公共英语三级-PETS3级写作B节—综合写作.pptx

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1、三、综合写作PETS-3 级级B节节写写作作主主要要考考查查的的是是 “看看文文写写作作”。给给出出一一篇篇200 250 字字的的文文章章，先先阅阅读读文文章章，总总结结中中心心 思思想想，然然后后根根据据文文章章中中心心思思想想发发表表 自自己己的的看看法法，写写一一篇篇120词词左左右右的的 作文，作文，类类似于似于“读读后感后感”。话话题题一一般般涉涉及及到到与与我我们们生生活活息息息息 相相关关的的社社会会现现象象和和问问题题，比比如如教教 育育、职职业业道道德德、身身体体健健康康、家家庭庭 关关系系、环环境境保保护护、人人口口增增长长、文文 化交流等。化交流等。题题型介型介绍绍话题

2、话题范范围围写作写作评评分分标标准准（1 7 2 0 分）分）完整性完整性包含所有要点，包含所有要点，评论评论合理；合理；准确性准确性原文理解完全准确；原文理解完全准确；语语法法结结构和构和词汇词汇准确，准确，错误错误极少；极少；连贯连贯性性有效使有效使用用多种多种衔衔接手法，接手法，内内容容连连贯贯流流畅畅，层层次次清清晰；晰；多多样样性性使用了丰富的使用了丰富的语语法法结结构和构和词汇词汇，没，没有有完全完全抄抄写。写。第四档第四档第三档第三档第二档第二档 第一档第一档第五档第五档2015年年9月真月真题题：Read the text below.Write an essay in abo

3、ut 120 words,in which you should summarized key points of thetext and make comments on them.Try to use your own words.Lori Schneider knows a few things about fear.“We were crossing a ridge that dropped off 8,000 feet on both sides,”says the 53-year-old climber of ascending Mount Everest last spring.

4、“The wind was blowing at 60 miles an hour.If there was ever a moment to panic,this was it.”But she didnt.An hour later,she reached the peakthe last step in her personal challenge to scale the highest mountains on all seven continents.Ten years earlier,shed come face-to-face with a different type of

5、fear,when she was unable to feel anything in the right side of her body.After learning she had multiple sclerosis(MS)a serious illness that gradually makes a person weak and unable to move or see,she left her marriage,job,and home:“I ran from my whole life.”It was just before climbing South Americas

6、 Mount Aconcagua in 2000 that she set her sights on the Seven Summits.After training by pulling 50-pound bags of dog food up the ski slopes near her home,she topped Europes Mount Elbrus in 2002,North Americas McKinley in 2006,and Australias Kosciuszko and Antarcticas Vinson Massif in 2008.Shed scale

7、d Africas Kilimanjaro in 1993.That left Asias Everest,the highest of all.And there she stood,on a ridge at 28,000 feet.“When I trained,I told myself to take one step at a time by spelling out word”she says.“So I spelled out Dont let fear in.”It got her to the top.Shes the first person with MS to con

8、quer the Seven Summits.With her condition stable,she plans a return toKilimanjarothis time with 15 others with MS by her side.仔仔细细分分析析题题干干给给出出的的信信 息息和和任任务务要要求求，重重点点阅阅 读读文文章章的的首首末末段段或或段段落落 的首末句。的首末句。切忌切忌“提笔就写提笔就写”！1审 题审 题列出文章基本框架：列出文章基本框架：分几段？每段写什么？分几段？每段写什么？总总共写几句共写几句话话？2列提列提纲纲根根据据列列好好的的提提纲纲，套套用用 经经

9、典典句句型型，句句子子之之间间用用 连连接接词词衔衔接接，同同义义词词之之 间间注意注意变变化。化。写作写作3检查检查句子的句子的时态时态、语态语态、主主谓谓一致、一致、单词单词拼写和拼写和 标标点符号等。点符号等。4检 查检 查答答题题流程流程St e p 1审题审题审题审题干要求：干要求：先先总结总结文章主要文章主要观观点，再点，再发发表自己表自己的的观观点。点。审审文章内容：文章内容：启启发发性故事、性故事、社会社会热热点点现现象等；象等；文章的中心思想是什么？（首末段文章的中心思想是什么？（首末段、段落段落首首末句）末句）什么人干了什么事，什么人干了什么事，带带来什么启来什么启发发？S

10、tep 2 列提列提纲纲120词词控制在控制在1214句句话话之之间间。总结总结文章文章观观点点简简明扼要明扼要总结总结文章的主要文章的主要观观点点总结总结模板：什么人做了什么事模板：什么人做了什么事带带来来了了什么什么启启发发。（34句句话话，40个个词词）表达自己表达自己观观点点层层次清晰，分点次清晰，分点论论述，述，连贯连贯流流畅畅，富富于于变变化化。（使用（使用连连接接词词、固定句式、同、固定句式、同义义替替换换）列提列提纲纲Step 2第一段第一段Lori Schneider虽虽身患身患MS疾病疾病，但是征但是征服服了了7座高座高峰峰。最令我印象深刻的是她最令我印象深刻的是她面面对对

11、困困难难的方的方式式。你会你会问问怎么才能怎么才能战胜战胜恐恐惧惧呢？呢？首先，勇气。首先，勇气。有勇气会有勇气会.没有勇气会没有勇气会.其次，精神力量。其次，精神力量。相信自己，就会相信自己，就会.举举例例说说明。明。最后，最后，乐观乐观。乐观乐观有力量。有力量。乐观乐观有益有益处处。总总而言之，勇气、精神而言之，勇气、精神力力量、量、乐乐观观。只有只有这样这样才才.第第 句句总结总结文章，点明文章，点明文章的中心；文章的中心；第第句提出自己的句提出自己的观观点或点或 话题话题。第二段第二段第第句写句写论论点点1；第第句，分句，分别别从正反两从正反两 方面方面阐阐述分述分论论点点1。第三段第

12、三段第第句写分句写分论论点点2；第第句，改写第句，改写第句；句；第第句，例句，例证证第四段第四段第第句写分句写分论论点点3；第第句句重重复改复改写写第第句。句。第五段第五段第第句句总结总结自自己己的的观观点点；第第句呼句呼应应自自己己的的观观点点。The story that Lori Schneider,a 53-year-old woman who had multiple sclerosis,conquered the Seven Summits inspires me a lot.What impresses me most is the way she overcomes the f

13、ear when she is confronted with difficulties.You may wonder how to overcome the fear?We should face to the troubles with courage.If we have courage,we can realize all our dreams.If we are in panic,the chance of success will slip away.Do not ever underestimate spiritual strength.If you believe in you

14、rself strongly enough,you really can make miracles.Just like Lori Schneider did,tell“Dont let fear in”to yourself repeatedly,and you will not afraid of anything.Keep optimistic regardless of adversities.The power of maintaining optimistic is undeniable.It is beneficial for us to think in a positive

15、way.In a word,we should be a man of courage,belief and optimism.Only then can we overcomeany fear in any given situation.这这篇作文写得如何？怎么改？篇作文写得如何？怎么改？The story that Lori Schneider,a 53-year-old woman who had multiple sclerosis,conquered the Seven Summits inspires me a lot.What impresses me most is the

16、way she overcomes the fear when she is confronted with difficulties.You may wonder how to overcome the fear?First of all,we should face to the troubles with courage.All of dreams can be true if we have the courage to pursue them.If we are in panic,the chance of success will slip away.Secondly,do not

17、 ever underestimate spiritual strength.If you believe in yourself strongly enough,you really can make miracles.Just like Lori Schneider did,tell“Dont let fear in”to yourself repeatedly,and you will not afraid of anything.Finally,keep optimistic regardless of adversities.The power of maintaining opti

18、mistic isundeniable.It is beneficial for us to think in a positive way.In a word,we should be a man of courage,belief and optimism.Only then can we overcome any fear in any given situation.St e p 3写作写作如何如何层层次清晰、行文次清晰、行文连贯连贯？1.分段分段2.连连接接词词、固定句式、固定句式 表文章表文章结结构构顺顺序：序：First,Second,Finally/Firstly,Second

19、ly,Finally/First of all，Secondly,Finally等。等。表并列表并列补补充关系充关系：What is more,Besides,Moreover,Furthermore,In addition 等。等。表表转转折折对对比关系比关系：However,On the contrary,But,Although+从句从句,.In spite of+n/doing,等等 表因果关系：因表因果关系：因为为Because,As.所以所以Thus,Therefore,As a result等。等。表表补补充充说说明明：In other words,that is to say等

20、。等。表表举举例例说说明：明：For example，For instance，such as+n/doing 表表陈陈述事述事实实：In fact,Frankly speaking等。等。表达自己表达自己观观点点：As far as I know/am concerned,In my opinion,Personally,As to me 等。等。表表总结总结：In short,In a word,In conclusion,In summary,All in all,Briefly/In brief 等。等。表表综综上所上所述述:From what has been discussed a

21、bove,From the foregoing等。等。如何富于如何富于变变化？化？句式句式变变化：化：1.主主动动句与被句与被动动句相互句相互转转化化2.简单简单旬、并列句、复合旬、并列句、复合句句并用并用3.插入插入语语例如：例如：The story that Lori Schneider,a 53-year-old woman who had multiple sclerosis,conquered the Seven Summits inspires me a lot.词汇变词汇变化：化：1.同同义义改写改写例如：例如：difficulty-trouble-adversity-probl

22、em.2.词词性性变换变换例如：增加、降低等例如：增加、降低等动动词词的表的表达达,如如increase steadily,decrease sharply等等,但但转换转换 一种方式用名一种方式用名词词的形式的形式表表达达,就就更更显显得有得有变变化性化性了了,如如experience a steady increase,undergo a sharp decrease。Step 4 检查检查注意：注意：不要不要进进行大篇幅的修改，更不要因行大篇幅的修改，更不要因为为修改修改破坏卷面的整破坏卷面的整洁洁。从以下方面从以下方面进进行修改：行修改：语语法：法：时态时态是是否否一致一致，主主谓语谓

23、语是是否一否一致致，名，名词词的的单单复复数数形式，形式，被被动语态动语态等。等。词汇词汇：连连接上下文的接上下文的连连接接词词使用是否正确使用是否正确，单词单词拼拼写是写是否否出出 现现低低级错误级错误等。等。写作写作训练训练2016年年3月真月真题题Read the text below.Write an essay in about 120 words,in which you should summarized key points of the text and makecomments on them.Try to use your own words.Dear Sally,It

24、was amazing to see your dance performance last weekend.I felt so proud of you when your teachers and schoolmates congratulated you upon your completion of performance.While you continue to enjoy the moment,Id like to share with you a small quote from Abraham Lincoln,“This,too,shallpass away.”I want

25、these words to be your guide at every turning point in your life.When youre feeling very proud of yourself at an achievement,knowing no bounds at that moment,remember that“This,too,shall pass away.”When youre at a difficult moment in your life and dont know what to do,find comfort in the same wordsT

26、his,too,shall pass away.Im not saying that the ache of some losses and setbacks will completely go away from your life.In fact,open the memories of painful events will hit you unexpectedly like tons of bricks and take your breath away years after they happen.But,like all humans,you have an almost in

27、finite capacity to adapt to lifes changes and a great ability bounce back from trying times.This understanding should give you a spark of hope when youre in a season of despair;it should also build up your confidence for taking risks in the future.Sally,our lives are made up of several peaks and sev

28、eral valleys.Thats the future of life.Live each moment as it comes.And always remember“This,too,shall pass away.”Love，PapaSallys farther wrote a letter to her.In the letter,her father congratulated her success in the dance performance last week and shared with her a quote from Abraham Lincoln,“This,

29、too,shall pass away.”Its very important to look at the ups and downs in life in a right way.On one hand,no matter how successful you are,try to maintain a low profile.When you are successful,tell you the moment shall pass away soon.Just as Steven Jobs said,“Stay humble and stay foolish.”On the other

30、 hand,whatever difficulties are in front of us,dont be discouraged and find the way to overcome them.When troubles come,the first thing we need to do is to cheer up and give yourself a hint that everything will be fine.In a word,whether in success or in failure,bear in mind that:“This,too,shall pass away.”范范 文文多多读读多背多背多写多写12读读高分范文高分范文3积积累累词汇词汇与短与短语语读读社会社会热热点点问题问题文章文章1 背常用句型和写作模板背常用句型和写作模板2 背背诵诵高分范文高分范文1 套用常用句型和写作模套用常用句型和写作模板板进进行行练习练习四、复习指导