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1、高考英语读后续写语篇练习1题目分析读后续写题目再现范文呈现努力方向2Part 1题目呈现3续写原文One Christmas Eve,my seventeen-year-old son called me from the bakery where he worked part-time.He was on the evening shift with a couple of co-workers,and the store was about to dose.The person from a local charity who was scheduled to pick up the le

2、ftover bread and cakes hadnt shown up.He was worried about what to do with the food,so I suggested he call the manager to ask for advice.The manager told him to throw the leftovers into the garbageapproximately$1,500 worth of fresh baked goods.It seemed completely wrong for all this good food to go

3、to waste,so we talked about where we could take it.A new homeless shelter had just opened in our area,so I called and asked if they could use a delivery of free baked goods.4续写原文An excited staff member said,“Yes,please!”I drove to the bakery and,together with my son and his co-workers,we loaded up t

4、he truck and made our way to the homeless shelter.As we walked toward the entrance,a woman stopped and held open the door for us.Thinking we were staff,she thanked us for what we were doing and said she was really grateful for her new temporary home.She introduced herself and told us her street frie

5、nds call her“Star”.We chatted for a while on the sidewalk with light snow falling around us.She said that moving off the streets into the shelter had saved her life.Star told us she spent her days looking out for those who needed help and trying to do kind things for others whenever she could.Then s

6、he asked for a favor.She showed us a phone number.Shed wanted to tell her friend she was okay so he wouldnt worry,but she couldnt afford the long-distance call.I said I would be happy to pass on her message.She wrote his name on a card.Then she hugged us both,and we wished each other a merry Christm

7、as.5段首句Para 1：On Christmas morning,I called the number on the card.A man answered the phone.Para 2：A few months later,I was driving when I saw Star standing in the middle of the crosswalk.6Part 2题目分析7续写原文分析8本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者和儿子一起将面包店原本要扔掉的新鲜面包和蛋糕送到了收容所，一位名叫Star的女士对我们表示感激。Star表示自己每天都在寻找需要帮助的人，并尽可能为他人提

8、供帮助。Star希望作者可以帮忙给她的朋友打长途电话，告知对方自己一切都好。点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语；点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句；点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语；点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。情节构建的重点9续写思路分析Para 1：On Christmas morning,I called the number on the card.A man answered the phone.由第一段首句内容“在圣诞节的早晨，我拨打了卡片上的号码。一个男人接了电话。”可知，第一段可描写男人接通电话后很激动，

9、并表示感谢。10续写思路分析Para 2：A few months later,I was driving when I saw Star standing in the middle of the crosswalk.由第二段首句内容“几个月后，当我开车时，我看到Star站在人行横道中间。”可知，第二段可描写看到Star为一位老妇人提供帮助，作者很开心。11续写思路分析续写线索拨通电话告知Star的近况男人表示感谢再次见到StarStar在帮助他人作者开心12续写素材可用词汇：行为类颤抖：tremble/shake/shiver记住：remember/keep in mind站：stand/

10、be on ones feet情绪类不安的：upset/uneasy焦虑的：anxious/nervous13续写素材可用句型：【高分句型1】The mans voice trembled with emotion when he heard the news.（由when引导时间状语从句）【高分句型2】As soon as the woman had crossed the road safely,Star continued on her way.（由as soon as引导时间状语从句）14Part 3范文呈现15范文呈现On Christmas morning,I called the

11、 number on the card.A man answered the phone.I told him who I was and that I had a message for him from Star.The mans voice trembled with emotion when he heard the news.Then he thanked me for calling,for he had been extremely upset and anxious about Star.He was relieved to hear she was safe in the s

12、helter.Meeting Star on Christmas Eve was more than a little magical.My son and I will always remember that evening.16范文呈现A few months later,I was driving when I saw Star standing in the middle of the crosswalk.She stood with her arms stretched wide and a big smile on her face.She was standing betwee

13、n the cars and an older woman with a walking stick,making her way very slowly across the road.As soon as the woman had crossed the road safely,Star continued on her way.I smiled as I drove to my meeting,thinking about our neighbourhood“Star”doing her job.17范文译文圣诞节的早晨，我打了卡片上的号码。一个男人接了电话。我告诉他我是谁，我收到了S

14、tar给他的信息。听到这个消息，那人的声音因激动而颤抖。然后他感谢我打电话给他，因为他对Star感到非常沮丧和焦虑。听说她在避难所里很安全，他松了一口气。在平安夜遇见星星不仅仅是一个小小的魔法。我和儿子将永远记得那天晚上。18范文译文几个月后，当我开车时，我看到Star站在人行横道中间。她站着，双臂伸开，脸上挂着灿烂的笑容。她站在车和一位拿着拐杖的老妇人之间，慢慢地穿过马路。这位妇女一安全过马路，Star就继续赶路。我微笑着开车去开会，想着我们邻居的“明星”在做她的工作。19Part 4努力方向20高级结构名词性从句高级结构三连动虚拟语气形容词做状语无灵主语21定语从句状语从句（包含倒装句）强调句副词做状语非谓语（包括独立主格）22Thankyou!