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1、高考英语读后续写语篇练习、家庭亲情篇：全家人一起筹划，让母亲过一个不一样的母亲节1题目分析读后续写题目再现范文呈现努力方向2Part 1题目呈现3续写原文How Do We Celebrate Mothers DayIt is specially in a big family like ours that such an idea takes holdwe decided to have a special celebration of Mothers Day.We thought it a fine idea.It made us all realize how much Mother h

2、ad done for us for years and all the efforts and sacrifice that she had made for our sake.We decided that wed make it a great day,a holiday for all the family,and do everything we could to make Mother happy.It was our plan to make it a day just like Christmas,so we decided to decorate the house with

3、 flowers and ribbons.We got Mother to arrange the decoration,because she always does it at Christmas.Well,after breakfast we had it arranged as a surprise for Mother that we would hire a car and take her for a beautiful drive away into the country,which would be a great enjoyment for her.We got ever

4、ything arranged for the trip,and we got Mother to cut up some sandwiches and make up a sort of lunch in case we got hungry.Mother packed it all up in a basket for us ready to go into the car.4续写原文Well,when the car came to the door,it turned out that there hardly seemed as much room in it as we had s

5、upposed,because we hadnt considered Fathers fishing basket and the rods,and it was apparent that we couldnt all get in.Father that he could just wait at home.But of course we all felt that it would never do it,especially as we knew he would make trouble.The two girls,Anne and Mary,would gladly have

6、stayed and helped Mother get dinner,only it seemed such a pity to,on a lovely day like this,have their new hats home to miss the beautiful day.Will and I would have dropped out,but unfortunately we wouldnt have been any use in getting the dinner.So in the end it was decided that Mother would stay ho

7、me and just have a lovely day round the house,and get the dinner.We all drove away with three cheers for Mother,and Mother stood and watched us from the window for as long as she could see us.Father caught such big fish that he felt sure that Mother couldnt have landed them anyway,if she had been fi

8、shing for them,and Will and I fished too,though we didnt get so many as Father.We all had a splendid time.5段首句Para 1：It was quite late when we got back,and Mother had dinner just nicely ready for us.Para 2：Mother said it was the most wonderful day in her life,with tears shining in her eyes.6Part 2题目

9、分析7续写原文分析8本文以事件的发展过程展开，讲述了在母亲节那天，一家人约好回家给母亲过一个不一样的母亲节，最后决定大家租一辆车一起外出，让母亲去享受一下乡下的生活，结果租的车有点小，经过大家的商议，母亲留下独自在家一天，并给大家准备午饭，我们一起在外面开心的玩了一天。点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语；点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句；点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语；点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。情节构建的重点9续写思路分析Para 1：It was quite late when we got back,and

10、Mother had dinner just nicely ready for us.由第一段首句内容“我们回来的时候已经很晚了，妈妈刚刚为我们准备好了晚餐。”可知，第一段可描写作者回到家中时母亲是如何做的，大家在这个如同圣诞节一样的母亲节是如何做的。10续写思路分析Para 2：Mother said it was the most wonderful day in her life,with tears shining in her eyes.由第二段首句内容“母亲说，这是她一生中最美妙的一天，眼睛里闪烁着泪水。”可知，第二段可以分析母亲为什么认为这是她一生最美妙的一天，从而说明母亲节的意

11、义。11续写思路分析续写线索回家很晚大家一起就餐餐后收拾家务结束后与母亲吻别母亲很感动分析感动原因解释母亲节的意义12续写素材可用词汇：行为类.就坐：sit down/be seated/seat oneself.收拾：clear sth.up/tidy sth.up/put sth.away.关心：care for/show regards to/be in love with情绪类.感谢：be grateful/showing his appreciation/show his gratitude.快乐的：joyful/delightful/pleased/happy13续写素材可用句型：

12、高分句型1.When it was over,all of us help clear the things up and wash the dishes.（运用了when引导时间状语从句）高分句型2.And as far as mothers are concerned,what matters most to mothers on Mothers Day isnt the amount of money spent.（运用了what引导的主语从句和过去分词作定语）高分句型3.Family time is important for most moms,and showing that yo

13、u really care for her is Mothers Day gifts.（运用了动名词短语作主语和that引导的宾语从句）14Part 3范文呈现15范文呈现It was quite late when we got back,and Mother had dinner just nicely ready for us.After everything was ready,and we sat down to the grandest kind of dinner-roast turkey and all sorts of things like on Christmas Day

14、.The dinner lasted a long while,and was great fun.We all felt joyful with our family together.When it was over,all of us help clear the things up and wash the dishes.It was quite late when it was all over,and we all kissed Mother before going to bed.16范文呈现Mother said it was the most wonderful day in

15、 her life,with tears shining in her eyes.Although our mother didnt go together with us and was still busy as usual,our love for her was felt inside her heart.She was so grateful of everything we did for her.And as far as mothers are concerned,what matters most to mothers on Mothers Day isnt the amou

16、nt of money spent.Family time is important for most moms,and showing you really care for her is Mothers Day gifts.So we all felt awfully repaid for all we had done.17范文译文我们回来的时候已经很晚了，妈妈为我们准备了晚饭。一切准备好后，我们坐下来吃了一顿最丰盛的晚餐，烤火鸡和各种各样的东西，就像圣诞节一样。晚宴持续了很长一段时间，非常有趣。和家人在一起，我们都感到很快乐。比赛结束后，我们所有人都帮忙收拾东西和洗碗。一切结束时已经很晚了，我们都在睡觉前亲吻了母亲。18范文译文母亲说这是她一生中最美好的一天，眼里噙着泪水。虽然母亲没有和我们一起去，仍然像往常一样忙碌，但我们对她的爱在她心中油然而生。她非常感激我们为她所做的一切。就母亲而言，母亲节对母亲来说最重要的不是花多少钱。家庭时间对大多数妈妈来说都很重要，表达你对她的真正关心是母亲节的礼物。所以我们都为自己所做的一切感到非常感激。19Part 4努力方向20高级结构名词性从句高级结构三连动虚拟语气形容词做状语无灵主语21定语从句状语从句（包含倒装句）强调句副词做状语非谓语（包括独立主格）22Thankyou!