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1、09慰问信（2013年，山东卷）假如你是新华中学的学生李华，你的美国朋友Tom一周前给你发电子邮件，询问你暑假里的打算，但你因准备期末考试未能及时回复。请根据双下要点给他回封邮件：1.未及时回信的原因；2.你假期的打算（如做兼职、旅行、做志愿者等）注意：1. 词数：120-150；2 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。【参考范文】Dear Tom,How is everything going? I feel terribly sorry for missing the chance of answering your letter in time. You know, Ive been prep

2、aring for the final exams these days, so I forgot to write back. In your letter, you asked me for my plans on summer vacation. Now, I am writing to tell you some specific details.Overall, three things will make my summer vacation meaningful. To start with, doing a part-time job is my dream and I int

3、end to work as a salesman because not only can I earn money by myself, but also it will broaden my horizons. In addition, it is a fabulous choice to visit some famous scenic spots such as Mount Tai during the vacation, in order to enjoy appealing scenery and make more friends. What is more, doing vo

4、luntary work, I think, will make a great contribution to the society, which is able to enrich my life.I sincerely apologize again for my mistake. By the way, whats your plan to spend your summer vacation? I am looking forward to your reply.Yours sincerely,Li Hua【解析】本书面表达考查提纲类作文。从写作要点和得分点来看，考生应在宏观上把握

5、书信体写作的要求，如格式、文体等，写作段落以三段式为宜，首段体现问候、写信背景等，尾段再次致歉、也可询问Tom暑假里的打算，体现书信体的交际性；而中间段具体交待未及时回信的原因、假期的打算。考生在微观层面上应具体把握写作的内容和语言，做到句子之间有效的连接，长短句结合，多用doing及物做主语，句子加半句原因、结果、目的等具体细节的解释、利用简单而有效的中文思路扩展英文细节。考生若能在写作部分做到内容充实符合要求、语言精彩与众不同、结构清晰一目了然，相信这样的文章能让考生获得一个相对满意的成绩。【范文点评】此范文表达流畅，语言优美，内容全面，符合题目要求。其中值得学习的句型有：不定式作目的状语

6、：To start with, doing a part-time job is my dream and I intend to work as a salesman because not only can I earn money by myself, but also it will broaden my horizons.非谓语动词和定语从句：What is more, doing voluntary work, I think, will make a great contribution to the society, which is able to enrich my lif

7、e.【经典套路】第一段：问候+写信背景+写信目的第二段：“道歉”部分(相当于“写信背景”)第三段：“假期安排”部分第四段：补充说明+客套话慰问信（含抗“疫”慰问信）开头句型1.I was (awfully) sorry to hear that+句子(yourteam lost the game.)2.I was shocked to hear of+sth. (your failure in the exam.)3.Im writing to tell you how sorryIam to hear aboutsth.(your loss)4.Knowing your situation,

8、Ifeel terribly sorry aboutsth.中间段句型1.I quiet understand how you feel now，but .我特别能理解你现在的感觉，但.2.You have devoted yourself to .你在.方面付出了大量的精力和时间3.But as we all know, it is extremely difficult to do .但是众所周知，做.本身就极其困难4.To prepare . , you have made every effort.为了准备这次. ,你已经尽了最大努力5.Its not your fault to do

9、 .不是你的错结尾句型1.If there is anything you need me to do, dont hesitate to let me know.2.IfIcan do anything for you, do let me know.3.Remember, we wont be far away if you need any help!4. I hope you can find my encouragement helpful. Best wishes.模板Dear ,I was very sorry to hear that .（交代事由） Its understan

10、dable for you to .（表明主要观点） However, if you canadoptdifferentperspectives, .（提出建议）First, its normal to lose in a basketball match, for you can either win or lose. If youve tried your best, why not lift your spirits toface up to（直面）the result? Anyway, . Besides, you can also . Therefore, if , you will

11、 .I hope you can find my encouragement helpful. Best wishes.Yours,Li Hua模板Dear_,I am _, I am very sorry to have heard of your present situation that you are so bitter after _. / I am shocked at the news about_(引出具体实情，表示惋惜和同情)At present,_ decides that it will give you_ when you receive a letter. That

12、 will offer you so much courage. I hope you will make efforts to overcome all kinds of difficulty, no matter how hard it is. You are sure to make it.(进一步安慰并鼓励对方)I will try my best to_, which may help you .It will give more courage to live on.(表示自己意愿提供帮助) May you recover soon./Good luck and best wish

13、es to you!(表达愿望与祝福) Yours sincerely, _一、题型特点慰问信是向失败者、生病者、不幸者、愁苦者或遇到天灾人祸的人表示安慰或同情的信件。此类信要写得及时、简明扼要，感情要真诚，措辞要贴切，尽量以乐观的口吻减轻亲友的烦恼和痛苦，并鼓励对方对日后烦人生活、学习、工作充满信心。二、写作思路 第一步：引出事实，表达惋惜和同情；第二步：安慰对方或鼓励对方，预测未来；第三步：表达愿望和祝福。二、套用句式：1. I was shocked at the news about the earthquake in 听闻地震的消息我很震惊。2. On, an incredible

14、and unknown earthquake suddenly happened in,Province.在，省市突然发生了一场惊人的、未曾预知的地震。3. We are so sorry to hear the news about the earthquake.听到地震的消息我们很难过。4.We are very sorry to learn that 我们非常遗憾地得知5.I just heard that youve been on the sickness last week.我无法告知你当你听到你发生事故我是多么难过。6.I just cant tell you how sorry

15、 I was to learn of your accident.我刚刚得知上个星期你病了。7.I was deeply concerned when I learned that当我听说时，我非常关心8.I just wanted to let you know how concerned we are.我只想要你知道我们是多么担忧。9.I hope you are getting some relief from the pain.我真心希望能减轻你的痛苦。10.We are hoping for your quick return to health/early recovery/rap

16、id recovery.我们真心/祈祷你能很快完全康复。11.We are looking forward to /hoping and praying for your speedy and full recovery.我们真心希望你早日康复。12.Only we have the perseverance can we defeat the natural disaster.我们只有不屈不挠才能战胜自然灾难。13.Please extend our deep sympathy to your family.请向你的家人转达我们最深切的同情。14.If there is anything I

17、 can do to help you, please let me know. 如果需要我的帮助，请告知。1假定你是李华，得知你的笔友Mike的家乡最近发生了大地震，损失惨重。请你给他写一封慰问信，内容包括：1. 你所了解的灾情；2. 你的担忧；3. 你的帮助。注意：1. 写作词数应为80左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。_2假定你是李华，得知你的美国网友Bill的家乡发生山火，房屋被烧毁，他现在住在临时避难所。请你写一封邮件慰问他，内容要点如下：1.询问受灾情况，表示关心；2.鼓励他振作起来，重建家园。注意：1. 词数80左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.开头和结尾已给

18、出，不计入总词数。参考词汇：山火 mountain fireDear Bill,_Yours,Li Hua3假定你是李华。你的英国好友Joe竞选篮球队队长失败了。他给你来信说他很受挫败。请你根据以下要点提示，给他写一封慰问信。要点：1. 得知消息；2. 安慰并鼓励他；3. 表达自己的关心和祝愿。提示：1. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；2. 词数：不少于100词（开头已给出，但不计入总词数）。3. 参考词汇：竞选run forDear Joe,I am sorry to hear that you failed in your attempt to run for the position o

19、f the basketball team leader._Yours,Li Hua4假定你是李华，你的加拿大朋友 Zack来邮件告诉你说，他未能通过 朗诵唐诗选拔赛。请你用英文给Zack写一封慰问邮件，主要内容包括：1. 点明得知的情况；2. 表达理解和安慰；3. 鼓励对方。注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 可以适当增加情节和连贯语。参考词汇：朗诵唐诗选拔赛 the tryout for “Tang Poetry Recital Contest”_5据报道，7岁的美国男孩Trump得知自己身患癌症（cancer）后处于极度的痛苦之中，美国抗癌协会（ACS）决定，每当Trump收到一封慰问信，

20、就多为他分担3美元的治疗费。假如你是新华中学的学生李华，请你用英文给Trump写一封慰问信，主要内容包括：1. 自我介绍；2. 表亦鼓励；3. 祝他早日康复。注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。_6假设你叫王红，得知你的英国朋友Andrew的爱犬Sparky发生了意外永远离开了他，请你给他写封慰问信。注意:1词数100左右；2可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。_7假设你是李华。重阳节即将来临，校学生会决定组织大家去敬老院开展慰问活动。请你给你的外国朋友一来自英国的交换生John写一封邮件，邀请他参加。内容包括;1.活动简介;2.具体安排（出发时间、地点等）。注意:1

21、.词数100左右;2.可适当增加细节，使行文连贯;3.开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数。参考词汇: 重阳节“Double Ninth Festival”;敬老院“nursing home”Dear John,_Yours,Li Hua8假定你是某国际中学的李华，将参加校志愿者协会慰问社区的留守儿童。请写信邀请你校交换生Cathy一起参加，内容包括：1活动内容；2发出邀请。提示词：留守儿童left-behind children注意：1写作词数应为80左右；2请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Dear Cathy,_Looking forward to your reply.Yours,Li H

22、ua9假如你是李华，最近收到了你的美国朋友Jenny的来信。她在信中说，由于刚进入高中，还不能适应新的环境，不知道如何去结交新朋友，因而情绪低落。请根据以下内容给她回信。1. 向Jenny表示问候和慰问。2. 针对她的问题提出几点建议。注意：1. 词数80左右;2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯;3. 信的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。Dear Jenny, I am really sorry to hear that you feel bad after entering the high school. _Best wishes!Yours,Li Hua10假定你是李华。你的英国朋

23、友Eric最近总吃外卖，导致消化不良。请你给他写一封电子邮件，内容包括：1.表示慰问；2.提出建议；3.表达祝愿。注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。_11假如你是红星中学学生李华。得知英国好友Jim在他们学校运动会的接力赛(the relay race)中摔倒，导致腿部骨折，请你用英文写一封邮件给他，内容包括：1.表示慰问；2.康复建议。注意：1.词数100左右。2.开头语和结语已给出，不计入总词数。Dear Jim,_Yours,Li Hua12假设你是李华，你的网友David 刚随父母搬家并换了一所新学校，他希望在新学校交到新朋友，并希望得到你的帮助。请你给他写

24、一封电子邮件，提供在新学校交朋友的建议。内容包括：1.对他搬新家表示慰问；2.提供在新学校交朋友的建议（至少两点）。要求：1.词数100左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。_13假定你是李华，上周与交换生Henry一起参加为期三天的社区志愿者活动，但Henry因故缺席了最后一天的活动，请根据以下要点向他介绍相关情况：1. 表示慰问；2. 活动内容及流程；3. 个人感受。注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。_参考答案1Dear Mike,How are you doing? I am sorry to hear that a terrible earthquak

25、e happened in your hometown. I can imagine how difficult this moment must be for you. Im really worried about you, your family and all your friends there. Im crossing my fingers for you now in the hope that you are all safe.Ive collected some donations from my classmates. To some extent, it may help

26、 you get over the difficulty.Best wishes to you all!Your sincerely,Li Hua【写作指导】本篇书面表达属于应用文。题目要求考生给家乡最近发生大地震的笔友Mike写一封慰问信，需描述自己所了解的灾情，表达担忧，并说明自己的帮助。【写作分析】1. 词汇积累难过的：sorrysad, sorrowful糟糕的：terribledreadful, awful, horrible发生：happenoccur, take place困难的：difficulthard, tough为担心：be worried aboutbe concerned about一定程度上：to some extentin some way, to a certain extent, to some degree克服：get overconquer, overcome困难：difficultyobstacle, barrier2. 句式拓展合并简单句原句：Ive collected some donations from my classmates. To some extent, it may help you get over the difficulty.拓展句：Ive collected some donations from my clas