the front door and placed it in Doras hand.Never had Dora received such a gift.Speechless and happy, she held her son tightly into her arms, with tears welling up in her eyes.他的努力得到了回报！鲁本紧紧地握着汽水罐，冲向商店

4、去买胸针。他一拿到那枚漂亮的胸针，就冲进前门，把它放在朵拉的手里。多拉从来没有收到过这样的礼物。她高兴得说不出话来，紧紧地把儿子抱在怀里，眼泪涌了出来。The butterfly cleaned her tears on the face, “No.” God felt a bit relieved and said, “Tomorrow you can become human again.” But she shook her head and said, “No, I want to be a butterfly for the rest of my life.” Then the bu

5、tterfly would stay together with her lover forever.On the top of the mountain, she seemed to enjoy the sunrise and the sunset happily with them.蝴蝶擦干了脸上的眼泪，说，“不。”上帝松了一口气，说。“明天你就可以变回人类了。”但她摇了摇头说，“不，我想做一辈子蝴蝶.”然后蝴蝶就会永远和她的爱人在一起。在山顶上，她似乎和他们一起快乐地享受着日出和日落2.特殊寓意的写景画面定格The sky was a billion pure eyes of light

6、 and the grass green underfoot, it was as if night and day had become one beautiful moment.Dawn had come.天空像是一亿只纯净的眼睛拼接在一起，脚下是青草，仿佛黑夜和白昼已成为一个美丽的时刻。黎明已经来临。（黎明到来的画面）The crystal and cerulean water was gentle as I waded through it, the sunset like orange paint on a blue canvas.当我涉过水晶般天蓝色的轻柔的水时，日落就像蓝色画布上

7、的橙色颜料。（美好日落时的画面）The moon under siege by stars seemed to lighten the night bringing forth stars that shone and hung in the blackness.The never ending blackness consumed everything.被群星围困的月亮似乎照亮了黑夜，带来了在黑暗中闪耀和悬挂着的群星。无尽的黑暗吞噬了一切。（描写夜空的画面）Looking up, I saw the sun shine brighter than I ever knew before.I s

8、aw a tree in the distance glisten gently as it reflected the suns rays.My consciousness ebbed away with the heat.I took a few blinks before I landed with a thud.抬头一看，我看到太阳比我以前所知道的还要明亮。我看见远处有一棵树反射着太阳光，发出柔和的光辉。我的意识随着热度而衰退。我眨了眨眼，然后摔倒在地才猛然回到现实中，恢复了知觉。（特殊寓意）Kissed by the rain and glistening, the wet grou

9、nd is cold under foot.A dense earthly sweet smell rises from the ground, enveloping everything within its soft embrace.潮湿的地面走起来很冷，被雨水亲吻后闪闪发光。一股浓郁的泥土般的香味从地上升起，把一切都包裹在它柔软的怀抱里。（雨后清新的画面）The rain drummed on the window, bidding farewell to the last beam of sunlight.雨水打着窗户，向最后一缕阳光告别。（雨水来临的画面）The leaves cru

10、nched beneath my feet as I strolled down the street.Occasionally, one would fall past me, lightly swaying as the air gently carried it to the ground.我在街上漫步时，树叶在我脚下嘎吱作响。偶尔，有叶子会从我身边掉下来，轻轻地摇晃，缓缓落到到地面。（描写落叶的画面）（二）对话收尾 以简单的对话形式结尾，适合记叙文续写，日常、简单又灵活。Chester said his father told him he had tried to search fo

11、r him and his brother, but both brothers had changed their last names.”He does remember me and my older brother and he told me that hes been looking for us ever since we lost contact,” he said.Chester said his brother has since flown to Colombia to be reunited with Urrea as well.When asked how the r

12、eunion with his father will change his life, Chester said,”I got family everywhere, so it might lead to many more trips now.”Chester说他父亲告诉他，他曾试图寻找他和他哥哥，但两兄弟都改了姓。他说：“他确实记得我和我哥哥，他告诉我，自从我们失去联系，他就一直在找我们，” Chester说他哥哥也飞去哥伦比亚和Urrea团聚了。当被问及与父亲的团聚会如何改变他的生活时，Chester说，“我的家人无处不在，所以现在可能会有更多的出行。”What was most fa

13、scinating about the reunion is that Shavi also moves others.Ninas family had moved to a bigger apartment.” Ive heard amazing stories about dogs loyalty, but I never imagined this sort of thing would ever happen to me.Even now, I can hardly believe this dog traveled such a long distance to find us, ”

14、 said Nina, ”I would never give this kind of friend away again.I never grow tired of repeating thisanimals are the most devoted and loving creatures.They need our love and care.”这次重聚最吸引人的地方在于，Shavi也打动了其他人。Nina的家人搬到了一个更大的公寓。“我听说过狗狗忠心耿耿的故事，但我从没想过这种事会发生在我身上。即使是现在，我也很难相信这只狗走了这么远的路来找我们，“Nina说，“我再也不会放弃这祥的

15、朋友了。我总是不厌其烦地重复这句话一一动物是最志诚和最可爱的生物。他们需要我们的爱和关心。”They hung all the things back to the wall.Jack asked Paisley, “Are you really willing to lead a tough life with me？” She patted away the ashes on hands and looked at the walls with loads of stuff on them satisfactorily, saying, ”Yes! For me，it is not a s

16、uffering to live.”他们把所有的东西都挂回墙上。杰克问佩斯利:“你真的愿意和我一起过难的生活吗?”她拍拍手上的骨灰，满意地看着墙上挂满东西的墙，说“是的！对我来说，活着不是一种痛苦。”（三）主题升华最后以升华主题结尾，起到总结全文的作用。从故事引出道理，由浅入深，这种写法更高级、更考验考生对短文的理解能力和概括能力。Everyone has one person they look up to as a role model.To me there is none other than my mom.She has beauty, brains, and one of the

17、best hearts I know.Without her in my life, I would have no idea whether I can be a famous dancer.Someday, when I am older and have children of my own, I hope I can be just as great a parent as my mom.（母爱的深远影响）每个人都有一个榜样。对我来说，不是别人，正是我妈妈。她很漂亮，很聪明，而且是我认识的最用心的人之一。如果没有她，我不知道我能不能成为一个著名的舞者。有一天，当我长大了，有了自己的孩子

18、，我希望我能成为像我妈妈一样伟大的父（母）亲。.I am extremely unhappy about it.I think money doesnt equal happiness.And free life style also doesnt equal happiness.The real happiness is that everyone loves each other, and does everything useful for our society.Most of my classmates support me.But some of them think money

19、is everything.In my opinion, money cant take the place of everything, such as your life, your time and your happiness.(表达自己的价值观）我对此非常不高兴。我觉得金钱不等于幸福。自由的生活方式也不等于幸福。真正的幸福是每个人都彼此相爱，为我们的社会做一切有益的事情。大多数同学都支持我。但有些人认为钱就是一切。在我看来，金钱不能代替一切，比如你的生活，你的时间和你的幸福。“Two reasons account for that you won,” the teacher ans

20、wered.”First, youve almost mastered one of the most difficult throws in all of judo.Second, the only known defense for that move is for your opponent to grab your left arm.It is your biggest weakness that makes you win the match.As a proverb says, Every coin has two sides. Making full use of your st

21、rength is your achievement.Please remember that in no case will you give up especially in trouble.God is fair to everyone.”(借用名言警句来升华主题）“有两个原因可以解释为什么你赢了，”老师回答。“首先，你几乎掌握了柔道中最难的一个动作。其次，这个动作唯一已知的防御方法，就是让你的对手抓住你的左臂。这是你最大的弱点，让你赢得比赛。正如谚语所说，每枚硬币都有两面。充分利用你的力量就是你的成就。请记住，在任何情况下，你都不要放弃，尤其是遇到麻烦的时候。上帝对每个人都是公平的。”

22、（四）结尾留白这样的结尾引人入胜，给予读者很大的想象空间，更具有艺术性。While she wrapped them, I took a deep breath and asked Joy, “Do you have dinner plans?” I explained that Id like to wait a bit before I went back to the hospital gave Grace and her husband some time alone with baby.“Would you be interested in joining me in a bite

23、to eat?” I asked.“Id love to,” she replied, her eyes sparkling like diamonds.And, this was the beginning of the end to my months of heartbreak following Betsys death.（故事结尾留白，给予读者想象空间）当她把它们包起来的时候，我深吸了一口气，问 Joy：“你晚餐有安排吗? ”我解释说我想等一会儿再回医院让Grace 和她丈夫有时间单独和孩子在一起。“你有兴趣和我一起吃点东西吗? ”我问。“我很乐意，”她回答，她的眼睛像钻石一样闪闪发

24、光。而且，这是我在 Betsy 死后几个月心碎的结束的开始。The beggar hesitated for a moment, then he decided to open it.He declared aloud, “Who cares? He wanted me to have it anyway.I might as well enjoy it now.” With that, he unwrapped the white tissue paper, but to his surprise, there was no hard rock candy inside.Instead, i

25、nto his fingers fell a shiny white pearl worth thousands of dollars.（出于意料的结局，给人惊喜和回味）乞丐犹豫了一会儿，然后决定打开它。他大声宣布: “谁在乎呢？不管怎样，他还是想让我拥有它。我还不如现在就享受呢。”说着，他打开了白色的纸巾，但令他惊讶的是，里面没有硬糖。相反，一颗价值数千美元的闪亮的白珍珠掉进了他的手指里。（五）首尾呼应首尾呼应的写法在语文写作中也经常使用，不仅能强调主题，引起共鸣，也能使文章结构更加紧密、严禁和自然。开头：I had an interesting childhood.It was fille

26、d with surprise and amusements, all because of my mother-loving, sweet, yet absent-minded and forgetful.One strange family trip we took when I was eleven tells a lot about her.结尾：Despite moms being absent-minded and forgetful,she was still a kind and nice mom.）开头：It was summer and my dad wanted to t

27、reat me to a vacation like never before.He decided to take me on a trip to the Wild West.结尾：Never had I had such a thrilling yet dangerous vacation before.The special trip to the Wild West was deeply engraved in my mind.开头：A funny thing happened to Arthur when he was on the way to work one day.结尾：Wh

28、at a funny day.Arthur couldnt stop laughing whenever he looked back on this hilarious（搞笑的）experience.二、万能结尾句（一）助人结尾句Only in this way could more and more people help each other in the future.只有这样，将来才能有越来越多的人互相帮助。（二）感动感悟结尾句Whether rich or poor, we should be happy to do something for society.This is be

29、cause giving is the source of happiness.无论贫富，我们都应该为社会做点什么。这是因为给予是幸福的源泉。（三）脱险结尾句That unforgettable experience was carved into my heart and nothing would be able to erase it.It turns out that theres always a way out of any trouble as long as we never give up our hope.那段难忘的经历刻在我的心里，没有什么能够抹去它。事实证明，只要我们不

30、放弃希望就总有办法摆脱困境（四）成长改变结尾句1.学习知识促“改变学习永远为时不晚。每人都应该并且有权利去接受更多的挑战，做更多的尝试。2.发挥天赋促“改变”Actually, each of us possesses a unique talent that we are born with.As long as we are good at discovering it and developing it to the fullest, and also make efforts, we can create miracles in the end.事实上,我们每个人都拥有与生俱来的与众不

31、同的天赋，只要我们善于发现它并将其发挥到极致,加上努力,最终你就一定能创造奇迹 。3.追逐梦想促“改变”Its never too late to pursue your dream.As long as you seize every opportunity and take full advantage of it, and also make every effort, you are sure to realize your dreams.追梦永远不晚。只要你抓住并充分利用机会，加上努力，你就一定会实现梦想。4.克服困难促“改变”The journey to success is no

32、t smooth.It is full of challenges and hardships.We should be brave to face them.As long as we dont give up hope and make every effort to overcome all the difficulties, we will surely achieve our goal finally.通往成功的路不会平坦，充满挑战和艰辛。我们要勇敢面对。只要不放弃希望并竭尽全力克服所有困难，我们最终会实现我们的目标。5.战胜恐惧促“改变”Determination and opti

33、mism are what it takes to conquer your fear,build your confidence and reach your goal.战胜恐惧、建立自信和实现目标，需要决心和乐观。6.战胜自卑促“改变”I smiled as I eventually realized the real source of confidence.Now, I am proud of what I look like, because I have come to realize that it is your personality that decides who you really are.我笑了，因为我最终意识到了自信的真正来源。现在，我为我的样子感到骄傲,因为我已经意识到，决定你真正是谁的是你的个性.7.战胜消极促“改变”Attitude is more important than facts for us.We cannot change our past; we cannot change the fact.However, the only thing we can do is hold a positive attitude.对我们来说，态度比事实更重要。我们不能改变我们的过去，我们不能改变事实。然而，我们唯一能做的就是保持积极的态度。5