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1、综 合 改 错（Errors Correction）：一、语法错误二、词汇错误三、逻辑错误四、多词少词Example:Television is rapidly becoming the literature of our periods. Many of the arguments 1.time/times/agehaving used for the study for literature as a 2. / school subject are valid for study of television. 3. the 一、语法错误1、平行结构(not only.but alsobot

2、h.andeither.orand)1) A professors salary is higher than a secretary.secretarys 2) One of these is informative, interesting, and is easy to understand.去掉3) Defining a problem is easier than to provide a solution.providing2、连词错误1) Candle will later be replaced by lamp, that could burn longer and light

3、er. which2) The children attended a small elementary school (often of just one room) to that they had to walk every day, possibly for a few miles. which，that前只能有except和in。except that除此以外；in that因为，体现在3) It will be interesting to discover how many young people go to universities without any idea of t

4、hat they are going to do afterward. what，what相当于the thing that4) It appears that we all find company in sound, if we demand a little quiet from time to time. but或yet 转折，所以不能用if 5) They are likely to travel more and to want more education. Nevertheless, many more jobs are available in these services.

5、 Therefore或So 因果3、分词错误1) Polices records show a surprised link between changes in the seasons and crime patterns. surprising2) Even the quiet of our careful protected wilderness areas can be invaded at any moment by a passed jet. passing3) So a sportsmans individual way of walking with raised should

6、ers is imitated by an admired fan. admiring4、指代错误 1) A break in their employment, or a decision to work part time, will slow its raises and promotions-as it would for men. their 2) Clearly some risks are worth taking, especially when the rewards are high: a man surrounded by flames and smoke general

7、ly considers that jumping out of a second-floor window is an acceptable risk to save its life. his 3) The modern light-house also identifies it in a code known to all ships. itself 主语宾语相重叠用反身代词5、形容词、副词（略）6、谓语错误（主谓一致、时态、语态）1)Business today whether it is running a little gas-station or a big factory t

8、ake good management.takes2) Advances in technology has also changed peoples lives. have3) But if 98 percent of us doesnt need to work, what are we going to do with ourselves? dont复数 4) Whether women who have started a career will attain pay equality with men rest on at least two factors. rests句子做主语为

9、单数 5) In some places all the trees have cut down. have been二、词汇错误(搭配错误、用词错误)三、逻辑错误（肯定否定乱用）1)Blood pressure drugs definitely help some people live after a heart attack, but these same drugs may be both necessary and harmful for those with only mild blood pressure problems. unnecessary2) In every case

10、, the influential person may consciously notice the imitation but he will feel comfortable in its presence. unconsciously四、多词少词（少介词、冠词、形式宾语；多介词和副词）1)When two Americans meet for first time, it is normal for them to call each other by their given name immediately. the first2）In fact, until recently seawater has almost be considered to be useless and no value. of no