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1、话题写作1（个人情况，居住环境，日常活动，学校生活，人际交往）话题一：个人情况话题素材串联一、常用话题词汇1 .夕卜貌：tall, short, strong, thin, handsome, good-looking, fat, beautiful/nice, look like, (be) of medium height, a round face, two big eyes, have a sweet smile, short straight hair.性格品质、与人相处:kind(beto sb.), friendly(beto sb.), strict(bewith sb.),

2、shy, quiet, active, outgoing, patient(bewith sb.), popular(bewith sb.), lovely, loving(慈爱的)，humorous, brave, funny, clever/smart, calm, get on/along with sb.2 . 职业：teacher, worker, doctor, nurse, dentist, driver, writer, engineer, farmer, policeman/policewoman, postman, actor/actress, singer, dancer

3、, scientist, musician, cook, pilot, coach, manager, businessman.兴趣爱好：hobby, like, prefer, enjoy, favorite, be fond of, be interested in体育：go fishing, go hiking, play basketball/football, running, swimming(2)收藏：collect stamps/old coins/balls/shells(贝壳)(3)其他：fly kites, read novels, write stories. 能力：b

4、e able to, be good at/do well in, learn about, learn.from, try one*s best to do sth., be talented in 二、佳句欣赏与运用谚语类A friend in need is a friend indeed.患难见真情。God helps those who help themselves.自助者天助之。Everyone has his price.天生我材必有用。人物介绍类He has a strong will and never gives up.Hes very helpful. He is al

5、ways ready to help others.My grandparents have had a great influence on me.She always encourages us to speak English as much as possible.话题四：学校生活话题素材串联一、常用话题词汇1 .学校设施：teaching building, library, playground, computer room, art room, music room, dining halL lab. 学习物品：schoolbag, pen, pencil, ruler, era

6、ser, crayon, pencil box2 .学习科目:Chinese, math(s), English, science, PE, physics, chemistry, art, music, geography, biology, history. 学校舌动：have art, join the English club, take part in the school sports meeting3 .学校规章制J度：cant run in the hallways/fight/arrive late for class/eat in the classroom/listen

7、to music in class.； have to be quiet in the library/wear school uniforms/listen carefully.； should (not) be allowed to drive/have part-time jobs/wear earrings/choose their own clothes.二、佳句欣赏与运用谚语类How time flies!时间飞逝!No pains, no gains一分耕耘，一分收获。学校和学校生活类How time flies! My middle school life will be ov

8、er.My middle school life is coining to an end.I have a lot of sweet/unforgettable memories.Our school is clean and beautiful.We enjoy studying here.Its our duty to do volunteer work to make our school more beautiful.Last weeks talent show in our school was a great success.We can plant more trees and

9、 pick up rubbish on campus.We should play a part in keeping our school clean.In a word, my three-year life in middle school is busy and colorful/meaningful/unforgettable.I hope my school will become more and more beautiful.典例剖析假如你是南昌市第二十八中学的一名学生，即将中学毕业，马上就要进入高中学习，你对未来的高中生活充满了憧憬。请你以“My Life in High S

10、chool”为题，根据表格提示内容，写一篇80词左右的英语短文(开头已给出，不计入总词数)。内容要点校园校园宁静(peaceful)而美丽，教室宽敞、明亮，是学习的好地方老师老师知识渊博(knowledgeable),既严格要求学生，又关爱学生同学与同学友好相处学习自主学习(learn by oneself)，积极参加小组活动课外活动积极参加各种课外活动(out-of-class activities),保持身体健康要求：1 .短文的标题和开头部分已给出，不计入总词数；.语句通顺，意思连贯，书写规范。My Life in High SchoolMy three-year middle scho

11、ol life will be over.And Im going to enter my high school in September.! think my high school life will be colorful.My high school will be peaceful and beautiful.lt must be a good place to study.The【写作导图】Beginning My Life in High SchoolMy three-year middle school life will be over. And Vm going to e

12、nter my high school in September.My high school will be.Main contents t The classrooms will be.The teachers.! will.ConclusionExpress your feelings：What a wonderful high school life I cant wait!【作文失分点与句子升格】失分点此类话题的作文贴合学生生活，学生相对来说比较熟悉，有话可写。结合此篇作文来说，易失分的地方主要有：1 .虽然表格中提示了要点，但是如何将信息衔接起来并过渡自然，是一大难点；.这是一篇讲

13、述未来的高中生活的作文，全篇时态应以一般将来时为主。写作时，切勿脱离作文背景，盲 目写作。一定要注意时态正确运用。句子升格（答案均在【佳作欣赏】中加粗体现）My high school will be peaceful and beautiful. There are many tall buildings in it.（用with”将两句合并为一句）1. They will be strict with students. They care for them, too.（用恰当的连词将两句连成一句，使句意保持不变）【佳作欣赏】My Life in High SchoolMy three-y

14、ear middle school life will be over.And Im going to enter my high school in September.! think my high school life will be colorful.My high school will be peaceful and beautiful with many tall buildings in it.lt must be a good place tostudy.The classrooms will be wide and bright.The teachers will be

15、knowledgeable.They will be strict with students but they care for them, too.I will get along well with my classmates.! will learn by myself and take an active part in group work.And I will take part in all kinds of out-of-class activities and keep fit.What a wonderful high school life! I cant wait!话

16、题五：人际交往话题素材串联一、常用话题词汇relationship, get on/along well with, fight with sb., argue about, quarrel（争吵）with sb., be sad/upset/stressed out, feel + a4/., make sb.+a4/.， have a problem with sb., have trouble/problems （in） doing sth., be worried about, be angry with, be mad at, communicate with, talk with,

17、 share sth.with sb., happen to, do/deal with, with the help of, look forward to.二、佳句欣赏与运用人际关系问题类My problem is that I cant get along well with my classmates.I have trouble in communicating with my pen pal in England.I feel so stressed out when my parents ask me to study hard and enter a good high sch

18、ool.Its difficult for me to go to sleep because I have so much homework to do.Whafs worse, my parents dont allow me to do what I like.人际关系问题解决类You had better regard your problems as challenges.Ifs a good idea to talk with your parents.They will understand you.I suggest that you should tell your teac

19、her the truth.At least, it shows you are honest.Sharing problems with others is a good way to deal with your problems.You should call him so that you can say youre sorry.典例剖析假如你是班长李华，请回复新同学Mike的求助邮件，给他至少3条建议并说明理由。词数不少于80（开 头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。To： Li HuaFrom： MikeHi! Li Hua,You know I am new here.I found

20、 it hard for me to get along well with people here.When I have trouble with my study, I dont know how to get help.I really want to be a good part of the class.Would you please give me some advice?I am looking forward to your reply.MikeTo： MikeFrom： Li HuaHi! MHce,Li HuaI have received your e-mailBeg

21、inand known that . Dont worry!A suggestionGive at least three suggestions and your reasons.MainContents【写作导图】Give encouragement and confidence.【作文失分点与句子升格】失分点人际沟通与学生的日常生活联系比较紧密，学生写作时往往有话可说。一般来说，引起失分的地方主要有:1 .不清楚构成建议信的要素，不知道如何安排建议信的内容；.提建议时脱离实际，没有结合问题提出可行有效的建议；2 .语句之间缺乏自然过渡，衔接不自然。句子升格（答案均在【佳作欣赏】中加粗体现

22、）I have received your e-mail.I have known that you cant get along well with people here.（用“and 连接并歹!成分” 和have difficulty in doing”升格句子）1. People enter a new environment.They will feel uncomfortable.（用“when 引导的时间状语从句升格句子）You can make friends with some students.They have the same hobbies as you.（用who

23、弓I 导的定i吾从句“升格 句子）2. You have trouble in study or in life.You can get help from them.（用“if 弓I 导的条件状语从句和ask sb.for help”升格句子）【佳作欣赏】To： MikeFrom： Li HuaHi! Mike,I have received your e-mail and known that you have difficulty in getting along well with people here.To tell you the truth, everyone will fee

24、l uncomfortable when they enter a new environment.Dont worry.I will help you solve this problem.Our class is a lovely family.All the classmates are very kind and warm-hearted.Dont be shy.Try to communicate with them.You can make friends with some students who have the same hobbies as you.You can ask

25、 them for help if you have trouble in study or in life.You should also take an active part in the class activities, because it will help you become a part of the class quickly.We are looking forward to being friends with you!Li Hua2021年江苏省连云港市我市第八届“最美港城人”系列评选活动正在进行，你班决定推荐李华参加其类别之一“最美志愿者”的评选。请你以“The

26、Most Beautiful Volunteer为题，给校英文报写一篇短文介绍李华，内容包括：（1 ）品质：礼貌、善良、有耐心；（2）事迹：乐于帮助老师和同学；周末参加各类活动，如去街道打扫卫生；另举两例;（3）你的评价：至少两条。注意：（1）词数90左右；（2）短文应包括所给内容要点，可适当发挥，使文章连贯；（3）短文中不得出现考生的真实姓名、校名等信息。The Most Beautiful Volunteer【答案】The Most Beautiful VolunteerLi Hua is a polite boy. He is both kind and patient.He is a

27、helpful volunteer. At school, he is ready to help teachers and classmates. At weekends, he takes part in lots of activities. He often does some cleaning in the street. Besides, he goes to the library to help carry books. Also, he looks after old people in the nursing home.We all think Li Hua is such

28、 an excellent boy that we should learn from him. Wed like to recommend him for The Most Beautiful Volunteer.2022年江苏省宿迁市71.实施“双减”政策，推行“阳光作业 我们同学可以从繁重的课业负担中解放出来，有更多的时间培 养兴趣爱好，陪伴家人、朋友。学校请你与学弟、学妹们分享如何合理安排课余生活，请根据下表提示完 成一篇题为“Enjoy study, enjoy life”的英语短文。Enjoy study, enjoy life校园1 .参加各种活动，如：绘画、舞蹈等；2 .多做运

29、动，有益健康；3（补充一点）家庭L畅说梦想，倾诉烦恼；2.帮做家务，学会一些生活技能；3（补充一点）注意事项：1 .词数90左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；2 .文中不得出现真实的地名、校名、人名等信息。Enjoy study, enjoy lifeBecause of the double reduction policy, we have more time to do what we like to enjoy study and life.In a word, if we spend our free time properly, we will get a lot in bot

30、h body and mind.【答案】Enjoy study, enjoy lifeBecause of the double reduction policy, we have more time to do what we like to enjoy study and life.In school, we should actively participate in various activities, such as painting, dancing, football, etc. Throughthese sports, we can make our bodies healt

31、hier and stronger. If students have difficulties, we should also activelyhelp them.At home, we should live in peace with our parents. We should talk about our dreams with them and talk about our troubles in time. Let parents know everything about us. With their support, we will get twice the result

32、with half the effort. At the same time, we should also help our parents do some housework and learn some life skills. If you are in a bad mood, you can listen to some music or do something you like.In a word, if we spend our free time properly, we will get a lot in both body and mind.2022年江苏省泰州市78.我

33、们在变化中成长，成长让我们的人生充满意义。回首三年初中时光，我们在学习、思想、性格、 生活等方面发生了很多变化。你所在学校公众号的英语写作栏目正在开展我的成长”征文活动，请分享你初 中三年中的成长故事，具体讲述其中一个变化。要点如下：1 .变化是什么？2 .变化过程是什么？3 .你从中得到了什么启发？要求：1.必须含有所有要点，并适当拓展；2,不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名等相关信息；3.词数100左右。【答案】We grow up in change. Growth makes our life full of meaning. Looking back on the three years

34、 of junior highschool, I have experienced many changes in my study, thoughts, personality, life and so on. The biggest personal change Ive ever made is that I have fallen in love with reading.When I was a child, I didnt enjoy books at all. Later, my mother always read stories fbr me and bought me bo

35、oks. Gradually, I began to love reading. While reading, I feel like talking with a wise man. Reading is also a fantastic way to enjoy my free time.Books are my friends. And they will benefit me a lot.2022年江苏省无锡市65.生命中总有一些值得我们感恩的人。最近，无锡教育电视台将举办题为“The PersonI Want to Thank 的英语演讲比赛。假如你想感谢身边某位对你有影响的人（父/

36、母亲、老师、朋友.），请根据以下流程图 写一篇英文演讲稿参加比赛。注意事项：1 .演讲稿须根据流程图自拟，要求语句通顺、意思连贯、符合题意；.流程图中括号部分为非限定性内容，仅供参考；2 .词数在100个左右，演讲稿的首尾已在答题卡上给出，不计入总词数;.演讲稿中不得使用真实的个人及学校信息；3 .演讲稿必须写在答题卡指定的位置上。【答案】He is friendly to everyone and he often helps people out.He is good at math and he is also talented in sports.I used to be shy, b

37、ut now Im outgoing.I spend some of my free time playing football for my team.There is no doubt that he is a successful teacher.兴趣爱好类Hobbies can open our eyes to the outside world.I m fond of classical literature.Li Lei is interested in/takes an interest in/has a strong interest in swimming.He is cra

38、zy about listening to English songs.He often loses himself in reading books.Darning gets excited about watching movies.典例剖析每到毕业季，学生们都会以各种方式表达对老师的感谢之情，如“因毕业希望老师批准永久请假”“最后 一堂课唱歌送别班主任”等。悲欢的背后是老师对学生的关怀和学生对老师深深的敬意。请根据下列提示和要求，以“I Love You, My English Teacher”为题， 写一篇短文。提示：1. Whats your English teacher like

39、?2. Why do you like him or her?要求：1 .短文须包括提示的两个问题，可适当发挥；2 .短文中不要出现真实的地名、校名和人名；3 .词数80左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。I Love You, My English TeacherI have met many good teachers in the last three years*The Person I Want to ThankIn my junior school life, many people have helped me. I thank them very much. But the pe

40、rson I want to thank most is my English teacher Miss Lee.Miss Lee is beautiful with long hair. And she is kind. She helps me a lot. She often helps me with my English. When I am in trouble, she always encourages me to face my difficulties and gives me good advice. I still remember that once T failed

41、 in an important English exam and was upset. She cheered me up and told me some good ways to improve my English. With her help, I made great progress in English and became interested in it. Im very thankful for all that she has done fbr me. She has a great influence on me, and her help is very usefu

42、l for my future development.2021年镇江市英语中考试卷时光荏苒，毕业季来临。假如你们学校校报组织题为“校园生活”的英语征文活动，内容可以是回望过去 三年或畅想未来三年的校园生活。请选择其中之一，并根据提示写一篇短文。School life in the past three yearsSchool life in the coming three years your hobby or interest activities you took part in and your progress your friends and teachers your drea

43、m or plan activities you hope to join in and the reasons teachers and classmates you hope to meet要求：1 .所写内容必须包括你选择的校园生活的所有要点，可适当发挥;2 .文章不少于90词，开头已给出，不计入总词数；3 .语意通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范；4 .文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名等信息。How time flies! Its time to say goodbye to my dear school. I would like to say something about【答案】Ho

44、w time flins! Its tiros to say goodbye to my dear school. I would like to say something about my school life in the past three years.I love reading. What impressed me most is the Reading Club. One day, I saw some students talking about books on the grass. I felt excited and joined in their discussio

45、n. Later, I became a member of the club. I read the four great classical Chinese novels and some history books. Reading has changed me far more than I expected, I am not as shy as T used to be and willing to try new things.I was so lucky to meet a lot of friends who shared the same interest with me.

46、 My teachers encouraged me to make up some stories. As far as Tm concerned, reading opens up a new world to me. I will remember the three-year school life forever.【审题指导】这是一篇提纲作文。本文适合四段式写法：第一段简要点明你喜欢的老师是谁；第二段 介绍你喜欢的英语老师的相关情况；第三段说明你喜爱这位老师的原因；第四段抒发你对老师的感谢之情。 文章时态主要采用一般现在时，人称以第一人称为主。但是在叙述老师的相关情况时，应使用第三人

47、称。【写作导图】The English teacher I love Mr. HuangI Love You, My English TeacherInformation about the English teacherThe reasons why I love this English teacherof medium height, thin, wear a pair of glasses, strict, care about every student.make our class lively.I love you, my English teacher Express my f

48、eelings and love【作文失分点与句子升格】失分点此类作文是全国各地中考的高频话题之一，对大多数学生来说比较容易写作。结合此篇作文来讲，易 失分的地方主要有：1 .描述人物外貌时，be与has混淆不清；2 .不善于运用亮点短语、并列句和复合句，句式简单枯燥，缺乏趣味性。句子升格（答案均在【佳作欣赏】中加粗体现）He is strict with every student.He cares about every student.（改为并列句，使句意保持不变）1. The students from poor families have trouble.He is always ready to help them