读后续写—振兴烘培店讲义 高考英语二轮复习作文专项.docx

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1、阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。Aram and Rossis Bakery Walking along the narrow brick sidewalk, Aram took a deep breath. The air smelled of lemons and baked bread and coffee, coming from Rossis Italian Bakery. He was almost there. Aram still couldnt believe his luck. All his friends were workin

2、g boring summer jobs waiting tables and babysitting. And here he was, about to start as an actual bakers assistant, doing what he loved. It was all thanks to his Aunt Rita. She knew Mrs Rossi and had arranged everything. It was the perfect experience for his future career. Rossis Bakery, he was sure

3、, would one day be known as the place where he got his start. Ah, here he was the bakery. A faded wooden sign over the door read Rossis Bakery. Aram straightened his shoulders and entered. Mrs Rossi was sitting at the counter, looking old and wise. Aram greeted her and stuck out his hand. Mrs Rossi

4、looked at it for a second before turning around and waving him inside.“Im ready to learn every thing,”Aram said. “Great. Lets start with the cash register,”Mrs. Rossi said, because thats what youll be doing. She showed him how to use the cash register. It wasnt hard. The pastry trays were all marked

5、 by price, and there werent that many choices anyway. Thats it? Aram said, his heart sinking. But when do we bake? Bake? I order wholesale now. No more baking.Im too old., Then Mrs Rossi silently held up her hands. Aram took in her knotted, swollen fingers, and he understood. A wave of disappointmen

6、t struck him. Sadness overwhelmed him so suddenly that he couldnt think of a word to say. He sighed, and Mrs Rossi sighed, too. I used to bake it all. Bread and cakes. And no one did it better than me. But that was when these things worked,said Mrs Rossi holding up her hands once more and glancing a

7、cross the shelves filled with empty bottles labeled with names of the various ingredients(配料)she once used. Suddenly she came alive, waving her arthritic(关节炎的)hands. People used to line up around the corner. Everyone wanted my baked bread.”注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Paragraph1: Then a thou

8、ght occurred to Aram that he could ask Mrs Rossi to teach him.Paragraph2: Mrs Rossi finally said, Lets buy the ingredients first.文本分析：1. 标题最明显的暗示是标题。有标题的读后续写中，标题常常暗示主旨或线索。例如读后续写文章标题“Aram and Rossis Bakery”暗示主人公最终会和文中的 Rossi 一同经营面包店，并且店门口的招牌应该加上 Aram，也就是“我”的名字。2.故事大意主人公Aram渴望将来做一个烘焙师，在暑期的时候想去Mrs Ross

9、i的烘焙店学习烘焙，但Mrs Rossi年纪大了，无法再做烘焙，只叫Aram做收银员。回忆起当年做面包和蛋糕的情景，Mrs Rossi精神为之一振。这时，Aram想到了一个主意，他可以让Mrs Rossi教他烘焙。故事会怎么样发展呢？3.文本特点这篇故事以主人公想学习烘焙但Mrs Rossi年迈已放弃烘焙的冲突为线索，要求学生续写后面的故事。整篇故事简单易懂，冲突明显。从文章标题Aram and Rossis Bakery来看，最后的结局可能是Mrs Rossi教会Aram做烘焙，并一起将烘焙店开下去。4. What is the conflict?Aram wanted to learn e

10、verything about bakery from Mrs Rossi but Rossi didnt bake anymore.5.What is the theme?1. One should stick to his/her dream no matter what happens.2. One should keep learning what he/she likes to enrich his/her life.3.Their love for bakery and their dream to rejuvenate the Rossis .Bakery coincided .

11、5. 续写关键第一段Focus: Aram asked Mrs Rossi to teach him.1. What did Aram do and say then?2. What was Mrs Rossis response? 3. How to end this paragraph?第二段Focus: Aram asked Mrs Rossi to teach him.1.What was Arams response?2. What would they do then?3. What was the ending of the story？6.描写制作蛋糕的场景I got the

12、milk and four eggs and the sugar. The hardest part would be breaking the eggs on the edge of the bowl.I sifted(饰) the flour and baking powder together first. And salt. I particularly remembered that because it seemed strange to put salt in a cake. I put all ingredients together and mixed them. It lo

13、oked creamy and delicious.I poured it into the baking pan and put it into the oven. After we finished tidying up, I opened the oven door and peeked. The cake had risen and turned tan. With hot pads I carefully took it out and put it on the table.参考答案：Para1：Then a thought occurred to Aram that he cou

14、ld ask Mrs. Rossi to teach him. Hesitating for a while, he plucked up all his courage to speak to Mrs. Rossi, “Mrs. Rossi, Im not here to be a cashier, I am here to learn to be a baker. Could you please teach me?” Raising her eyebrows in surprise, Mrs. Rossi froze, as if rooted on the ground. Scratc

15、hing her knotted, swollen fingers, she sighed, “ I am too old to do this now. Look at my hands!” “But I can be your hands!” Aram replied with a trembling but determined voice. Moved by his words, Mrs. Rossi nodded her head slowly.Para 2：Mrs Rossi finally said, Lets buy the ingredients first. Hearing

16、 this, Aram jumped up in happiness, with his eyes sparkling like shining stars. All the ingredients having been bought, all those empty bottles were filled. Mrs. Rossi taught Aram how to make a cake step by step. With Mrs. Rossis guidance, Aram put all ingredients together and mixed them. It looked

17、creamy and delicious. Then, he poured it into the baking pan and put it into the oven. The whole house was quiet except for the slight sound made by them. To their satisfaction, when the cake was taken out of the oven, the shop was flooded with the sweet fragrance from it. Aram said, “Thanks, Mrs. Rossi, for teaching me how to make a cake to realize my dream.” Mrs. Rossi held his hands, saying, “ It is you who teach me how to stick to my dream.”学科网（北京）股份有限公司