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1、高 考 英 语 写 作 训 练 2021年 广 州 二 模 续 写 Aram and Rossis BakeryWalking along the narrow brick sidewalk,Aram tooka deep breath.The air smelled of lemons and bakedbread and coffee,coming from Rossis Italian Bakery.He was almost there.Aram still couldnt believe his luck.All his friendswere working boring summ

2、er jobs-waiting tablesand babysitting.And here he was,about to start asan actual bakers assistant,doing what he loved.Itwas all thanks to his Aunt Rita.She knew Mrs.Rossiand had arranged everything.It was the perfectexperience for his future career.Rossis Bakery,hewas sure,would one day be known as

3、the placewhere he got his start.Ah,here he was-the bakery.A faded wooden signover the door read“Rossis Bakery.Aramstraightened his shoulders and entered.Mrs.Rossiwas sitting at the counter,looking old and wise.Aramgreeted her and stuck out his hand.Mrs.Rossilooked at it for a second before turning a

4、round andwaving him inside.Im ready to learn everything/5Aram said.“Great.Lefs start with the cash register,Mrs.Rossi said,because thafs what youll be doing.”Sheshowed him how to use the cash register.It wasnthard.The pastry trays were all marked by price,andthere werent that many choices anyway,hat

5、s it?”Aram said,his heart sinkina“But when do we bake?”“Bake?I order wholesale now.No more baking.Im too old.,Then Mrs.Rossi silently held up herhands.Aram took in her knotted,swollen fingers,andhe understood.A wave of disappointment struck him.Sadness overwhelmed him so suddenly that hecouldnt thin

6、k of a word to say.He sighed,and Mrs.Rossi sighed,too.ul used tobake it all.Bread and cakes.And no one did it betterthan me.But that was when these things worked,”said Mrs.Rossi holding up her hands once more andglancing across the shelves filled with empty bottleslabelled with names of the various

7、ingredients（酉 己 料）she once used.Suddenly she came alive,waving herarthritic（关 节 炎 的）hands.Teople used to line uparound the corner.Everyone wanted my bakedbread.A ram来 实 习 的 年 轻 人 未 来 职 业 憧 憬 失 望 Mrs.R ossi店 主 老 女 人 高 超 烘 焙 技 巧 被 迫 放 弃 Then a thought occurred to Aram that he could askMrs.Rossi to tea

8、ch him.Aram 请 求 教“Dear Mrs.Rossi J his eyes shone like the stars inthe night sky,“I love bakery from my childhood andits my dream to provide delicious bread and cakesfor others.When people are in a bad mood,I believetasty food can bring them happiness,and want tobecome that person who spread joy thr

9、ough my ownefforts!Please teach me!”过 去 梦 想 一 现 在 观 点 一 未 来 期 许：提 出 要 求 Mrs.Rossi raised her eyebrows and carefullymeasured the young man,who stood nervouslywaiting for her answer.过 程 说 服 提 出 教 一 同 意？（不 合 理）不 同 意？一 反 复 请 求 一 心 理 变 化（对 话、原 因、复 杂）沉 默 Mrs.Rossi finally said,Lets buy the ingredientsfirs

10、t/5 Rossi 同 意 教 配 料 买 齐 开 始 烘 焙 学 习 提 升 焕 发 生 机 顾 客 归 来 For Aram,it was a weight off his mind./心 理 回 应 In the following days,Aram ordered all the necessaryingredients online and the empty bottles on theshelves were refilled.具 体 动 作+结 果 With Mrs.Rossis guidance,Arams baking skillsimproved day by d a

11、y.情 节 发 展 动 作Old customers started to come back,and the fadedbakery seemed to regain its life.结 果 Sometimes Mrs.Rossi would sit in an armchairoutside and greeted people under the new woodensign,which now read“Aram and Rossis Bakery.平 凡 结 尾 一 日 常 一 扣 题全 文 呈 现 Then a thought occurred to Aram that he c

12、ould askMrs.Rossi to teach him.uDear Mrs.Rossi J his eyesshone like the stars in the night sky,u love bakeryfrom my childhood and its my dream to providedelicious bread and cakes for others.When peopleare in a bad mood,I believe tasty food can bring themhappiness,and I want to become that person who

13、spread joy through my own efforts!Please teach me!5 5Mrs.Rossi raised her eyebrows and carefullymeasured the young man,who stood nervouslywaiting for her answer.Mrs.Rossi finally said,Lets buy the ingredientsfirst/5 For Aram,it was a weight off his mind.In thefollowing days,Aram ordered all the nece

14、ssaryingredients online and the empty bottles on theshelves were refilled.With Mrs.Rossis guidance,Arams baking skills improved day by day.Oldcustomers started to come back,and the fadedbakery seemed to regain its life.Sometimes Mrs.Rossi would sit in an armchair outside and greetedpeople under the new wooden sign,which now read“Aram and Rossis Bakery”.