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1、2023年中考英语作文评分标准及满分技巧（干货）一、结构要清晰结构清晰这点真的很重要，我们都知道，阅卷老师们要在规定的时间 内批阅上千份作文，而清晰的结构，会让阅卷老师一目了然，自然就 会喜欢你的作文。什么结构好呢？那就是三段式。第一段要开门见山，直接拿出主题。给大家举个例子，比如，写我的 妈妈，第一段直接就说 My mother is a worker. She is beautiful and she is a good mother.明确自己的观点。第二段就要说，她为什么是一个好妈妈。1. She works hard. 2. She is very strict with me. 3.

2、 She always encourages me and help me when I am in trouble.详细说出妈妈的优点。第三段得出结论。大家可以发表自己的观点，也可以提出建议和希望。如,I love my mother. I love my family!homework. Ms Li knew that. Instead of being angry with me, she told me the importance of study and encouraged me to study hard to become a talented person in the f

3、uture.(3) Last term, I failed my exam. I was so that that I cried sadly in my room. When my mother came from work late, she talked with me patiently and cheered me up. That evening, when I woke up at night, my mother was still working. I was deeply moved. Then I made up my mind to study harder than

4、before.尾段：As a sunshine teenager, Xiao Hui is a good example for us to learn from. /I will treasure the friendship forever.Now I understand my father s love to me. I will never forget what my father did for me and try my best to make him pleased.He is an excellent teacher I will never forget and lov

5、e him forever.三、咨询建议类首段:I m sorry to hear that you have difficulty in doing Don t worry about it!Here are some useful suggestions I d like to share with you.主体段：1 .主题句：Actually, if you are careful, you 11 find various simple ways to help you solve the problem.2 .要点：First and foremost, Its adj/n. for

6、/of sb. to do . . . . So that.In addition, you are supposed to do . . . , which can not only but alsoWhat s more, you had better (not) do . , becauseLast but not least, I suggest you (should) do . . . , from which, you re able to do .尾段:With these suggestions carried out,I firmly believe you will im

7、prove . a lot.I sincerely hope that my suggestions can be of great help.Looking forward to your earliest reply.四、观点看法类首段：With the development of the science andtechnology/society,. is becoming more and more serious. /the problem about is under a heated discussion/ . has become a hot topic. As for th

8、at, There are different opinions among people.主体段：On the one hand, some people hold the idea that . . . . The reasons are as follows. First, . . Second, . . Last,.On the other hand, others disagree. They suppose that . Because . . More importantly, .尾段：As far as I m concerned, every coin has two sid

9、es, and . is not a n exception. As long as we treat properly, it will be of great help.中考作文经典词句一、常用的名言警句1. Actions speak louder than words.事实胜于雄辩.2. A friend in need is a friend indeed.患难朋友才是真朋友.3. Where there is a will, there is a way. 有志者事竟成.4. All roads lead to Rome.条条大道通罗马.5. Every man has his w

10、eak side. 人人者口有缺点?6. Failure is the mother of success.失败是成功之母?7. Nothing in the world is difficult if you set your mind to it.世上无难事，只怕有心人。8. A life without a friend is a life without a sun. 人若无友, 就如同生命中没有太阳。9. All things are difficult before they are easy. 万事开头难。10. Always prepare for a rainy day. 未

11、雨绸缪。11. Practice makes perfect.熟能生巧。12. Bad news has wings.好事不出门，坏事传千里。13. You have to believe in yourself. That s the secret of success.你必须相信自己，这是成功的关键。14. Don t judge a man by his looks.不可以貌取人。二、常用过渡语1 .表起始的过渡语:first of all, to begin with, first and foremost 等。2 .表时间的过渡语：first, at first, then, lat

12、er, in the end, finally, afterwards, after that, since then, for the first time, at last, as soon as, the next moment, meanwhile, later on, soon, 等。3 .表空间的过渡语:on the right/left, to the right/left of, on one side of on the other side of , at the foot/top/end of, in the middle/centre of, next to, far

13、from, in front of 等.4 .表因果的过渡语:for, since, as, because of, thus, so, as a result (of)等.5 . 表转折的过渡语:but, yet, however, after all, in fact, while, on the contrary, instead of, although, otherwise, in spite of 等。6 . 表歹U举的过渡语：for example, such as, like, as follows, in other words, and so on 等。7 .表推进的过渡语

14、:on one hand on the other hand，in addition to, as well, still, also, in other words, not only* but also，besides, in addition, furthermore, what s more, moreover 等.8 .表总结的过渡语 :in short, in a word, in general, in brief, in all, all in all, above all 等.三、常用句型1 .重点句型1) . It s adj for sb to do做对某人来说2) .

15、so that 如止匕以至于 too to do太 而不能 suchthat如此以至于3) .notuntil 直到 ,才一例：I didn t go to bed until my mother came back.4) . The reason why 句子is that 句子 的原因是The reason why he got angry was that she told him a lie.( 他生气的原因是她对他说了谎。)5) . That is why 句子6) . That is because 句子7) . It is said that 句子that 句子据报道8) . T

16、here is no doubt that那是的原因那是因为据说 It is reported句子 毫无疑问9) . It goes without saying that 句子 不言而喻，毫无疑问10) . There is no need to do 没必要做11) . There is no point in doing 做某事毫无意义2 .提建议had better (not) do 最好(不)做It s adj. /n. of/for sb. to doI suggest that you (should) do我建议你做be supposed to do 应该做If I were

17、you, I would do我要是你的话，我会做Don t forget to do=Remember to do.Why not do / why don t you do-?为什么不,一How about / what about doing怎么样?3 .表示喜欢和感兴趣like / love doing=enjoy doing=be fond of doing 喜欢做一prefer to do A rather than do B 宁愿做 A 也不愿做 Bbe interested in doing = show/ take great interest in n./ doing. 感

18、兴趣1.1. 力做try to do努力做try one s best to do= do one s best to do竭尽全力做 make efforts to do = make every effort to do 尽力做一do what sb can (do ) to do 尽力做spare no effort todo不遗余力的做do尽某人全力做going to do打算/计划做do what / everything sb. can to5 .打算做/计划做intend / plan to do 打算做bedecide to do 决定做一 determine to do 决定

19、做一二、时态要准确英语作文除了结构，还有一个是阅卷老师最敏感的，那就是时态，这 也是一篇作文是否得高分的关键。要明确文章的时态、同时人称要一 致、数要一致、首尾要呼应。再根据内容要求，现确定事情是过去已经发生还是未来即将发生，比 如记叙一件事要用一般过去时；写经常发生的事或对人物的描写，要 用一般现在时；对于未来的憧憬要用一般将来时；过去的事情对现在 造成的影响或过去延续到现在的状况都用现在完成时。一定不能乱用 乱配。三、短语运用要灵活同学们在写作文的时候，要尽量使用有把握的词，避免不必要的失分。 当然，定语从句、宾语从句等句型，在关键的时候用上一两个，会增 添你文章的文采。在英语中存在很多简

20、单又能表达很多意思的短语。 这些短语的运用可以使作文更加原汁原味。还有对关联词的使用，如 first of all, secondly, finally, last, so that, in order that, not. . but, not only. . . but also 等。make up one, s mind to do 下定决心做6 .表示想/希望want to do = would like to do 想做，hope/wish to do希望做expect to do期待着做desire to do=have a great desire to do7 .只加doing

21、作宾语的动词finish / keep / practice / suggest / allow / consider / mind/ miss / avoid / imagine / enjoy doing固定搭配look forward to doing 盼望做keep on doing 坚持做dream of doing梦想做can t help doing 情不自禁地做一 keep / stop / prevent sb. from doing阻止某人做be busy (in ) doingbe busy with 名词忙于做spend time / money (in )doing

22、spend time / money on 名词花费时间做have fun / have a good time / enjoy oneself doing 玩得开心还可以使用高级点的如，in a word, all in all （表示总结的）， but, yet, however （表示转折）等。经验的阅卷老师很在意这些逻辑连接词，因为这些词体现了整个文章 的思路。四、写全要点近年的各地中考英语提示性作文比较多，也就是说写作内容几乎都有 要点提示，确切地说就是给出写作提纲，通常都是35个提示点， 这种作文，同学们一定记住不要逐字翻译，但是提示点必须在文章中 有所体现。文章写得再好，如果缺少

23、了要点就会扣分的。所以要点也就是文章的 第二段内容，同学们要把提示点写全，然后围绕提示点充分发挥，丰 富自己所写的内容。五、书写要认真这一点同学们必须高度重视，作文的书写一定要保持规范整洁，同一 篇文章书写规范整洁的和书写混乱的之间可以有2到5分的差距。给阅卷老师留下最深刻印象的就是你的书写，最简单的得分点就是我 们的认真书写。工整漂亮的书写会给评卷老师留下美好的第一印象和 愉快的心情，在扣分时自然会“手下留情”。大家切记不要涂改，在情况允许的前提下可以打些草稿。避免不必要 的丢分。漂亮的字体是可以练出来的，只要大家在心里注意了自己的书写，都 会写得很好。作文评分标准中考作文一般从内容、语言、

24、组织结构这三方面进行评分（总分20 分）：（一）内容（满分8）7-8分：内容切题，意思连贯，表达清楚、完整。5-6分：内容基本切题，意思大致连贯，表达基本清楚、但不够完整。2-4分：内容不够切题，意思不够连贯，表达不够清楚、有些离题。0-1分：文不对题，表达不清。（二）语言（满分8）词数：每少5个单词扣0.5分，以此类推。只写出个别单词、词不成 句不给分。拼写：每处错误扣0.5分，同一错误不重复计数。语法：每处错误扣0.5分，同一语法错误不重复扣分。标点符号、大小写：每两处错误扣0.5分，但扣分总和不超过1分。（三）组织结构（满分4）内容充实，上下文连贯，用语规范，表达准确，无语法错误；词汇和

25、 句型句式运用恰当，多见好句型和习惯表达用语者，可给3-4分。内容充实，不写废话，上下文连贯，用语规范，表达准确，无或少见 语法错误；词汇和句型句式运用恰当，多见好句型和习惯表达用语者, 可给2分。一般情况下，内容和语言累计得分在15分以上者（含），方可得到 1-2分组织结构分。内容和语言在15分以下者，如文中有值得肯定的好的句型和表达， 可酌情考虑给1分组织结构分。通篇句型句式单一、词汇贫乏者，即使无语法错误，一般也不予给组 织结构分。分类作文提纲一、活动介绍类首段：(1) I m pleased to know that you re greatly interested in . . .

26、 , so I? d like to share a piece of good news that there will be a . . . . Now, let me offer you some useful information.(2) It s my great honor to invite you to enter a . . . . Now, let me offer you some useful information about it.(3) It s time for us to say goodbye to our school life soon.Surpris

27、ingly, there is a/an. . . prepared for us. Now, let me offer you some information about it.主体段:1 .时间&地点：The .will be held in Classroom 302 at 3 o clock in the afternoon on June 8th,2019.2 .内容：(1)主题句：There will be various meaningful activities included in it.(2)要,苞:First of all, You will be invited t

28、o . . . /You will be given a chance to . . . . which willAfter that, It will be more than interesting for you to . . /It will impress you a lot to . . . so thatAt last, doing sth. will play an important part in . . . .So .尾段：Thats all. I firmly believe that if you join in it, you will .That s all. I

29、 sincerely hope that you can come and share the happiness/fun with us.二、写人叙事类首段：(1)朋友：A friend in need is a friend indeed. I have a friend just like that who often offers me much warmth in my life. Let me introduce him to you.(2) 父母：If you ask me who is the most important one to me, without doubt, t

30、he answer is my . . . . Let me introduce him to you .(3) 老师：In both my life and study, my . teacher is special to me because he is not only my teacher but also my friend who has made a great difference to my character.主体段:1 .外貌：is very beautiful but a little fat with long hair and big eyes.2 .性格：.is

31、 an outgoing woman who always gets along well with people around her. / . . . is very kind to others and easy to get on with. /is so ready to help others that we all like to make friends with him.3 .爱好:She is especially good at cooking and often cooks different delicious foods for me.4 .事彳列：(1) Lind

32、a is like an angel. Whenever I meet trouble, she will always be there. When I fail my test, She always encourages me to face the fact bravely and then tries to help me to check the reason why I fail. At the same time, she shares her good ways of studying with me.(2) My Chinese teacher, Ms Li, not only teaches us how to learn, but also teaches us how to be a person. I remember I made a serious mistakes in Grade seven, that was to copy others