2024高考英语重点写作满分练1　必修第一册　UNIT 2.docx

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1、写作满分练1必修第一册UNIT 2限时40分钟应用文写作(图表类短文) 学校英文报正在开展以Means of Transportation Choice为题的讨论。请使用图表中的调查结果写一篇短文投稿,内容包括:1.出行方式选择状况描述;2.简单评论。城市居民出行方式调查结果(人数百分比)注意:1.写作词数应为80左右; 2.短文的题目和首句已为你写好,请按如下格式在相应位置作答。Means of Transportation ChoiceNowadays, there are various means of transportation for people to choose from

2、for their daily needs. _答案与解析学校英文报正在开展以Means of Transportation Choice为题的讨论。请使用图表中的调查结果写一篇短文投稿,内容包括:1.出行方式选择状况描述;2.简单评论。城市居民出行方式调查结果(人数百分比)范文借鉴Means of Transportation ChoiceNowadays, there are various means of transportation for people to choose from for their daily needs. According to a survey condu

3、cted recently among city residents, the percentage of people who choose private cars is as high as 49.70% while 29.10% take public transportation like buses or subways. Those who choose to go on foot only account for (占比例) 2.60%. The rest (18.60%) prefer other means of transportation. (出行方式选择状况描述)As

4、 the figures of the chart show, compared with public transportation, private cars are still a main option for most city residents, probably due to its incomparable convenience, which is a disturbing trend if we take environmental protection into consideration (将考虑在内). (简单评论)读后续写阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续

5、写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。“First up is Sam,” Mr. Mead said for probably the fourth time. This was the moment I felt frightened. Fire Dragon, my best yoyo (悠悠球), was frozen into my fist. It had been there since Mr. Mead had told the class to get ready for our threeminutelong performances.I walked toward the fr

6、ont of the room. My heart was pounding. “I􀆳d like to show you some dodo tricks,” I began. “I mean, some yoyo tricks.”My deskmate Mary giggled. “Three minutes? I wouldn􀆳t last one!”“My first trick is The Sleeper,” I said. “It is a necessary part of any other tricks, so it is very ne

7、cessary.” My jaw felt like it was held by rubber bands.“I􀆳ll throw the yoyo down, and instead of pulling it right back, I􀆳ll let it, um, spin (快速旋转) first for about twenty minuteser, I mean seconds.”I took the yoyo out of my sweaty fist and held it up so that everyone could admire

8、its colors: bright red with spots of gold. “It􀆳s called Fire Dragon.”“It doesn􀆳t look very dangerous,” someone whispered.My hands were shaking. I snatched the yoyo back into my palm and bent my elbow. To begin the move, I straightened my arm and let go of the yoyo. However, my Fire

9、 Dragon hit the floor. I now looked very stupid. Mary wasn􀆳t the only one giggling.“My next trick is, um, Walk the Dog.” I would throw a sleeper and set it down. It would walk across the floor, like a dog. Everyone stood up to see better. I got in a good power throw, but my Fire Dragon slid

10、 off my finger! Fire Dragon, still spinning, went rolling under desks.Mary let out a squeal when it landed by her feet. Giggling, she picked up Fire Dragon and gave it back to me. “Fire Dragon on the loose!” she said. Waves of laughter began to spread through the classroom. My shoulders began shakin

11、g. I was laughing!I was in midchuckle when Mr. Mead announced “OK, Sam.I think we􀆳re ready for you to try again.”注意:1.续写词数应为150左右;2.请按如下格式在相应位置作答。“Try again? Was he kidding?” I thought. _I took a deep breath and started my performances._萨姆拿着自己最好的悠悠球,准备给同学们演示,但是由于紧张,一出场就闹出不少乱子,惹得同学们哈哈大笑。不过这一

12、笑使他放松了紧张的心情,萨姆调整了一下状态,重新登场,赢得了老师和同学们热烈的掌声。续写第一段:衔接首句可描写“我”的心理活动,比如意识到这是一个展示“我”悠悠球技能的机会,衔接原文尾段中对作者笑的描写,接着可描写笑使作者放松下来,不再紧张;接着可描写“我”和Mary的眼神互动,接着可写教室内同学们的反应和“我”的紧张;尾句衔接第二段首句“开始表演”,可写Mary用眼神鼓励“我”。续写第二段:衔接首句“开始表演”和原文“My first trick is The Sleeper”可写“我”表演The Sleeper的动作,“我”的表演如何?周围同学们的反应? Mary对“我”的表扬;尾句可写同

13、学们请“我”教他们玩悠悠球的绝技。范文借鉴“Try again? Was he kidding?” I thought. But then I realized this was a second chance to show the class that I really could handle a yoyo. “I􀆳m ready,” I heard myself saying. And it􀆳s strange, but I really was. The laughing had left me. Feeling a little relaxed,

14、 I lifted my eyes and met Mary􀆳s eyes. I saw smile, no, trust, in her eyes. Laughter and whispers suddenly stopped. The weight of everyone watching me, seemingly doubting my ability, pressed down on me (大家都看着我,似乎怀疑我的能力,压在我身上). That was when Mary smilingly mouthed the words “You can” to me.I

15、 took a deep breath and started my performances. “First, The Sleeper. ” I threw the yoyo down, and instead of pulling it right back, I let it spin first for about twenty seconds. The next three minutes saw my two wonderful tricks of Fire Dragon flying and spinning freely. The crowd went wild! Everyone clapped and cheered, even Mr. Mead.“I know you can” Mary came up and gave me a strong high five (大力击掌). After class, a few of my classmates asked if I􀆳d teach them how to do some yoyo tricks. And I proudly agreed.