高考英语黄冈经典一轮（全国通用版）实用课件：写作技法点拨系列 第二部分 八.ppt

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1、八、恰当添加细节,锦上添花【技巧点拨】根据高考英语作文的评分标准,作文被分成了五个档次。其中分数较高的档次对于考生作文的要求都涉及了覆盖所有内容要点、使用较多语法结构和词汇、有效使用语句间的连接成分。其实,还有一个重要的方面没有被指出,那就是在作文中要注意细节的体现。恰当添加细节的方法具体如下:1.列举具体的实例进行补充说明(1)青少年应尽我们所能保护环境、拯救地球。We teenagers should do what we can to protect the environment and save the earth.We teenagers should do what we can

2、 to protect the environment and save the earth.For example,we can use recyclable bags instead of plastic bags,refuse to use single-use products,plant more trees and save water and energy.(2)我要花一些时间和父母在一起。Ill spend some time staying with my parents.Ill spend some time staying with my parents,chatting

3、 with them and doing some housework.(3)我想找一个像我一样喜欢旅行的笔友。I like to seek a pen pal who is interested in traveling just like me.I like to seek a pen pal who is interested in traveling just like me.If possible,we can travel together or share traveling.2.增添与所写信息相关的神态、动作、心理描写以及背景渲染等内容(1)我有时去村西的小河游泳。I went

4、 swimming in the river in the west of the village now and then.I went swimming in the river in the west of the village now and then.The water in the river was very clear.(背景渲染)Weather permitting,I went swimming in the river in the west of the village now and then.(相关背景)(2)我看到了一些不良行为。I found some bad

5、 behavior.I found some bad behavior.Some people scribbled on the wall;some played soccer on the lawn and some people threw rubbish everywhere.(相关行为描述)3.增加相关信息的时间、地点等内容(1)我要和父母一起去超市购物。Im going to do some shopping with my parents in the supermarket.Im going to do some shopping with my parents in the s

6、upermarket and wont be back until about 5:00 in the afternoon.(增加时间)(2)我已经带来了你让我归还的这两本书。I have taken with me the two books you asked me to return.I have taken with me the two books you asked me to return to the City Library.(增加地点)4.适当增加与所给信息相关的原因、结果、条件、让步、手段、目的、地点等内容(1)假设你是李华,你的英国笔友Henry最近来信询问你高考后的暑

7、假安排。请根据下面要点写一封回信,说明你的计划,并简述理由。要点:1.休息;2.读书;3.参加社会活动。I need a good rest.Ill do some reading.I need a good rest because I do feel tired after the hard work of all these years.Of course,Ill do some reading for fun,and for knowledge as well.(因果关系)Ill take part in some social activities.If I have free ti

8、me,Ill take part in some social activities.(条件状语)If possible,Ill take part in some social activities.(条件状语)If possible,Ill take part in some social activities so that/in order that I can know more about society.(结果状语)(2)Tracy来电话说咖啡屋(Bolton Coffee)见面取消。Tracy called,saying that she couldnt meet you at

9、 Bolton Coffee.Tracy called,saying that she couldnt meet you at Bolton Coffee as she had something important to do with.(原因状语)5.结尾适当发挥,写出个人感受、评价、希望、愿景、倡议等(1)Although I was very tired this summer holiday,I felt very happy for what I did.(个人感受)(2)I think such activities are necessary and meaningful.(评

10、价)(3)In a word,if she would like to learn Chinese,I hope she will do it well.(愿景)(4)As students,its our duty to protect our school environment and make it clean.(倡议)【高考预测】世纪金榜导学号79060269假如你是李华,在你校学习的美国交换生David和你成为了好朋友,并且在他的帮助下你的英语学习取得了很大的进步。在他结束学习回国之后,请你用英语给他写一封感谢信。内容应包括:1.表达思念;2.感谢帮助;3.希望保持联系。注意:1.

11、词数100个左右;2.可适当增加细节;3.开头结尾已给出,不计入总词数。Dear David,_Yours,Li Hua【参考范文】Dear David,How time flies!Its been a whole week since you left our school.(添加时间)Thank you so much for your help.How I wish you could stay here a little longer!On writing this letter,precious memories rush into my mind.I still remember

12、 when you first came into our classroom smiling and showed us your wonderful Street Dance,which,as well as your native accent,attracted us all.What leaves me the deepest impression is the way you helped me memorize Englishwords.You always repeated the words many times before I could learn them all by heart.(添加具体事例)With your help,I have made much progress in my English,which finally ranks the top 10 in my class.(添加结果)Thank you so much again!I really hope we can stay in touch forever!(表达愿景)Yours,Li Hua