高考英语复习：写作技巧点拨系列(八).ppt

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1、写作技巧点拨系列(八)揣摩图画内涵,从容掌控图画作文【典例典例导练导练】(2013江江苏苏高考高考)请请根据根据你你对对右面两幅画的理解右面两幅画的理解,以以“Actions Speak Louder than Words”为题为题,用英用英语语写一篇写一篇作文。作文。你的作文你的作文应应包括以下内容包括以下内容:1.简简要描述两幅要描述两幅图图的内容的内容;2.概述你概述你对对两幅两幅图图中不同做法的理解中不同做法的理解;3.举举例例说说明两幅明两幅图对图对你的启示。你的启示。【写作指写作指导导】.常用句式常用句式 (1)What is illustrated/reflected in th

2、e picture is that.(2)What the picture describes vividly is a kind of common phenomenon that.(3)The picture vividly reflects a phenomenon where our society is in bad need of.(4)Seeing the picture,I cant help thinking how ridiculous.is.However,what is reflected in the picture is not a rare phenomenon

3、in modern society.(5)There are at least two good reasons accounting for.(6)There may be three factors which contribute to/account for/are responsible for this phenomenon.(7)The second reason is that.(8)Faced with phenomenon/these problems,we should take a series of effective measures to cope with.(9

4、)It is high time we took some measures to put an end to this phenomenon/these problems.(10)Only in this way can we.(11)First,.Second,.Third,.(12)The social problem has aroused great concern among people.(13)We should raise peoples awareness of.黄金模板黄金模板 第一段第一段:描述描述图图画画 As is vividly shown in the pict

5、ure,图图画画的的内内容容.The picture tells us that图图片大致反映的意思片大致反映的意思.第二段第二段:解解释释、说说明和分析明和分析图图片片 The implied meaning of the picture should be taken into account seriously.First/To begin with,揭揭示示涵涵义义/原原因因/结结果果1,Second/Whats more,揭揭示示涵涵义义/原原因因/结结果果2.Last but not least/Finally,揭揭示示涵涵义义/原原因因/结结果果3(如如果果有有的的话话).And

6、 the social problem(如如 果果 是是 现现 象象 的的 话话 可可 以以 用用 phenomenon)has aroused the great concern/care of our whole society/world/all the people.第三段第三段:给给出自己的看法和想法以及解决出自己的看法和想法以及解决问题问题的的办办法法 In my view/point of view(or As for me),we should take some measures as follows to deal with the problems shown in th

7、e picture.First,we should具具体体的的措措施施1.And then we have to/must具具体体的的措措施施2.Only in these ways can we solve the problem of具体的具体的问题问题.【审题谋审题谋篇篇】信息全而不漏信息全而不漏【佳句佳句锤炼锤炼】词词句精而高句精而高级级1.图图画中的信息是画中的信息是“百百说说不如一干不如一干”。(一般表达一般表达)The message in the pictures is“Actions speak louder than words.”(主主语语从句和同位从句和同位语语从句从句

8、)_ is the message _What the pictures describevividly/conveythat“Actions speak louder thanwords.”2.我我们的地球正受到的地球正受到严重的破坏。我重的破坏。我们该怎么做怎么做,是是说空空话还是采取切是采取切实可行的措施呢可行的措施呢?(一般表达一般表达)Our earth is suffering severe damage.What should we do,just have empty talk or take practical measures?(不定式作状不定式作状语语+高高级词汇级词汇+

9、定定语语从句从句)Our earth is suffering severe damage.Should we just _or take practical measures _ _ the earth _?pay lip servicetoprotectwhich is suffering severe damage3.为了改善了改善环境境,我我们应该立即采取措施立即采取措施,如停止砍伐如停止砍伐树树木。木。(一般表达一般表达)To improve the environment,we should take immediate action.We should stop cutting

10、down trees.(过过去分去分词词作状作状语语)_,we should take immediate measures,such as stopping cutting down trees,to better the environment.Faced with phenomenon/the problem4.我我们应该把把书和体育用品捐和体育用品捐给需要的儿童需要的儿童,而不是空喊口而不是空喊口号。号。(一般表达一般表达)We should donate books and sports goods to children in need.We shouldnt shout empt

11、y slogans.(it作形式主作形式主语语+定定语语从句从句)Instead of shouting empty slogans,_ _donate books and sports goods to children _.itis more meaningful towho need them/needing them5.我我们应该严格自格自觉遵守交通遵守交通规则,红灯停灯停,而不是抱怨交通而不是抱怨交通拥拥堵。堵。(一般表达一般表达)We should strictly and voluntarily obey traffic rules.We should stop at the r

12、ed light.We shouldnt complain about traffic jams.(虚虚拟语拟语气气+倒装倒装)_ strictly and voluntarily follow traffic rules and _ just complain about traffic jams.It is high time that we shouldunder no circumstancesshould we【连连句成篇句成篇】过过渡巧而自然渡巧而自然Actions Speak Louder than Words People celebrate Earth Day differe

13、ntly.In Picture1,a man is trying to put up a banner on a lonely tree surrounded by stumps,but in vain,while Picture2shows a couple planting trees happily.The message conveyed here is clear:“Actions speak louder than words.”Our earth is suffering severe damage.Should we just pay lip service or take p

14、ractical measures to protect it?The answer is definitely the latter.Immediate action should be taken,like stopping cutting down trees,to better the environment.Actions are important in other fields,too.Instead of shouting empty slogans,it is more meaningful to donate books and sports goods to childr

15、en in need.We should strictly and voluntarily follow traffic rules,stopping at the red light rather than complaining about traffic jams.Only when we match our words with actions can we make a difference.【命题专家如是说命题专家如是说】图图画画类类作文解作文解题题关关键键 图图画画类类作作文文以以图图画画和和文文字字相相结结合合的的方方式式呈呈现现内内容容要要点点,其其难难点点在在于于如如何何将

16、将图图画画语语言言转转化化为为逻逻辑辑语语言言。只只有有读读懂懂图图画画所所蕴蕴含的深刻道理含的深刻道理,才能有的放矢。需注意以下几点才能有的放矢。需注意以下几点:1.仔仔细细观观察察图图画画。图图画画中中的的每每一一个个要要素素对对表表达达图图画画的的寓寓意意都都有提示作用有提示作用,注意注意图图画中每一个要素提供的信息。画中每一个要素提供的信息。2.品品味味图图画画文文字字。图图画画配配有有的的语语言言文文字字言言简简意意赅赅,认认真真思思考考这这些文字所些文字所隐隐含的含的观观点点,使之成使之成为为弄清弄清图图画寓意的画寓意的钥钥匙。匙。3.挖挖掘掘深深刻刻内内涵涵。图画画背背后后隐藏藏的的深深刻刻寓寓意意才才是是图画画要要揭揭示示的真正主的真正主题。挖掘出。挖掘出图画的寓意是写作的关画的寓意是写作的关键。4.适适度度联联想想发发挥挥。图图画画作作文文一一般般要要求求做做适适度度的的联联想想发发挥挥,以以使使上下文更好地上下文更好地衔衔接。但一定要根据接。但一定要根据图图画做到合情合理。画做到合情合理。5.描写虚描写虚实结实结合。合。对图对图画中的内容分清主次画中的内容分清主次,详详略得当。略得当。6.做做好好衔衔接接过过渡渡。在在适适度度发发挥挥的的前前提提下下,注注意意连连词词的的使使用用,达达到到浑浑然一体的效果。然一体的效果。