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1、大学英语六级考试优秀范文及写作指导关于如何看待大学生上网的英语作文Internet Surfing-因特网冲浪Nowadays, there i s a grow i ng popu I ar i ty of I nternet surfing on co I Iege campus. An i ncreas i ng number of students, major i ng either in science or engineer ing or in I iberaI arts, spend many hours surfing the Internet with keen inter

2、est everyday.Internet surf i ng has attracted co I Iege students I i ke magnets because it i s the worId of Internet and the worId of globalization. Fi rst, with the globaI coverage of Internet, we can reach out and touch anyone at any pI ace of the worId. Via I nternet, we can send and rece i ve E-

3、ma i I s at any t ime much faster, cheaper and more effective than conventional means such as teI ephone, teI ex and fax. Next,via access to the home pages of I i brar i es, universities, journaIs and news agencies, and research organ i zat i ons, we can eas iIy acqu i re a I I k i nds of informat i

4、on, to know what i s going on a I I over the wor Id. Final ly, by clicking the mouse, we are capabIe of doing such important things as shopping, finding jobs, maki ng fr iends, down-loading files and programs, doing bus i ness, pub IishingStill a Good Vi rtue? You shouId wr i te at I east 150 words,

5、 and base your compos i t i on on the out I i ne （given i n Ch i nese） below:1）随着人们生活水平的提高，一些人认为勤俭节约的生活方式已 经过时了2）但是很多人反对这种说法3）你的看法是，为什么？Is Thr ift Still a Good Vi rtue?关于勤俭节约的英语作文-行文思路本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点提出一种观点，提纲第2 点提出另外一种相反的观点，提纲第3点要求谈谈“我”的观点，由 此可判断本文应为对比选择型作文。根据所给提纲，本文应包含如下内容：提出第1种观点：节俭和 朴素的生活方式已经过时

6、了，并说明理由；提出第2种观点：勤俭节 约仍然是一种美德，并说明理由；表明“我”对节俭的看法，并说明 理由。关于勤俭节约的英语作文-高分范文Is Thrift Still a Good Vi rtue?With the improvement of the Iiving standards, many peopIe are 1 no I onger i nterested i n the simple I i fe sty I e 2 and someof them even fee I ashamed to be thrifty. What they pursue i s the Iates

7、t fashion. In thei r eyes, thr ift i s a I ready out of sty I e.3However, still other peopIe insist that thr ift is a good vi rtue. They say that the unprecedented power of production doesn t mean that we are ent it led to a life of extravagance, because our natura I resources are I i mi ted 2 and s

8、ome of them even are 4 on the dec I i ne. 5 Moreover, they ho I d that waste may Iead to degradat ion of social atmosphere and envi ronmenta I pollution as well.6As to me, I prefer the Iatter opinion. I be Iieve 7 “Waste not, want not. The truth of this saying is 8not to give up comfort but to enhan

9、ce efficiency. 5 I n fact, economic growth depends enormous Iy on sav i ng. 5Bes i des, there are still mi I I ions of Chinese 9 I iving under poverty I ine. We can never afford reck I ess waste. 5Therefore, 10 it i s no doubt that thrift i s still a good v i rtue that we shou I d not g i ve up.关于勤俭

10、节约的英语作文【亮点点评】“不再2表示递进。3引出另外一种观点。4 “在下降”。5过渡衔接词语，使文章条理清晰、衔接紧密。6用于引出自己的观点或选择。刀引用谚语“俭以防匮”。8not. . . but连接并列结构，意为“不是而是9现在分词短语作后置定语。10 “毫无疑问”。关于勤俭节约的英语作文-佳句临摹1 .佳句:Our natura I resources are I i mi ted and some of them even are on the dec Ii ne.临摹：车祸使人们的财产遭受极大的损失，甚至还夺走了无数人 的生命。2 .佳 句：The truth of th i s

11、say i ng i s not to give up comfort but to enhance efficiency.临摹：我们永远都不应该低估自己的能力，而应该相信一句谚语: “有志者，事竟成。”KEY1. Traffic accidents have caused great damages to people s properties and even taken away thousands of people s I ives.2. We shouId never underestimate our abi Iities but should be I i eve i n th

12、e proverb: Where there i s a wi I I, there i s a way.” 关于节食减肥的英语作文Di rect ions: For thi s part, you are a I I owed 30 minutes to wr i te a composition on the topic On Dieting. You shouId write at I east 150 words, and base your composition on the out Ii ne （given i n Ch i nese） below:1）现在有越来越多人的选择节食

13、减肥，有的人是为了健康，但是 更多的人是为了有一个苗条的身材2）分析节食减肥可能带来的影响3）你的建议On Dieting关于节食减肥的英语作文-行文思路本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点指出一种现象并要求说明 原因，提纲第2点要求分析这种现象可能带来的影响，提纲第3点要 求针对该现象提出“我”的建议，由此可判断本文应为现象解释型作 文。根据所给提纲，本文应包含如下内容：描述越来越多的人节食的现象并分析主要原因；阐述节食不当可能带来的影响；针对节食给出 “我”的建议。关于节食减肥的英语作文-高分范文On DietingNowadays more and more peop I e are be

14、gi nn i ng to go on a d iet. Some peopIe are concerned with thei r health, and they go on a diet in order to Iose unwanted weight. But still others, 1especially the young women, are paying too much attention to the i r outward appearance. They 2 become the I ead i ng numbers who go on a diet.3Howeve

15、r, dieting might 4br ing great negat i ve effects on peopIe. 3For one thing, quite a Iot of peopIe don t reaI Iy need dieting to keep health, and they diet just because they want to keep slim. For them, dieting 5 not on I y i s use I ess but a I so might damage the i r heaI th. 3For another, some pe

16、opIe I ack enough knowledge on how to diet scientifically. 3As a resuIt, they are I ikeIy to suffer from malnutrition.6 Cons i der i ng the ser i ous damage of unhea I thy d i et i ng, we shouId be cautious in dieting. 3In my opinion, dieting, 7for whatever reasons, needs professionaI guidance. 8On

17、Iy with r i ght gu i dance can dieting work 9as we expect.关于节食减肥的英语作文-【亮点点评】1 “尤其”,表示强调。2 “成为主力军”。3过渡衔接词语，使文章条理清晰、衔接紧密。4用于引出对危害或负面影响的阐述。5 “not onlybut also”用于连接并列成分。6 “考虑到，鉴于”,介词。7 “不管因为什么原因，whatever意为“无论什么”。8 “only+状语”位于句首,引起句子部分倒装。9 “像我们期望的那样”。关于节食减肥的英语作文-佳句临摹1 .佳句：For them, dieting not on I y i s

18、 use I ess but a I so mi ght damage thei r health.临摹：基因技术不仅使动植物受益而且还有助于提高人类的生活 质量。2 .佳 句：I n my op i n i on, d i et i ng, for whatever reasons, needs profess ionaI gu i dance.临摹：无论你的目标是什么，你都必须通过诚实的劳动来实现它。3 .佳 句：On Iy with r ight guidance can dieting work as weexpect.临摹：只有修满足够的学分，学生才能够获准毕业。KEY1. Gene

19、tic technology he I ps not on I y the p I ant and animals but a I so human be i ngs to Ii ve a h i gher qua Ii ty2. Whatever your aim i s, you must worked honest I y to attai n i t.3. On Iy when adequate credits have been achieved can students gain the qua I ification for graduation.关于交通事故的英语作文Di re

20、ct ions: For this part, you are a I I owed 30 minutes to wr ite a composition on the topic Road Accidents. You shou I d write at I east 150 words, and base your composition on the out Ii ne （given i n Ch i nese） below:1）交通事故会给人们的生命和财产带来很大的损失2）分析交通事故发生的主要原因3）如何降低交通事故发生率 Road Accidents关于交通事故的英语作文-行文思路

21、本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点提出一个问题，提纲第2 点要求分析造成该问题的原因，提纲第3点要求说明解决该问题的方 法，由此可判断本文应为问题解决型作文。根据所给提纲，本文应包含如下内容：指出道路事故的严重性及 主要危害；分析导致道路事故的主要原因；说明应该如何降低道路事 故的发生率。关于交通事故的英语作文-高分范文Road Acc i dentsRoad acc i dents, 1 as one of the i mportant soc i a I prob I ems, have always been paid great concern. In most of the big

22、cities, every day, there happen quite a few road accidents. In these acc i dents, many peop I e suffer great property I osses 2 and some of them even Iose the i r Ii ves.3The fol lowing reasons contr ibute to road accidents. 4Above all, traffic i s becoming heav i er and heavier, especial ly in big

23、cities. More and more vehicIes on road 5increase the chances of accidents. 4In addition, many dr i vers I ack safety awareness and even don t comp I y with the traffic reguI at i ons. For examp Ie, some dr i vers run the redI ight or dr ive after being drunk. 4Besides, the 6weak supervi sion and man

24、agement of traff ic controI sectors i s a not i ceabIe reason.7Consider ing the ser iousness of the traffic prob Iem, 8it i s h i gh time for us to take more effect i ve measures to so I ve i t. 4Fi rstly, the government shouId i nvest more money to improve pub I ic transportat ion and provide more

25、transportation ways for peopIe to choose. 4Second Iy, str i cter Iaws and regulations shouId be made to puni sh those who break traffic reguI at i ons. 4Finally, dr i vers shouId enhance safety awareness and deveI op good driving manners. 9Only i n th i s way could road accidents be avoided successf

26、uIly.关于交通事故的英语作文【亮点点评】1插入语,as意为“作为2表递进。3用于引出原因。4过渡衔接词语，使文章条理清晰、衔接紧密。“增加了的机会或可能性”。6 “监管不力”，weak的使用准确地道。7 “考虑到，鉴于”，介词。8用于引出解决办法，表示解决问题的紧迫性，常译为“早该是的时候了，9 “only+状语”位于句首，引起句子部分倒装。关于交通事故的英语作文-佳句临摹1. 佳句：In these accidents, many peopIe suffer great property Iosses and some of them even Iose thei r I i ves.临

27、摹：一些人失败后可能会变得灰心丧气，甚至会放弃成功的希 望。2. 佳句：More and more veh i c I es on road i ncrease the chancesof accidents.临摹：许多学生认为考取更多的证书可以增加他们找工作的机会。3. 佳 句：It is high time for us to take more effecti ve measures to solve it.临摹：因此，我们早该关注一下人口过剩问题了。KEY4. Some peopIe, after a fai Iure, may become discouraged andeven g

28、ive up thei r hope for success. papers and free Iy airing our op i n i ons on a I I sorts of i interest i ng i ssues. What i s more, I internet offhrs many opportunities. For examp I e, we can work, educate ourse I ves and communicate with others at home via Internet.I n the I nformat ion Age, it is

29、 diff icuh to imagine modern I ife without Internet. With the rapid deveIopment of Information Techno Iogy i ndustry, successfuI dot-com compan i es mushroomed everywhere. Internet i s revoIut ion i z i ng our economy, our society and our life.关于大学生压力的英语作文Di rect ions: For th i s part, you are a I I

30、 owed 30 minutes to wr i te a composition on the topic How Shou I d Col lege Students Re I i eve Pressure? You shou I d write at I east 150 words, and base your compos i t i on on the out Ii ne （given i n Ch i nese） below:1）当今的大学生要面临很多来自不同方面的压力2）大学生缓解压力的方式有3）你一般都是如何排解压力的？How Should Col lege Students

31、 Rei ieve Pressure?5. Many students be Ii eve that more certificates may i ncrease the chances of the i r be i ng empIoyed.6. Therefore, i t is high time we paid spec i a I attent i on to the prob Iem of overpopuI at i on.(关于大学生就业难的英语作文 Di rect ions: For this part, you are a I I owed 30 minutes to w

32、r i te a compos i t ion on the top ic Col lege Students Job Hunt i ng. You shouId write at I east 150 words accord i ng to the out Ii ne given be Iow i n Ch i nese:1)近年来出现大学生就业难的现象2)产生这一现象的原因3)如何解决这一问题关于大学生就业难的英语作文【思路点拨】本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点要求指出目前大学生就业 难的现象，提纲第2点要求分析这种现象产生的原因，提纲第3点则 要求阐述应该如何解决这一问题，由此可判断

33、本文应为问题解决型作 文。根据所给提纲，本文应包含以下内容：提出大学生就业难的现象, 指出现象的表现；说明现象产生的原因，如大学生追求目标过高等； 从几个方面提出解决方法。关于大学生就业难的英语作文【参考范文】Col lege Students Job HuntingNowadays, the empIoyment of col lege students i s becoming more and more of a prob Iem. About a decade ago, uni vers ityjobs afterstudents could find sat i sfactory a

34、nd env i abIe graduation, while the things are quite different at present.In addition, according to statistics, about 30% of graduate students can t find a job but stay at home after graduationoEmpIoyment difficulty of col lege students i s due to the fol lowing reasons. Among these, the increasing

35、recruitment of co I I eges and un i vers i ties p I ays a vital role. I n add i t i on, many co I Ieges and universities fail to adapt thei r courses to the deveIopment of economyoCons i der i ng the ser i ousness of unemployment of co I Iege students, I think it is high time that we took effective

36、measures to so Ive the prob Iem. Above all, col lege students shou I d rea I i ze the i r own defects and further i mprove themse I ves to keep the i r competitive edge i n soc i ety. Moreover, co I Ieges or universities shouId provide more trainings and internship opportunities before the students

37、enter the society. Besides, col lege students shouId hold a r ight attitude towards jobs and set the i r job expectations at a suitable I eve I. On Iy through these ways can the co I I ege students f i nd a sat i sfactory job and have a br i ghter future。（ 关于大学生同居利与弊的英语作文Di rections: For this part,

38、you are a I I owed 30 mi nutes to wr i te a compos i t i on on the top i c My View on Col Iege Student s cohabitation. You shouId write at I east 150 words, and base your compos it ion on the out I i ne （gi ven in Chinese） below:1）现在社会上的未婚同居现象相当普遍，大学生中也存在这种现 象2）分析大学生同居的利与弊3）你怎样看待大学生同居现象？为什么？关于大学生同居利

39、与弊的英语作文【思路点拨】本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点指出一种现象，提纲第2 点要求分析该现象的利与弊，提纲第3点要求谈谈“我”对该现象的 看法，由此可判断本文应为对比选择型作文。根据所给提纲，本文应包含如下内容：描述大学生中的未婚同居 现象，引出对其的争议；对比分析大学生同居的利与弊；表明“我” 对大学生未婚同居现象的立场并说明理由。关于大学生同居利与弊的英语作文【参考范文】My View on Col lege Students, CohabitationNowadays, premar i taI cohabitation i s common and popuI ar and t

40、h i s phenomenon has extended to the campus. More and more co I I ege student I overs choose to I i ve together off campus. Th i s phenomenon has aroused great pub I i c concern and there are much discussion on its advantages and disadvantagesoAdmittedly, co I Iege students cohabitat ion has its adv

41、antages. One of them is that the lovers can know each other better by Iiving together. They can decide whether thei r romant i c re I at i onsh i p shouId go on. Second Iy, cohabitation matures col lege students and improves thei r sense of responsibi Iity. However, there are a I so many prob Iems r

42、esulting from the cohabitation on campus. A good examp I e to i I I ustrate this point i s that some girls might be hurt by the i r i rrespons i bIe boyfr iends. Bes ides, I i vi ng together wi I I invoIve many trivial things, which of course wi I I infIuence thei r study。From my poi nt of view, it

43、i s unwise for co I Iege student I overs to I i ve together dur i ng thei r educat i on. After all, premar ita I cohabitat ion i s not an easy thi ng, which i s too ear Iy for co I Iege students who are not mature enough. Therefore, I suggest that the col lege students shouId take Iove ser iousIy an

44、d do not choose to Iive together before gradualiono关于电视选秀节目的英语作文 Di rections: For this part, you are a I I owed 30 minutes to wr i te a compos i t ion on the top ic Attend i ng TV PK shows does (or does not) good to young peop I e.You should write at I east 150 words, and base your composition on th

45、e out Iine （gi ven in Chinese） below:1）现在各种各样的电视选秀节目吸引了许多年轻人2）为了实现明星梦，一些年轻人甚至放弃了学业，这种现象引起 了许多关注3）你怎么看？为什么？关于电视选秀节目的英语作文【思路点拨】本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点和第2点指出一种有争议 的现象，提纲第3点要求表明“我”对该现象的看法，由此可判断本 文应为对比选择型作文。根据所给提纲，本文应包含如下内容：描述年轻人热衷选秀节目 的现象，引出对其的争议；表明“我”对年轻人热衷选秀节目的看法, 并说明“我”的理由。关于电视选秀节目的英语作文【参考范文】Attend i ng TV

46、 PK Shows Does No Good to Young PeopIeNowadays TV PK shows are great hits in China and have attracted many young peopIe. Some youngsters even give up thei r studies to attend these shows in the hope of becoming famous overn ight. Some peopIe th i nk these shows prov i de young peopIe more chance to

47、show taIents, while others be I ieve that attend i ng these shows does no good to the young peopIe. As for me, I prefer to the Iatter op i n i onoIt shouId be admitted that some young peopIe I ike Li yuchun has stood out from the numerous attendants i n the PK show, but that doesn t mean attend i ng

48、 the PK shows i s a good way to become successfu I for young peop Ie. The fol lowing reasons can support my view. Fi rstIy, TV PK shows breed rest Iessness and i nduce young peop I e to hunt after fame at whatever cost. Second I y, TV PK shows can subvert the youngsters vaIues. They think attending the PK shows is a shortcut to the success, so they may despise the way of achieving success by hard work. Final ly, if the