2021年新高考英语模拟题分项汇编10 作文 解析版.pdf

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1、专题1 0作文1.（2021届湖南省衡阳市一模）假如学校准备在下周召开2021届高考誓师大会，请你以学生会的名义起草一则通知，告知高三的全体同学此次大会的相关事宜，内容应包括：1.大会时间与地点；2.大会主要流程；3.集会注意事项。注意事项：1.词数80词左右；2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。参考词汇：誓师大会an oath-taking rallyNoticeThe Students5 Union【答案】NoticeIn order to arouse our passion to face and get us fully prepared for the upcoming Gaoka

2、o,our school will holdan oath-taking rally in the stadium at 7 p.m.next Tuesday.Ifs required that all the people,including students,teachers and parents involved,should attend it.The wholerally consists of three parts:the headmaster,representatives of students and their parents giving speeches;allte

3、achers and students pledging their oaths respectively;each class taking a group photo at the school gate andsigning names on a displayed board.Do remember to gather in the stadium at 6.30 p.m.on time.As safety always comes first,please queue up inlines to enter the hall orderly and do NOT push each

4、other.Besides,for students,please bring our own chair for aseat.The Students,Union【分析】本篇书面表达是篇应用文，要求考生以学生会的名义起草则通知，告知高三的全体同学2021届高考誓师大会的相关事宜。【解析】第一步：审题体裁：应用文时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时和一般将来时。结构：总分法总分法是指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。要求：1.大会时间与地点；2.大会主要流程；3.集会注意事项。第二步：列 提 纲（重点词组）In order to；prepare for；consist

5、 of；give speeches；remember to do sth.；gather in；on time；queue up in lines第三步：连词成句l.I n order to arouse our passion to face and get us fully prepared for the upcoming Gaokao,our school willhold an oath-taking rally in the stadium at 7 p.m.next Tuesday.2.Its required that all the people,including stud

6、ents,teachers and parents involved,should attend it.3.The whole rally consists of three parts:the headmaster,representatives of students and their parents givingspeeches;all teachers and students pledging their oaths respectively;each class taking a group photo at the schoolgate and signing names on

7、 a displayed board.4.Do remember to gather in the stadium at 6.30 p.m.on time.5.As safety always comes first,please queue up in lines to enter the hall orderly and do NOT push each other.6.For students,please bring our own chair for a seat.根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态的问题。第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）表并列补充关系：Besides连

8、句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，第五步：润色修改【点睛】高分句型1Its required that all the people,including students,teachers and parents involved,should attend it.（it为形式主语，that引导主语从句）高分句型2Do remember to gather in the stadium at 6.30 p.m.on tim e.（用 do 对 remember 进行强调）2.（福建省2021届高三诊断性考试）假定你是李华，上周日参加了学校组织的农场劳动，请

9、用英语写一封信，向你的新西兰笔友David介绍活动的情况，内容包括：1.时间和地点；2.活动内容；3.收获。注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Dear David,I am writing to share with you my experience on the farm last week.Yours,Li Hua【答案】Dear David,I am writing to share with you my experience on the farm last week.At 8:00 a.m.last Sunday,my classmatesa

10、nd I gathered at the school gate and cycled to a farm.On our arrival,the farm workers gave us a warm welcome,and we started to plant crops and vegetables under their guidance.Then we joined them in preparing lunch.Afterlunch,the head of the farm gave us a talk about fantastic changes in the countrys

11、ide.Tired as we were,we did havea great day and learned a lot.Best wishes.Yours,Li Hua【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假定你是李华，上周日参加学校组织的农场劳动，请用英语写-封信，向你的新西兰笔友David介绍活动的情况。【解析】第一步：审题体裁：应用文时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般过去时。结构：总分法总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。要求：1.介绍同学们的听说训练情况；2.希望提供更有效的学习方法；3.询问对方的意向。第二步:列提纲（重点词组）share with；at

12、the school gate；On our arrival；gave us a warm welcome；under their guidance；joined themin；in the countryside第三步：连词成句1.At 8:00 a.m.last Sunday,my classmates and I gathered at the school gate and cycled to a farm.2.On ourarrival,the farm workers gave us a warm welcome,and we started to plant crops and

13、vegetables under theirguidance.3.After lunch,the head of the farm gave us a talk about fantastic changes in the countryside.4.Tired as we were,we did have a great day and learned a lot.根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）（供参考）L表文章结构顺序:First of all,Firstly/First,Secondly/Second.And then,Finall

14、y,In the end,At last2.表并列补充关系：What is more,Besides,Moreover,Furthermore,In addition As well as,not only.but（also）,including,3.表转折对比关系：However,On the contrary,but,On the one hand.,On the other hand.Some.,whileothers.,as for,so.that.4.表因果关系：Because,As,So,Thus,Therefore,As a result连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的

15、衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，【点睛】高分句型 1 I am writing to share with you my experience on the farm last week.句中动词不定式作目的状语。高分句型 2 On our arrival,the farm workers gave us a warm welcome,and we started to plant crops andvegetables under their guidance.句中使用并列连词and连接的并列句。【高分句型 3 Tired as we were,we did have a great day

16、 and learned a lot.句中 as 是连词,意思是“尽管,引导让步状语从句。3.（2021届湖南省六校高三联考）假定你叫李华，你的英国朋友Jessica听说”在中国，中小学学生每天都在课间做眼保健操。对此她感到很好奇，特来信向你了解相关情况。请你根据以下要点给她回信：1.介绍眼保健操；2.做眼保健操的注意事项。注意：1.写作词数应为80左右（开头和结尾已给出.不计人总词数）；2,可以适当增加细节.以使行文连贯；3.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。参考词汇：acupuncture points穴位Dear Jessica,If you want to know more det

17、ails,do not hesitate to write to me.【答案】参考范文Dear Jessica,Knowing that you are interested in the eye exercises Chinese kids are doing every day,Td like to share someinformation with you.Nowadays,a number of Chinese adolescents are suffering from short-sightedness.Based on traditionalChinese treatment

18、 theory,eye exercises have been practiced regularly to help reduce the rate of eye disorder.Thereare basically four sessions in the whole process,which takes approximately 10 minutes.When doing eye exercises,you need to make sure your hands are clean and press on the correct acupuncture points as re

19、quired.If you want to know more details,do not hesitate to write to me.Yours,Li Hua【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给英国朋友Jessica写一封信，告诉她眼保健操的相关情况。【解析】第一步：审题体裁：应用文时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时。结构：总分总法要求：1.介绍眼保健操；2.做眼保健操的注意事项。第二步:列提纲（重点词组）be interested in；a number of；suffer from；eye exercises；in the whole process；make sure第三

20、步：连词成句1.Knowing that you are interested in the eye exercises Chinese kids are doing every day,Id like to sharesome information with you.2.Nowadays,a number of Chinese adolescents are suffering from short-sightedness.3.Based on traditional Chinese treatment theory,eye exercises have been practiced re

21、gularly to help reducethe rate of eye disorder.4.There are basically four sessions in the whole process,which takes approximately 10 minutes.5.When doing eye exercises,you need to make sure your hands are clean and press on the correct acupuncturepoints as required.根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。第四步：

22、连句成篇（衔接词）1.表文章结构顺序：First of all,Firstly/First,Secondly/Second（供参考）2.表并列补充关系：What is more,Besides,Moreover,Furthermore,In addition（供参考）3.表转折对比关系：However,On the contrary,but（供参考）4.表因果关系：Because,As,So,Thus,Therefore,As a result（供参考）连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，【点睛】高分句型 1 Knowing that you are in

23、terested in the eye exercises Chinese kids are doing every day,Td like toshare some information with you.（现在分词 knowing 作状语）高分句型 2 There are basically four sessions in the whole process,which takes approximately 10 minutes,（which引导非限制性定语从句）4.（福建省龙岩一中2021届高三模拟）为了鼓励在家多读，联合国教科文组织确定4 月 2 3 日为“世界读书日”（Worl

24、d Book Day）。请你写篇英语短文呼吁同学们多读书。内容应包括：L简述世界读书日（时间及目的）；2.读书的益处；3.呼吁同学们多读书。注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。【答案】World Book Day is a yearly event on April 23,the aim of which is to encourage more people to formthe habit of reading.To begin with,reading books enriches our mind and teaches us how to distingui

25、sh between right and wrong.Whafs more,it broadens our horizons and gives us wisdom as well,which helps us live more wisely.Last bul notleast,it can also bring us more imagination than watching TV or surfing the Internet can do.Since reading books is so beneficial to us,we can make it an essential pa

26、rt of our life.One is never too old tolearn.No matter what time you realize the importance of reading books,you can enjoy it!【解析】本文是一篇关于世界读书日的发言稿。发言稿一般由称呼语、正文和结束语三部分组成，开头和结尾一般有固定的格式。正文常分为三部分：第一部分开门见山地提出本人要谈的问题及对问题的看法。第二部分说明理由。第三部分照应开头，总结全文。可以对全文作简明扼要的总结，也可以谈自己的感想、看法或期望。由于发言稿在命题形式上侧重于考查正文的写法，所以写正文时要注

27、意：条理要清晰,适当增加关联词和细节。语言要简洁明快，少用复杂句，多用简单句。话说的要准确、易懂，最好运用大众语言。但文中的句型也要善于变化，不要过于单一。【本文亮点】1、开头开门见山，点明主题。2主体部分论据充分,层次清楚。to begin with,what,s more,last but nol least等关联词的使用，连接紧凑自然。3、措辞准确，句式多变。简单句和复合句穿插使用，使文章简洁生动又错落有致。另外，恰当运用了多个高级词汇和短语，enrich our mind,distinguish betweenright and wrong,bring us more imaginat

28、ion,beneficial,essential 等的运用，为文章增色不少。5.（福建省厦门外国语学校2021届高三模拟）你校正在组织英语作文比赛。请以身边值得尊敬和爱戴的人为题，写一篇短文参赛，内容包括：1.人物简介；2.尊敬和爱戴的原因。注意:词数100左右；【答案】The person I respectWe have a lot of respectable people around us.They may be our teachers,parents or one of our elders.As forme,my father is the person I respect m

29、ost.My father is a teacher who loves his work and his students very much.He works very hard every day but he will also spare some time to accompany me and share many funny things withme about his work.When I come across the problems of learning in my study,my father will listen to me patiently and e

30、ncourageme to overcome the difficulties bravely.He achieved a lot in his work,respected by his students.So,in my mindmy father is the person I respect most and I love him deeply.【分析】本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文。要求学生以身边值得尊敬和爱戴的人为题，写 篇短文参赛。【解析】第一步：审题体裁：应用文时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时。结构：总分法要求：1.人物简介；2.尊敬和爱戴的原因。第二步：列 提 纲（重点短语）A

31、s for me；spare some time；listen to me patiently;第三步：连词成句I.As for me,my father is the person I respect mostly.2.He works very hard every day but he will also spare some time to accompany me and share many funnythings with me about his work.3.My father will listen to me patiently and encourage me to o

32、vercome the difficulties bravely.根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。第四步：连句成篇I.表示并列补充关系:As for;and;also；2.表因果关系：So；3.表转折对比关系：but；连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，第五步：润色修改【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了较多的高端句式，如定语从句My father is a teacher who loves his work and his students verym

33、uch；非谓语动词 He achieved a lot in his work,respected by his students；时间状语从句 When I come across theproblem of learning in my study,my father will listen to me patiently and encourage me to overcome thedifficulties bravely等。文章思路清晰，层次分明，上下句转换自然。为文章增色添彩。6.（福建省漳州市2021届高三质检）假定你是学生会主席李华，漳州艺术团将到你校为国际交换生举办木偶戏表演

34、活动，请你拟一个书面通知，内容包括：1.活动目的；2.活动时间、地点；3.期待参与。注意:L 词 数 8 0 词左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。参考词汇：艺 术 团 art group;木偶戏表演puppet showNoticeThe Students9 Union【答案】NoticeIn order to help the exchange students to get a good knowledge of local culture,a puppet show given byZhangzhou Art Group is going to be held in our sc

35、hool hall at 9:30am next Sunday.As is known,the puppet show is a special and traditional art form.Through the activity,not only can you tastea visual feast,but also learn more about the origin and development of puppet show.Therefore,its a good chanceto experience our local culture.All exchange stud

36、ents are warmly welcomed.Sincerely looking forward to your participation.The Students Union【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一个书面通知，通知漳州艺术团将到你校为国际交换生举办木偶戏表演活动的情况。【解析】第一步：审题体裁：应用文时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时和一般将来时。结构：总分法总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。要求：1.活动目的；2.活动时间、地点；3.期待参与。第二步:列提纲（重点词组）in order to;get a good knowle

37、dge of;not only.but also;leam about;look forward to第三步：连词成句1.In order to help the exchange students to get a good knowledge of local culture,a puppet show given byZhangzhou Art Group is going to be held in our school hall at 9:30 am next Sunday.2.As is known,the puppet show is a special and traditio

38、nal art form.3.Through the activity,not only can you taste a visual feast,but also learn more about the origin anddevelopment of puppet show.4.All exchange students are warmly welcomed.Sincerely looking forward to your participation.根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）1.表并列补充关系：not only.but a

39、lso2.表因果关系：therefore连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。【点睛】高分句型 lAs is known,the puppel show is a special and traditional art form.（运用 as 弓|导的非限定性定语从句）高分句型 2Therefbre,its a good chance to experience our local culture.（运用不定式作后置定语）7.（广东省2021届高三联考）假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Peter给你发邮件说他即将参加英国高考（A-level）,但现在感到紧张，不知

40、如何办。请给他回复邮件，内容包括：1.以具体事例安慰对方；2.提出建议。注意：1 .词数80左右：2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Dear Peter,Best wishes!Yours,Li Hua【答案】One possible version:Dear Peter,Receiving your e-mail and learning youre worried about your A-level,Tm writing back immediately.Actually,I fully understand you because I had the same experienc

41、e as you.I once had to participate in animportant exam,but I was so stressed that I almost gave it up.However,my English teacher comforted me,sayingthat if I tried every effort,everything would go on well.Hearing this,I calmed myself down and successfullypassed the exam.So rd advise you to ask your

42、teachers fbr help.Theyre experienced and skilled in dealing with problems.Why not have a try?Best wishes!YoursLi Hua【分析】本篇书面表达属于普通书信，要求考生给英国朋友Peter回信，帮助他缓解考前压力并提出一些建议。【解析】1 .词汇枳累收到：getreceive马上，立亥ij：at once immediately参与：take part in participate in处理：handle deal with2.句式拓展原句：So rd advise you to ask

43、your teachers fbr help.Theyre experienced and skilled in dealing withproblems.拓展句：So Td advise you to ask your teachers fbr help because theyre experienced and skilled in dealingwith problems.【点睛】高分句型 1 Receiving your e-mail and learning youre worried about your A-level,Im writing backimmediately.（现

44、在分词短语作状语）高分句型 2 I once had to participate in an important exam,but I was so stressed that I almost gave it up.（ihal结构引导的结果状语从句）8.（广东省佛山市2021届高三质检）假定你是学校的外教助理李华。因“五一”假期安排，学校调整了课表（class schedule）,由你负责通知外教 Petero请你给Peter写一封邮件，告知放假时间，并提醒他查看新课表。注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.请在答题卡的相应位置作答。【答案】Dear Peter,I write to inf

45、onn you about the schools class schedule adjustment during the coming Labor Day holiday.The holiday begins on 1st May and ends on 5th May,but you will have to work on the following Sunday.Therefore,theres a new class schedule for you,which has been attached to this e-mail.Please remember to read the

46、attached file and make sure you know about the new class arrangement in advance.If you have any question,feelfree to contact me.Wish you a happy holiday.Yours,Li Hua【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给外教Peter写封信，告知放假时间，并提醒他查看新课表。【解析】1 .词汇积累因此：thereforethus/consequently确保：make sure ensure安排：arrangement schedule联络：c

47、ontact get in touch with2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：I write to inform you about the schoofs class schedule adjustment during the coming Labor Dayholiday.拓展句：1 write to inform you that during the coming Labor Day holiday the schoofs class schedule will havesome changes.【点睛】高分句型 1 Therefore,theres a new class sch

48、edule for you,which has been attached to this e-mail.（运用 了which引导的非限制性定语从句）高分句型 2 Please remember to read the attached file and make sure you know about the new classarrangement in advance.（运用 了省略 that 的宾语从句）9.（河北衡水中学2021届高三模拟）假定你是校排球队队长李华。请写封邮件告知你的队友Chris球队近期将参加比赛，内容包括：1.比赛信息；2.赛前准备；3.表达期待。注意：1.词 数

49、 100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。【答案】Dear Chris,Im writing to let you know that we will have a volleyball match next month.The match will take place in ourschool gym on the afternoon of July 4th.We will play against the team from HongXing High School.In order towin the match,we should get fully prepared and

50、 practice hard.So from tomorrow,we need to train for two hoursafter school every day.Please come to the school gym at 6:30 pm from Monday to Friday.Youre an excellent player.With you on the team,we are confident that we can win the game.Lets try hardtogether!Cheers,Li Hua【分析】今年的书面表达沿袭近几年的体裁，仍旧是应用文。本