上海市静安区2020-2022年中考英语二模试题分类汇编：话题作文.docx

《上海市静安区2020-2022年中考英语二模试题分类汇编：话题作文.docx》由会员分享，可在线阅读，更多相关《上海市静安区2020-2022年中考英语二模试题分类汇编：话题作文.docx（3页珍藏版）》请在淘文阁 - 分享文档赚钱的网站上搜索。

1、上海市静安区2020-2022年中考英语二模试题分类汇编话题作文2022年上海市静安区中考二模英语试题十四、话题作文64 . Write at least 60 words on the topic llThe moving moment in my life5 （请以生活中让 我感动的瞬间”为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格）在你的生活中一定有许多令人感动的记忆,请结合自己的个人经历,谈谈发生了哪件事, 并具体讲述为何这个瞬间最能触动你的心灵。（注意：1.信中不得出现姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。2.照抄阅读语篇不得分。）2021年上海市静安区中考二模英语试题VII. W

2、riting （作文）（共 20 分）84.Write at least 60 words on the given situation.（根据所给情境写一篇不少于60个词的短文， 标点符号不占格）美国拉斯维加斯的不少学生参加了户外花园教室项目，在活动中收获了很多，你在校内 外参加过什么有趣有益的项目，并给你留下了深刻的映像。请以“Making learning fun（乐中学）”为题，分享你的经历或感想。（注意：1.短文中不得出现考生姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不子评分。2.照抄阅读语篇不得分。）2020年上海市静安区中考二模英语试题十四、话题作文69 . Write at least 60

3、words about the topic uMy view on online lessons this March”（请以“今 年三月的网课之我见”为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。）（注意：文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。The following is for reference only.（以下内容仅供参考）What is your view?Show us an example or give your reas（m（s.） to support your view.Give at least one suggestion you woul

4、d like to make to your leacher(s).答案：2022年上海市静安区中考二模英语试题64 .例文：The moving moment in my lifeHere is a moving moment in my life that I will never forget.I still remember that was a rainy day. I failed an exam, and I felt very upset. What was worse, I didnt bring an umbrella. Countless raindrops beat a

5、gainst my body, which seemed that they were laughing at me. Suddenly, the raindrops disappeared. At first. I thought the rain finally stopped. But when I looked up, I saw a big umbrella and the smiling face of my deskmate, Mike. He looked into my eyes sincerely and said, “An exam cant stand fbr ever

6、ything. I believe you can get good grades next lime. His words really touched my heart and chccrcd me up. After that, I studied harder and made great progress.【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇话题作文0以“The moving moment in my life”为题，介绍 生活中让自己感动的事情。2.写作指导：本文时态以一般过去时为主行文；人称以第一人称为主。写作时围绕主题展开 适当的叙述，谈谈发生了哪件事，并具体讲述为何这个瞬间最能触

7、动你的心灵。确保语句通 顺，逻辑清晰，无单词语法错误。2021年上海市静安区中考二模英语试题【答案】Making learning funPve joined in various after-class meaningful activities, of which the volunteer one in (he local nursing house is the most impressive. Several classmates and I volunteered there every weekend last year. We did some cleaning, chatte

8、d with (he old and read newspapers (o them. After Hnishing the whole activity, I benefited a lot because I got meaningful lessons and fun. First, cleaning the nursing house develops my ability of doing chore, which prepares me for living independendy in future. Second, talking with the old and readi

9、ng newspapers to them improve my communication skills and bring me much fun. Therefore, (his activity offers me so many benefits that ifs really impressive and unforgettable.乐中学习要点提示好词好句开头：引出哪次活动 对自己的深刻影响I have joined in various . activities, of which the . is the most impressive.我已经参加了各种各样的活动，其中的活动

10、让我刻骨 铭心。正文：举出实例以及 得到的收获after doing sth.= after + 句子 之后做某事。benefit a lot.收益许多get meaningful lessons and fun.得到有意义的课程和乐趣develop the ability of doing chore 提升做家务的能力live independently 独立生活improve communication skills 提升沟通技巧offer sb so many benefits 提供许多好处结尾：点明主旨Therefore, this activity offers me so many

11、 benefits that its really impressive and unforgettable.总结连词和so that结果状语从句2020年上海市静安区中考二模英语试题69 .例文：My view on online lessons this MarchIn order to stop coronavirus from spreading this March, students in China arc expected to study at home and have online lessons. I like this pattern of learning.I th

12、ink I can plan my own time and subjects and its very convenient for me because I can study my lessons on computers or phones at any time or any place. I can watch (he videos more than once. Also if I cant understand some problems, I can find answers online. However, I had to read and do exercises on

13、 a computer screen, which hurts my eyes.In my opinion, both online lessons and traditional lessons arc necessary. They can be combined together to make our study more effective. I suggest teachers should remind students to do eye exercises and offer psychological guidance. They should communicate wi

14、th students much more to solve their confusion and problems online.【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于话题写作。在写作时根据题目要求发表对于三月份网课学 习的看法，给出论据来证明自己的观点同时给老师一些建议。2 .例文点评：例文用第一人称来写作；时态采用一般现在时为主；介绍网课的优势及列举论 据讲述细致且条理清晰。3 .高分亮点：短语：in order to ； stop from ； are expected to ； at any time ; do exercises ;in my opinion; becombined together; communicate with0句型：because弓I导的原因状语从句；if引导的条件状语从句；and表示并列的句子,which弓| 导的定语从句。