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1、写作技巧点拨系列(六)精研提纲材料,轻松驾驭提纲作文【典例导练典例导练】(2014唐唐山山模模拟拟)作作为为一一名名高高三三学学生生的的你你,明明年年即即将将毕毕业业。现现在在校校报报征征稿稿,请请根根据据以以下下要要点点写写一一篇篇英英语语短短文文,谈谈谈谈你你对对高高三生活的体会和建议。三生活的体会和建议。1.对老师与家长的关爱表示感谢对老师与家长的关爱表示感谢;2.向与自己发生过矛盾的同学表达歉意向与自己发生过矛盾的同学表达歉意;3.努力学习努力学习,实现人生梦想实现人生梦想;4.对学弟、学妹的建议。对学弟、学妹的建议。【写作指导写作指导】.常用句式常用句式(1)as.(2)It won

2、t be long before.(3)without.(4)Firstly.Secondly.Finally.黄金模板黄金模板第一段第一段:简述写这篇文章的用意简述写这篇文章的用意 High school is always considered as the most cherished period of ones life(人人生生值值得得纪纪念念).As a Senior 3 student,it wont be long before I graduate(即即将将毕毕业业).Now,I have much to share with my fellow students.第二段第

3、二段:梳理提纲要点梳理提纲要点,表达谢意、歉意和感悟表达谢意、歉意和感悟Firstly,I would like to show my appreciation of help from those standing by me all the way_.Secondly,its high time to say sorry to classmates _.Above all,.Just as the old saying goes,“No pains,no gains.”_ 第三段第三段:对他人的希望对他人的希望Finally I hope _谢意谢意歉意歉意感悟感悟希望希望【审题谋篇审题谋

4、篇】信息全而不漏信息全而不漏【佳句锤炼佳句锤炼】词句精而高级词句精而高级 1.作为一名高三学生作为一名高三学生,不久就毕业了不久就毕业了,现在我有很多事情与现在我有很多事情与同学们分享。同学们分享。(一般表达一般表达)Im a student in Senior 3 and Ill graduate soon.Now,I have a lot of things and Ill share with my fellow students.(介词短语介词短语+固定句式固定句式+不定式作定语不定式作定语)_ a Senior 3 student,_I graduate.Now,I have muc

5、h _ my fellow students.Asit wont be long beforeto sharewith2.首先首先,我想向那些一直支持我我想向那些一直支持我,给我帮助和关爱的老师、父给我帮助和关爱的老师、父母、朋友表示感谢。如果没有他们的帮助和建议母、朋友表示感谢。如果没有他们的帮助和建议,我的生活我的生活就会与现在不一样。就会与现在不一样。(一般表达一般表达)At the beginning,I would like to show my appreciation of help from those who are standing by me all the way,te

6、achers,parents,including friends.If there were no their help and advice,my life would be different.(过渡语过渡语+分词作定语分词作定语+虚拟语气虚拟语气)_,I would like to show my appreciation of help from _by me all the way,teachers,parents,and _._,my life would be different.Firstlythose standingfriends included Without thei

7、r help andadvice3.其次其次,到了向我伤害或误解过的同学道歉的时间了。交流到了向我伤害或误解过的同学道歉的时间了。交流和微笑充当友谊的桥梁。和微笑充当友谊的桥梁。(一般表达一般表达)Then,its high time that I should say sorry to my classmates.I hurt or misunderstood them.Communication and smiles are used as bridges to friendship.(过渡语过渡语+固定句式固定句式+定语从句定语从句)_,_say sorry to my classmat

8、es _ I hurt or misunderstood.Communication and smiles _bridges to friendship.Secondly its high time towhomact as4.尤其重要的是尤其重要的是,我已经下定决心努力学习我已经下定决心努力学习,因为我相信因为我相信,努努力学习是成功的钥匙力学习是成功的钥匙,正如古代谚语说的正如古代谚语说的“不劳无获不劳无获”。(一般表达一般表达)Importantly,Ive decided to make every effort to study.I believe hard work is the

9、key to success,like the old saying,“No pains,no gains.”(过渡语过渡语+高级词汇高级词汇+原因状语从句原因状语从句)_ to make every effort to study,_ I believe hard work is the key to success._,“No pains,no gains.”Above all,Ive made up mymindforJust as the old saying goes【连句成篇连句成篇】过渡巧而自然过渡巧而自然High school is always considered as t

10、he most cherished period of ones life.As a Senior 3 student,it wont be long before I graduate.Now,I have much to share with my fellow students.Firstly,I would like to show my appreciation of help from those standing by me all the way,teachers,parents and friends included.Without their help and advic

11、e,my life would be different.Secondly,its high time to say sorry to my classmates whom I hurt or misunderstood.Communication and smiles act as bridges to friendship.Above all,Ive made up my mind to make every effort to study,for I believe hard work is the key to success.Just as the old saying goes,“

12、No pains,no gains.”Finally I hope that all the younger fellows can make full use of time,because time and tide wait for no men.【命题专家如是说命题专家如是说】提纲作文解题关键提纲作文解题关键提提纲纲作作文文是是高高考考试试题题中中最最常常见见的的书书面面表表达达命命题题方方式式之之一一,通通常常会会以以中中文文、英英文文、中中文文+英英文文、文文字字+表表格格、文文字字+图图片片等等不不同同的的形形式式给给出出要要点点,并并要要求求考考生生根根据据所所列列要要点点组组

13、织织语语言言,将将所列要点完整、清晰地表达出来。需注意以下几点所列要点完整、清晰地表达出来。需注意以下几点:1.仔仔细细研研读读题题目目。确确定定所所写写文文章章的的主主题题、人人称称、大大致致写写作作内内容及主要采用的时态等。容及主要采用的时态等。2.分分析析整整合合要要点点。对对所所给给要要点点进进行行分分析析及及重重新新整整合合,并并适适当当进进行行细细节节扩扩展展。重重新新整整合合信信息息是是为为了了将将信信息息分分为为若若干干部部分分,划划分分依据是要点间的逻辑关系和相似性等。依据是要点间的逻辑关系和相似性等。3.确确定定文文章章体体裁裁。根根据据题题目目要要求求以以及及要要点点的的

14、特特征征来来进进一一步步确确定定文文章章的的体体裁裁,根根据据要要点点的的逻逻辑辑关关系系来来确确定定文文章章的的整整体体框框架架和和具体段落具体段落,并根据重整的信息来确定每个段落的具体内容。并根据重整的信息来确定每个段落的具体内容。4.斟斟酌酌具具体体表表达达。结结合合要要点点的的关关键键词词来来确确定定所所选选用用的的具具体体词词汇汇及及搭搭配配。结结合合要要点点的的内内容容以以及及所所确确立立的的文文体体本本身身的的特特点点来来选选择择使使用用何何种种句句型型。结结合合文文体体信信息息选选择择合合适适的的句句型型、适适时时地地交叉使用不同的句型也是一种需要培养的能力。交叉使用不同的句型也是一种需要培养的能力。