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1、考点51 读后续写之写好记叙文的句子（核心考点精讲精练）读后续写的语言升级考点1 利用词汇手段提升文章的表现力考点2利用高级句式让人物形象栩栩如生 考点1 利用词汇手段提升文章的表现力方法把话写具体使语言更具表现力Because of her hatred, she looked at him.Because of her hatred, she glared at him.As scheduled, we participated in several good activities.As scheduled, we participated in several instructive a

2、ctivities.方法使用高级词汇提高文章品质The advice the old man gave Tom was very important.The advice the old man gave Tom was very significant/vital/critical.I should be free any time after school next week.I should be available any time after school next week.方法使用相关短语让表达更具体、更形象。Hearing the bad news, the boy cried

3、 sadly.Hearing the bad news, the boy burst into tears sadly.After a days work, we all tired.After a days work, we all worn out.方法恰当使用非常形象地描述事物或反映细腻的感情色彩变化The day was bitterly cold; the moon was shining brightly in the sky.Having no choice, I slowly raised the book, hoping to hide myself.I was quietl

4、y, joyfully and patiently watching as the sun painted a brand-new day.On our way back home, my father held me tightly, wearing a big frown.方法运用介词短语增加句子的多样性She gazed up at him, glowing happily.She gazed up at him, glowing with happiness.Like a lamp，the moon shone from above.The stars twinkled their e

5、yes curiously.Like a lamp，the moon shone from above.The stars twinkled their eyes with curiosity.考点2利用高级句式让人物形象栩栩如生一、描写外貌与性格的结构及句型句型1 学会熟练使用with介词短语及with的复合结构，使人物外貌、性格表达活灵活现，生动形象。典例1 She is a girl with a pair of black eyes.她是一个有一双黑眼睛的女孩。（介词短语作定语）She is a girl with lovely dimples on her round face.她是

6、一个女孩，圆圆的脸上有几个可爱的小酒窝。（with的复合结构作定语）She is a girl with a pair of black eyes and lovely dimples on her round face. 她是一个女孩，有一双黑眼睛，圆圆的脸上有几个可爱的小酒窝。（综合使用介词结构作定语）句型2 学会熟练使用定语从句，使人物外貌、性格表达信息更丰富。典例2 He is a man with great determination.他是一个意志坚强的人。（with介词定语作定语）His perseverance is occasionally unimaginable. 有些时

7、候他的毅力是你没法想象的。He is a man with great determination, of whom the perseverance is occasionally unimaginable./ He is a man with great determination, whose perseverance is occasionally unimaginable.他是一个意志坚强的人,有些时候他的毅力是你没法想象的。（综合使用介词短语和定语从句）句型3 学会熟练使用倒装句，突出人物形象的核心内容。典例3 A pair of blue eyes and lovely dimp

8、les（酒窝）are on her round face.On her round face are a pair of blue eyes and lovely dimples（酒窝）. 在她的圆脸上，有一双黑眼睛和几个可爱的小酒窝。(倒装句型)Such is Lin Qiaozhi, an easygoing, kind and warmhearted woman.这就是林巧稚，一个随和善良又热心肠的女人。句型4 学会熟练使用并列连词and，突出人物形象的多种特征和品质。典例4 Her face blushed with rosy health, and her lips had a fr

9、eshest smiles, and her eyes sparkled with bright good-nature.她脸色红润，显得很健康，嘴角挂着最明艳的笑意，眼睛里闪耀着欢快的光芒。She was dressed in white, a picture of youth, unprotected innocence, and humble girlish simplicity.她穿着一身白色衣服，显得年轻美貌、天真烂漫，像个又温顺又单纯的姑娘。句型5 学会熟练使用but，though和although，对比突出人物不同时期的特征，使表达更强烈。典例5She looks as if s

10、he had been handsome once, but she is pale and thin and untidy and has not a word to say for herself.看上去她从前长得相当漂亮，可现在苍白又消瘦，而且不大整洁，见了人不大说话。Although not a strong boy, there was nothing of the coward about him.他虽不是一个强壮的少年，但却没一点胆怯的迹象。句型6 学会熟练使用一些简单的修辞手法，使外貌、性格表达栩栩如生。典例6 He is a boy but he is too shy lik

11、e a little girl to speak in the public.他是一个男孩，可是他腼腆的像个小姑娘，不敢在公共场合讲话。句型7 学会熟练使用进行时描述人物形象，让人物活起来。Her big brown eyes are dancing with eagerness.她那双棕色的大眼睛急切地转动着。Her eyes were shining softly.她的眼光温柔地闪动着。二、常用表达动作、行为的经典结构及句式1.熟练使用介词短语、副词修饰动词，赋予人物动作丰富的情感。with+情感名词with delight/excitement/ pleasure/ happiness

12、/joy/satisfaction /anger/rage/patience/fear/terror/embarrassment/pride /caution/care/patience/certainty【例】Jacks face flushed/burned with embarrassment.杰克窘得满脸通红。with+身体部位 with its hungry red eyes/ its sharp teeth/her shaky hand/her pale lips等等【例】She kissed Oliver with her pale lips. 此处用with her pale

13、lips来修饰动作kiss，体现了母亲当时虚弱的状态，和对Oliver满满的爱。in+名词 in surprise/amazement/shock/sorrow伤心 in a high /low / sweet/loud/soft /weak voice 用.的嗓音 In a tone of surprise /curiosity /impatience /regret /command 用.的语气 【例】He hung/dropped/lowered/bent/bowed his head in shame.他羞愧地低下了头。副词 suddenly /immediately /instant

14、ly /rapidly /firmly /slowly /angrily/happily/excitedly【例】He carefully jumped over the broken glasses.此处也可以把副词carefully提高句首，强调他的小心，效果更好。高分表达：Carefully，he jumped over the broken glasses.2.熟练使用一些简单的修辞手法，让你的写作更加形象生动。【例】She went home in a flood of tears.她泪如泉涌地回家去了。此处在动作描写中添加了in a flood of tears夸张描写，生动传神地

15、体现她当时的情感状态。3.使用时间状语从句，突出动作的发生背景。如when，while，as，before，after引导的时间状语从句来体现。【例】 When I arrived there, I walked to the door and knocked. As I waited at the stop, I heard a big noise.4.使用并列谓语动词让动作像电影一样，连续起来，让人物活起来，即Action1 and Action2或者Action1，Action2 and Action3。【例】 She hailed a taxi, got into it and tol

16、d the driver her destination. He reached deep into his pocket , pulled out a handful of change, and held it up to the farmer.5.使用非谓语来体现动作的即时性，同时尽显英语表达的功力。 V1-ing，V2 或者V1，V2-ing【例】 Looking up at the teacher, the boy said, “Thank you.” Without any hesitation, he packed up his camping gear, heading str

17、aight to the woods没有多想，他收拾好野营装备直奔树林。 V1 and V2, V3-ing 或者V1，V2-ing and V3-ing或者V1-ing，V2，V3-ing【例】Pattingon my shoulder, my fatherencouraged me never to give up my dreams.父亲拍着我的肩膀，鼓励我永远不要放弃自己的梦想。 The students came in, talking and laughing.学生们说着，笑着走进来。 Hearing the cry, out rushed the neighbors, tryin

18、g know what had happened听到呼喊，邻居们冲了出来，想知道发生了什么。 Having done., 主句【例】Having left my keys in the dormitory, I went back to get it.= After I had left my keys in the dormitory, I went back to get it. Having thought about the situation for a while, I decided to give up the idea that I should go home.=After

19、 I had thought about the situation for a while, I decided to give up the idea that I should go home.这个句型可以和after引导的时间状语从句互换6.综合使用各种手段，让人物在立体空间中动起来。【例】Burning with anger, he glared at me with his big frightening eyes , yelling, “Youre such an idiot.”此处的burning with anger是情感描写，glare和yell是动作链，同时将动作和语言描

20、写结合在了一起，形成了饱满的动作面，属于高分表达。 As night was beginning to fall, Jane sat on the grass, staring at the vast sky, frightened and ravenous饥饿的.此处将环境描写，动作描写以及情感描写结合在一起，形成了饱满的动作面。三、情感和态度常用的表达结构和句型1.学会使用to ones + n.（令某人.的是）结构表达情感和态度。to ones joy/delight 令某人高兴的是to ones surprise/astonishment 令某人惊奇的是to ones regret 使

21、某人感到遗憾的是【例】Much to her surprise he came back the next day. 让她非常吃惊的是他第二天就回来了。2. 学会使用in + n =adv.（地）结构表达情感和态度。震惊、惊讶：in shock, in astonish, in amaze, in surprise etc高兴、兴奋、激动：in excitement， in great joy，in delight etc悲伤：in sorrow， in tears etc 【例】I live with my families everyday, and we live together in

22、 great joy. 我每天和家人生活在一起，很热闹。3、学会使用 系动词+ 过去分词 +at/to do /that 从句结构将动作和情感、态度结合起来。Sb.+系动词+-ed.+at sth/doing 对某事感到的【例】I was surprised at his change. 我对他的改变感到惊讶。Sb.+系动词+-ed.+todosth. 做某事感到的 【例】We were very surprised to learn that she had got married again. 我们听说她又结婚了，感到很惊讶。Sb.+系动词+-ed.+that从句【例】They were

23、amazed that I was talking in an Irish accent. 我说话带爱尔兰口音让他们感到很惊奇。4. 学会使用 sothat句型将情感、态度和结果结合起来。【例】On hearing the news that he was admitted into the key university, he was so excited that he jumped for joy.当听到他被重点大学录取的消息的时候，他非常激动以至于高兴地跳了起来。5. 学会使用 it isthat强调句型，突出情感、态度的重要作用。【例】Further reading made me

24、realize that it was hard work and determination as well as her gentle nature that got her into medical school.进一步阅读有关她的文章让我意识到正是她的勤奋努力和决心以及她温柔的性格使她进入医学学校的。6. 学会使用形容词作状语将情感和态度的状态表达出来【例】Speechlessandhappy,sheheldhersontightlyintoherarms,withtearswellingupinhereyes.她说不出话来，高兴极了，把儿子紧紧地抱在怀里，眼里噙满了泪水。7. 学会使

25、用让步状语从句将人物的情感和态度的高度表达出来【例】Though badly frightened, she remained outwardly composed. 她虽然非常害怕，但表面上依然很镇静。Upset as he was, he still went to work as usual.尽管他难过，我仍然一如既往的去工作。一、句子升级1.He was trembling in a blanket and he said, “Im cold.”（用现在分词改写）_in a blanket, he said, “Im cold.” 2.I sat back in a chair and

26、 fell asleep. （用现在分词改写）_back in a chair, I fell asleep.3.When I saw no one noticing us, I put the Christmas present down and left. （用现在分词改写）_no one noticing us, I put the Christmas present down and left.4.“Here，” he said.At the same time, he handed the coins to the gatekeeper.“Here，” he said， _the c

27、oins to the gatekeeper. （用现在分词改写）5.For a few moments, I just stood there.I held that ten-dollar bill and I wondered what to buy and who to buy it for. （用现在分词改写）For a few moments, I just stood there, _that ten-dollar bill and wondering what to buy and who to buy it for.6.He stood there and tears of g

28、ratitude were welling up in his eyes.（用独立主格结构改写）He stood there,_.7.Her father was lying on his back, and his dog was trapped under the truck. （用独立主格结构改写）Her father was lying on his back,_.8.He was eager and excited, and she waved her hands, trying to attract others attention. （形容词作状语）_, she waved he

29、r hands, trying to attract others attention.9.To Annies delight, surrounded by his classmates, Mark seemed like a rock star, and he was cheerful and proud. （形容词作状语）To Annies delight, surrounded by his classmates, Mark seemed like a rock star,_.10.Well also spend some fun time together, singing, danc

30、ing and playing games.We hope it will make them happy. （用非限制性定语从句改写）Well also spend some fun time together, singing, dancing and playing games,.【答案】1. Trembling 2. Sitting 3. Seeing 4.handing 5.holding 6.(with) tears of gratitude welling up in his eyes 7.(with) his dog trapped under the truck 8.Eage

31、r and excited 9.cheerful and proud 10.which we hope will make them happy二、完成句子1.【2022届广东省高三5月联考】From that night on, my life changed a lot. Before that, I just enjoyed being a kid, _（不得不处理不重要的事情）of my teenage life.2. 【2023届安徽省合肥市第八中学高三最后一卷】_（充满喜悦）, I cant wait to share with you this exciting news!3.【

32、2023届安徽省皖江联盟高三最后一卷联考】_(毫不犹豫）, Nicholas rushed back into the now flame-filled home.4. 【2023届安徽省皖江联盟高三最后一卷联考】_（被烟火包围着）, he recognized the direction of the cry and rushed towards it.5. 【2023届安徽省皖江联盟高三最后一卷联考】_（拖着他疲惫的身体）, he slowly rushed to the door_（怀里抱着孩子）.6.【2023届福建省高中毕业班4月适应性练习】_（看到她微笑的脸）made me fee

33、l really happy inside.7. 【2023届河北省高三适应性考试】_（看到年轻学生们闪亮的眼睛）preparing for their first competition, I knew I couldnt let them down.8. 【2023届河北省邯郸市高考三模（保温卷）】I could hardly contain my excitement as we stood in front of the unfamiliar house,_（想知道里面有什么在等待着我们）.9. 【2023届河北省邯郸市高考三模（保温卷）】We lifted the cat up an

34、d hugged him close,_（感到既感激又格外高兴）.10. 【2023届湖北省高三3月第二次适应性英语模拟测试】_（泪水夺眶而出）, Jerrys father watched his beautiful little crippled son flapping his arms up and down in the wind, _（高声喊道）, “IM FLYING, DADDY!”【答案】1.having to deal with unimportant matters 2.Full of joy 3.Without hesitation 4. Surrounded by fire and smoke 5. Dragging his tired body; with the child in his arms 6. Seeing her smiling face 7. Seeing the shining eyes of the young students 8.wondering what awaited us inside 9.feeling grateful and overjoyed 10. Tears welling up in his eyes；yelling at the top of his voice7学科网（北京）股份有限公司