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1、专题08 书面表达1（2022天津中考真题）假如你是李华，请你给美国笔友David写一封信，讲述你班同学王红回家路上做的一件好事，并谈谈感受。（1）上周五，一棵树被大风吹倒，挡住了道路。（2）王红看到后，捡起地上的树枝，又去移动树干。（3）树干太沉，她搬不动。（4）人们过来帮忙。（5）你认为参考词汇：被吹倒be blown down挡住block树枝branch树干trunk要求：（1）词数：80100个。（2）开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。（3）要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。Dear David,How are you? Id like to share a story with you

2、.Last Friday, _Do you have a story to tell? Hope to hear from you.Yours,Li Hua【答案】例文Dear David,How are you? Id like to share a story with you.Last Friday, on Wang Hongs way home, she saw a big tree was blown down by wind and it blocked the way. After Wang Hong saw it, she picked up the branches on t

3、he ground and then moved the trunk again. But the trunk was so heavy that she couldnt move it by herself. When other people saw what she was doing, they were moved by her and came to help her. Finally, they succeeded in moving the trunk away. I think she is a very kind person. And from this story, I

4、 learn that we should offer to help when someone needs help. It not only helps others, but also makes ourselves happy.Do you have a story to tell? Hope to hear from you.Yours,Li Hua【解析】1.题干解读：本文要求根据题干中的提示内容讲述你班同学王红回家路上做的一件好事，并谈谈感受，可适当增加细节。2.写作指导：本文以一般过去时为主，人称以第三人称为主。第一段和最后一段已给出，第二段具体描述她做好事的过程；第三段描述自

5、己的感受。写作时运用不同的句式和短语使文章层次清晰、逻辑清楚，做到无单词拼写和语法错误。2（2021天津中考真题）假如你是某中学学生李华, 最近你班发生了一件令人感动的事情。请根据以下提示, 给你的英国好友 Tom 写一封信, 与他分享你的感动。（1）两周前同学王红伤了左腿。（2）王红上下楼很困难, 但想来。（3）校长知道后, 决定将你班从四楼搬到一楼。（4）你们帮助王红（如买午饭等）。（5）你认为要求：（1）词数： 80100 个。（2）开头和结尾已给出, 不计入总词数。（3）要点齐全, 行文连贯, 可适当发挥。Dear Tom,How are you? I have a moving st

6、ory to tell you. _Please tell me something interesting about you and your classmates. Yours,Li Hua【答案】范文：Dear Tom,How are you? I have a moving story to tell you.Wang Hong is my classmate. She hurt her left leg in an accident two weeks ago. It was difficult for Wang Hong to go up and down the stairs,

7、 but she wanted to come to school. The headmaster decided to move my classroom from the fourth floor to the first floor after he knew it. Wang Hong is very grateful to the headmaster. As her classmates, we should also help her. Some helped her buy lunch, others helped her to clean up. She is happy.

8、I think students should help each other and make progress together.Please tell me something interesting about you and your classmates. Yours,Li Hua【解析】【分析】1.题干解读：该题目属于应用文写作，要求根据所给的汉语提示，以李华的名义想Tom写一封信谈谈最近你班发生的令人感动的事情，注意要点齐全，写作时要按信的格式来写。2.写作指导：本文应该用第三和第一人称来叙述内容；时态采用一般现在时和一般过去时；在写作时应承接短文开头，根据汉语提示的内容，叙述

9、王红同学受伤后，校长和同学对她的帮助，并写作自己的感受。在叙述内容时，力求语言正确，内容完整，保证行文连贯。3（2020天津中考真题）假如你是学校校报英语专栏的小记者，请根据以下要点写一篇短文，描述你校学生李华的一次难忘经历，并表达你的想法。（1）李华在假期中去甘肃参加了文化交流活动。（2）他向当地学生介绍天津的历史和名胜古迹。（3）他介绍自己的学习方法，还为他们演奏钢琴。（4）他与很多学生成为朋友并保持联系。（5）你认为参考词汇：文化交流活动cultural exchange activities名胜古迹places of interest要求：（1）词数：80100个。（2）开头已给出，不

10、计入总词数。（3）要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。Li Hua, a student of our school, went to Gansu to _【答案】例文：Li Hua, a student of our school, went to Gansu to take part in the cultural exchange activities. He introduced the history and places of interest of Tianjin to the local students. He showed his ways of learning and pl

11、ayed piano. He made friends with some students there and kept in touch with them. I think it is an unusual experience. It is necessary for the students to take part in cultural exchange activities. They can not only learn some useful cultural knowledge but also making friends with other people. Its

12、a good way to communicate with other students.【解析】1.题干解读：该题目属于记叙文写作。在写作时应紧接文章开头继续写作，根据内容提示讲述李华假期的经历并发表自己的看法。2.例文点评：例文主要用第三人称进行写作，主要采用一般过去时态来写作。讲述李华假期的经历叙述完整且条理清晰。3.高分亮点：短语：take part in；kept working；places of interest；playedthe piano；made friends with；kept in touch with；communicate with。句型：it做形式主语的句子

13、；not onlybut also的句型；and表示并列的句子。4（2018天津中考真题）书面表达86.请你根据以下内容提示，以“The Story of Li Hua”为题，为学校广播站英语专栏写一篇短文，介绍发生在你班同学李华身上的一件事。（1）上周五放学后李华乘公交车回家，看到有人在吃橘子，并把橘皮扔在车上。（2）李华把橘皮捡起，放进垃圾桶。（3）乘客用手机拍了照片，发布到网上。（4）老师知道后表扬了李华，李华说这是他应该做的。（5）你觉得参考词汇：果皮peel垃圾桶dustbin发布post表扬praise要求：（1）词数：80-100个。（2）短文的题目和开头已给出，不计入总词数。（

14、3）要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。The Story of Li HuaLast Friday, when my classmate Li Hua took a bus back home from school. _【答案】The Story of Li HuaLast Friday, when my classmate Li Hua took a bus back home from school. After school last Friday, Li Hua took a bus home and saw someone eating oranges and throwing or

15、ange peel on the bus.So he picked it up and put it into the dustbin. The passenger on the bus took photos of Li Hua with their mobile phones and and posted them online. After knowing it, the teacher praised Li Hua and encouraged others to learn from him.I think Li Hua did a good deed. It is impolite

16、 to throw litter in public places.【解析】本文内容应包含题目中所提供的所有信息。灵活运用各种句式，采用不同的表达方式将各个要点完整地表述出来，注意主次分明，详略得当。语言力求准确，简洁。最后必须认真查验是否有漏写，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。点睛：这篇短文使用了大量的固定短语，为文章增色不少，如take a bus；put into ；take photos of； encourage to do sth;；learn from等； and ;so 和固定句型It is +形容词+to do sth等的运用，使文章的表达更有逻辑性，更富有条理；同时语言流畅，内容

17、完整，是一篇不错的范文。5（2019天津中考真题）书面表达86.假如你是晨光中学的学生李华，平时坚持用英语写日记。请根据以下要点，描述你星期三放学乘地铁回家路上看到的事情，并表达自己的想法。(l)一个男孩不舒服，开始呕吐，一位穿着漂亮的女士帮着擦拭地面，男孩表达感谢。(2)地铁到站，有人挤向座位，有人下不去车，有人因此争吵。(3)你认为参考词汇：开始呕吐begin to vomit挤向座位push towards the seat争吵havea quarrel要求：(1)词数：80100个。(2)日记格式和开头已给出，不计入总词数(3)要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥WednesdayWhen

18、I took the underground back home from school, I noticed【答案】Wednesday When I took the underground back home after school.I noticed a boy who felt not very well and whose face was pale.I was wondering whats wrong with him when he suddenly began to vomit.Seeing this scene, a lady who wore beautiful dre

19、ss not only gave a helping hand but also cleaned the floor without hesitate.And then the boy expressed gratitude with a low bow.As time passed by, the subway arrived.Someone pushed toward the seat while others cant get off，therefore they had a quarrel angrily.From my perspective,I wish we all can he

20、lp each other when someone is in trouble just like the beautiful lady and be polite all the time.Only in this way can our world become better and better.【解析】这是一篇日记，根据材料中的相关信息用英语写一篇日记。所提供的材料中列举了你星期三放学乘地铁回家路上看到的事情，主要从(l)一个男孩不舒服，开始呕吐，一位穿着漂亮的女士帮着擦拭地面，男孩表达感谢。(2)地铁到站，有人挤向座位，有人下不去车，有人因此争吵。(3)你认为。写出自己的想法。这几

21、个方面去写。时态为一般过去时，人称为第一人称。注意作文中必须包含材料上的所有信息，并适当发挥。写作时，避免使用汉语式的英语，尽量使用我们熟悉的句子或短语。语法要正确，表达要符合英语习惯，注意时态、时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系，表达具有条理性。【高分句型一】I noticed a boy who felt not very well and whose face was pale.我注意到一个男孩感觉不太好，脸色苍白。句子who felt not very well是由who引导的定语从句。【高分句型二】Seeing this scene,

22、a lady who wore beautiful dress not only gave a helping hand but also cleaned the floor without hesitate.看到这一幕，一位穿着漂亮衣服的女士不仅伸出援助之手，而且毫不犹豫地打扫了地板。句子who wore beautiful dress是由who引导的定语从句。该句话还运用了not onlybut also：不但而且。【高分句型三】Only in this way can our world become better and better.只有这样，我们的世界才能变得越来越好。这句话是由o

23、nly引起的倒装句。6（2022天津南开二模）假设你是大明。你打算在暑假里做一件有意义的事情，恰好动物救助中心正在招募志愿者，于是你用英文写了一封邮件发送给负责人Mr. Lee，阐述你想成为志愿者的理由。1你喜爱动物，愿意帮助它们。2你养了一条狗和一只小猫，有照顾动物的经验。3你可以乘地铁去救助中心，交通便利。4工作日或是周末，你都可以去上班。5其他理由（补充一点即可）。参考词汇： Animal Helpers 动物救助中心convenient 便利的要求：（1）词数：80100个。（2）短文的开头和结尾部分已给出，不计入总词数。（3）要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。Dear Mr. Lee,

24、I am a student. I would like to_YoursDaming【答案】例文Dear Mr. Lee,I am a student. I would like to be a volunteer for the Animal Helpers Center. My nameisDaming. I am writing to recommend myself according to the following points. Firstly, I love animals and I am willing to help them. Secondly, I keep a d

25、og and a cat as my pet, so I have some experience of taking care of animals. Thirdly, I can take the subway to the center, it only takes about 15 minutes to get there. The transportation is convenient. Fourthly, as a student, I can go to the Animal Helpers Center three days a week. Besides, I know a

26、 little about medical knowledge.If I am lucky enough to be chosen, I will try my best to help animals. Thank you for your patience.Looking forward to your reply.Yours,LiMing【解析】1.题干解读：该题目属于应用文电子邮件的写作。在写作时应承接短文开头，根据汉语提示的内容，介绍自己想成为志愿者的理由，可适当增加细节。2.写作指导：本文应该用第一人称来介绍内容，时态采用一般现在时。在介绍内容时，力求语句通顺，语法正确，保证提示内

27、容完整，条理清晰，行文连贯。7（2022天津红桥三模）初中阶段的学习生活即将结束，回想自己在妈妈的关爱和帮助下的成长过程，心中充满感恩之情。请你根据以下要点提示以李华的名义给妈妈写一封感谢信。(1)自从我出生，您就一直照顾我；(2) 每天早上早起准备早点、水果，每天晚上做可口的饭菜；(3) 每天陪我写作业，复习功课；(4) 当我遇上麻烦，您总是鼓励我并帮我解决问题；(5) 妈妈，谢谢您参考词汇：解决solve 陪伴accompany要求：(1)词数：80100个。(2)信的开头已给出，不计入总词数。(3)要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。Dear Mum,How time flies! I wi

28、ll graduate from middle school. With the care and help of you, I have made great progress.You_Yours,Li Hua【答案】例文Dear Mum, How time flies! I will graduate from middle school. With the care and help of you, I have made great progress.You have taken care of me all the time since I was born. Every morni

29、ng you get up early in order to make breakfast and get fruit ready for me. Every evening I can enjoy the delicious food which you make for me. When I do my homework and go over lessons every night, you often accompany me till midnight.Whenever I am in trouble, you always encourage me and help me sol

30、ve problems.Thank you, my dear mother. I am so thankful for your love that Ill work harder and try to do better in the future.Yours,Li Hua【解析】1.题干解读：本文主要根据题干中的提示内容给自己的妈妈写一封感谢信，可适当增加细节。2.写作指导：本文以一般现在时为主，人称以第一人称和第二人称为主。第一段已给出；第二段主要根据题干中的提示具体描述妈妈为自己做的事情；第三段表达对妈妈的感激之情。写作时运用不同的句式和短语使文章层次清晰、逻辑清楚，做到无单词拼写和语

31、法错误。8（2022天津河西二模）安娜由于无法克制自己的紧张情绪，导致考试成绩不理想。她在网上写了一份求助的帖子。请你根据自己的经历和做法给她回一封信。下面是Anna的帖子：I am a middle school student. I dont know how to deal with my test anxiety (考试焦虑). I listen to the teacher carefully in class. And Ive done all of my homework and studied hard every day. But when the day of the te

32、st comes, I feel so nervous that I cant get it together to answer those questions. What would I do?Anna要点提示：（1）考试的前几天：认真复习，修改错题，有问题问同学和老师；加强体育锻炼；（2）考试的前一天晚上：早休息，放松，听听音乐；（3）考试中：不紧张，（再任写一条建议）要求：（1）词数：80100个。（2）开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。（3）要点齐全，行文连贯，适当发挥。Dear Anna,Test anxiety can be a real problem if you cant b

33、eat it. Try to do the following things and then youll feel better._Everything takes time and practice, and learning to beat test anxiety is the same.Yours,Frank【答案】例文：Dear Anna,Test anxiety can be a real problem if you cant beat it. Try to do the following things and then youll feel better.A few day

34、s before the exam, you should review your lessons carefully, correct the mistakes and write down the correct ones next to the wrong ones. If you have any problems, go and ask your teacher and classmates. Whats more, you should do some exercise to keep you strong. You shouldnt go to bed too late befo

35、re the exam. Make sure to have a good sleep. You can listen to music to relax yourself. During the exam, keep calm and dont be nervous. Finish the easy ones first and dont spend too much time on one problem. This is my advice.Everything takes time and practice, and learning to beat test anxiety is the same.Yours,Frank【解析】1. 题干解读：本文是一篇书信。针对安娜的考试成绩不理想这个问题提出一些建议，写一封回信。具体的建议要包含所给的提示，可适当发挥。2. 写作指导：本文采用一般现在时，人称以第二人称为主。开头和结尾已给出，从考试前几天，考试的前一天晚上和考试中三个方面提出自己的建议。写作时保持主谓一致性，做到无语法和标点错误。