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1、One bright and breezy morning in Irelan d, a leprechaun named Colin marched thro ugh the woods. He was whistling like a bird （技能：吹口哨，续写会用到）and think ing about how pretty he looked in his n ew waistcoat （道具：心爱的新背心）which w as as fresh and green as a beautiful spring leaf （春天新发芽的绿叶象征着一种生 命？和鳄鱼那篇的光一样）.W

2、ith that thought, he tried imitating t he sound （技能：模仿声音）of the wind whis t1ing in the trees. Colin grinned. Copy ing different sounds was among his grea test strengths.（技能点加满）The peace was broken （peace 被打破后文衣服被撕破衣服被补好peace恢复，一个完整的闭合圈）by the yelling an d howling nearby. Waah!Waah!” What w as that?

3、Colin dived into a bush, shaki ng and trembling with fear. Was it a fo x or an eagle, ready to snatch him up fo r breakfast?在爱尔兰的一个明媚、 微风吹拂的早晨，一个 叫Colin的小精灵正穿 过树林。他像鸟儿一样 吹着口哨，想着他穿上 新背心后的漂亮模样， 那背心鲜绿如春叶一般 美丽。想着想着，他试图模仿 风吹过树林的声音。Co lin露出了微笑。模仿 不同的声音是他最大的 优点之一。宁静被附近的喊叫和吼 叫声打破了。“哇！哇！” 那是什么？ Colin害怕 得跳进了一

4、丛灌木，全 身颤抖。是狐狸还是鹰， 准备把他抓起来当早 餐？正在他颤抖时，声音又 响起了。“哇！哇！” 然而灌木丛中并没有什 么东西跳出来。Colin 环视四周，然后松了一As he trembled, the sound came again. W aah! Waah!v Yet nothing leaped out of t he bushes. Colin cast a glance around, t hen sighed in relief.uWaah! Waah!”He crept toward an open area where a human baby girl sat, f

5、i11 in g the air with her cries. Quiet! Creat ures fill the woods,（丛林里有各种各样的 生物，有危险的，当然，也有善良的，比如小 精灵 Colin） Colin whispered. He tried si nging, dancing, making funny faces an d imitating various animal noises（此处 使用技能 1 次） to distract her attention.口气。“哇！哇！”他悄悄向 一个开阔的地方爬去， 在那里一个人类的小女 婴坐着，她的哭声充满 了空气。安

6、静！森林里 满是生物，Colin低声 说。他试图通过唱歌、 跳舞、做鬼脸和模仿各 种动物的声音来转移她 的注意力。“Waah! Waah!” Small hands grabbed f or him, and he jumped back. But the,“哇！哇！”小手向他抓去，n he realized the babys hands were. 他立即后跳。但后来他发现， reaching not for him but for his bri婴儿的手并不是在抓他，而ght green waistcoat. Unwillingly, h是在抓他那件明亮的绿色背e shrugged ou

7、t of his waistcoat an心。他不情愿地脱下背心， d held it up to the baby, who stopp. 举给婴儿，婴儿立即停止了ed crying immediately. Soon his waist哭泣。很快，他的背心上就 coat was gathering drool as the bab积聚了婴儿的口水，婴儿把y held it to her face. Then, Colin h它放在脸上。接着，Colineard the sound of the waistcoat being , 听到了背心被撕裂的声音。torn.（心爱的新背心沾上口水，又

8、被撕坏了，得是什么心情）Realizing he had lost his beloved wa 当 Colin 意识到他已经失去了他心爱的背心，他开始寻 找婴儿的父母。“Pegeen!你在哪儿？ ”在树 林中，婴儿的父母焦急地喊 着。父亲哽咽地说：“我当 时正在挤牛奶”，他的脸色 充满了忧虑。在他后面，婴 儿的母亲哭红了眼睛。她哭 着说：“我当时正在缝衣服, 她就不见了。”Colin的心被触动了。他必 须做点什么。婴儿的父母一 直在错误的地方寻找。但是, 由于小精灵不能冒险被看 见，所以他不能直接把他们 带回婴儿身边。续写第一段：Colin想了一会儿，脸上露 出了微笑。续写第二段：两天后，C

9、olin在树林中闲 逛时，他发现了树枝上挂着 的熟悉的东西。i s t coat, (beloved waistcoat V Sbeloved daughter) Colin sought to find the babys parents.“Pegeen! Where are you?” There were the baby s parents in the woods, des perate in their shouts. I was mi Iki ng the cow, the father choked, his face worn with worry. Behind him w

10、as the babys mother, red-eyed from wee ping. She cried “I was sewing and sh e was gone. ”Col inf s heart was touched. He had to do something. The babys parents had been searching in the wrong place.But because a leprechaun mustnt risk being seen, he couldnr t simply lead them back to the baby.续写第一段：

11、Colin thought for a moment and a smi le flashed across his face.续写第二段：Two days later, Colin was wandering t hrough the woods when he spotted some thing familiar hanging from a branch.试水作文：Colin thought for a moment and a smile flashed across his face.（Colin利用他善用口技技能，吸引父母注意力并引导他们见到孩子）He decided to em

12、ploy his talent of imitation and he started to whistle, a tune so enchanting that it attracted a flock of birds, which/who （感觉这里小鸟也可以拟入，用who） f 1 ied over the baby, chirping loudly. The sound echoed through the forest, drawing the attention of the distressed parents. In response to the distinctive b

13、irdcal 1, they unknowingly changed their course 不知不觉改变路线, moving closer and closer to their lost child. Colin, hidden behind a thick bush, continued to do this with his imitation until he he heard the rustling of leaves and the relieved laughter of the parents as they found their daughter. Colin sig

14、hed with relief, happy to have made a difference, even if it meant sacrificing his beloved waistcoat.【有一说一，本来我想着是Colin学baby哭吸引父母，看了 一下官方参考 范文，也是这么写的，突然，觉得原文第一段说Colin学小鸟儿吹口哨， 模仿森林里的风，此处还是应该让Colin利用大自然的声音吸引baby的父 母，且不容易让父母发现他。另外小baby的声音应该也不会太大，不然父 母刚才应该能听到声音，所以这里用了 Colin学小鸟的声音吸引小鸟，然 后森林里的鸟儿声音echo共鸣，就像

15、是一种“天地异象，灵宝出世”的感 觉。本来还想着写鸽子一诺亚方舟鸽子衔着橄榄枝，代表peace,原 文也出现了 peace。后来觉得似乎有点牵强，遂放弃】Two days later, Colin was wandering through the woods when he spotted something familiar hanging from a branch.（衣服被补好 了） It was his fresh and green waistcoat, now a little worn and torn but mended with love and care. A note

16、 was pinned to it, expressing gratitude： ”To our little girl!s heroes,H it read, Thank you and the birds for leading us to our daughter. We have mended your waistcoat already. Realizing that the parents had somehow understood a kind, invisible soul had led them to their child,Colin smiled, his heart

17、 filled with warmth. He then joyfully puton his repaired waistcoat, feeling a warm sense of satisfaction. It was not the greenness of the fabric that mattered, but the journey it had borne witness to. In that moment, he understood： true wealth lay not in possessions, but in kindness shared.（最后 一句主旨句

18、不是特别满意，暂时也想不到其他的句子）附：官方参考范文Colin thought for a moment and a smile flashed across his face. Waah! Waah! ” he cried. uPegeen! ” the couple exclaimed and followed, their hearts pounding with hope. Mimicking the baby s cries. Colin moved, just a hop, skip, and jump ahead of them, taking care not to be s

19、een. Soon, they got to the clearing “Pegeen! ”At the sound of her parents voices, the baby dropped the waistcoat and cried. Immediately, the mother rushed over and scooped up the baby in a joyful dance. Meanwhile, the father plucked the waistcoat from the ground-crumpled and ragged like an autumn le

20、af.With a sigh,Colin slipped away,feeling a warmth in his heart.Two days later, Colin was wandering through the woods when he spotted something familiar hanging from a branch. It was his beloved waistcoat-now washed and mended, looking as good as new. Colin snatched up the waistcoat, happy to have i

21、t back in his possession. As he held it close, he discovered a note attached to it, which read, “Thank you! Youve made a big difference to our life!” Colin grinned as he slipped the waistcoat on and then strutted forward, crowing like a rooster. From that day forward. Colin continued to stroll through the woods, whistling and imitating different sounds, but with a newfound sense of purpose and compassion in his heart.