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1、 读后续写素材：人与动物精彩描写关于狗的神态描写How to make the dog in your writing vivid and eye-catching?1.Upon his masters arrival, the dogleapt to his feet，snorted happilyandbounded forward.(高兴狗狗)2.The dogcurled into a wet lumpandlay shiveringon the ground. (可怜狗狗)3.Aware ofthe immense danger,the crippleddog wasdoing im

2、pression of a corpse.（胆怯狗狗）4.Hestretched,shook himselfandcircled several timesbefore dropping to the ground.（伸个懒腰抖抖身，保证有个好睡眠）5.With pricked ears, hewatched for a momentand thenyawned.（警觉狗狗）6.Lying on the ground，the dogkept his eyes wide open,ears flat,a vibrating growl deep in his chest.（别惹我，后果自负）7.

3、The dogwandered offtorest her noses in her paws.（我想静静，不想理你）8. Dogstake much pleasure in rolling and rubbing their necks and backs with their paws.（调皮狗狗）9.Seeing the meatin the masters hand, the little dogwagged its tailandwatched with hopeful eyes.（馋狗狗）10.At the sight ofa strangerapproaching the hou

4、se,the dogwatched him,ears up,head slightly cocked.（高度戒备狗狗）11.The dog,when intently watching and slowly approaching the prey,kept one of itsfore-legs doubled up for a long time,ready for the next cautious step.（伺机一扑,成败在此一举）12.Little puppiesenjoy playing growling and biting each others faces and legs

5、.（天真烂漫小可爱）13.The doggot worried, crawling up around the old mans feetas iftoseek for safety and warmth.（好怕怕，别过来）人与动物的读后续写集锦A heroic dogLike most dogs whose homes are situated on large plots of land，one New Zealand dog regularly went off exploring through the farmland around hishomefor hours at a tim

6、e.But asLouie，a sheepdog rescued from a shelter when he was just a puppy，got older，his trips got shorter and shorter.Now that Louie is 12 years old，he chooses to stay close to home and hardly ever goes out to explore any more，which is why his family was so worried when he recentlydisappearedand didn

7、t return home as usual.“My mother was a little upset as he had stopped his wandering，” said Marolyn Diver，whoseparents own Louie.“We were veryconcernedthat he might forget where his home was.” Butthankfully，Louie turned up at the house a few hours later.“He looked sotiredand had basically just colla

8、psed(崩溃)，”Marolyn said.“We were concerned that someone might have hurt him. But then we realized there wasa small note attached to Louies collar.After reading the note，I felt complete relief and relaxed，and then my heart melted.”“Louie is the hero of the day，” read the note，which was written by a ne

9、ighbor about a mile away.“He led me to Maddy in distress stuck under a pile ofbranchesCheers，Rob” “According to Rob，Louie was waiting for him at his house and demanded to be followed.Rob said that he was 100 percent sure that Louie knew what he was doing，and leading him to Maddy was his pure focus，”

10、 Marolyn explained.注意：1所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph 1：Once Rob found Maddy, Louie helped him dig her out. Paragraph 2：“That night we were very worried about Louie，” Marolyn said. 【参考范文】OnceRobfoundMaddy，Louiehelpedhimdigher out.Accordin

11、g to Rob，Louiepulled atbranchesand dug her out of the ground.Rob said that as soon as Maddy was free，both dogs ran to a nearby pond and jumped into it and began to drink water.Then he gave Louie a huge handful of dog biscuits as a thank-you.He knew that Louie might get in trouble for being late forh

12、ome，so he thought he would writea small noteto explain why Louie was absent.“Thatnightwewereveryworried aboutLouie，”Marolynsaid.“He could hardly walk and looked terrible.We wereconcernedthat he might not make it through the night.”Thankfully，Louie was back to normal the next morning whenRobcame by w

13、ith Maddy for a visit.Marolyn said，“It has changed the way I look at him.And I think myparentsfeel the same way.Im so proud of him.” 02阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。It was one of the hottest days of the dry season. We had not seen rain in almost a month. The crops were dying.Cows

14、 had stopped giving milk. The streams were long gone back into the earth. If we didnt see some rain soon we would lose everything.I was in the kitchen making lunch for the family when I saw my six year- old son，Billy，walking toward the woods.I could only see his back. He wasnt walking in his usual w

15、ay. He was obviously walking with a great effort，trying to be as still as possible. Minutes after he disappeared into the woods，he came running out again，toward the house.Moments later，however，he was once again walking in that slow and purposeful step toward the woods.This activity went on for over

16、an hour：walking cautiously to the woods，then running back to the house.Finally，my curiosity got the best of me.I crept out of the house and followed him on his journey.He was cupping both hands in front of him as he walked；being very careful not to spill the water he carried. Branches and thorns sla

17、pped(拍打)his little face but he did not try to avoid them. He had a much greater purpose. As I leaned against a tree to spy on him，I saw the most amazing site.Several large deer appeared threatening in front of him. But Billy walked right up to them. I almost screamed for him to get away. And I saw a

18、 baby deer laying on the ground，obviously suffering from heavy loss of water and heat exhaustion，lift its head with great effort to lap(舔饮) up the water in my beautiful boys hand.Paragraph 1：When the water was gone，Billy jumped up to run back to the house. Paragraph 2：And later I knew what was going

19、 on. 【参考范文】Whenthewaterwasgone，Billyjumpeduptorun backtothehouse. My curiosity once again drove me to follow him back.After he reached the kitchen，he turned on the tap. As he was trying hard to cup both hands to receive the water，it was still running away through his fingers.And he also had great di

20、fficulty turning off the tap with hands occupied. He seemed to be so sorry and selfcondemned for his wasting of water.Wearing a note of upset on his face，he carried it carefully toward the woods.AndlaterIknewwhat wasgoingon. It began to make sense to me why he wasnt walking in his usual way. I stood

21、 on the edge of the woods watching the most beautiful heart working so hard to save a life. As my tears began to hit the ground，they were suddenly joined by other drops.and more drops. It was as if the nature itself was moved by the great effort made by my son and began to weep with pride.03阅读下面材料,

22、根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。Little snow had fallen this winter. For Reuven the frier(皮衣制作工) it was a bad year, and after long hesitation he decided to sell Zlateh the old goat. The town butcher had offered eight silver coins for the goat. Reuven told his oldest boy, Aaron, to take the

23、 goat to town. Aaron understood what it meant, but he had to obey his father. His sisters cried loudly.Aaron took along two slices of bread to eat on the road. He needed to deliver the goat by evening and return the next day with the money. While the family said goodbye, Zlatch stood as patiently as

24、 ever. Zlateh trusted human beings.The sun was shining when Aaron left. Suddenly the weather changed, and after awhile it began to snow. Soon their path was completely covered and Aaron got lost. Beneath the snow Aarons boots touched the softness of a plowed field. He realized that he was no longer

25、on the road. Zlateh bleated (哀鸣) as if asking to be taken home. Aaron looked around hoping to find a farmer driving a sleigh(雪橇) along the way. But he could see nothing.Aaron knew that if they did not find shelter, they would freeze to death. Suddenly he made out the shape of a hill. When he came ne

26、ar it, he realized that it was a large haystack (大干草堆)covered by snow. Aaron knew that they were saved. When he reached the hay, he dug a nest for himself and the goat. It was always warm in the hay. And hay was food for Zlateh.Zlateh, sat down and seemed to have regained her confidence in man. Aaro

27、n ate his bread, but after the difficult journey he was still hungry. He looked at Zlateh and realized that he would not be starved to death. Goats milk was sweet. Zlateh ate frequently and her body gave forth an animal warmth, and Aaron hugged her tightly. The snow fell for 3 days and the wind quie

28、ted down.Paragraph1: .On the morning of the fourth day, Aaron heard the ringing of sleigh bells. Paragraph2:The news that Aaron and Zlateh were coming up the road was a great joy in the family. 【分析】本篇书面表达是读后续写。【详解】这是一篇记叙文。通过阅读所给文章可知，文章讲述了父亲Reuven为了度过艰难冬季，决定卖掉家里最老的山羊Zlateh，长子Aaron负责将Zlateh送到屠户那里换钱，在途

29、中，他们遭遇了风雪天气，Aaron寻得了大堆干草堆，又饿又冷的情况之下， Zlateh的羊奶给了Aaron温饱。历经三天的风雪天气终于停了下来，在一位过路农民的帮助之下，他和羊一起回家与家人团聚。续写部分分为两段，第一段开头是：On the morning of the fourth day, Aaron heard the ringing of sleigh bells. (第四天早上，Aaron听到了雪橇的铃声。)所以应该写Aaron从干草堆里出来后发生的事情，由首句的“Aaron heard the ringing if sleigh bells”，可知，要描述的内容应该是Aaron和羊

30、如何获得雪橇主人的救助，比如大声呼喊；同时，由于前文提供的线索“Goats milk was sweet. Zlateh ate frequently and her body gave forth an animal warmth, and Aaron hugged her tightly.(羊奶是甜的。Zlateh频繁地吃干草，她的身体发出动物般的温暖，Aaron紧紧地拥抱着她。)可知，本段还应该描写Aaron在与羊建立了深刻感情之后的不忍分离等；第二段开头是The news that Aaron and Zlateh were coming up the road was a great

31、 joy in the family. ( Aaron 和Zlateh在回家路上的消息，使全家人都非常高兴。)本段应该描写家人的反应，情节和细节上要回应上文，尤其突出描写父亲的反应和变化，比如父亲改变的对羊的态度，不再卖掉或给与羊奖赏等，文末要进行主题升华。还要注意所续写短文的词数应为150左右，按要求完成写作任务。【点睛】本文描写详略得当，使用了高级词汇和高级句子。如：1.高级词汇：get out of; make up ones mind; point out; rush out; in tears; think of2.复合句式：Aaron shouted loudly to the peasant who drove the sleigh for help. (who引导定语从句)Aaron told them in tears how he had found the haystack and how Zlateh had fed him with her milk in the past few days. (how引导宾语从句)Nobody ever again thought of selling Zlateh, who had been an import family member to them. (who引导非限制性定语从句)