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1、第二讲浓妆淡抹步步突破第一节词汇鲜活用高级词汇代替基础词汇能使得语言表达文采倍增。如：1(2021新高考全国卷，书面表达)When feeling depressed, I often choose to appreciate the novel part which includes a lot of imaginative stories.(三个黑体词分别比upset, enjoy及wonderful形象、高级)2(2020全国卷，书面表达)He instructed us in nursing techniques.(instruct比show高级)三类写作词汇升级对比A：“单词单词”型

2、1艰难的difficultchallenging2选择choicealternative3后果resultconsequence 4丰富的richabundant5幸运的luckyfortunate6提高develop/improvepromote7感谢thankappreciate8决定decidedetermine9勤奋的hardworkingdiligent10最终finallyeventually 11重要的importantvital；significant12吸引人的attractiveappealing；inviting；fascinatingB：“单词短语”型1喜欢likebe

3、 keen on；be fond of；be crazy about2拜访visitpay a visit to；call on sb.3想要wantbe anxious to；be eager to；long to 4表扬praisespeak highly of5支持supportbe in favor of6面对facebe faced with 7容忍bearput up with8理解understandmake sense of；figure out9使用useemploy；make use of；take advantage of10道歉apologizemake an apol

4、ogy 11从不neverin no case；by no means；under no circumstances12意识到realizebe aware of；be conscious of13记忆rememberbear/keep in mind that14重要的important(be) of great importance15只要ifon condition that；as long asC：“短语短语”型1擅长be good athave a good knowledge/command of；be experienced in2尽力做try ones bestspare no

5、 effort；make every/an effort3参加join inparticipate in 4忙于做be busy(in)doingbe rushed off ones feet；be occupied in/with；be buried in；be engaged in5因为because ofdue/owing to；as a consequence of6例如for examplefor instance；take .as an example7实际上in factas a matter of fact；in truth；in reality8成功做某事succeed in

6、 doing sth.make it 9在看来in ones opinionas far as sb.be concerned；from ones own perspective10我想/认为I think/believeI am firmly convinced that .对点训练用高级词汇替换划线词1Please remember (keep/bear in mind) that we are part of the big family.2In my opinion (As far as Im concerned)，riding bicycles is a good solution

7、to air pollution.3She was good at physics although (despite the fact that) she found it boring.4During (In the course of) the mountainclimbing，please help each other and pay special attention to your safety.第二节句式精选除高级的语法结构外，高级句式的运用在写作中同样不可或缺。1The reason why .is that .原因是(2021郑州模拟，书面表达)In the first p

8、lace，the reason why I didnt answer your letter in time a week ago was that I had to make full preparations for my final exam.首先，一星期前我没有立刻给你回信的原因是我必须为期末考试做好准备。2Word came that .消息传来说(2021陕西全真模拟)Word came that you are coming to our school as a teacher and we are looking forward to your coming.消息传来说你要来我

9、校当老师，我们都盼望着您的到来。3If I .，I would .如果我是我会(2021南昌模拟)If I were a dustman，I would make our city cleaner with no rubbish lying on the street.如果我是一位清洁工，我会使我们的城市更加整洁，大街上没有垃圾。4Id appreciate it if .如果我将感激不尽(2019全国卷，书面表达)Id appreciate it if you could reply to my letter at your earliest convenience.如果在你方便时给我回信我

10、将感激不尽。5When it comes to .当谈到When it comes to the season I like best，spring will always occur to me in no time.当谈到我最喜欢的季节，我会立刻想到春天。6Its my great privilege to do sth.做某事是我莫大荣幸Its my great privilege to be here，sharing this moment with our friends from the Great Britain.在这儿与来自英国的朋友共度此刻是我的莫大荣幸。7It is a v

11、irtue and tradition for sb.to do sth.做某事是某人的优良传统和美德 (2021河南六市联考)It is a virtue and tradition for us Chinese people to help those in need.帮助需要帮助的人是我们中华民族的优良传统和美德。8It is the first time for sb.to do sth.某人第一次做某事(2021安徽第一次检测，书面表达)Since it is the first time for us to go to Australia，wed like to know the

12、details about the accommodations so that we can make good preparations in advance.因为这是我们第一次去澳大利亚，我们想了解住宿的详细情况以便我们能提前做好准备。9It is thought/considered/believed that . 认为/建议/相信(2021石家庄模拟，书面表达)It is suggested that any foreign student who is enthusiastic about China can take part in the activity.建议任何一位热衷于中

13、国的外国学生都可以参加这项活动。10cant/can never .too/too much/enough/over无论怎样都不过分The development of society has made it necessary for us to have a good knowledge of English，so we cant overemphasize the importance of learning English.社会的发展使得精通英语对我们来说变得很必要，所以我们怎么强调学习英语的重要性都不为过。11As the old saying goes .常言道，(2021济南模拟

14、)As the old saying goes，“Practice makes perfect”常言道：熟能生巧。12祈使句and陈述句 (2021重庆二调，书面表达)Make good preparations for your journey，and you will enjoy yourself.对旅行做好充分准备，你会玩得开心的。13Why not do sth.？为什么不做某事？Last Sunday，when my parents went out shopping，I suddenly got an idea: why not give the rooms a thorough

15、cleaning?上周日，当我的父母外出购物时，我突然有了一个想法：为什么不把房间彻底打扫一下？ 14some .and others .一部分另外一部分Everyone is busy in classroom.Some are reading，and others are writing.每个人都很忙，有些在读书，有些在写作。15Soadj.be主语that句子如此以致于So precious is time that we cant afford to waste it.时间是如此珍贵，我们经不起浪费它。对点训练翻译下列句子1许多人喜欢旅游是因为他们可以感受大自然的美景，同时也可以呼吸新

16、鲜的空气。The reason why most people like traveling is that they can feel the beauty of nature and breathe the fresh air at the same time.2当谈到提高汉语时，我的建议是每天尽可能地多听多说，正如俗话所说，熟能生巧。When it comes to improving Chinese，my advice is that you should listen every day and practice speaking it whenever possible.Just

17、as the old saying goes，“practice makes perfect”3一般认为，阅读增加我们的知识、扩大我们的心胸。It is believed (that) reading increases our knowledge and broadens our mind.第三节段落整合段落是一个相对独立的单元，同时也是构成一篇文章的基本单元，但它并不是几个句子的简单堆砌，而是通过连续的句子表达一个中心意思。合理地组织段落会使文章大放异彩。一、组段应遵循的原则1统一性原则段落的统一性是段落写作的最基本要求。一个段落只能有一个主题，其他所有的事实、例子、证据都应服务于同一个主

18、题。统一性有助于笔者清楚有效地表达自己的观点。通过有机地将主题密切相关的扩展句编排在一起，可使文章主题更明确，中心更突出。例如：(2021新高考八省联考)He sized up the situation and called for his daughter，who spoke English.He conveyed through her that he had a jack but that is was too small for the Jeep, so we would need something to support it.Then he got a saw (锯子) from

19、 the truck and cut a section out of a big log on the side of the road.We rolled it over and put his jack on top，and we were in business.本段文字都是围绕段落首句“He sized up the situation and called for his daughter，who spoke English.”展开的。首句交代了段落主旨，其余文字根据主旨进行了具体的阐述。2连贯性原则指句与句、段与段过渡自然(和谐、流畅、层次分明、符合逻辑)。保持段落的连贯性就应恰

20、如其分地运用过渡语，使内容承前启后。如：first，at first，second，and then，finally，whats more，but，however，such as，thus，as a result，in fact，therefore，in a word，in short等。例如：(2020全国卷，书面表达)My uncle is a surgeon in the local hospital.He often buries himself in his work and is busy with diagnoses and operations，which often take

21、 him so much time and energy that it is impossible for him to look after his family.Most movingly，facing fierce COVID19，he volunteered to go to Wuhan in harms way without hesitation.Wearing thick protective suits，he headed for the wards，leaving a thin but tall figure behind.本段文字对自己的叔叔做了介绍，首句点明其身份，中间

22、说明叔叔日常的敬业表现，段尾用具体事例说明叔叔值得尊敬。该段文字主旨突出、层次分明、字字珠玑。状语从句、定语从句、非谓语动词的使用又极大地丰富了句式的多样性。3关注段落的简洁性一个段落的长度没有具体的限制，主要取决于段落主题表达的需求。有的只需简短的几句，有的则需要更多的细节支持。但无论哪种情况，一个段落的写作必须遵循简洁的原则，避免赘言和与主题无关的语言成分。如：If you are like me，and you really believe that childrens living is important，and that all school experiences should

23、be happy，then go and open your childrens textbook，have a look at it.该段只用了34个单词就巧妙表达了一个完整的思想：如果你和我一样，就去看看孩子的课本。二、常见的段落排列 衔接与过渡性词语的使用是语言连贯性得以实现的最常用手段。在句与句之间、段与段之间恰当地使用一些承上启下的连接(过渡)性词语是非常必要的。高中阶段应该掌握的连接(过渡)性词语归纳如下：1表示起始关系的过渡性词语above all， to begin/start with， today，now，nowadays，at present，currently，rece

24、ntly，generally speaking，according to，with the development of .等。 (2020全国卷，书面表达)To begin with，although he is old，he stepped forward to Wuhan.首先，虽然他已经老了，但还是前往了武汉。2表示时间顺序的过渡性词语first，first of all，to begin with，then，later，in the end，finally，at last，after that，afterwards，since then，immediately，suddenly，me

25、anwhile等。 (2020全国卷，书面表达)Meanwhile，I competed with my friends to see who picked more.期间，我和朋友比赛看谁摘的多。3表示并列关系的过渡性词语and，or，also，as well as，neither .nor .，not only .but also .，either .or .，not .but .等。 (2019浙江卷，概要写作)We should not pay more attention to kids outcome but recognize their efforts to achieve g

26、oals.我们不应该过多关注孩子们的结果而应赏识他们为实现目标做出的努力。4表示转折关系的过渡性词语but，yet，however，while，otherwise，on the contrary，though，although，even if/though，despite，in spite of，regardless of等。(2020全国卷，书面表达)Although it was hot，everyone had a great time there.尽管天非常热，但每个人都非常开心。5表示因果关系的过渡性词语because，as，since，for，thanks to，due to，as

27、 a result of，so，therefore，as a result/consequence等。 (2021全国卷甲，书面表达)Because this activity will be presented on the English website, I sincerely want you to offer me some advice.因为这个活动将会发布在网络上，因此我诚挚地想要得到你的建议。(2019天津卷，书面表达)It is a fact that rap music not only allows us to have a relax，but also enables

28、us to learn more about culture.Therefore，I wonder if you could tell us something about rap to enrich our knowledge.事实上，说唱音乐不仅可以让我们得到放松，而且还能使得我们学习更多的文化。因此，我想您是否能够告诉我们一些关于说唱音乐的东西来丰富我们的知识呢。6表示递进关系的过渡性词语whats more，furthermore，moreover，besides，whats worse，still less，to make matters worse，worse still，on t

29、he one hand .on the other hand .，for one thing .for another (thing) .等。(2019全国卷，书面表达)Whats more，Im outgoing and warmhearted.另外，我性格外向且热心肠。7表示列举事实的过渡性词语such as，for example/instance，take .for example，that is to say，as follows，in other words等。 (2018全国卷，书面表达)A suitable gift such as a bunch of flowers is

30、necessary for your visit.你做客时，合适的礼物，比如一束花，是有必要的。8表示观点的过渡性词语in my opinion，in my view，from my point of view，as far as Im concerned，as for me，personally等。(2020全国卷，书面表达)In my opinion，the activity boosted our confidence.在我看来，这个活动增加了我们的信心。9表示总结的过渡性词语in short，in brief，in conclusion，in a/one word，to sum up，

31、all in all，on the whole，in general等。 (2021全国卷乙，书面表达)In conclusion , we should have a good understanding of its advantages and disadvantages and find a proper way to make our study more efficient.总之，我们应该完全了解它的利弊并且找到恰当的方式使得我们的学习更高效。对点训练阅读下面短文，选择适当的过渡性词语填空Recently，it has been a great public concern tha

32、t the students lack selfprotection awareness.There is a lack of social experience among students and therefore learning how to protect ourselves is of great significance to us all.1.For one thing，security comes first.Without security，we can achieve nothing and cannot live up to parents expectations；

33、2.for another thing，protecting ourselves contributes to the healthy development of the students，which is associated with the happiness of every family.3.Meanwhile，it also helps to build a more harmonious society.4Personally，in order to protect us students，5.above all，we should strengthen our securit

34、y awareness.6.Besides，when accidents occur，we should calm down and turn to teachers or parents for help.The government also plays a leading role in protecting students.7.In a word，only by the combined efforts of every side involved can we live and study in harmony.第四节审题谋篇审题谋篇的好坏一般有三个标准，即思想内容、层次安排和文字

35、运用。一般认为：好的思想内容是指令人感到真实可信、生动有趣、有深度的内容；好的层次安排指的是写作内容统一，组织合乎逻辑，语意前后连贯，句与句相互衔接；好的文字运用则指所用语言正确、文字优美。审题谋篇一般有以下几个步骤：1动笔之前，用较短的时间确定体裁主题，理清思路，梳理要点。2筛选段落可能用到的重要素材，区分主次，详略得当。3合理安排文章的结构。一篇文章通常可分为三部分，即开头、正文和结尾。审题谋篇思维导图典例展示1(2021全国卷甲)假定你是李华。你校计划举办介绍中国传统文化的主题班会，并在英文网站展示。请你写一封邮件给外国朋友Chris，向他了解哪些中国传统文化更吸引外国友人。内容包括：1

36、阐明写信事由；2征求建议；3表示感谢。注意：1词数100左右；2可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。审题谋篇 【参考范文】Dear Chris，A class meeting under the theme of traditional Chinese culture will be held in our school and presented on an English website. Im writing to consult you about some information on this topic.As is known to all, China has abundant a

37、nd unique culture with along history, like ancient costumes, tea culture, Chinese opera, and traditional handcraft. From your perspective, which appeals to foreign friends the most? Do you have any suggestions or can you just put forward another alternative if possible.Thank you ahead for your sugge

38、stions and your early reply will be highly appreciated.Yours，Li Hua典例展示2(2020新高考全国卷)假定你是李华，上周日你校举办了5公里越野赛跑活动。请你为校英文报写一篇报道。内容包括：1参加人员；2跑步路线：从校门口到南山脚下；3活动反响。注意：写作词数应为80左右。审题谋篇A CrossCountry Running Race 【参考范文】A CrossCountry Running RaceIn order to enrich our campus life, our school organized a 5km cro

39、sscountry running race last Sunday. Ninety students from twenty classes participated in the race, among whom thirty were girls. Participants set out at 9 am from the gate of the school, through the Renmin Park, and finally arrived at the foot of Nanshan Mountain. After the race, we felt that not onl

40、y did the event improve our physical and psychological quality, but it also helped us build a positive attitude towards life. We do hope that the school will carry out more similar activities in the future.对点训练.(2019全国卷，书面表达)假定你是李华，暑期在伦敦学习，得知当地美术馆要举办中国画展览。请写一封信申请做志愿者。内容包括：1写信目的；2个人优势；3能做的事情。注意：1词数10

41、0左右；2可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3结束语已为你写好，不计入总词数。审题谋篇 Yours，Li Hua【参考范文】Dear Sir/Madam，My name is Li Hua.Im a Chinese student who is taking a summer course in London now.Im glad to learn that your gallery will hold a Chinese painting exhibition.I would like to do some voluntary work for the exhibition.So I am

42、writing this letter asking to be a volunteer.I am good at English and familiar with Chinese paintings.I would like to volunteer to help visitors, introduce Chinese cultural exchanges.My aim is to let China go to the world and let the world understand China.I would appreciate it if you could agree to

43、 my request.Yours，Li Hua.(2020全国卷，书面表达)假定你是李华，你和同学根据英语课文改编了一个短剧。给外教Miss Evans写封邮件，请她帮忙指导。内容包括：1剧情简介；2指导内容；3商定时间地点。注意：1词数100左右；2结束语已为你写好，不计入总词数。审题谋篇 Yours sincerely，Li Hua【参考范文】Dear Miss Evans，How are things going with you? Im writing to you to ask for your constructive advice.These days，I，together with my classmates，have adapted a short play based on the English text.But we find it difficult to make the plot adapted complete and attractive enough.The heroine borrowed a di