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1、文档标题石家庄市2022年高中毕业班教学质量检测（二）英语读后续写试题【高考模拟题】第二节 读后续写（满分 25 分）阅读下面短文, 根据所给情节进行续写, 使之构成一个完整的故事。One day a man named Steve Gowan was fishing in the Thames Estuary in Britain. By the end of the day, besides fishes and sea weeds, he fished a messenger bottle. He opened it carefully and inside the bottle was

2、 a brief loving letter from a British soldier named Hughes to his wife:Dear wife, I am writing this note on this boat and dropping it into the sea just to see if it will reach you. If it does, sign this envelope on the bottom right-hand corner where it says receipt. Put the date and the hour of rece

3、ipt and your name where it says signature and look after it well.Ta-ta sweet, for the present. Your Hubby.Also attached was a note intended for the finder of the bottle:Sir or madam, would you kindly forward the enclosed letter and earn the blessing of a poor British soldier on his way to the front

4、of this ninth day of September, 1914. Signed Private T. Hughes.Actually, as Hughes crossed the English Channel on 9 September, 1914, at 7:52 p.m. he dropped a message in a green beer bottle over the side of the ship and he died two days later in the war.85 years later, the bottle was finally caught

5、by Steve Gowan, the fisherman. Steve Gowan examined the letter carefully. It had the soldiers name and army number, so he supposed that the message should be real. But how could he deliver it to the intended recipient? In 1999, the Internet was still in its early years. No way would he be able to fi

6、nd Hughess possible surviving family that way! So, what to do?Well, he put an advertisement in a local paper! The story captured so many hearts and minds that it gained national coverage. Somewhere along the way, through magic and luck, he learned that Hughess daughter, Emily, was still alive in New

7、 Zealand! 注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；2.请按如下格式作答。Paragraph 1: Right away, Gowan and journalists managed to get in touch with Emily.Paragraph 2: The local paper decided to offer Mr. Gowan an air ticket to deliver the letter in person.【试题信息】试卷名称体裁主题语境词数石家庄市2022年高中毕业班教学质量检测（二）记叙文人与社会正文英文词数321，续写第一段首句12个单词，续写第二段首句

8、17个单词。【语篇分析】1. what（前文主旨）1999年，Steve Gowan在捕鱼的时候发现了英国士兵Hughes于1914年去往前线的时候写给妻子的放在漂流瓶里的情书。1999年的时候，网络还不够发达，Steve Gowan选择了登报找人，几经周折，Steve Gowan得知Hughes的女儿Emily生活在新西兰，故事由此展开。2. why（故事主题）帮助他人家人团聚。3. how（写作技巧）第三人称、记叙、描写4. 具体内容（利用拉波夫叙事模式进行分析） 点题 文章无标题，通过第一段可知，本文讲述的市主人公Steve Gowan在一次捕鱼过程中偶然拾得一个漂流瓶，里面是一位老兵给

9、妻子的情书。 指向 故事发生时间是1999年的某一天，地点是the Thames Estuary in Britain，主要人物是Steve Gowan和老兵的女儿Emily，次要人物是老兵的妻子和记者。 进展 主人公Steve Gowan在一次捕鱼过程中拾得一个漂流瓶，里面是一位老兵给妻子的情书，Steve Gowan想要帮助老兵完成心愿，但是当时网络不够发达，于是Steve Gowan选择登报，幸运地得知老兵的女儿生活在新西兰，想要与她取得联系。 结果/结局结局部分是需要学生续写的，通过前面的情节走向，再根据续写第一段的首句“Right away, Gowan and journalist

10、s managed to get in touch with Emily.”可知Steve Gowan和记者试图与Emily取得联系，而根据第二段首句“The local paper decided to offer Mr. Gowan an air ticket to deliver the letter in person.”可知当地报社决定给Steve Gowan一张机票让他亲自去送信。所以续写第一段是Steve Gowan与Emily成功取得联系后Emily的反应，而续写第二段是Steve Gowan得知消息后的反应及两人见面的场景。 评议文章倒数第二段讲到1999年网络不发达，于是S

11、teve Gowan选择登报的方式寻找老兵的家人。最后一段幸运地找到了老兵的女儿，因此后文与其相见并转交信件。 回应 根据续写第一段的提示句和续写第二段的提示句可知，续写第一段应着重叙述Emily得知这封信的存在之后的反应，考生应结合“85年之后”这个线索去体会Emily的感受。根据续写第二段的提示句可知，当地报社决定给Steve Gowan一张机票让他亲自去送这封信。因此，本段可首先描述Steve Gowan得到这个消息时的感受和想法，并合理构思二人会面后的情况。5. 语言 人物角色1：Steve Gowan性格：细心，机智，热心行为：小心打开漂流瓶，仔细确认信件的信息，思考适合的方式主动帮

12、忙寻找家人。心理：curious careful determined happy moved角色2：Emily行为：偶然得知父亲的信件的消息。心理：surprised moved happy/ grateful 场景老兵的女儿得知父亲的信件 语言风格语言风格很平实6. 情节 冲突Steve Gowan拾到信件后尝试联系老兵的家人，网络不发达，该如何联系并送信？ 行动Steve Gowan选择登报并与Emily取得联系。（续写第一段） 解决报社提供机票让Steve Gowan亲自送信。（续写第二段） 伏笔前文提到因为网络不发达，所以Steve Gowan登报寻找，幸运地得知老兵女儿Emily的

13、消息，并且续写第二段提到报社提供机票，为后文两人成功会面送信埋下了伏笔。【素材积累】Para 1the Thames Estuary 泰晤士河河口sea weed 海草loving letter 情书Para 2receipt 收到signature 签名Para 4attach 附上intend for 为准备Para 5on ones way to 前往的路上front 战争前线Para 7recipient 收件人It had the soldiers name and army number, so he supposed that the message should be real

14、.宾语从句 中文含义：信上有士兵的名字和部队编号，所以他认为这条消息应该是真的。Para 8capture 捕捉，抓住Somewhere along the way, through magic and luck, he learned that Hughess daughter, Emily, was still alive in New Zealand! 宾语从句 中文含义：在寻找的过程中，或许是魔法和运气，他得知Hughes的女儿Emily还活着，在新西兰!【参考范文】Right away, Gowan and journalists managed to get in touch wi

15、th Emily. It took the old lady, who was only 2 when her father headed off to the battle (定语从句+时间状语从句), really a while to recover from the pleasant surprise (不定式作真正的主语). Due to her young age at the time of his death, Emily never knew her father, though she grew up listening to stories about him from

16、her mother and cherishing his award medals (让步状语从句). Having only a few photos of his father (非谓语动词短语作状语), Emily spent most of her life trying to find out more about him.The local paper decided to offer Mr. Gowan an air ticket to deliver the letter in person. He jumped at the chance to help Emily con

17、nect herself with this lost piece of her past. Emily shed tears of joy when hugging the faraway guest tightly. Holding the amazingly dry and intact note (非谓语动词短语作状语), she offered her heartfelt gratitude, saying the bottle was a great source of warmth and comfort (非谓语动词短语作状语). Though Gowan joked that he himself a fisherman served as a postman this time (让步状语从句+宾语从句), he never expected something clinging to his fishing net (现在分词短语作后置定语) would bring so much to a beloved one almost a century later.学科网（北京）股份有限公司