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1、英语六级写作8综合改错 Passage 2 Until the very latest moment of his existence, manhas been bound to the planet on which be originated anddeveloped. Now he had the capability to leave that planet 1. has and move out into the universe to those worlds which hehad known previously only directly. Men have explored

2、 2. indirectly parts of the moon. put spaceships in orbit around anotherplanet and possibly within the decade will land into anoth- 3. on er planet and explore it. Can we be too bold as to sug- 4. sogest that we may be able to colonize other planet 5. planetswithin the not-too-distant future? Some h

3、ave advocat-ed such a procedure as a solution to the population problem: ship the excess people off to the moon. But we must keep in head the billions of dollars we might 6. mindspend in carrying out the project. To maintain the earths population at its present level, we would have to blast off into

4、 space 7,500 people every hour of every day of the year. Why are we spending so little money on space 7. muchexploration? Consider the great need for improving 8. Consideringmany aspects of the global environment, one is surely justified in his concern for the money and resources that they are poure

5、d into the space exploration ef- 9. 去掉forts. But perhaps we should look at both sides of thecoin before arriving hasty conclusions. 10. arriving at/reachingPassage 3Most people work to earn a living and theyProduce goods and services. Goods are eitheragricultural (like maize) or manufactured (like c

6、ars). Services are such things like education, 1. asmedicine, and commerce. These people provide 2. Somegoods; some provide services. Other people provideboth goods or services. For example, in the same 3. andgarage a man may buy a car or some service which helps him maintain his car.The work people

7、 do is called as economic 4. 去掉activity. All economic activities taken together make up the economic system of town, a city, a country,or the world. Such economic system is the sum-total 5. 之前加anof what people do and what they want. The workpeople do either provides what they need or providesthe mon

8、ey with that they can buy essential 6. whichcommodities. Of course, most people hope to have enough money to buy commodities and services whichare essential but which provide some particular 7. nonessentialpersonal satisfaction, such as toys for children, visits 8. 之后加tothe cinema, and books. The sc

9、ience of economist is basis upon the facts 9. basedof our everyday lives. Economists study our everydaylives and the general life of our communities in orderto understand the whole economic system of which we are a part. They try to describe the facts of theeconomy in which we live, and to explain h

10、ow itworks. The economist methods should of course be 10. economistsstrictly objective and scientific.Passage 4British people dont drink as many tea as they1. muchused to, but Great Britain still takes almost twenty-five per cent of all world exports of the commodity.The world largest producers of t

11、ea are India, China2. worldsand the Sri Lanka.3. 去掉 The quantity of tea is affected by the climate, 4. qualityby the latitude at which it is grown and also by that part of the tea bush is plucked. In fact, as5. whichDominic Beddard, a tea taster, tells us, favour can6. flavoureven depend on which da

12、y the leaf is plucked:There are very considerable differences between teas from the same estate made on different day, he says.7. daysProcessing tea is a complicated procedure. After the green leaf has been plucked, it is processed in afactory. Quickly and carefully, the tea is reduced to 8. slowlya

13、 small brittle particle, which is then dried and looks like the tea you see in a packet. The tea companiesthen rely on tasters as Donimic to value the tea. This9. 之前加such has to be done on a day-to-day basis because of fluctuations in quality. Having to taste up to sixhundred cups of tea a day certa

14、inly causes Dominics10. makesjob an unusual one!take = account for 9题或者把as改成likecause sb. to do make sb sth 不是双宾语，而是宾语和补语Passage 5Parents can be supportive of suspicions. Theycan be helpful to the teacher, or are in need of help1. bethemselves. Sometimes, I think parents are too hardto their childre

15、n. I have seen many parents of this2. onkind. I often have the problem of parents coming inand telling me what they really treat their kids. They3. howtell me that they usually stand over their kinds whenthey do their homework. They check their work andmake big fuss over the grades. They criticize t

16、he kids4. 之前加aover everything having to do with school. My response usually is: well, you know, he is really a good kid. He is fine in my class. Maybe you shouldnot be too strict with them.5. him We want parents to realize the fact that teachers are professors at working with children. They have6. p

17、rofessionalobserved many children and many parents. Becauseof this, and because of their specialized training,teachers can be realistic about children. Teachersknow whether parents want their children to do well7. thatand to behave well. But teachers know less what8. betterchildren should be able to

18、 do at different ages andstages. They dont expect the 8-year-olds to do the work that can only be done by the 12-year-olds. Parents, in the contrary, often expect their children9. onto do what is usually beyond their age and ability. Obviously, this may make great harm to the 10. dochildrens develop

19、ment.stand over 密切监视某人what 后面必须缺少主语或者宾语make a big fuss 大惊小怪Passage 6 Thus you experience success as you complete each chapter. While you have completed the overall 5. havent goal, you know you have progressed toward it.Passage 7although the tremendous amounts of money, time 3. despiteand energy givi

20、ng over to oral health.Although 后面必须接句子Critics, on the other hand, slam the profession. It can be conservatively estimated that at least 15 percent of United States dentists areincompetent, honest, or both, says a former 10. dishonestPassage 8All these tokens of success are in a sense merely bribes

21、provided by another person. Therefore, they can be 10. HoweverButeffective and useful.in a sense 某种意义上Passage 9It is not just in academy that children are been pushed 4. beingtoo far and too fast. Some parents start their preschoolWe need to abandon the false notions that we can create exceptional children by early instruction and such children are symbols of our competence as 8. 之前加thatparents.