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1、The City I Desire to Visit某报英语编辑正在向即将毕业的高三学生征文，请你以“The City I Desire toVisit”为题，写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：1.城市印象；2.参观原因Beginning（第一段：当谈到我想要去参观的城市时，某城第一个出现在我的脑海中。）When it comes to the city I desire to visit,.=_I desire to visit,.=_I desire to visit,.=I desire to visit,.Beijing comes to my mind firstly.=Beijing to

2、 my mind firstly.北京第一个出现在我的脑海中=Beijing my mind firstly.北京第一个涌入我的脑中O=Beijing1匕京排在我的愿望之首=Beijing 我把北京当作第一个目的地Body（第二段：城市印象+参观原因）城市印象 As the capital of China,Beijing,with time-honored palaces andfuturistic skyscrapers coexisting harmoniously,appears to have one foot firmlyplanted in the past and the ot

3、her planted in the future.作为中国的首都，历史悠久的宫殿和未来主义的摩天大楼和谐共存的北京，似乎一只脚踏在过去，一只脚踏在未来。仿写（重庆）As,Chongqing,withandcoexisting harmoniously,appears to have one footplanted in and the other planted in the.（南京）As,Nanjing,withandcoexisting harmoniously,appears to have one foot planted in_the past and the other plan

4、ted in the future.（郑 见、|）As,Zhengzhou,withandcoexisting harmoniously,appears to have one foot planted in_the past and the other planted in the future.参观原因：Unfortunately,as a Chinese,I have never been there once,whichnecessitates a vacation journey.不幸的是，作为一个中国人，我一次也没有去过那里，这使得度假旅彳亍成为了必需。Body（第三段：旅行规划）

5、1.the Great 他 My first destination must be the Great Wall.I am longing to enjoy a grandersight by climbing to a great height.我的第一个目的地一定是长城。我渴望爬到一储艮高1 蟀帧去欣赏更壮观的景色。grand adj.宏伟的壮丽的（补充：As the old sayinggoes:不到长城非好汉）2.Tian（mmen SquareMoreover,attending the flag-raising ceremony in Tian9anmen Square will

6、make me feel_and proud.此外，参加天安门广场的升褊仪式将使我感 到 爱 国 和 信3.Beijing Opera此外，京剧也很吸引我，它以戏剧和独特的形象在国内外享有盛誉。因此，我希望我能有机会感知中国传统文化的这种精髓.4.Peking University此外，浓厚的学术氛围也使我向往这座城市。有着北大清华和其他许多有名的大学驻足于此，有着中国最好的教育资源，背景吸引着许多著名的研究学者，科学机构和企业，这使得它成为了主要的科研圣地。Ending（第四段：结尾）I cant wait to dive into the citys unique history and

7、culture.完整一篇：After graduation,a visit to Beijing tops my wish list.As the capital of China,Beijing,with time-honored and futuristicskyscrapers coexisting harmoniously,appears to have one foot firmly planted inthe past and the other planted in the future.Unfortunately,as a Chinese,I havenever been th

8、ere once,which necessitates a vacation journey.My first destination must be the Great Wall.I am longing to enjoy a grandersight by climbing to a greater height.Moreover,attending the flag-raisingceremony in Tiananmen Square（动名词短语作主语）will make me feel patrioticand proud.Furthermore,the Forbidden City

9、 also appeals to me.I cant wait to dive into the city1 unique history and culture.毕业后，去北京旅游是我最想做的事。北京作为中国的首都，历史悠久的摩天大楼和未来主义的摩天大楼和谐共存（与复合结构），似乎一脚踩在过去，一脚踩在未来。不幸的是，作为一个中国人,我从来没有去过那里一次，这就需要一个假期旅行（非限制性定语从句）。我的第一个目的地一定是长城。我渴望爬到更高的地方,欣赏更壮丽的景色。此外，参加天安门广场的升旗仪式（动名词短语作主语）将使我感到爱国和自豪。此外，紫禁城也吸引了我。我迫不及待地想深入了解这座城市独

10、特的历史和文化。1.Chongqing,featuring its local delicacies and charming scenery,is increasinglyattracting tourists from home and abroad and it is the city that I want to visit庆以它的地方美食和迷人的风景吸引着越来越多的国内外游客，这是我最想去的城市。（2307于弋珂）most.fi2.Nanjing is an ancient capital of six different dynasties,playing an important

11、 part inthe history,culture and economy in our country.南京是六朝古都,在我国的历史，文化和经济中都占有重要地位。（张文馨）3.As a window city open to the outside world,Tianjin successfully combinestraditional culture and modem life,for which it attracts various kinds of organizationsand enterprises to enhance its economy.天津作为对外开放的窗口

12、城市,成功地将传统文化与现代生活相结合，吸引了各类组织和企业，促进了天津经济的发展。（2307陈玉瑶）4.With the contemporary transportation developing rapidly,travelling to all cornersof the world gets easier and easier.When asked about the city I desire to visit aftergraduation,Beijing comes first undoubtedly.（2307 文涵）5.As the third-largest countr

13、y in the world,China is famous for its spectacularscenery,abundant natural resources and splendid traditional culture.In my perspective,whats most worthy to visit among hundreds of cities in China is Zhengzhou.（2307 李姝馨）6.As many peoples ideal city,Beijing represents Chinese prosperous culture andgl

14、orious history,which are particularly embodies in its distinctive and historicalbuildings,such as Tiananmen Square,the Forbidden City and the Summer Palace.作为许多人心目中的理想城市，北京代表着中国繁荣的文化和辉煌的历史，这在天安门广场、紫禁城和颐和园等独具特色的历史建筑中尤为明显。（2307马雯睿）7.Featuring its local delicacies,Beijing draws a constant stream of vis

15、itors to have ataste for its authentic cuisine personally,such as Beijing duck and Douzhir.北京以当地美食为特色，吸引了源源不断的游客来亲自品尝北京烤鸭和豆汁儿等正宗美食。（2307马雯睿）8.Sanya,located in the south of China（located in southern China）,which features itspleasant climate,charming scenery and local delicacies,is increasing drawingn

16、umerous people from home and abroad to spend a relaxing vacation there.三亚，位于中国南方，以其宜人的气候，迷人的风景和当地的美食为特征，吸引着越来越多的国内外游客来这里度过一个轻松的假期。（2307孙雨欣）9.What motivates me to travel there is that I can slow down my living pace and feelthe beauty of life peacefully,which can not only reduce my pressure,but alsost

17、rengthen my confidence to work constantly.莪;之所以去那里旅行，是因为我可以放慢生活节奏，平静地感受生活的美好，不仅可以减轻我的压力，还可以增强我不断工作的信心。（2307孙雨欣）10.So charming is Beijing that the city cant be missed.（2307 罗婉平）11.a multicultural and modem city.多元且现代的城市,a progressive city 一个先进的城市（2307罗婉平）12.It is the fantastic scenery and diverse sce

18、nic spots which gain an internationalreputation that leave a deep impression on me,arousing my curiosity to explore thischarming city.（2307 路翔宇）13.In a word,I firmly believe that my dream relevant to visiting Guangzhou can befulfilled on day.（2307 路翔宇）14.Located in the central plains in China,Luoyan

19、g is a treasury of ancient remains,drawing a constant stream of tourists from home and abroad,where LongmenGrottoes enjoys an international reputation.洛阳位于中国的中原地区，是古代遗迹的宝库，吸引着源源不断的来自国内外的游客，其中龙门石窟享有国际声誉。（2307刘溪悦）15.Longmen Grottoes show that Buddhism played a significant role in that age,in themeanti

20、me,it displays the magnificent traditional Chinese culture,which wont fail tomake you excited&shocked,龙门石窟显示了佛教在那个时代的重要作用，同时，它展示了瑰丽的中国传统文化，不会让你不兴奋和震惊的。（2307刘溪悦）16.In a word,Luoyang is a birthplace of Chinese culture and provides spiritualnutrition for Chinese civilization,which makes it a fontastic

21、place to visit.总之，洛阳是中华文化的发祥地，为中华文明提供了精神营养，是一个极好的旅游胜地。（2307刘溪悦）17.Not only does the scenery in winter deserves paying a visit,especially when thesnow turns the whole city in to a wonderland,but also its delicacies appeal to visitorsa lot,such as mushrooms cooked with chicken,stew the goose in an iro

22、n pot andmany other special dishes w汕 tasty flavour.不仅冬天的风景值得一游，尤其是当雪把整个城市变成了一个仙境，而且它的美食也吸引了很多游客，如蘑菇炖鸡，炖鹅铁锅和许多其他美味的特色菜肴。（2307杨开冰）18.The Great Wall is a masterpiece of Chinese diligent spirit,winding its way fromwest to east,across deserts,over mountains,through valleys till at last it reaches thesea

23、.It is the great intelligence and practical experience of the ancient Chinese thatgave birth to the magnificent scenic spot.长城是中华民族勤奋精神的杰作，它从西向东蜿蜒曲折，穿过沙漠，越过高山，穿过山谷，最后到达大海。（2308尹笑方+赵幸琛）19.gain a deeper insight into获得更深刻的洞察力（2308柳沁园）20.Whats more,with Qingdao established as one of the central cities,t

24、he past fewyears have witnessed its amazing progress in economy and society.更重要的是，随着青岛成为中心城市之一，过去几年见证了它在经济和与社会。（2308柳沁园）21.Maybe its not the most prosperous city in China,but a city with slow-paced livingstyle,which appeals to me most.也许它不是中国最繁华的城市，但它是一个生活节奏慢的城市，这是最吸引我的。（2308毛梦尧）22.In Shanghai,there

25、 are many excellent universities and educational resources,which means more chances fbr the young to pursue their dreams and achieve success.上海有很多优秀的大学和教育资源，这意味着年轻人有更多的机会去追求自己的梦想，获得成功。（2308曹子轩）23.It is distinct/obvious/apparent that I should make every effort to study hard so thatI can be admitted t

26、o the universities in Shanghai.很明显，我应该尽一切努力学习，以便我能被上海的大学录取（2308曹子轩）24.Based on its remarkable location and long history of opening to the outside world,its economy has grown rapidly in the past few years 由于其优越的地理位置和长期的对外开放历史，它的经济在过去几年中迅速发展。.（2308刘炜琳）25.As far as I am concerned,the city which deserve

27、s to be visited is Lijiang.Locatedin the southeast of China,it is a fantastic city attracting plenty of visitors 就我而言，值得参观的城市是丽江。它位于中国的东南部，是一个吸引大量游客的很了不起的城市。.（2308查一聪）26.In addition,it is an ancient town where valuable cultural relics are well preservedand the local customs and cultures are also att

28、ractive/fascinating（极有吸弓|力的）此外，它还是一个古城，珍贵的文物保存完好，当地的风俗文化也很吸引人。（同）27.Florence is a charming city in Italy with a long history,where the renaissance tookplace,thus making it give birth to great virtues such as independence,the desire offreedom and critical thinking（im.）.佛罗伦萨是意大利一座有着悠久历史的迷人城市，是文艺复兴的发源地

29、，因此诞生了伟大的美德像是独立、渴望自由以及批判性思维。（2308王紫凝）28.Due to historical reasons,there are a huge amount of fancy and delicate buildingsfrom ancient Rome and ancient Greece,which can not only broaden our horizons butalso improve our ability to fin true beauty.由于历史的原因，有大量来自古罗马和古希腊的花式和精致的建筑，这不仅可以开阔我们的视野，也可以提高我们发现真正美

30、的能力。（2308王紫凝）29.Last but not least,Florence is the home to countless poets and writers,amongwhich Dante7s books are still widely read and highly appreciated now,最后，佛罗伦萨是无数诗人和作家的故乡，其中但丁的作品至今仍被广泛阅读和推崇。（2308王紫凝）30.All in all,Florence is a priceless and precious diamond in the world,spreading thelight o

31、f humanism and extraordinary intelligence of our human beings.总之，佛罗伦萨是世界上一颗无价的钻石，传播着人类的人文主义之光和非凡的智慧（2308王紫凝）31.the delicious food makes me reluctant to depart.（2308 李心雨）32.Tibet can cater to the tourists who want to immerse/soak themselves in the charmof nature,such as clear sky,shining lakes,vast grasslands and countless yaks andsheep,where you can experience a perception of happiness,peace of mind,comfortand security.西藏可以满足那些想要沉浸在大自然魅力中的游客，比如晴朗的天空，闪亮的湖泊，广阔的草原，数不清的耗牛和羊，在那里你可以体验到幸福，平和，舒适和安全的感觉。