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1、优秀资料 欢迎下载 Continuing to Help Those in Need?写作指南 这是一篇观点阐述型作文，要求对“是否应该继续帮助别人”作观点的阐述。根据题目要求可以将文章内容安排如下：第一段：用实力来证明“做好事会惹麻烦的事情”时有发生。第二段：指出在这种趋势下人们的忧虑。第三段：提出个人观点：应该继续帮助别人，但是同时要懂得保护自己。There has been an increasing number of reports about those who offer to help others end up putting themselves into trouble.

2、For instance,a bus driver in Nantong was wrongfully charged by the elder women he tried to rescue from a roadside accident.Had it not been the footage of the bus camera,the bus driver would have been found guilty.Reports of this kind tend to prevent people from offering their helping hands to those

3、in need,because they want to stay away from the unnecessary conflicts.Bit by bit,it is worried that people in the society will become distant and indifferent to one another.As far as I am concerned,we should continue to help those in need,but in the meantime,we should know how to protect ourselves.P

4、rotective measures,such as filming what is happening,are effective to ensure that our well-meant intentions would not get punished.1.开篇指出论题的背景。End up doing sth.“以告终；结果却”，为亮点表达。2.用具体的例子来进一步阐明论题的背景。本剧使用了省略 whom 的定语从句，使句子一气呵成。Be wrongfully charged“被错怪”。3.本剧使用了虚拟语气，是拿高分的亮点。Footage 指“视频脚本，片段”；be found gu

5、ilty“被认定有罪”4.承上启下，带出该段关于人们“担忧”的论述。Tend to“倾向于”；stay away from“远离”；unnecessary conflicts“不必要的纷争”。5.用 it is worried that 句型把人们的“担忧”勾勒出来。Distant and indifferent“疏远和冷漠”。6.用 As far as I am concerned 引出个人观点 7.well-ment intentions would not get punished意为“好人不会造恶报”。Post-90s Generations Network Life 写作指南：这是一

6、篇典型的现象-观点型作文，要求考生先描述现象，再就现象阐明自己的看法。根据题目要求，文章安排如下：第一段：指出现象，即 90 后的我们从小接触到网络，是伴随着互联网长大的一代。第二段：具体列举 90 后的我们在网络上的活动，讲述通过网络表达自我的形式有哪些。第三段：提出自己的看法。可以赞同，比如认为与互联网的亲密接触能够让自己获取大量的最新的信息，充满时尚感和创造力；也可以不赞同，比如可以说网络上的东西很多是快餐文化，不营养，人与人之间面对面的真实的友谊才是最有益的等。The term post-90s generation refers to us who were born in the

7、1990s.That is just the period of time when the Internet was enjoying a boom.Indeed,we are the generation that has grown up with the Internet.We have various ways to express ourselves on the Internet.We like hanging out on forums,social networks or microblogs.It is quite common for us to have more vi

8、rtual friends than friends in real life.We prefer using the Martian language,which is quite different from the normal characters.优秀资料 欢迎下载 As far as I am concerned,we are a generation with vigor and creativity.We are ready to accept new ideas.So long as we don t indulge in the Internet,we can benefi

9、t a lot from it in that it gives us a free way to express ourselves and keeps us informed of the latest news.1.enjoy a boom 是亮点表达，指互联网的繁荣。2.指出 90 后是伴随着互联网成长的一代，符合题目第一点要求。注意行文最好使用第一人称，符合目前在校大学生的年龄特征。3.Hang out on 意为“在闲逛”，hanging out on forums指“在各种论坛上闲逛”，是亮点表达。注意一些时新词语的表达，“微博”表达为 microblog。4.Virtual f

10、riends 表示“虚拟的朋友”，friends in real life 指生活中真正的朋友 5.使用定语从句对 Martian language 进行解释，使句子更简练、高级。6.With vigor and creativity“充满活力和创造力”为后置定语，修饰 a generation,为亮点表达。7.Be ready to 意为“乐于”，注意使用这种常见的较为地道的表达形式。8.最后这句话结构比较复杂。So long as 意思是“只要”，这种表达使文章更严谨。Indulge in 意思是“沉溺于”；keep sb.Informed of 是亮点表达，意思是“使某人知道”There

11、 Is No End to Learning 写作指南：这是一篇谚语阐释型作文，要求对“学无止境”写一篇文章。根据题目要求可以将文章内容安排如下：第一段：解释“学无止境”的定义及表现。第二段：用所给的例子解释“学无止境”的重要性。第三段：自己再举一个例子（刚毕业的大学生不要以为学习就终止了）来再次重申“学无止境”的重要性。Learning,by definition,is an on-going process,which requires our continuous efforts and commitment.No wise man would claim that he has lea

12、rned enough,because there is simply too much to learn for an individual.A case in point is the college study.Some students assume that their learning process was over the moment they passed the College Entrance Exam(CEE)and get slackened in their university study.As a matter of fact,passing the CEE

13、is the conclusion of one stage of learning,and signifies the beginning of another.In another case,fresh graduates from universities usually think they bid farewell to learning.The belief of this kind,again,is mistaken.Even if they no longer pursue formal learning in classrooms,they are still bound t

14、o learn something about their jobs,the industry and the society as a whole.In whatever case,the truth holds that there is no end to learning.1.本句开宗明义，指出学习是一个持久的过程。By definition“根据定义”；on-going“正在进行的；持久的”；continuous“不断的”。注意“同义反复”是英语写作中的一个技巧，即用不同的词汇表达同一个意思，表达形式丰富。2.本句解释为什么“学无止境”No wise man would claim“

15、明智的人不会认为”；simply“简直”。3.引出第一个例子。A case in point“一个恰当的例子”，为亮点表达。4.指出一些学生的错误认识。assume“以为”；College Entrance Exam(CEE)“高考”；slacken“松懈”。5.As a matter of fact 用引出正确的观点。Signify“标志着”。6.举第二个例子来说明问题。fresh graduates“刚毕业的学生”；bid farewell to“与以将文章内容安排如下第一段用实力来证明做好事会惹麻烦的事情时有发生第二段指出在这种趋势下人们的忧虑第三段提出个人观点应该继续帮助别人但是同时要

16、懂得保护自己开篇指出论题的背景以告终结果却为亮点表达用具体的点指视频脚本片段被认定有罪承上启下带出该段关于人们担忧的论述倾向于远离不必要的纷争用句型把人们的担忧勾勒出来疏远和冷漠用引出个人观点意为好人不会造恶报写作指南这是一篇典型的现象观点型作文要求考生先描述现网长大的一代第二段具体列举后的我们在网络上的活动讲述通过网络表达自我的形式有哪些第三段提出自己的看法可以赞同比如认为与互联网的亲密接触能够让自己获取大量的最新的信息充满时尚感和创造力也可以不赞同比如可以优秀资料 欢迎下载 告别”。7.指出该观点也是错误的。mistaken“错误的”。8.解释什么才是正确的看法。Pursue formal

17、 learning“一定要进行正式的学习”；be bound to“一定要”。9.最后总结，呼应文章的题目。The truth holds that 从句强调 that 后面的内容为真理。Due Attention Should Be Given to Handwriting 写作指南：这是一篇原因分析型作文，要求考生对“书写不好”这一现象作出分析，并给出解决的办法。根据题目要求可以将文章内容安排如下：第一段：简要阐述学生书写不好的现象及其严重程度。第二段：分析这一现象的原因过多使用电脑，而忽略书写。第三段：提出解决方法。方法有二：一是教师要收手写的作业而不是电子版；二是多开展书法及书写的课外

18、活动吸引学生的兴趣。Students of today are heavily complained by their teachers because of their horrible handwriting.The situation is so bad that a significant amount of time is allocated to train students handwriting in high-schools.The main reason for this seemingly absurd phenomenon might be the prevalence

19、 of computer.Students may,for instance,download study materials from the website instead of writing them down.When they want to communicate with each other,all they need is to hit the keyboard,leaving the laborious writing out of the mind.To remedy this problem,two approaches should be adopted.First

20、,teachers should ask students to submit their hand-written home-work,instead of soft-copy ones.Second,calligraphy contests should be staged as regular extracurricular activities to arouse students interests.With these two measures,I am sure students will be able to write readable characters,while en

21、joying the convenience brought by the computer.1.第一句指出学生书写差的现象。Be heavily complained“被严厉投诉”；horrible“可怕的”。2.指出问题的严重程度。A significant amount of“大量的”；allocate“分配”。3.指出这一现象的原因。seemingly absurd phenomenon“看上去荒谬的现象”；prevalence“普遍，流行”。4.举了一个常见的例子说明书写差的原因。5.进一步叙述书写差的原因。hit the keyboard“敲键盘”；leaveout of the

22、mind 意思是“不为而费神”；laborious“费力的”。6.指出解决的方法有两个。remedy“补救”；approach“方法”；adopt“采用”；用词准确且简练。7.解释第一个方法。Submit“提交”；soft-copy“电子版的”。8.解释第二个方法。Calligraphy contests“书法比赛”；stage“举行”；extracurricular activities“课外活动”；arouse students interests“激发学生的兴趣”。9.最后总结全文：在电脑与手写之间找到平衡。10.以将文章内容安排如下第一段用实力来证明做好事会惹麻烦的事情时有发生第二段指出在这种趋势下人们的忧虑第三段提出个人观点应该继续帮助别人但是同时要懂得保护自己开篇指出论题的背景以告终结果却为亮点表达用具体的点指视频脚本片段被认定有罪承上启下带出该段关于人们担忧的论述倾向于远离不必要的纷争用句型把人们的担忧勾勒出来疏远和冷漠用引出个人观点意为好人不会造恶报写作指南这是一篇典型的现象观点型作文要求考生先描述现网长大的一代第二段具体列举后的我们在网络上的活动讲述通过网络表达自我的形式有哪些第三段提出自己的看法可以赞同比如认为与互联网的亲密接触能够让自己获取大量的最新的信息充满时尚感和创造力也可以不赞同比如可以