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1、读后续写原文中文Today was the finals of the Dance Competition. Our team of five hadme as the lead dancer; then there was Grace, my best friend and Eric, a dance lover who is a master in perfecting our choreography；and two talented twins，with such flexibility and grace on the stage that one cannot take their

2、 eyes off them.今天是舞蹈比赛的决赛。我们五人的团队有我作为领舞者；还有我的好朋友Grace和热爱舞蹈、精通编排的Eric；还有两个有天赋的双胞胎，TA们在舞台上的柔韧性和优雅让人无法移开眼睛。We had found a perfect coach for our team. Jackie, a cousin of Erics, worked in a dance school. Shewas a bit hesitantat first, but quickly agreed when she saw theprogress we had madeso far.我们为我们的团

3、队找到了一个完美的教练。Jackie是Eric的表亲，她在一所舞蹈学校工作。起初她有些犹豫，但当看到我们取得的进步后，她很快就同意了。In the dressing rooms, there were so many othercompetitorspreparing for their performance, rushing here and there.在更衣室里，有很多其他参赛者在为自己的表演做准备，忙得不可开交。Grace and I had changed into our costumes and were putting on our shoes when Ericmurmur

4、ed, “ Who are they?”当Grace和我换上我们的服装并正在穿鞋时，Eric喃喃说道：“他们是谁？”We turned to follow his stare, among many people,four beautiful girls along with a lean boyhad just walked in.我们转身顺着他的目光看去，在众多人群中，四个美丽的女孩和一个瘦削的男孩刚刚走进来。“Theyre first-rate!” cried Grace, “more like fashion models.”“他们太棒了！”Grace惊叫道，“更像是时尚模特。”The

5、y sure were. A look at the list of competitors told methey were from“Tweekverse”, themost famousdance schoolin the whole country.的确如此。看了一眼参赛者名单，我发现他们来自“Tweekverse”，这是全国最著名的舞蹈学校。Jackie came up behind us, “Guys, its time, come on. Lets go!”Jackie走到我们身后，说道：“伙计们，该上场了，加油。我们走吧！”“Oooh，do you get the vibe？”

6、Grace was excited. I could understand her，I didnt feel any less thrilled.“哇，你感受到氛围了吗？”Grace很兴奋。我能理解她的心情，我也同样兴奋不已。When we entered the concert hall, my jaw literally just dropped. It was massive. There were so many people. The four judges, who were seated at a large panel, didlook very serious.当我们走进音乐

7、厅时，我的下巴都惊掉了。这里非常宽敞。人们非常多。四位评委坐在一个大桌子旁，看起来非常严肃。The competition started. The first performances were brilliant. One team had the neon theme，in which they wore shine-in-the-dark costumes and the whole place was dark. I was attracted to their impressive display. Obviously, everybody was. The judges card

8、s displayed the scores.They were marking out of ten.比赛开始了。第一个表演非常出色。有一个团队的主题是霓虹灯，他们穿着在黑暗中发光的服装，整个场地都变黑了。我被他们令人印象深刻的表现所吸引。显然，每个人都是如此。评委们的评分卡上显示了分数。他们的评分是满分十分。The next performances were even better, but for us,they became more competitive.The group fromTweekverse was the best.Their costumes, charming

9、faces and fascinating performance impressed everyone.接下来的表演更加出色，但对我们来说，竞争变得更加激烈。来自Tweekverse的那个团队是最好的。他们的服装、迷人的面容和迷人的表现给每个人留下了深刻的印象。续写第一段：It was our turn next.接下来轮到我们了。续写第二段：I could hardly believe my eyes when I saw the final score-9.5 on the screen.(霓虹组10分，Tweekverse最棒的，我们组9.5-第三名？)当我看到屏幕上显示的最终得分9.

10、5时，我简直不敢相信自己的眼睛。文本分析我们五个人组成了一个舞蹈团队，找到了一个非常出色的教练Jackie.今天是舞蹈比赛的决赛。第一个登场的团队取了10分的满分，接下来是Tweekverse团队，全国最优秀的舞蹈团队。怀着无比忐忑的心情，接下来该我们登场了。五要素分析Who:我的舞蹈团队（I ;我的好朋友Grace热爱舞蹈、精通编排的Eric；两个有天赋的双胞胎）;教练Jakie；Tweekverse团队；四个评委When:the day of the finals of the Dance CompetitionWhere:the finals of the Dance Competiti

11、onWhat:It is our turn to stage in the Dance CompetitionHow:Other competitors are so excellent Why:We lacked confidence in ourselves.故事情节续写Para1:我们已经练习了无数遍，调整了步伐，精化了动作，现在该到把最好的一面呈现给观众的时候了。聚光灯照亮我们，音乐想起，我们完美地开始了开场舞。双胞胎的动作非常优雅而我和Eric则展示出力量和精准度。我们的舞蹈融合了现代舞，hip-hop以及独一无二的风格。观众一开始屏住呼吸，眼睛目不转睛地盯着我们，接着便爆发出雷鸣般

12、的掌声。Para2:一阵狂喜席卷了我们。我们不仅超出了自己的预期，而且还给评委留下了深刻的印象。观众的欢呼声和掌声震耳欲聋，我的心中充满了自豪。当我们聚集在舞台上领奖时，我不禁对我们令人难以置信的团队、我们出色的教练杰基以及我们共同度过的难忘旅程感到感激。我们对舞蹈的共同热情将我们带到了这一刻，我们知道这只是一段非凡旅程的开始。试水作文续写第一段：It was our turn next.We had practiced for countless hours, refining our moves, adjustingour steps, and now it was time to pre

13、sent it to the audience.The spotlight hit us, and the music began to play.We began our routine with perfect synchronization(开场齐舞，帅！张PD：Balance,注意你的balance!).Grace and the twinsexecuted their moves with elegance, whileEric and Ishowcased our power and precision.Our choreography was a blend of contemp

14、orary and hip-hop, a unique fusion that brought out our versatility.The audience was silent, their eyes glued to our performance. As the music reached its ending, we posed our final formation, a complex pyramid with me at the top.The applause that followed our final pose was thunderous.I glanced at

15、the judges and caught smiles ontheir faces.续写第二段：I could hardly believe my eyes when I saw the final score 9.5 on the screen. (霓虹组10分，Tweekverse最棒的，我们组9.5-第三名？)A wave ofeuphoriawashed over us.We had not only exceeded our own expectations but had also managed to impress the judges with our performanc

16、e. The cheers and applause from the audience were deafening, and my heart swelled with pride. As we gathered on stage to collect our prize, I couldnt help but feel grateful for our incredible team, our excellent coach,Jackie,as well asthe unforgettable journey we had shared.Our shared passion for da

17、nce had carried us to this moment, and we knew it was only the beginning of an extraordinary journey.附：官方参考范文It was our turn next. I felt goose bumps and my hands were shaking.My teammates also seemed very nervous.Jackie immediately worked out our expressions.“Hey, its going to be alright guys. You

18、have got to enjoy yourselfmove with the beat and dance your heart out.”she encouraged us. As we went up the stage. I felt a new energy. Wewere going to show the judges how excellently we could not only dance, but also make the audience connect andfeel with us. That determination and courage made me

19、and our team ace the competitionI could hardly believe my eyes when I saw the 9.5 on the screen. It was the highest mark yet and ours wasthe last performance. The crowd was bowled over by us. As we were bowing in response to the standing ovationwe received, I glimpsed sideways and saw a beaming Jackie cheering with the audience. Our rivals came tomeet us too. I could detect a note of disappointment in their “Congrats”. However, that was not what caused meto grin, it was just my elation at how we outshone them with our performance.学科网（北京）股份有限公司