书面表达读后续写精彩结尾（重难题型）（解析版）-备战2023年高考英语一轮复习帮.pdf

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1、54书面表达读后续写精彩结尾序号内容精彩结尾1画面定格人物动作的画面定格精彩结尾2画面定格一一特殊寓意的写景画面精彩结尾3对话结尾精彩结尾4主题升华精彩结尾5结尾留白精彩结尾6首尾呼应法 技 巧|卜精彩结尾01：画面定格人物动作的画面定格01They stood there for a moment,side by side,waiting for the rushing holiday current and fortheir place in it.Then the daughter glanced over and momentarily regarded her mother.Ands

2、lowly,almost reluctantly,she placed her arm with apparently unaccustomed affection aroundher mothers shoulders and gently guided her back into the deluge.她们并肩站在那里，等待着节日的浪潮，等待着她们在浪潮中的位置。然后女儿扫了一眼，立刻注视着她的母亲。慢慢地，几乎是不情愿地，带着明显不习惯的爱她把胳膊放在她母亲的肩膀上，轻轻地引导她回到洪水中。02His hard work paid off!Holding the soda tin fir

3、mly,Reuben rushed for the shop to buy thebrooch.The moment he got the beautiful brooch,he burst through the front door and placed itin Doras hand.Never had Dora received such a gift.Speechless and happy,she held her sontightly into her arms,with tears welling up in her eyes.他的努力得到了回报！鲁本紧紧地握着汽水罐，冲向商店

4、去买胸针。他一拿到那枚漂亮的胸针，就冲进前门，把它放在朵拉的手里。多拉从来没有收到过这样的礼物。她高兴得说不出话来，紧紧地把儿子抱在怀里，眼泪涌了出来。03The butterfly cleaned her tears on the face,“No.God felt a bit relieved and said,Tomorrowyou can become human again.But she shook her head and said,“No,I want to be a butterflyfbr the rest of my life.”Then the butterfly wo

5、uld stay together with her lover forever.On thetop of the mountain,she seemed to enjoy the sunrise and the sunset happily with them.蝴蝶擦干了脸上的眼泪，说，“不。”上帝松了一口气，说。“明天你就可以变回人类了。”但她摇了摇头说，“不，我想做一辈子蝴蝶”然后蝴蝶就会永远和她的爱人在一起。在山顶上，她似乎和他们一起快乐地享受着日出和日落。读后续写精彩结尾02：画面定格特殊寓意的写景画面01The sky was a billion pure eyes of ligh

6、t and the grass green underfoot,it was as if night andday had become one beautiful moment.Dawn had come.天空像是十亿只纯净的眼睛拼接在一起，脚下是青草，仿佛黑夜和白昼已成为一个美丽的时刻。黎明已经来临。（黎明到来的画面）02Dawn sent shimmering rays over the placid ocean,bestowing a golden path from the shore tothe horizon.黎明在平静的海面上放射出出闪闪发亮的光线，留下一条从海岸到地平线横亘而

7、过的金色道路。（黎明到来的画面）03The crystal and cerulean water was gentle as I waded through it,the sunset like orange painton a blue canvas.当我涉过水晶般天蓝色的轻柔的水时，日落就像蓝色画布上的橙色颜料。（美好日落时的画面）04The lingering sunlight was obliterated by the rapidly falling night,resembling a pitch-blackcurtain draped over the sky.逗留在天际的最后一

8、缕阳光被迅速落下的夜幕擦除，就像是天空被一层漆黑的幕布覆盖。（日落时的画面）05The moon under siege by stars seemed to lighten the night bringing forth stars that shone andhung in the blackness.The never ending blackness consumed everything.被群星围困的月亮似乎照亮了黑夜，带来了在黑暗中闪耀和悬挂着的群星。无尽的黑暗吞噬了一切。（描写夜空的画面）06Looking up,I saw the sun shine brighter tha

9、n I ever knew before.I saw a tree in the distanceglisten gently as it reflected the suns rays.My consciousness ebbed away with the heat.Itook a few blinks before I landed with a thud.抬头一看，我看到太阳比我以前所知道的还要明亮。我看见远处有一棵树反射着太阳光,发出柔和的光辉。我的意识随着热度而衰退。我眨了眨眼，然后摔倒在地才猛然回到现实中，恢复了知觉。（特殊寓意）07Dotted with glittering

10、stars,the sky,midnight blue,gave the scene a fairytale quality.缀满星光的天空，午夜的蓝色，给了这一场景一个童话般的质量。（神话般美丽的夜空画面）08The rain drummed on the window,bidding farewell to the last beam of sunlight.雨水打着窗户，向最后一缕阳光告别。（雨水来临的画面）Kissed by the rain and glistening,the wet ground is cold under foot.A dense earthly sweetsm

11、ell rises from the ground,enveloping everything within its soft embrace.潮湿的地面走起来很冷，被雨水亲吻后闪闪发光。一股浓郁的泥土般的香味从地上升起，把一切都包裹在它柔软的怀抱里。（雨后清新的画面）09The leaves crunched beneath my feet as I strolled down the street.Occasionally,one wouldfall past me,lightly swaying as the air gently carried it to the ground.我在街

12、上漫步时，树叶在我脚下嘎吱作响。偶尔，有叶子会从我身边掉下来，轻轻地摇晃，缓缓落到到地面。（描写落叶的画面）读后续写精彩结尾03：对话结尾01Chester said his father told him he had tried to search for him and his brother,but bothbrothers had changed their last names.He does remember me and my older brother and hetold me that he s been looking for us ever since we lost

13、 contact,“he said.Chester said hisbrother has since flown to Colombia to be reunited with Urrea as well.When asked how thereunion with his father will change his life,Chester said,“I got family everywhere,so itmight lead to many more trips now.”Chester说他父亲告诉他，他曾试图寻找他和他哥哥，但两兄弟都改了姓。“他确实记得我和我哥哥，他告诉我，自从

14、我们失去联系以来，他一直在找我们，”他说。Chester说他哥哥也飞去哥伦比亚和U rrea团聚了。当被问及与父亲的团聚会如何改变他的生活时，Chester说，“我的家人无处不在，所以现在可能会有更多的出行。”02What was most fascinating about the reunion is that Shavi also moves others.Ninay s familyhad moved to a bigger apartment.T ve heard amazing stories about dogs loyalty,but Inever imagined this

15、sort of thing would ever happen to me.Even now,I can hardly believethis dog traveled such a long distance to find us,“said Nina,“I would never give this kindof friend away again.I never grow tired of repeating this-animals are the most devoted andloving creatures.They need our love and care.”这次重聚最吸引

16、人的地方在于，沙维也打动了其他人。妮娜的家人搬到了一个更大的公寓。我听说过狗狗忠心耿耿的故事，但我从没想过这种事会发生在我身上。即使是现在，我也很难相信这只狗走了这么远的路来找我们，”妮娜说，“我再也不会放弃这样的朋友了。我总是不厌其烦地重复这句话一一动物是最忠诚和最可爱的生物。他们需要我们的爱和关心。”03Her husband spoke to the director of Heightvale,Dolores Haworth.Soon she offered him ajob working for the company.She said,“He just had a brillia

17、nt working attitude and isdefinitely the type of employee we are looking for.I was told,If he does this for free,imagine his jobs if he was being paid.I met him and he was a lovely and polite young manand he has already started working for us.”她丈夫和Heightvale的 主 管 Dolores Haworth谈过了。很快她就给了他一份为公司工作的工作

18、。她说，“他的工作态度很好，绝对是我们要找的那种员工。有人告诉我，如果他这么做是免费的，想象一下他的工作是有报酬的。我见过他，他是个可爱又有礼貌的年轻人，他已经开始为我们工作了。”04They hung all the things back to the wall.Jack asked Paisley,“Are you really willing to leada tough life with me?”She patted away the ashes on hands and looked at the walls withloads of stuff on them satisfac

19、torily,saying,Yes!For me,it is not a suffering to live.”他们把所有的东西都挂回墙上。杰克问佩斯利：“你真的愿意和我一起过艰难的生活吗？”她拍拍手上的骨灰，满意地看着墙上挂满东西的墙，说：“是的！对我来说，活着不是一种痛苦。”读后续写精彩结尾04：主题升华01Everyone has one person they look up to as a role model.To me there is none other than mymom.She has beauty,brains,and one of the best hearts I

20、 know.Without her in my life,Iwould have no idea whether I can be a famous dancer.Someday,when I am older and havechildren of my own,I hope I can be just as great a parent as my m om.（母爱的深远影响）每个人都有一个榜样。对我来说，不是别人，正是我妈妈。她很漂亮，很聪明，而且是我认识的最用心的人之一。如果没有她，我不知道我能不能成为一个著名的舞者。有一天，当我长大了，有了自己的孩子，我希望我能成为像我妈妈一样伟大的

21、父（母）亲。02I am extremely unhappy about it.I think money doesn t equal happiness.And free life stylealso doesn t equal happiness.The real happiness is that everyone loves each other,and doeseverything useful for our society.Most of my classmates support me.But some of them thinkmoney is everything.In m

22、y opinion,money can t take the place of everything,such as yourlife,your time and your happiness.（表达自己的价值观）我对此非常不高兴。我觉得金钱不等于幸福。自由的生活方式也不等于幸福。真正的幸福是每个人都彼此相爱，为我们的社会做一切有益的事情。大多数同学都支持我。但有些人认为钱就是一切。在我看来，金钱不能代替一切，比如你的生活，你的时间和你的幸福。03“Two reasons account for that you won,“the teacher answered.First,you ve a

23、lmostmastered one of the most difficult throws in all of judo.Second,the only known defense forthat move is for your opponent to grab your left arm.It is your biggest weakness that makesyou win the match.As a proverb says,Every coin has two sides.Making full use of yourstrength is your achievement.P

24、lease remember that in no case will you give up especially introuble.God is fair to e v e ry o n e.（借用名言警句来升华主题）“有两个原因可以解释为什么你赢了，”老师回答。“首先，你几乎掌握了柔道中最难的一个动作。其次，这个动作唯一已知的防御方法，就是让你的对手抓住你的左臂。这是你最大的弱点，让你赢得比赛。正如谚语所说，每枚硬币都有两面。充分利用你的力量就是你的成就。请记住，在任何情况下，你都不要放弃，尤其是遇到麻烦的时候。上帝对每个人都是公平的。”读后续写精彩结尾05：结尾留白01While s

25、he wrapped them,I took a deep breath and asked Joy,“Do you have dinner plans?Iexplained that Id like to wait a bit before I went back to the hospital-to give Grace and herhusband some time alone with baby.Would you be interested in joining me in a bite to eat?”I asked.Td love to,she replied,her eyes

26、 sparkling like diamonds.And,this was thebeginning of the end to my months of heartbreak following Betsys death.（故事结尾留白,给予读者想象空间）当她把它们包起来的时候，我深吸了一口气，问Joy：“你晚餐有安排吗？“我解释说我想等一会儿再回医院让G race和她丈夫有时间单独和孩子在一起。“你有兴趣和我一起吃点东西吗？“我问。“我很乐意，”她回答，她的眼睛像钻石一样闪闪发光。而且，这 是 我 在Betsy死后几个月心碎的结束的开始。02The beggar hesitated for

27、 a moment,then he decided to open it.He declared aloud,“Whocares?He wanted me to have it anyway.I might as well enjoy it now.With that,heunwrapped the white tissue paper,but to his surprise,there was no hard rock candy inside.Instead,into his fingers fell a shiny white pearl worth thousands of dolla

28、rs.乞丐犹豫了一会儿，然后决定打开它。他大声宣布:“谁在乎呢？不管怎样，他还是想让我拥有它。我还不如现在就享受呢。”说着，他打开了白色的纸巾，但令他惊讶的是，里面没有硬糖。相反，一颗价值数千美元的闪亮的白珍珠掉进了他的手指里。读后续写精彩结尾06：首尾呼应012017年浙江高考题开头：I had an interesting childhood.It was filled with suprises and amusements,allbecause of my mother loving,sweet,yet absent-minded and forgetful.One strange f

29、aimlytrip we took when I was eleven tells a lot about her.结尾：Despite moms being absent-minded and forgetful,she was still a kind and nice mom.尽管妈妈总是心不在焉，健忘，但她仍然是一个和蔼可亲的妈妈。022018年浙江高考题开头：It was summer and my dad wanted to treat me to a vacation like never before.Hedecided to take me on a trip to the

30、Wild West.结尾：Never had I had such a thrilling yet dangerous vacation before.The special trip to theWild West was deeply engraved in my m ind,我从来没有过这么刺激又危险的假期。那次去西部的特别旅行，深深地印在我的脑海里。2016年浙江高考题开头：A funny thing happened to Arthur when he was on the way to work one day.结尾：What a funny day.Arthur couldnt

31、stop laughing whenever he looked back on thishilarious experience.多么有趣的一天啊，每当亚瑟回想起这次欢乐的经历，他就忍不住笑个不停。042020年浙江高考卷原文结尾：A few minutes later,the helicopter amved.As we were lifted into the air,we saw thestubborn bear was already heading back to our camp.When Elli and I got home anddeveloped our pictures

32、,we noticed this bear had broken an important tooth.Like humans,polar bears feel pain,have emotions,and can be afraid.Elli and I learned our lesson:bewareof a bear with a toothache.经 典2021新高考1 卷】A MOTHER S DAY SURPRISEThe twins were filled with excitement as they thought of the surprise they were pl

33、anningfbr Mothers Day.How pleased and proud Mother would be when they brought her breakfast inbed.They planned to make French toast and chicken porridge.They had watched their motherin the kitchen.There was nothing to it.Jenna and Jeff knew exactly what to do.The big day came at last.The alarm rang

34、at 6 a.m.The pair went down the stairs quietly tothe kitchen.They decided to boil the porridge first.They put some rice into a pot of water andleft it to boil while they made the French toast.Jeff broke two eggs into a plate and added insome milk.Jenna found the bread and put two slices into the egg

35、 mixture.Next,Jeff turned onthe second stove burner to heat up the frying pan.Everything was going smoothly until Jeffstarted frying the bread.The pan was too hot and the bread turned black within seconds.Jennathrew the burnt piece into the sink and put in the other slice of bread.This time,she turn

36、eddown the fire so it cooked nicely.Then Jeff noticed steam shooting out of the pot and the lid starting to shake.The nextminute,the porridge boiled over and put out the fire.Jenna panicked.Thankfully,Jeff stayedcalm and turned off the gas quickly.But the stove was a mess now.Jenna told Jeff to clea

37、n it upso they could continue to cook the rest of the porridge.But Jeffs hand touched the hot burnerand he gave a cry of pain.Jenna made him put his hand in cold water.Then she caught the smellof burning.Oh dear!The piece of bread in the pan had turned black as well.注意：1.续写词数应为150左右。2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位

38、置作答。As the twins looked around them in disappointment,their father appeared.The twins earned the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up.【答案】As the twins looked around them in disappointment,their father appeared.Fathersappearing was like a savior to the two children.Under the guidance of their

39、father,they tookpositive actions and started all over again.They made the bread and then went on cookingporridge.Father helped them adjust the fire,which was the key to success.It was all right thistime.Delicious breakfast was ready.How happy they were!The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and wo

40、ke their mother up.When their mother sawthe delicious and perfect breakfast in front of her,she was very surprised.It was not only thegift,but the love of the children for her that moved her very much.The two children couldfinish cooking a breakfast,which she didnt expect.The children said loudly,Ha

41、ppy MothersDay!”Mother hugged them tightly and kissed them again and again.【解析】【分析】本文以母亲节为线索展开，讲述了双胞胎Jenna和 Jeff为了献给母亲一份美味的早餐，自己动手，做起饭餐来，但是不幸的是，他们连连失败，后来在父亲的帮助下，获得成功，他们把早餐献给亲爱的母亲，妈妈非常感动的故事。【详解】1.段落续写：由第一段首句内容“当双胞胎失望地环顾四周时，他们的父亲出现了。”可知，第一段可描写他们的父亲指导帮助他们准备早餐。由第二段首句内容“这对双胞胎把早餐端到楼上，叫醒了他们的母亲。”可知，第二段可描写母亲

42、收到孩子们的礼物早餐，非常感动。2.续写线索：帮助指导一一积极一一献礼一一感动3.词汇激活行为类帮助：help/assist.指导：guide/conduct.献礼：present a gift/give a gift情绪类.积极：positive/positively/take positive actions.感动：moved/touched、模 拟 检 现 以Writing 1（2022.浙江.模拟预测）阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。Whatever life threw at us each year,come Christmas our family h

43、ad one constanttradition:our dog Pepper opened our presents for us.Watching our sweet dog unwrap giftsalways warmed the holiday,which was often a little bittersweet because college,studyingabroad,or work commitments often kept my two sisters and me away.One year,everyone made it home for a Christmas

44、 together.I visited from college,Kaeiflew in from Arizona,and Kara was back from Ireland.Mom?s jubilance kept her busy bakingcookies for us all.Our Christmas season should have been perfect.It couldnt feel perfect,though,because Peppers health was deteriorating.Her life hadalready been longer than w

45、e expected she was fourteen-and yet her mind was still sharp.Her enthusiasm for life made us feel better.But her body could not keep up with her spirit.Shed already shown the usual signs of deafness and stiffness.That year,her hips and backlegs started giving out on her.We knew we would soon have to

46、 make a difficult decision.It was likely Pepper,s last Christmas,so we decided to make sure she enjoyed it.OnChristmas Eve,we gathered around the tree to open an early present.We each took a turn andthen called Pepper to open one more.But her tangled legs could not navigate the boxes andshredded wra

47、pping paper on the floor.She stumbled over the obstacles,and soon shedisappeared into the next room.She crumpled back to the floor,as out of the way as she couldget.We were heartbroken.Could Pepper even participate in her last Christmas?Pepperstayed on the periphery of all our holiday activities.Thr

48、oughout the day,we gave gifts but didnot feel very giving.We shared stories over cinnamon rolls that tasted bland.We playedgames by the tree whose twinkles had dimmed.That evening,Kaei said what wed all been thinking:I wish Pepper could have helpedopen presents this year.We all put down our mugs of

49、spiced tea.Maybe she still could,“Kara said.But theres none Mom reminded her.Kara jumped up and left the room.Weheard her opening drawers and cabinets in the kitchen.注意：字 数 150左右，(2)请按如下格式在答题纸上作答。Kara returned with a box of dog biscuits,scissors,a pile of color paper,and a roll oftape.Soon,Pepper se

50、lected her first Christmas gift.【答案】One possible version:Kara returned with a box of dog biscuits,scissors,a pile of color paper,and a roll oftape.She cut a small section from the paper and wrapped a single dog treat in it.She held itup as if she had just struck gold.Now there?s a present for her!I