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1、个人生活方式. 应用文写作道歉信假如你是新华中学的学生李华，你的美国朋友Tom一周前给你发电子邮件，询问你暑假里的打算，但你因准备期末考试未能及时回复。请根据以下要点给他回封邮件：1. 未及时回信的原因； 2. 你假期的打算(如做兼职、旅行、做志愿者等)注意：1. 词数80左右；2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Dear Tom， Yours，Li Hua【范文】Dear Tom，How is everything going on with you? Im writing this letter to express my apology to you for not writing yo

2、u back in time. In the first place, Ill be so happy if you could accept my apology. Its of great importance for me to make full preparations for the final exam last week. Therefore, I couldnt spare enough time to write you back in time. Whats more, I am willing to tell you that I am to do some partt

3、ime jobs in the summer holiday. No one can deny the fact that we can have our vision broadened in the process. Last but not least, it must be pointed out that I would love to go travelling during this holiday.I am looking forward to hearing from you. And Ill appreciate it very much if you could give

4、 me an early reply.Yours，Li Hua点评：1. 词汇美：文章运用了很多高级词汇，如be going on with, express ones apology to, in time, in the first place, be of great importance, make full preparations for, whats more，be to do, deny, broaden, last but not least, point out等。2. 句式美：句It作形式主语，真正的主语为后面的不定式短语to make full preparations

5、 for the final exam last week。句the fact后接that引导的同位语从句，that在从句中不作成分，但不可省略。句it是形式主语，真正的主语是that引导的主语从句，that在从句中不作成分。句if引导条件状语从句，it为指示代词，指代if从句的内容。. 读后续写阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。An 80yearold man was sitting on the sofa in his house along with his 45yearold highly educated son. Suddenly a cro

6、w perched (栖息) on their window.The father asked his son, “What is this？” The son replied, “It is a crow.” After a few minutes, the father asked his son for the second time, “What is this？” The son said, “Father, I have just now told you that its a crow！” After a little while, the old father again as

7、ked his son for the third time, “What is this？”At this time some expression of irritation (恼怒) was felt in the sons tone when he said to his father with a rebuff (生硬回绝), “Its a crow, a crow.” A little while later, the father again asked his son the fourth time, “What is this？”悬念1This time, the son s

8、houted at his father, “Why do you keep asking me the same question again and again, although I have told you so many times IT IS A CROW？ Are you not able to understand this？”A little while later the father went to his room and came back with an old tattered (发皱的) diary, which he had maintained since

9、 his son was born.On opening a page, he asked his son to read that page.When the son read it, the following words were written in the diary：悬念2 Today my little son aged three was sitting with me on the sofa when a crow was sitting on the window. My son asked me 23 times what it was, and I replied to

10、 him all 23 times that it was a crow. I hugged him lovingly each time he asked me the same question. I did not feel irritated at all but I rather felt affection for my innocent son.注意：续写词数应为150左右。After reading the diary, Feeling ashamed, the son got down on his knees before his father. 一、理清文章大意关键：Wh

11、o: the son and his fatherWhere: in the houseWhat: the diaryHow: the son was ashamed大意：父亲问了儿子四次“这是什么”，儿子回答四次“乌鸦”后开始大发雷霆。父亲拿出以前记录不厌其烦回答儿子23遍同样问题的日记让儿子看。二、挖掘文中悬念点悬念1思考：文章为什么用了四次“What is this？”？悬念2思考：儿子读完日记后有什么感受？三、分析段落开头语段首句1思考：读完日记后儿子会哭吗？ 儿子会想起自己的童年旧事吗？儿子想自己要是老的时候，自己的儿子会怎么看自己？段首句2思考：儿子为什么羞愧地跪下？他会对父亲说些

12、什么？儿子会联想到儿时父亲为自己所做的一切而向父亲承诺些什么吗？通过以上思路，预设续写情节如下：Paragraph 1：感动流泪回想起日记中记录的内容反思：自己老的时候儿子会怎样对待自己Paragraph 2：感到惭愧，跪下道歉求得宽恕许诺【范文】After reading the diary, the son was filled with tears and began to reflect on the days when he sat together with his father. His father patiently answered the same question al

13、l 23 times without feeling any irritation while his father asked him the same question just four times! The son thought to himself: If I attain old age, how will my son look at me? Will he think of me as a burden? Will he shout at me because of my poor sight, poor hearing or poor understanding?Feeli

14、ng ashamed, the son got down on his knees before his father. He made an apology to his father, begging his father to forgive him for his bad behaviour. He said this aloud, “I promise to see you happy forever, Dad. It is you who have cared for me since I was a little child, showering your selfless af

15、fection on me. You worked hard to make money so that I could afford to go to university. I will serve you in the best way no matter how you behave.”点评：1. 使用恰当的修饰词让描写更加生动。patiently一词与上文作者对父亲的不耐烦形成了鲜明对比。without feeling irritation巧妙地呼应了上文的At this time some expression of irritation was felt。selfless一词用得精妙，概括了父亲的伟大，折射了作者惭愧的原因。2. 词汇与语法结构丰富、准确。all 23 times与上文照应，与父亲问了四次同样的问题作者就不耐烦形成强烈反差，此处是全文的点睛之笔。It is you who . 此处强调句用得恰如其分，尽显儿子的惭愧之情，也显露儿子回报父爱的决心。If I attain old age(条件状语从句)，showering your selfless affection . (非谓语动词短语)，so that I could afford . (目的状语从句)等高级句式和结构的应用为文章的增分点。