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1、My New BrotherContinuation WritingAnalyze the textI was in my room,feeling unwilling to head to the community theatre with my brother Henry.He had recently been adopted by my parents and I was not in the mood for being onstage with him.Kirstie,come here,my mom called.Following her voice,I found her

2、outside the bathroom,holding a wet book.She gave the book a shake.Henrys book was in the bathtub.Did you put it there?She glared at me,something she had never done before Henry came to our home.I hadnt wet his book on purpose.Raindrops fell from my eyes.To make matters worse,she promised to buy him

3、a new copy.My heart ached.Henry was stealing my mothers love.He was ruining my life.Meanwhile,Henry was nearby,absorbed in working on a complicated rope knot（绳结）,something he liked to do.Why did a boy like him like doing girly work?It seemed far from manly（男子汉气概）.Soon,it was time to set off to the c

4、ommunity theatre.As Henry walked ahead of us to the car,my mom took me aside and said in a low voice,It will be Henrys first time onstage.Be kind to him,honey.I nodded but sighed（叹气）.I hadnt always found it this difficult to be kind.But since Henry had moved in,everything felt different.The theatre

5、used to be a special place for my parents and me.With Henry involved,it didnt seem so special any more.Finally,it was our stage time.My heart beat wildly.I forgot my annoyance at Henry for a while.As we kids lined up,ready to act out our short play,I realized how loosely I had tied the drawstring on

6、 my skirt.Sure enough,my skirt began to drop.I could hear the audience laughing.Even though I was wearing shorts under my skirt,I could feel my face burst into flames.However,my hands were full.If only someone could help me out.Read the text and find out its main idea and“my”emotions.climaxendingKNO

7、WNUNKNOWNRead for main idea and emotionsunwillingreluctantP1:I was unwilling to be onstage with my adopted brother Henry.emotionsmain ideaAnalyze the textI was in my room,feeling unwilling to head to the community theatre with my brother Henry.He had recently been adopted by my parents and I was not

8、 in the mood for being onstage with him.Kirstie,come here,my mom called.Following her voice,I found her outside the bathroom,holding a wet book.She gave the book a shake.Henrys book was in the bathtub.Did you put it there?She glared at me,something she had never done before Henry came to our home.I

9、hadnt wet his book on purpose.Raindrops fell from my eyes.To make matters worse,she promised to buy him a new copy.My heart ached.Henry was stealing my mothers love.He was ruining my life.Meanwhile,Henry was nearby,absorbed in working on a complicated rope knot（绳结）,something he liked to do.Why did a

10、 boy like him like doing girly work?It seemed far from manly（男子汉气概）.Soon,it was time to set off to the community theatre.As Henry walked ahead of us to the car,my mom took me aside and said in a low voice,It will be Henrys first time onstage.Be kind to him,honey.I nodded but sighed（叹气）.I hadnt alway

11、s found it this difficult to be kind.But since Henry had moved in,everything felt different.The theatre used to be a special place for my parents and me.With Henry involved,it didnt seem so special any more.Finally,it was our stage time.My heart beat wildly.I forgot my annoyance at Henry for a while

12、.As we kids lined up,ready to act out our short play,I realized how loosely I had tied the drawstring on my skirt.Sure enough,my skirt began to drop.I could hear the audience laughing.Even though I was wearing shorts under my skirt,I could feel my face burst into flames.However,my hands were full.If

13、 only someone could help me out.unwilling/reluctanthurt/wronged confusedembarrassedhelpless climaxendingKNOWNUNKNOWNRead for main idea and emotionsunwillingreluctant?embarrassedhelpless hurtwronged P2:I was misunderstood by my mom for playing jokes on Henry deliberately.P4:While on stage,I realized

14、my skirt was about to drop because the drawstring got loose.P1:I was unwilling to be onstage with my adopted brother Henry.confusedP3:I couldnt understand why Henry was absorbed in rope knots.emotionsmain ideaDesign the plotPara.1 Right then,Henry sensed my embarrassment.Para.2 After the performance

15、,I found Henry and tapped him on the arm gratefully.What did Henry do?linking 1Read for cluesWhat can we infer from the following sentence?Meanwhile,Henry was nearby,absorbed in working on a complicated rope knot,something he liked to do.Henry had the ability to tie the drawstring on“my”skirt.Design

16、 the plotPara.1 Right then,Henry sensed my embarrassment.Para.2 After the performance,I found Henry and tapped him on the arm gratefully.What did Henry do?How did I feel?linking 2linking 1linking 3How did I show gratitude?What was Henrys response?Whats the theme?surprised,relieved,.help me tie my dr

17、awstringsuccessful,smooth,.express thanks,hug him tightly,.hug back,smile,no big deal,.How was the performance?Read for themeTip 1 Echo the text1转变初始感受转变初始感受(para.1)I was in my room,feeling unwilling to head to the community theatre with my brother Henry.e.g.Maybe _ in this new chapter of my world a

18、fter all.Change:unwillingacceptable2复现关键词块复现关键词块(para.2)Henry was stealing my mothers love.He was ruining my life.e.g.Henry was _ stealing my mothers love _ ruining my life.Instead,he _.it wont be so bad to accept my new brotherneithernorused his own power to bring new vigor into my lifeCallback:ste

19、al my mothers love;ruin my life3形成对比意识形成对比意识e.g.It was at this moment that I realized families are _(不是由血缘关系而是由爱所联结的不是由血缘关系而是由爱所联结的).e.g.It dawned on me that the string knot on the skirt would go untied,_ and never(但但是是家家庭庭的的结结永永远远不会解开不会解开).Read for themenot bonded by blood but by lovebut the family

20、 knot wouldntContrast:not.but.Example 1:Example 1:HenryHenry在台上的及时帮助在台上的及时帮助Ver.1.0He rushed to help me.Ver.2.0Sentence pattern:Sb.did 1,did 2,and did 3.(para.4)my mom took me aside and said in a low voice.I nodded but sighed.他毫不犹豫他毫不犹豫地地快速靠近我快速靠近我，弯下腰弯下腰/俯身蹲下来俯身蹲下来，为我，为我系了系了一个牢固又漂亮一个牢固又漂亮的蝴蝶结。的蝴蝶结。

21、“搞定。搞定。”他他悄声悄声说说道。道。Without a second thought,he _,_ and _.“Nailed it.”He whispered.approached me quicklybent down/dropped to a crouchAccumulate the languagetied a beautiful firm bowknotTip 2 Split the actionExample 2:Example 2:演出成功演出成功Ver.1.0The show was a huge success.Ver.2.0侧面描写观众反应侧面描写观众反应(para.4

22、)My heart beat wildly.I forgot my annoyance at Henry for a while.My heart beating wildly,I forgot my annoyance at Henry for a while.（独立主格结构独立主格结构）演出演出一一结束，观众结束，观众就就投来赞许的目光，投来赞许的目光，雷鸣般雷鸣般的掌声的掌声回荡回荡在大厅周围。在大厅周围。The moment the show was over,the audience cast approving glances at us,_ around the hall.Acc

23、umulate the languageTip 3 Add detailed description from different perspectivesa shower/storm of thunderous applause echoing Example 3:Example 3:我向我向HenryHenry真心道谢真心道谢Ver.1.0“Thank you,Henry.”I said sincerely.Ver.2.0with复合结构复合结构/虚拟语气虚拟语气(para.4)With Henry involved,it didnt seem so special any more.If

24、 only someone could help me out.e.g.我的声音我的声音颤抖着颤抖着，脸发烫脸发烫。我不得不承认，。我不得不承认，要不是有他的帮助要不是有他的帮助/要是没有要是没有他出色的打结技术他出色的打结技术，我，我就不会鼓起勇气就不会鼓起勇气站在舞台上。站在舞台上。My voice trembled _.I had to admit that,_,I _ to stand on the stage.but for his timely help/without his wonderful knotting skillsAccumulate the languageTip

25、4 Fill with advanced structureswouldnt have plucked up the courage with my face burningWhat makes a good continuation writing?Summarize and appreciateSummarize and appreciateRight then,Henry sensed my embarrassment.Without a second thought,he approached me quickly,dropped to a crouch,and tied a beau

26、tiful firm bowknot.“Nailed it.”He whispered.Shocked by what he had done,I felt something deep in my mind began to change.It seemed as if his kind deeds had melted my heart.Thinking about what I had done to him,I felt ashamed of myself.While I was lost in thought,the music took me back to reality.We

27、edged to the stage and started our performance.The moment the show was over,the audience cast approving glances at us,a storm of thunderous applause echoing around the hall.After the performance,I found Henry and tapped him on the arm gratefully.Thank.you,Henry.My voice trembled with my face burning

28、.I had to admit that,but for his timely help,I wouldnt have plucked up my courage to stand on the stage.Without his wonderful knotting skills,the performance would have been quite different.Henry patted me gently on the shoulder,an enormous grin flashing across his face,Not a problem.We are family,arent we?Tears blurred my eyes,words failing to convey my warmth,so I gave him a heartfelt hug.It was at this moment that I realized the string knot on the skirt would go untied,but the family knot wouldnt and never.AssignmentFinish and polish your version of writing using the“SAFE”rule.