高考英语黄冈经典一轮（全国通用版）实用课件：写作技法点拨系列 第二部分 七.ppt

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1、七、做好起承转合,美不胜收【技巧点拨】完成了审题的过程,有了具体要点和整体布局后,就要整合信息点,让庞杂的内容变得富有逻辑性和层次感。在句与句内在衔接的基础上,做到段落间的起承转合,使文章有整体性、连贯性。学会正确使用连接词、衔接句,能为写作助一臂之力。.用好连接词在句与句之间、段与段之间恰当地使用一些承上启下的连接性词语是语言连贯性得以实现的最常用手段。连接性词语归纳如下:1.起始关系:tobeginwith,firstofall,asweallknow,asisknown,asisshownin.,accordingto等。Asweallknow,goodlearninghabitscon

2、tributetoefficientstudy.2.时间顺序:atthebeginning,then,later,finally,atlast,intheend,afterwards,sincethen,afterthat,immediately,meanwhile等。Atthebeginning,Icollectedallthethingsscatteredintheroomsandputtheminplace.ThenIwipedthedustoffallthefurniture.Afterthat,Imoppedthefloor.3.条件关系:if,unless,incase(of),a

3、s/solongas,onconditionthat,provided(that)等。Iwouldbeverygratefulifyoucouldmeetmyuncleattheairport.4.转折关系:but,yet,however,while,otherwise,onthecontrary,nevertheless等。However,notuntilthematchwasoverdidwerealizethatwelostit.5.因果关系:because,as,since,for,thanksto,dueto,asaresultof,so,therefore,asaresult/co

4、nsequence等。Therefore,thereisnoreasonforustolookdownuponordinaryjobs.6.并列关系:and,or,aswellas,notonly.butalso.,either.or.,not.but.,neither.nor.等。WewillhaveagoodtimethereandIwillsendyousomephotostakenthere.7.递进关系:besides,whatsmore,moreover,furthermore,whatsworse,stillless,tomakemattersworse,worsestill,m

5、oreimportantly等。Manyofthemcanhardlylookafterthemselves,stilllessmanagetheirownlives.8.列举事实:suchas,forexample/instance,take.forexample,thatistosay,asfollows,inotherwords,ontheonehand.,ontheother(hand).,foronething.foranother.等。Ontheonehand,Icanearnsomemoneybydoingittohelpmyparents;ontheotherhand,Ican

6、gainsomeexperiencefromit,whichwilldogoodtomyfuturelife.9.表示观点:inmyopinion,inmyview,frommypointofview,asfarasIamconcerned,asforme,personally等。AsfarasIamconcerned,theystandforlove,friendshipandunity.10.总结:inshort,inbrief,inconclusion,inaword,tosumup,allinall,onthewhole,ingeneral,generallyspeaking等。All

7、inall,travelingisthebestchoiceforustoenrichourlivesandgetreadyforthenewchallenges.写好连接句1.引出开头Itiswellknowntousthat.(我们都知道)Asfarasmyknowledgeisconcerned,.(据我所知)Recentlytheproblemof.hasbeenbroughtintofocus.=Nowadaysthereisgrowingconcernovertheproblemof.(最近问题引起了关注)2.表达不同观点Peoplesviewson.varyfrompersont

8、operson.Someholdthat.However,othersbelievethat.Peoplemayhavedifferentopinionson.(人们对可能会持有不同见解)3.表示结尾Inshort,itcanbesaidthat.(总之,意思是)Fromwhathasbeenmentionedabove,wecancometotheconclusionthat.(从上面提到的,我们可以得出结论)4.提出建议Itishightimethatweputanendtothetrend.(该是我们停止这一趋势的时候了)Onlyinthiswaycanwe.(只有这样,我们才能)5.预

9、示后果Obviously,ifwedontcontroltheproblem,thechancesarethat.willleadusindanger.6.表示观点AsfarasIamconcerned/Inmyopinion.(就我来说)7.给出原因或顺序Foronething,.foranotherthing,.=Ontheonehand,.ontheotherhand.(一方面另一方面)【高考预测】假定你是李华,你和父母在澳大利亚旅游期间于5月1日至2日入住GoldenBayHotel酒店,但对其提供的服务不满意。请发电子邮件向酒店的管理者进行投诉,希望改进服务。请根据下文语境,选用以下

10、衔接词填空。therefore,first,second,third,however,sothatDearManager,MynameisLiHua.Istayedatyourhotel,GoldenBayHotelduringmyvisittoAustraliafromMay1to2withmyparents._,theserviceinyourhotelleftmuchtobedesired.Imwritingthisemailtoexpressmydissatisfaction.However_,wefoundoursuitcasesbrokenaftertheywerecarriedt

11、oourroombyoneofyourporters._,waterwasleakingoutofthetoiletinthebathroom._,thenoisefromthebardownstairswentonsolateintothenighteachnightthatwecouldntgetagoodrest.FirstSecondThird_,Ihavetosaythattheserviceinyourhotelisofpoorquality.Isincerelyhopeyoucanimproveyourservice_noneoftheabovehappensagain.Yourssincerely,LiHuaThereforesothat