【课件】读后续写—做面包 课件-2024届高考英语一轮复习.pptx

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1、Continuation Writing读后续写读后续写 做面包做面包3 steps Step 1 读 Reading Step 2 续 Predicting Step 3 写 WritingStep 1:Reading读读 ReadingPlot情节Emotion 情感Theme主题What should we read?The easy way out isnt always the easiest.I learned that lesson when I decided to treat my father to a special meal.I glanced through the

2、cookbook and chose a menu which included homemade bread.Knowing the bread would take time,I started on it as soon as he left for work.As I was not experienced in cooking,I thought if a dozen was good,two dozen would be better,so I doubled everything.As Dad loved oranges,I also opened a can of orange

3、 and poured it all into the bowl.Soon there was sticky dough(生面团)covered with ugly yellowish marks.Realizing I had been defeated,I put the dough in the rubbish bin outside so I wouldnt have to face Dads blame.I went on preparing the rest of the meal,and when dad got home we sat down to eat the meal.

4、He tried to enjoy the meal but seemed disturbed.Twice he got up and went outside,saying he thought he heard a noise.The third time he left,I went to the window to see what he was doing.Looking out,I saw dad standing about three feet from the rubbish bin,holding the lid up with a stick and looking in

5、to the container.When I came out of the house,he dropped the stick and explained that there was something alive in the rubbish bin.Picking up the stick again,he held the lid up enough for me to see.I felt scared.But I stepped closer and looked harder.Without doubt it was my work,The hot sun had caus

6、ed the dough to double in size and the fermenting yeast(摩母)made the surface shake and sigh as though it were breathing.I had to admit what the living thing was and why it was there,didnt know who was more embarrassed by the whole thing,dad or me.P1：我想给爸爸做面包。爸爸一去上班，我就开始做面包了。我想给爸爸做面包。爸爸一去上班，我就开始做面包了。做

7、面包没有经验，所有东西都做面包没有经验，所有东西都double。结果失败了，把面。结果失败了，把面团扔进垃圾桶，以免父亲责备。团扔进垃圾桶，以免父亲责备。继续准备晚饭，爸爸享受晚餐的同时，非常困扰。两次起继续准备晚饭，爸爸享受晚餐的同时，非常困扰。两次起身去看看外面的噪声一探究竟。第三次起身的时候，我趴身去看看外面的噪声一探究竟。第三次起身的时候，我趴在窗户那儿看父亲在做什么。在窗户那儿看父亲在做什么。爸爸用棍儿把垃圾箱的盖子打开，发现垃圾箱里好像有活爸爸用棍儿把垃圾箱的盖子打开，发现垃圾箱里好像有活的东西。我很害怕，走进一点以看的更仔细一些。的东西。我很害怕，走进一点以看的更仔细一些。结果发

8、现是仍在垃圾箱里的面团发酵膨胀了，仿佛是面团在垃结果发现是仍在垃圾箱里的面团发酵膨胀了，仿佛是面团在垃圾箱里呼吸。我只好承认圾箱里呼吸。我只好承认living thing 是什么，及它为什么会在是什么，及它为什么会在垃圾箱里。垃圾箱里。I:confident-eager-worried-embarrassed-ahsmedDad:delighted-disturbed-curious-surprisedP2：P3：P4：P5：阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。A MOTHERS DAY SURPRISE The twins were filled wit

9、h excitement as they thought of the surprise they were planning for Mothers Day.How pleased and proud Mother would be when they brought her breakfast in bed.They planned to make French toast and chicken porridge.They had watched their mother in the kitchen.There was nothing to it.Jenna and Jeff knew

10、 exactly what to do.The big day came at last.The alarm rang at 6 a.m.The pair went down the stairs quietly to the kitchen.They decided to boil the porridge first.They put some rice into a pot of water and left it to boil while they made the French toast.Jeff broke two eggs into a plate and added in

11、some milk.Jenna found the bread and put two slices into the egg mixture.Next,Jeff turned on the second stove burner to heat up the frying pan.Everything was going smoothly until Jeff started frying the bread.The pan was too hot and the bread turned black within seconds.Jenna threw the burnt piece in

12、to the sink and put in the other slice of bread.This time,she turned down the fire so it cooked nicely.Then Jeff noticed steam shooting out of the pot and the lid starting to shake.The next minute,the porridge boiled over and put out the fire.Jenna panicked.Thankfully,Jeff stayed calm and turned off

13、 the gas quickly.But the stove was a mess now.Jenna told Jeff to clean it up so they could continue to cook the rest of the porridge.But Jeffs hand touched the hot burner and he gave a cry of pain.Jenna made him put his hand in cold water.Then she caught the smell of burning.Oh dear!The piece of bre

14、ad in the pan had turned black as well.注意：1.续写词数应为 150 左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。As the twins looked around them in disappointment,their father appeared The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up.高中英语写作新题型读后续写读后续写理解材料What did father and author do?1.Opening作者根据食谱给父亲做面包。所有原料都用了双份，结

15、果失败了，把面团扔进了垃圾箱。父亲发现了垃圾箱里的面团。What happened in the party?2.Build-up3.Climax故事高潮部分（矛盾冲突）4.Resolution5.Endingmake breadfail,put the dough in the rubbishauthor:scaredfather:curious-embarrassed父亲和作者说了什么？做了什么？聚会上发生了什么？Read for the themeset the tone(情节基调)主题-人与自我practice practice makes perfectmakes perfectma

16、ke good preparations make good preparations before you take actionbefore you take actionFailure is the mother of Failure is the mother of success.success.Nothing is impossible Nothing is impossible for a willing heart.for a willing heart.Step 2:Pedicting续续P1:My dad tapped gently on the shoulder,and

17、we went inside.1.What did my dad say to me and do to help me make bread?2.How did I feel after hearing my dads words?3.What action did I take to make perfect bread?P2:At a party three months later,everone wanted to try my bread.1.What did my father and people in the party think of my bread?2.How I f

18、elt after hearing their praise?3.What lesson have I learned from the experience?Task 5:design the fixed five sentencesP1:My dad tapped gently on the shoulder,and we went inside.P2:At a party three months later,everone wanted to try my bread.第二句:定P1尾句与P2首句的衔接句第四句:定结尾句第五句:定升华句第一句:定接P1首句的衔接句(接心理/动作)第三句

19、:定接P2首句的衔接句(接心理/动作)(面包已做的很好，所以很多人想吃)(回顾做面包的历程，感激爸爸)(熟能生巧，行动之前做好准备)Which five sentences can be fixed based on the given sentences?（爸爸说什么做什么)(party里人们对面包的反应)遣词造句，填充细节续写第一段：续写第一段：（父亲的言语及动作（父亲的言语及动作+作者的言语、动作）作者的言语、动作）第一句:定接P1首句的衔接句(接心理/动作)However,to my surprise,my father said smilingly：“its not a big de

20、al,please cheer up,and the easy way out isnt always the easiest.第二句:定P1尾句与P2首句的衔接句Through my practice and dads guidance,it turned out the bread I made are very delicious.中间：爸爸指导我、我不断练习Then he offered to help me make the perfect bread.What my father said was like sunshine,which helped me free from em

21、brassment and shame.With Dads comfort and encouragement,I gathered huge courage to go through the cusine book carefully and got down to baking bread,believing that I must make it.续写第二段：续写第二段：（朋友的语言及动作（朋友的语言及动作+我的反应我的反应+主题升华）主题升华）第一句:定接P2首句的衔接句(接心理/动作)After taking a bite,everyone in the party,includi

22、ng my father,gave their thumps up.第二句:定结尾句 Through my practice and dads guidance,it turned out the bread I made are very delicious.第三句：定升华句To be frank,I have learnt a lot during my numerous experiments.An amazing loaf of bread required a suitable balance of ingredients as well as numerous ppatience of waiting for the dough to rise.Countless as my failures to make us tasty bread were,every single moment of them were cherished.Along the journey,I have developed from the man whose dough sighed in the dustbin to the man whose bread made your taste buds dance.优秀作文展示：优秀作文展示：