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1、写作过程审 题：体裁，人称，时态，要点布局谋篇：怎 么 开 头（通常有给，简洁，直入主题）分 几 段（34段最佳），内容先后排列，如何结 尾（切题）初步写作：强 调：脑海里浮现汉语句子时，考虑用什么短语，固定搭配，句型表达出这个意思固定短语，特殊句型，从句，连接词（段落与段落之间有承上启下）修改查错：谓语动词，非谓语动词，名词单复数，冠词等认真抄写，卷面干净整洁1.根据邮件内容回复一封信 邮件阅读三次，看清所给邮件里的写作要点，标上序号。根据要点写作2.How to类 有 条 理，每一条建议从大到小写。.,like doing A,doing B and doing C.suchas A,B

2、and C.注意：有没有“结合自身经历说明“。takemyself for example,as for me,3.要求叙述某一次的活动经历等总分总时态一过叙述所发生的事情最后一段一定要写体会感受感悟等，积极向上的内容Last month,our school held an event withthe theme of Motherland in My Heart toexpress our love for our motherland.During the event,we had many activities,including singing red songs and telli

3、ng storiesabout the Red Army.I took part in the singingcompetition.Besides,I attended the speechcontest,in which I told a story about a hero.Many students were moved by my story.I think this event is very meaningful.Improud of my country.I hope our motherland willbecome much greater and everybody ca

4、n live abetter life.Last month,our class had a charity sale.Two days before the sale,we handed out noticesto make our sale known by others.Then we madedifferent things like food and toys.It was so muchfun!When everything was ready,we started tosell the things.To our surprise,all the things weresold

5、out in a short time!At last,we gave away themoney we made to Childrens Home.I think it was a meaningful experience.Making things helps develop our life skills.Meanwhile,we can learn how to communicatewith others well.Last but not least,helpingpeople makes us happy.4.计划，打算，安排等 一般将来时或want tointend to

6、plan to will be able toDuring the Health Week,we will have aSchool Trip Day on Friday.Here is the plan forthe day.We will start our trip by walking toLakeside Park.In the morning,there is going tobe a kite-flying competition.At noon,we will havea picnic near a small lake there.After lunch,wewill go

7、boating on the lake.We can feel a sense ofpeace in mind while we are rowing on the bluewater.By being part of these activities,we will notonly develop friendship with our classmates,butalso relax ourselves and be free from pressure ofstudy.5.发表对某一事物的观点类一定要看清是利弊都要写还是二选其一方写详写还是略写In my eyes,as I see it

8、 it seems to me that asfor me而且：moreover,besides,in addition因此：as a result,therefore,that is why.总之：in a word,in short,to sum up,inconclusionfollow trends blindly make good use of causegreat harm to do good to假如你是李华，你的美国朋友Jim 对短视频在中国的流行很感兴趣，写信向你询问。请你回信向他介绍短视频的特点，并谈谈你对短视频流行的看法。提示词:short video短视频提示问题：

9、1.What are short videos like?2.What are some positive and negative thingsabout short videos?3.What do you think about the popularity ofshort videos?Dear Jim,Im glad to introduce short videos to you.Asits name suggests,most short videos are less than5 minutes.Some shorter ones only last for a fewseco

10、nds.They are easy and fun to make.One positive thing about short videos is thatthey help record peoples lives.Through shortvideos,people can share interesting things,gainknowledge and support,or just relax.However,every coin has two sides.People might becomeaddicted to watching short videos as well.

11、I think short videos can do us good.Withtheir popularity,we can share our happiness withthe whole world.At the same time,we should alsodevelop the ability to tell truth from lies andnever follow trends blindly.Yours,Li Hua6.介绍中国元素，中国事物7.邀请信邀请外国朋友参加活动等开门见山直入主题活动安排再次邀请Dear Mike,My classmates and I are

12、 going to ZhejiangUniversity for a study tour this Saturday.It is oneof the best universities in China and its also mydream university.Well go around the campus tovisit the labs and libraries,and learn about itshistory.We will also talk with the teachers andstudents there.We*d like to invite you to

13、join us,andremember to take your passport because welltake the train to get there.We will meet at theschool gate at 7:30 on Saturday morning.Look forward to seeing you!Hi,Andrew,Hows it going?Knowing that you are fondof food,I*m writing to invite you to attend ourschool food festival.The festival wi

14、ll begin at 2:00 on Fridayafternoon,June 25th on the school playground.We are glad to have something delicious likedumplings and zongzi.We can also cook food andsell it to our schoolmates to raise money forcharity.The festival will surely offer us a goodchance to show and experience Chinesetradition

15、al food culture.Besides,it is a good timefor us to share happiness,love and team spirit.Its a great pleasure to have you here with us.Looking forward to your reply.8.介绍某个名人最后一段一定要写他的影响向他学习希望成为他一样的人等9.自荐信 只写自己的优点，不需要真实，优点与该岗位相关有相关经验等等10.看图写话杭州卷假定你是李平，请阅读以下邮件，接受邀请并回复。词数80左右，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Hi Li Ping,H

16、ow is everything going with you?Next weekmy cousin Mike is staying with me.Were having aparty next Saturday.Please come!We*ll have lotsof drinks.But if you remember,can you bring someChinese food?The party will be starting at 6p.m.What time do you think youH be coming?141 probably need one or two pe

17、ople to help me tidyup after the party.Do you think you41 be able tostay and help?Anyway,hope you can make it.Please writeback to tell me if you can come or not.All the best,MattDear Matt,Its good to hear from you.Everything is finewith me here.Thanks for the invitation!I willdefinitely come!It will

18、 be good to meet Mike.1 1 1 1arrive at around 5:30 next Saturday and bringsome traditional Chinese foods,like dumplings andzongzi for you.I hope you would like them.Dontworry.I will stay after the party to help you cleanup.Thanks again for the invitation.I am reallylooking forward to it!All the best

19、,Li Ping宁波卷假如你是李华，上个月你校举行了“祖国在我心中”的主题活动(theme event),请你根据以下提供的信息并结合你参加这个主题活动的经历，写一篇英语短文向你校英语报投稿。注意：(1)短文必须包括导图的所有要点，并适当发挥；(2)文中不得出现真实的人名和校名；(3)词数80 100；标题已给出，不计入总词数。Motherland in My HeartLast month,our school held an event with thetheme of Motherland in My Heart to express ourlove for our motherland

20、.During the event,wehad many activities,including singing redsongs and telling stories about the Red Army.Itook part in the singing competition.Besides,Iattended the speech contest,in which I told a storyabout a hero.Many students were moved by mystory.I think this event is very meaningful.Improud o

21、f my country.I hope our motherland willbecome much greater and everybody can live abetter life.温州卷在中国传统文化中，“家”是一个永恒的话题，家人相聚一堂，才是完整的家，温暖而有力量。请你结合下图，以Home为题，写一篇约110词的英语短文，让外国朋友了解中国文化的“家”。HomeHome means a lot to every Chinese.When our family members come back home forreunion,we sit around the table,sha

22、ring ourachievements and happiness.Home becomes thewarmest place.It*s a place full of love.Love can be expressed bygift,family dinner and phone call.However,none isbetter than going back home and spending timewith our families.Ifs also a place full of strength.Whenever wehave difficulties,we can ret

23、urn home.Thanks tothe encouragement and help from our families,wecan rebuild our belief and confidence to keepmoving forward.So how long have you been away from home?Come back.Home is always waiting for you.金华卷假如你叫Darning,本周六你们班要去浙江大学开展研学活动(study tour)o请根据下列表格中的内容；给外籍教师M ike发一份邮件，告知你们的计划，并邀请他一同前往。注意

24、：1.文中必须包含所给的内容要点，可适当发挥；参考词汇供选择使用；2.文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息；3.词数:80100；4.邮件的开头与结尾已给出，不计人总词数。Dear Mike,My classmates and I are going to ZhejiangUniversity for a study tour this Saturday.It is oneof the best universities in China and it*s also mydream university.We*ll go around the campus tovisit the labs and

25、 libraries,and learn about itshistory.We will also talk with the teachers andstudents there.Wed like to invite you to join us,and remember to take your passport because weflltake the train to get there.We will meet at theschool gate at 7:30 on Saturday morning.Lookforward to seeing you!Yours,Darning

26、丽水卷外教Steve爱好艺术，喜欢运动。他想在任教期满前再体验一次中国文化。假设你是李华，请根据下面的要点，写一封邮件，邀请他到你家过周末。：、r-Xi 1 1 w n cy，一.-，内容要点 参考词汇I一 1 -.weekend Sports(or music/drawing)paint,play basketbail.-plan activities-卜-;-；-二-*:婷标疹一experience of Chinese cultures make jiaozi.write with a Chin 咐两W/口，注意：(1)文中必须包含工 市的两个要点，可适当发挥；(2)文中不得出现真实人名

27、、校名和地名等相关信息；(3)词数:80100；开头与结尾已给出，不计人总词数。Hi,Steve!Im Li Hua.I hear youd like to experience somemore Chinese cultures before going back.So whynot come to my home for the weekend?I have agood plan!As both of us like sports,let*s play basketball inthe gym around my home in the morning.Afterthat,we can p

28、ractice writing with a Chinese brushtogether.It*s not easy but makes us peaceful.Youcan also sense the beauty of the Chinesecharacters.To experience more,we are going tomake jiaozi,one of the most traditional foods inChina.It must be meaningful to have jiaozi madeby yourself.I am sure you will have

29、great fun.Wait for your reply!Yours,Li Hua衢州卷为助力打造“书香校园”，你校英语社团将举办以“热爱阅读”为主题的征文活动，请以“EnjoyReading,Enjoy Life”为标题写一篇短文介绍你自己的阅读情况并阐述阅读给你带来的好处。要求：1.短文应包括两个要点（阅读情况和阅读好处），可适当发挥，参考词汇仅供选择使用；2.短文不能出现真实的人名和校名；3.词数：90110。参考词汇：experience,habit,knowledge,pleasureReading makes a full man.Theres no doubt that rea

30、ding plays animportant role in our life.Many people enjoyreading.As a matter of fact,I have read lots ofbooks and got into the habit of reading everyday.Good books are like wise friends.Theysupport me to walk forward and help meunderstand the world better.In addition,readingalways brings me a colorf

31、ul world.I can not onlygain knowledge but also get great pleasure.All inall,reading is like a journey.Just walk slowly andenjoy the flowers along the way.嘉兴卷校学生会为即将到来的“健康周”活动策划了两个项目。假设你是学生会成员，请写一篇英语短文，在校英语报上介绍其中一个项目的活动内容及其益处。要点提示如下：Project%A School Trip DiyA Sports DayActivities,fly kites have a pic

32、nic have ball games,play tug-of-wart 拔;可）BcncGl%（被处）develop fnendship,tccl relaxed.develop friendship,keep fit.二 挪子英语一1注意:(1)短文必须包含表中你所选项目的所有信息，并适当发挥。(2)文中不得出现与你身份相关的信息。(3)词数:80 100。短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。During the Health Week,we will have a SchoolTrip Day on Friday.Here is the plan for theday.We will star

33、t our trip by walking to LakesidePark.In the morning,there is going to be a kiteflying competition.At noon,we will have a picnicnear a small lake there.After lunch,we will goboating on the lake.We can feel a sense of peacein mind while we are rowing on the blue water.By being part of these activitie

34、s,we will notonly develop friendship with our classmates,butalso relax ourselves and be free from pressure ofstudy.2(100 words)During the Health Week,we will have a SportsDay to make our school life more colorful.On that day,there will be different sports.Inthe morning,we will play ball games.Everyo

35、necan go in for their favorite ones.In the afternoon,there will be a game that you can nevermiss playing tug-of-war.It is really a good chanceto make us better understand the meaning ofteamwork.After that,there will be a kung fulesson,which can help us learn to keep fit.All these sports will do us g

36、ood.Not only canthey make us feel relaxed but also developfriendship.绍兴卷上个月，你们班为Childrens Home的孩子们组织了一次爱心义卖活动。请根据下表信息用英语写一篇短文，向某英语网站投稿，谈谈本次活动和你的体会。注意：(1)短文必须包括上表所有信息，可适当增加细节；(2)你的体会至少两条；(3)词数:80 100；(4)短文首句仅供选择使用，不计人总词数。参考词汇：义卖活动charity sale短文首句:Last month,our class had a charity sale.Last month,our

37、 class had a charity sale.Twodays before the sale,we handed out notices tomake our sale known by others.Then we madedifferent things like food and toys.It was so muchfun!When everything was ready,we started to sellthe things.To our surprise,all the things were soldout in a short time!At last,we gave

38、 away themoney we made to Childrens Home.I think it was a meaningful experience.Making things helps develop our life skills.Meanwhile,we can learn how to communicatewith others well.Last but not least,helping peoplemakes us happy.湖州卷假定你是李雷。某英语杂志正在举办征文活动，请根据广告中的信息写一篇短文，用于投稿。文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息；词数:80 100

39、。|A R T IC L E S W A N T E D!Be i n g He a l t l a y Which do you think is more important.doing exercise or eating healthy food?What do you do to stay healthy?Tell us what you think!W rite an a rt tele answeriBK thesequestion*and w e w ill publish _ _the best one*o u r aiagarinc.、People are paying m

40、ore and more attention tostaying healthy.Ways such as doing exercise,eating healthy food etc.help a lot.But I thinkdoing exercise is more important.For me,I used to sit at the desk for too long andseldom go outside doing some sports.As a result,I put on 5 kilos just in a year and I felt tired easily

41、.But when I tried to take up running after school,I began to feel energetic and healthier.Since then,I have kept the habit of takingexercise.And I find it does good to both the mindand the body.2People may have different ways to keephealthy,such as doing exercise,eatinghealthy food,etc.I think eatin

42、g healthily is moreimportant.At school,we have sports time every day,so Ithink we*ve got enough exercise.However,we usually have lunch hurriedly atschool.So eating healthily at home is importantfor us.Luckily,we can enjoy delicious and healthyfood cooked by our parents,which also makes usfeel good.A

43、s for me,I often make some vegetablesalad for breakfast or even cook something I likeat weekends.I think I will eat healthily to stay strong andhappy.台州卷假如你是李华，请给你的外国好友Andrew写一封电子邮件，介绍你校美食文化节(food festival)的相关内容及举办目的，并邀请他参加此次美食节。邮件内容包括：Time2 1 00 p.m.Friday.June 25th _一 一Placethe school playground _

44、Activitiescook,have something delicious._ _ _Aimsexperience Chirurc food cuhurc：money for charily._ _ _注意：(1)邮件必须包括表格中的所有信息，可适当发挥；(2)邮件中不得出现真实姓名和校名等相关信息；(3)词数:80100。邮件的开头和结尾已给出，不计人总词数。Hi,Andrew,Hows it going?Knowing that you are fond offood,Im writing to invite you to attend our schoolfood festival.

45、The festival will begin at 2:00 on Fridayafternoon,June 25th on the school playground.We are glad to have something delicious likedumplings and zongzi.We can also cook food andsell it to our schoolmates to raise money forcharity.The festival will surely offer us a goodchance to show and experience Chinesetraditional food culture.Besides,it is a good timefor us to share happiness,love and team spirit.Ifsa great pleasure to have you here with us.Looking forward to your reply.