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1、2023年高三一模作文汇编1.黄浦区.2023年已接近尾声，还记得年初你为自己定下的小目标吗？不知你是否实现了你的小目标？发一个 微信挚友圈来回顾一下吧（文中请不要出现真实的校名人名）。你的挚友圈文字内容需包括：1 .你的2023年度小目标；2 .你为实现年度小目标所作的努力；3 .你实现（或没有实现）年度小目标的阅历总结。 范文：|My new years resolution for 2023 was that T should be able to communicate with foreign people in English. To achieve this goal, I ha

2、d asked my English teacher for help. According to her suggestions, I made up a plan.Firstly, I started with simply reading English articles and found many pronunciation errors in my reading after listening to the video tape of its recording. Then, I tried to learn phonetics and practice one syllable

3、 after another again and again. I started with a single word, then a phrase, a sentence, a paragraph and finally the whole passage. After 3-month practice, I was able to read an article fluently without making any mistakes in pronunciation. I felt happy. Next, I practiced my listening. By listening

4、to a passage four times, I required myself to take it down without spelling en*ors or any information blank. Last but not least, I installed an app called Shanbei Oral English on my phone to practice both my listening and speaking. Its like having conversations with a robot. I had to understand what

5、 it said to me and answer its questions accordingly. After practicing for almost 8 months, I had my first talking session with an American teacher in our school. I was proud of myself.What I have learnt from this experience is something as a saying goes: no pain no gain. Though the process of learni

6、ng could be dull and tiring, its worth all the efforts after I achieved my goal. Even if I didnt, its still a valuable part of my life.阅卷作文8+8+4=20The wonderful year of 2023 is drawing to an end. I remember that I set an annual goal to keep fit at the beginning of 2023, since staying healthy is cruc

7、ial to ensuring my study, thus better prepare myself for Gaokao.To achieve my goal of keeping fit, here are some efforts Fve taken throughout the year. On the very first day of 2023, I downloaded a fitness app called Keep. Following the fitness instructions the app offered, I exercised every other n

8、ight before I go to bed. Also, I did some research into the daily nutrition I need in order to stay healthy both physically and mentally, after which I devised a moderate dieting plan. Apart from the above, Ive invited family members and friends to join me so that we can encourage each other and exc

9、hange fitness experience.So far, the record shown on my fitness app shows that Ive done well this year, reaching a record high of 200 training times in total. Although at times I felt like giving up because of too much study pressure and limited time, Im glad I have stuck to my plan. It seems to me

10、that anything is possible if I throw in all of my energy and passion, and most of all, perseverance. Some rules apply to study. So I hope I will keep such passion and strength to do my best in the coming 2023. （237 words） 点评：1.文本结构段落清楚，符合作文题目要求。1）第一段明确告知自己的年度小目标是什么；2）其次段有总起句，段落中有清楚的标记词（如also, apart

11、from）告知读者自己所做的努力，且努力 的行为都特别详细。3）第三段对阅历的总结可以再和其次段的三个努力匹配些，a.借助科技的力气（app）； b.借助科学的 力气（did research into the daily nutrition） ; c.组团抗击惰性。2.在语言表达实力比较强的基础上，可以考虑文字的进一步精炼。是否有“废话”？字数建议不超过 200 （此学生语言实力强，中等学生160左右即可）。精练而精确的表达也是思维和表达功力的体现。7+8+4=19Greeting from the end of 2023! Its now the time to conclude our

12、yearly goals again. On the new years eve, I set up two goals for the year: to getter better grades and to lose weight and Im proud to announce that Ive accomplished the first one.A personal habit Id like to changeIt is roughly estimated that almost everyone has a unique habit, and so do I. My indivi

13、dual habit, taken up in my childhood, is biting my nails, which has a chronically negative effect on others9 impression me.Comparatively speaking, my own habit seems quite violent abusive when it comes to others, for sometimes I will use needles or something sharp to eliminate the tissues which are

14、beyond my teeths touch. It is regular to a certain extent, for me to bleed or be infected due to this harmful habit.However, the key factor causing me to change is that biting my mails is regarded as the behavior of lacking self-assurance. And for many times I have been told only after changing and

15、kicking this awful habit can I become more self-confident and deserves trusting and respecting.Consequently, I have made a determination to take immediate measures, to thoroughly abandon it. Considering the freezing temperature now, a pair of gloves are supposed to be greatly effective to hide my fi

16、ngers, and some spicy sauces can be taken advantage of. Moreover, the resolution and persistence that is of great necessity in terms of the progress. Difficult and tough as it may be, I will spare no effort and stick to it so that I will ultimately achieve success and improve others9 impression on m

17、e.范文四A personal habit I would like to changeI have a bad habit that I always put what I need to do today to the next day. The habit is so called “Procrastination”, and I have been bothered by it over the years.It is often the case that students are high in their senior three. Ambitious as I am, I al

18、ways plan my everyday task fully and elaborately without any extra time left. The result is Apparent: when I am faced with so many tasks at night, I lose the confidence and concentration, thus making a fail promise that I shall finish it later in the end.It is crystal to me that doing every detail i

19、s significantly powerful to meet the final accomplishment. So I am trying every means to get rid of it. I will no longer make any ambitious but unrealistic plan. Indeed, I will list the things I need to do most and take sequence to finished them as planned.To plus, I believe that making an appropria

20、te plan is not enough, while a strong will is critical. So, I must be prepared to do whatever it takes to finish my plan.A personal habit I would like to changeIn terms of the habits I would like to change, it accessed to me that I would always make a perfect plan but leave everything until the last

21、 moment. So as far as I am concerned, I feel desperate to change the delaying habit.It is widely recognized that time is the must precious thing throughout our life. To some extent, getting used to putting off the plan is a kind of wasting time. Whafs more, finishing a supposed long-term task in a s

22、hort hurry does no good to the quality of task itself. And therefore, I am eager to get rid of the unsatisfying habit as early as possible.Only through reminding myself continuously can I be stimulated to engage in the mission. So I am figured out a couple of measures including writing on the sticky

23、 notes and cairying them wherever I go, setting clocks in my cell phones regularly, etc. I hold a film belief that if I could get rid of the bad habit, I would benefit more in the efficient and high quality studying.9.奉贤区请将要描述图片内容，并联系生活实际谈谈你的感想。 参考词汇：宝马(BMW);奔驰(Benz)As is depicted in the picture, wi

24、th a strong and distorted comparison psychology, 2 students are showing off their parents1 wealth and statues to enhance and exhibit his worth. Compared with a girl sitting on her fathers humble bike, they seem to go towards parents1 privilege competition instead of erecting decent life values and o

25、utlook.In modern times, rich second generation* Official second generation, flight father are not fresh words, and frequent reports online have always reminded us that this phenomenon is all around us. They believe the children of rich families, known as the second rich generation, can always get de

26、cent jobs and social status ahead of the poor. And children from poor families think traits like hard-work, creativity and sound academic achievements can never beat having a “good father”. However, Fight father game, it is not a game but a lesson teaching us to be dependent on ourselves to create a

27、 colorful feature. Emphasis should be put on ones capacity rather than background, and adults have the responsibility to help teenagers build up the correct values and views on life. So as for students like us, we should have a good attitude towards family background. Facing with millionaires, keep

28、eyesight horizontal; facing with poverty, keep heads up and never give up. Besides, we should make full preparation, though a solid foundation of wealth will help us overcome difficulties, it is not for person who has no preparation. So an old proverb says that the sweetest fruit is one that has cul

29、tivated by hand.10.闵行区假设你是学生李华，你校正在下学期开设的选修课程征求学生看法，请你向学校课程部老师写一封 email,提出你的课程建议。你的email中必需包括：1 .课程名称2 .课程的主要内容3 .设置该课程的理由Dear teacher,Its really a surprise to learn that our school is seeking suggestions from us students about the course to be developed next semester. The proposals I put forward ar

30、e as follows:As far as Im concerned, most classmates really expect to have a course named Selected Reading from British and American Newspaper. The content of this course can be separated into three parts: current affairs, exotic culture and practical techniques in daily life. There are four reasons

31、 accounting for my preference.Firstly, we will be informed of the latest affairs that is happening in the world very well, through which we can keep pace with the changing times. Secondly, we will learn a variety of culture and customs, which can help to broaden our horizons and enrich our knowledge

32、. Thirdly, we will learn to work out the practical problems in daily life on our own, becoming independent of our parents. In addition, we can enlarge our vocabulary and improve our capacity of reading comprehension by having access to considerable articles written by native speakers.There is no den

33、ying that we will benefit a lot from the new course we can take next term. We would appreciate it very much if our humble suggestions can receive your favorable consideration.Yours sincerelyLi Hua11 .浦东新区近年来，随着科技的迅猛发展，身边的新事物取代旧事物的事例层出不穷，请你简要描述一个详细实例, 并说明这一新事物存在的理由。Sample 1In the past few decades, wi

34、th the rapid development of modern technology, we have stepped into the digital age. As the population of Internet users , which are called online residents, is going larger, emails are likely to be taking the place of traditional letters.On one hand, email enables people to deliver their messages m

35、ore easily and convenient, as well as lowering the expense. People no longer need to go to a post office to send letters, which saves time for issues of more importance.On the other hand, email narrows the gap between people living in different areas, or even in different countries. Contacts can be

36、more efficient, thanks to the international networks, whereas email can be received instantly.Convenient as it is, there are still some problems caused by email remain to be solved. Personal privacy, for example, can be threatened by hackers. Generally speaking, however, we cant deny that the emerge

37、 of email does more benefit than harm.Sample 2With the rapid development and popularity of Internet, many physical stores are being replaced by the online shopping. Although the majority of shop keepers criticize the Internet commerce as a fatal killer, from my point of view, the existing of it must

38、 have some dramatic advantages.For one thing, it goes without saying that the online online shopping brings so much convenience. Compared with going to a far place, and caring a mass of things, so comfortable is it that we can conduct shopping with a click of mouse.For another, there is no denying t

39、hat shopping online can avoid embarrassment. Internet provides you with a private room. No doubts that you wont be showed when purchasing bargains anymore.All in all, the advanced online market is a sign of the countrys progress. We ought to regard it as a means of modern life. Only by improving the

40、 transportation and electronic devices can our online shopping have a better future.12 .静安区|你是李华，接近寒假，你的好挚友刘伟写信像你询问他的寒假安排，目前有三个备选方案：去美国某 中学参与冬令营(winter camp);应征某历史博物馆临时讲解员(docent);提前学习下学期中学课程。 请给刘伟写回信，谈谈你的看法。信中必需包括：1 .你建议的方案；2 .你如此建议的理由；3 .你对于执行此方案的建议。参考范文：Dear LiuIm truly delighted to receive your

41、letter asking for my advice on your plan on winter vacation. Its no wonder that all the three plans are not only meaningful but also helpful to you. However, as far as I am concerned, among the plans, being a temporary docent in the museum would be the best choice for you. The reasons are as follows

42、.To begin with, its about the time issue. Since its winter vacation, the time is limited compared with summer vacation, and as the most important festival-Spring Festival is also in the vacation, we shouldnt leave far away from home. Therefore, attractive and meaningful as it is, going to America to

43、 attend a winter camp might not be a wise choice. For learning the next-term course in advance, though, to some extent, it is useful. But for you, it is not essential and necessary since you are already an A-grade student. I dont doubt you can also achieve a good academic performance without learnin

44、g it ahead of time. As a result, being a temporary docent in the museum is undoubtedly becoming the first choice. I believe you can learn a lot in the program. For to be a qualified docent, you must know a lot about what you need to explain to the visitors, which provides a good chance for you to le

45、arn. Meanwhile, you can also polish your communication skills in the process of introducing things to others.So great the opportunity is that you must take actions to seize it. In order to achieve it, I suggest you learn more about the museum by searching information online first. Secondly, youd bet

46、ter choose one aspect that not only you are familiar with but also is related to the museum to study more. Last but not least, prepare well for the interview in advance.Please take good consideration of my advice. I hope you will find these ideas useful.Best wishes,Li Hua13.青浦区你应邀在英语课上的“每日一谈”环节中发表自己

47、对中国诗词大会(The Chinese Poetry Competition) 国家宝藏(National Treasure)等以传统文化为主题的电视节目热播现象的看法。你的发言稿必需包括：简洁介绍一个此类节目；分析此类节目热播的缘由。(注：文中不得出现真实的姓名及学校名称。文章的开头已为你写好。) 作文范文：Apparently, such kind of TV programs definitely need our praise for they help us better appreciate the beauty of Chinese culture.The Chinese poe

48、try competition, is a vivid example of how technology and traditional cultural, once combined together, can create a national trend. It features competitions among high school students to help them truly understand the value of traditional poems instead of memorizing them for exams.50, you might won

49、der why these shows can enjoy such a great popularity. Personally, I find the reason quite simple. First, I am convinced that it is the charm of traditional Chinese culture itself that draws us to these shows like a magnet. Traditional culture, like poems, provides us with a glimpse of what life was like before. It seems as if an invisible bridge leading to Chinese culture was the