2023届高考英语读后续写万能模板以及范文讲义.docx

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1、读后续写固定模板一、读后续写第一自然段第1句：情感描写，使用情感万能句：sb. felt a great sense of + 情绪名词+ welling up in sb s heart and surging through sb.表示“某人感到一股强烈 的在内心升腾、奔涌。”【分析】well up表示“涌出。我们可以这样记忆well表示“好”以外，还可以表示“井”。“涌出”是用到 T “井”这个含义。surge表示“汹涌”。这个句子的亮点是后半句welling up in sb s heart and surging through sb.,把情绪的描 写形象化，具体化了。表示情绪的名词

2、：表不高兴delight 高兴,joy 高兴、relief 欣慰，表示激动excitement 兴奋 surprise/amazement 惊讶表示伤心失望sorrow 悲伤 grief 悲伤 disappointment 失望 depression / frustration 沮丧 sadness 哀伤 annoyance 烦庙表示害怕fear/scare/fright/horror/terror表示生气anger / rage 愤怒表示忧虑anxiety、worry, concern 着急 tension 紧张其他类guilt 内疚，shame,羞耻 satisfaction ；茜足、pu

3、zzlement 迷惑，regret 后悔puzzlement / confusion 困惑 tiredness/ exhaustion 疲惫 embarrassment 尴尬 gratitude 感激 relief 如释重负 shame 羞愧练习1：Sunny感到一股强烈的恐惧，在她心中升腾，奔涌。Sunny felt a great sense of horror welling up in her heart and surging through her.练习2： Jessica感到一股强烈的高兴，在她心中升腾，奔涌。Jessica felt a great sense of deli

4、ght welling up in her heart and surging through her.第2句：细节描写，使用非谓语结构：doing A,主语+谓语B (主语+谓语A, doing B)Burning with anger, he glared at me with his frightening eyes, yelling, Youre such an idiot.”(2)Having done A.,主语+谓语B已经,某人,Having queued for 3 hours, he was told that the ticket had been sold out.(3)

5、done A,主语+谓语 B, doing CEncouraged by the teacher, Lucy raised her hand, whispering, “I want to have a try. ”第3句：细节描写，使用with复合结构Jenny walked slowly to the front, with her legs trembling and her heart beating fast.He turned around, with tears rolling/streaming down his cheeks.The girl stood there, shi

6、vering/trembling with cold, with dirt on her face and hair.第4句：细节描写，使用倒装句No sooner had sb done than sb did【原句 1 The moment my mother finished her performance, the audience broke into rapturous applause.【咒级No sooner had my mother finished her performance than the audience broke into rapturous applaus

7、e.注意事项：l.had done比did先发生 2.No sooner放句首第5句：过渡衔接句，使用时间状语从句或者定语从句或形容词作状语：如when, while, as, before, after引导的时间状语从句When I arrived there, I walked to the door and knocked. As I waited at the stop, I heard a big noise.形容词作状语The girl stood there, staring at the food, cold and hungry.They sat on the beach,

8、enjoying the sunshine, relaxed and happy.定语从句The youngest kid wanted to get a present, but he was refused by his mother, which made him cry.二、读后续写第二自然段第1句：情感描写，使用独立主格(with) +n+doing,一句话例如：l.Tears streaming down my face and blurring my vision, I was thrown into the abyss(深渊)of grief and sorrow.2.Laug

9、hter bubbling (洋溢，涌起)up inside him, he ran towards his mother,第2句：结局，使用Not until结构原句The villagers didnt realize how serious the pollution was until all the fish died in the river.改写Not until all the fish died in the river,did the villagers realize how serious the pollution was.第3句：所感Exhausted/tired/

10、cold as i was,i felt my time and effort worthwhilejor I have made my own contribution to XXX.第4句：所悟From this experience/storyj have learned that/we can learn thatXXX might go away,but YYY endureshardship might exist,but YYY endures第5句：难忘That day/experience was so unforgettable that it would stay in

11、my memory forever.补充：可以在句子前面，适当的加上过渡词，来表示时间、地点和逻辑，使整篇的文章更加的立体丰富。(1) immediately,(2) Without hesitation(3) After a short while, after that, then(4) On arrival(5) Two hours later(6) At the sight of what had happend(7) With all the work alone(8) However; instead2023年聊城市高考模拟试题续写练习第二节(满分25分)阅读下面材料，根据其内容和

12、所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。Mrowwwwl! The cat meowed angrily as she clawed at Jennifers arm, drawing a thin line of blood. Just as quickly as she struck out with her claw, the agile (灵活的)orange and-white cat leaped back to her hiding space under Jennifers bed. From the darkness underneath the bed, two g

13、reen eyes produced bright light, staring back out at Jennifer.Jennifer was starting to feel discouraged in a major way. She was never one for giving up; but it had been several days like this since she adopted the cat一Darla-from the animal shelter, struggling to win over the young cafs affection thr

14、ough treats and soft and gentle whispers. It was during her summer break, so she had plenty of time to keep trying to win over the animal. But it wasnt time that was the issue - it was Jennifers emotions that were quickly fading.It had been two years since Jennifers beloved brown tabby （斑猫）-Marlin-p

15、assed away. She never could quite get over the shock and emptiness which remained in her heart here childlike joy once thrived. Marlin had been Jennifers faithful friend and loving companion rough all the pains and trials of growing up. After Marlin died, things were never quite the same again for J

16、ennifer. It was the first real death to pierce Jennifers heart and signaled the end of her carefree childhood.She desperately wanted Darla to love her the way Marlin had and for ee to love Darla just the same; but what was Jennifer supposed to do now? The cut on her arm was all she had to how for he

17、r effort. Jennifer sat on the floor, burying her face in her hands, and her body trembled as she softly began to cry.注意：1续写词数应为150左右After a few minutes,Jennifer noticed a strange feeling - fur.Jennifer then reached out her hand toward the cat.参考范文（模板书写）：After a few minute,Jennifer noticed a strange

18、feeling-fur.第 1 句情感描写：Jennifer felt a great sense of delight welling up in her heart and surging through her.第 2 句乡田节描写： Having stared at Darla for a minute,she raised her head and kept silent for a while.第 3 句乡田节描写：No sooner had she made attempt to approach the little creature than she realized tha

19、t she was the person who need comfort.第 4 句名田节描写：She turned around, with tears streaming down her cheeks.第5句过渡句：When she was aware of Darlas significance,she wiped her tears and made a decision.Jennifer then reached out her hand toward the cat.第 1 句情感描写：Laughter bubbling （洋溢，涌起）up inside her, she st

20、roke the cat happily.第 2 句结束语： Not until the cat accept her did Jennifer pull Darla into her arms .第 3 句所感：Exhausted as she was,she felt her time and effort worthwhile,for she has made her own contribution to the relation between them.第 4 句所悟：From this experience,she has learned that life might go away,but love endures.第 5 句难忘： That experience was so unforgettable that it would stay in Jennifers memory forever.