读后续写写作素材讲义--2023届高三英语三轮冲刺.docx

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1、读后续写写作素材讲义亮点句子积累1 .倒装句Here comes the rough sketch of my advice.Challenging as it may be, it helps.Should you accept my application, I would.Such was Einstein, a man of achievements and deep thoughts, but with simple habits.Not only has . incredibly ，but it also.2 .衔接句As a matter of fact, I believe,

2、only through reading can the soul be strengthened, ambition inspired and success achieved.Additionally, a wide range of reading can broaden our horizon and brighten our life.Above all, enthusiastic and outgoing, I myself am young man always ready to offer hands to others.3 .无灵主语句The uncertainty was

3、starting to wear on us.Any advice is highly appreciated.主题升华句子积累Any act of love can thaw a frozen heart.爱的行动可以融化冰冻的心。The best love is the kind that awakens the soul and makes us reach for more.最好的爱 是那种能叫醒灵魂并激发我们拼搏的力量。And let today embrace the past with remembrance and the future with longing.用回忆 拥抱过

4、去，用渴望拥抱未来。Yesterday is todays memory and tomorrow is todays dream.昨日是今日的记忆，明日 是今口的梦。You know some birds are not meant to be caged, their features are too bright.你知道有的鸟儿是注定不能被关在笼子里的。它们每一根羽毛都闪耀着自由的光辉。Hope is a good thing and maybe the best of things. And no good thing ever dies.希望是很好的东西，也许是最好的。好的东西是不会

5、消逝的。Its a small price to pay, but I do it again in a heart beat （立刻，马上）.Its true that during their explorations they often faced difficulties and dangers of the most perilous nature （荆棘丛生），equipped in a matter which would make modern climber shudder （毛骨悚然）at the thought but they didnt go out of thei

6、r way to court such excitement, they had a single aim, a solitary goalthe top.（他们有唯一的、坚定的 H 标顶峰。）The reading of all good books is like a conversation with the best man of past centuries.读好书就像与过去百年间最优秀的灵魂交流。环境描写句子积累风景如画：spectacularly beautiful scenerystrikingly beautiful mountains sceneryworld-class

7、and jaw-dropping scenery picturesque举世无双： out of this worldnothing beatswithout equalbeyond compare/challengeunmatchedpeerlesssingularly goodInstead the ivy grew wild here, trailing like a waterfall down to the ground.（青藤如瀑）One morning Mary woke to find bright sunshine flooding her room.（阳光倾洒）Tiny g

8、reen shoots were jutting out of the soil.（幼芽破土）The mysterious cave was sealed in the endless fog again after our departure.（浓雾弥漫）There lies a stream, lined with lush/flourishing/prospered plants.A strong gust of wind lifted the ivy, parting it like a curtain.（风过青藤）Beside the lake, beneath the trees,

9、 shaking and dancing in light winds.（风舞）The rain drummed on/beat against the window, bidding farewell to the last beam of sunlight.动作描写句子积累1 .道歉Tm sorry,“ he said, gently patting （轻拍）Jacksons head.He put down his hand, glanced cautiously （小心翼翼地瞟一眼）at Carter and ducked/lowered his head.To my surprise

10、, she smiled at me and expressed her apology for ignoring （因忽略表达 歉意）my loneliness as well as my difficulty with English communication.2 .原谅His mother silenced him by gently putting her finger on his lips, gave a soft kiss on his forehead and sneaked out of the study （轻手轻脚地出了书房）.3 .开心“I wanted to sur

11、prise you!” He pointed at a neatly wrapped box with his eyes brilliant/twinkling/sparkling /glistering/glomming （闪烁）.Seeing his families, sitting around in perfect harmony, Carter felt a surging of happiness.Cheerful singing/floating/lingering in the room, the two sisters immersed themselves in the

12、beauty of the music.心理、神态描写积累4 .感激But for （如果没有）Henrys help, I wouldnt have finished my performance smoothly.I looked at her, tears of love and gratitude （爱和感激的泪水）welling up in my eyes.Afterwards, it was my turn to give a small lecture, where I expressed my gratitude to my mom and dad.5 .回忆At that m

13、oment, unexpectedly, the memory of the sight of Billy crying on the ground occurred to Carter, hovering in his mind and reminding him something.Looking at Jackson, Carter couldnt help imagining his little brother spending the whole day carefully painting the car.“I just wish I knew how to help her/*

14、 Amanda said to herself, thinking of Lis frightened eyes.铺设伏笔攻略伏笔，也就是读后续写中的“暗流涌动，铺设伏笔是高级的写作手法。如何铺设伏笔？1 .理清文章发展脉络，找出前后文对比之处，在转折点处标记，识别作者的心绪起伏After the crash, I went from the kid who got a fine iPod and who had the coolest house, to almost having no where to stay.（处境变化）2 .识别关键要点a.My mom continued to t

15、reat me to whatever I wanted until I was seven and my world crashed.（要点：I got everything I wanted,妈妈对我有求必应;my world crashed,我的世界 崩塌）b.So, for a year or two, I kept asking for things whether I really needed them or not.（要 点：I keep asking whether I really needed them or not,我索取物品，无论有无需要）感悟：主人公不完美，有缺点，才需要有所改变。续写时要照应原文，府此不完美要有相应转 变的表达。3 .抓主要人、物，切忌新创人物抓一切有实际意义的物品，从中筛选关系最密切的，而文中一旦出现人物，不出意外，后文必 将涉及。