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1、易错点27 读后续写（5大陷阱易错点）-备战2024年高考英语考试易错题易错点27 读后续写目 录01 易错陷阱（5大陷阱）02 举一反三【易错点提醒一】审题不清、文本内容易混易错点【易错点提醒二】段首句推理衔接易混易错点【易错点提醒三】情节发展易混易错点【易错点提醒四】词句易混易错点【易错点提醒五】卷面易混易错点03 易错题通关易错陷阱1：审题不清、文本内容易混易错点。【分析】只有把材料读透，才能明确故事主线，把握续写方向，为续写奠定基础。很多考生因为词汇匮乏、时间不够等种种原因没有读透文本信息，导致续写严重偏离所给素材、跑题等错误。为了表现角色的成长或事件的发展，文中会出现影响角色成长和事

2、件发展的关键线索，而这些线索之间的逻辑关系，构成事件发生的经过，就是文章的主线。易错陷阱2：段首句推理衔接易混易错点。【分析】 续写部分的内容，无论是时间的先后还是情节的发展，都以第一段和第二段首句这两句话为内在联系的连接点。它们直接决定了情节的发展方向。考生容易忽略这两句的作用，或是第二段首句与第一段结尾之间的联系。应当根据第二段首句逆推第一段尾句，即过渡句。易错陷阱3：情节发展和结局易混易错点。【分析】续写必须与原文内容故事衔接自然、连贯。语言风格与所给材料应当保持一致。要紧扣原文主题、预设核心冲突、推动故事发展。所给材料中可能会有很多伏笔，并且可能较为零星的分布在所给材料中，考生不必分别

3、进行回应，只选取有助于推动情节发展或凸显故事主线的伏笔来设置情节。 一般来说，文章的第一段会介绍故事发生的背景、人物的性格特点等，为可能出现的矛盾冲突做好铺垫，考生应当善于发现和利用这些伏笔。 结局设置巧妙，可以对续写起到画龙点睛的作用。一般选择“首尾呼应”或“情感升华”来传递作者的思想感情和感悟，凸显作者的变化。具体读后续写升华句和写作要领详见本作者编撰的专辑2023年新高考英语满分作文读后续写高分突破+万能金句。易错陷阱4：词句易混易错点。【分析】 为丰富故事的情节，充实续写的内容和升级语言，考生会用到多样化的词汇或句型。而匮乏的词汇量和薄弱的基础知识则会造成高级句型和词汇的错用。 易错陷

4、阱5：卷面易混易错点。【分析】 整洁优美的卷面会成为加分的一个因素。有点考生不注意规范书写，字母大小随意，字迹潦草不清，乱涂乱画，书写马虎等都会给阅卷者留下“脏、乱、差”等印象。读后续写不同于第一部分写作，其分值更高，故优美的卷面留下的印象分占比更大。 【易错点提醒一】 词句（笼统词与高级词）易混易错点【例1】 一天晚上，一个小偷走进了她家。 【变式1】当我们要离开时，他哭起来。【变式2】他笑得合不拢嘴。 【变式3】她不敢一个人外出。【易错点提醒二】 句式结构之非谓语动词易混易错点【例2】 Seeing from the top of the mountain, the village loo

5、ks more beautiful.【正确】【变式1】Having experienced so many failures one after another, she finally picked herself up.【易错】【变式2】Devoted to his research work, the professor cared little about any other things.【易错】【变式3】She was terrified at the thought of being alone.【易错】【易错点提醒三】 句式结构之独立主格易混易错点【例3】She laughed

6、, her eyes shining.【易错】【变式1】She froze, her mouth hanging open.【易错】【变式2】Jessica sighing with relief, the pair hugged each other and shed tears of excitement.【易错】【变式3】she sat there still, tears rolling down her cheeks. 【易错】【易错点提醒四】 句式结构之形容词与副词易混易错点【例4】Mick froze with terror, too scared to move an inch

7、.【易错】【变式1】Her heart leaped with joy.【易错】【变式2】The day was cold but clear.【易错】【变式3】Jacks face flushed/burned with embarrassment.【易错】【易错点提醒五】 句式结构之从句和特殊句式易混易错点【例5】When faced with the great challenge, he had a frown on his face.【易错】【变式1】Not only did we see it but also we touched it.【易错】【变式2】Honesty is t

8、he most important quality that I want him to possess.【易错】【变式3】Not a word did he say that day.【易错】1 （2023浙江台州统考一模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。Green ThumbAll I did was show my little sister how to grow plants. Dig a hole. Put in a seed. Cover it with dirt. Water it. Wait. “See, Laynie,” I exp

9、lained, “a whole plant will grow from this tiny seed. All we have to do is water it.”Laynie had her own watering can so she could “help” me in the garden. One day, after everything was watered, she ran to the fence and started sprinkling water on another spot. I walked over and saw a fresh patch of

10、dirt near the fence.“Did you plant something there?” I asked.“Yes,” she said. “Im growing a pencil. My purple pencil got too small, so I planted it.”“What? But, Laynie”I should have explained things right then, but I just muttered, “UhI never grew one before.”Later I got what seemed like a great ide

11、a. I dug up Laynies pencil and “planted” a brand-new purple pencil. Laynie was really excited when she saw it. “My pencil grew!” she shouted.A few days later, Laynie was watering on the same spot. Two days later, new crayons sticking their pointy little heads out, thanks to me. Laynie jumped up and

12、down and yelled, “They look like flowers!” She “picked” them and ran into the house.Next, Laynie grew an adult bear doll from a tiny one, a soup spoon from a teaspoon, and a hand mirror from a piece of glass. When she claimed that she had grown these things, I just kept my mouth shut! Actually, it w

13、as fun trying to think of what should grow from Laynies seeds. And it was cool to see her get excited.One day I saw her patting down some dirt near the fence again, so I knew shed just planted something. My heart dropped to my feet when she asked, “How long does it take to grow a goldfish, Brad?” I

14、couldnt speak.“Not long, I bet!” said Laynie. She knelt down to whisper “Grow, Molly. Grow!” before she skipped back to the house.注意：1续写词数应为150左右；2请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。I sat down with my back to the fence and thought for a long time._Later I found Laynie sitting by the spot where Molly was buried._2 （2

15、024浙江杭州统考一模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。My dad and I had been looking forward to the Stale cross-country race of my senior year of high school, which would be the climax (顶点) of my existence.I was the fastest runner on my team, and I was supposed to make it into the top fifteen. We had been

16、 working towards this race for three years. It was everything to me, and it was everything to my dad. He was a runner and was wild with joy by my success in running. He made it to every race, even flying home early from business trips to see me run. I always listened for his voice, which rang above

17、the crowd-telling me to relax my arms, calling out my time. He pushed me. He cheered for me. He believed in me. We spent countless hours on the sandy canals of Arizona. Breathing in the dust of the desert, the blossoms of the orange trees, and the terrible smell of the dairy farm, we made our way ac

18、ross the city. We pounded miles and miles into our running shoes, marking with every step the path to greatness. It was a journey that was just ours. A dream passed on from one generation to the next. Then the big day came. It was hotter than normal - too hot. My throat felt like a field of cotton,

19、cracked with the summer heat, as I waited for the gun to fire. I gazed out at the crowd; dozens of familiar faces from church and school flickered across my view. They had come for me. They were counting on me. I saw my dad set his watch, worry and excitement etched across his face. With the sound o

20、f a gunshot, the race began. For the first two and half miles, I felt great. I had never before been so ready for something. The weeks leading up to the race were filled with hard practices and a strict diet. The scorching sun beat upon my back, blinding me with its brilliance. Nothing was going to

21、stop me, though. 注意：1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。However, without warning, my strength was running out._I whispered, “Im so sorry I disappointed you, Dad.”_3 （2023广西玉林阶段练习）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。We sat on the bus waiting while other passengers piled on. A blond-haired girl,

22、about nineteen years old, took the seat in front of us. The bus driver followed behind her. He demanded her fare.“You pay $40 or get off the bus!” the driver said.“I paid already. Yesterday, online,” the girl insisted.“No, no record of it!” the bus driver pointed to the paper in his hand and waved i

23、t in her face. “See. No pay! You pay, or you must get off.” He angrily pointed to the exit door.“But I dont have money. And I paid already. Please.”The bus driver picked up his mobile phone and made a call to find out if there had been an error with the paperwork. After failing to get through, he wa

24、s getting angrier with the girl. So he cut the call and didnt try.“No, you have not paid. You must pay.”“But please, I dont have any money on me. I must get to LA today. Please.”Tears streamed down her face.I had boarded a bus headed to Los Angeles. I was very excited about experiencing LAMy dream o

25、f visiting Disney Land was about to come true. But while I sat there comfortably in my seat, thinking about my next adventure, this young girl was in tears, with a man standing over her, demanding money.I wasnt sure what I should do. Was she telling the truth? It wouldnt be the first time someone ha

26、d extracted money by telling a sad story that turned out untrue. Did she really not have any money? Maybe the bus driver would show some sympathy and allow her to sort the payment out later?But no, the bus driver continued to demand she pay $40 or get off the bus. The young girl insisted that she di

27、dnt have enough money for the fare and had no one she could contact for help. It seemed the driver would throw her off the bus.注意：1. 续写词数应为150个左右;2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Suddenly, a messy grey-haired woman with a weathered face stood up. _At the next rest stop, I noticed that woman had no money for foo

28、d. _4 （2023湖南湖南师大附中校联考一模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。To act with integrity was a habit with Susan who always follows the Golden Rule: “Do not do to others what you do not want others to do to you.” But when she thought over her past conduct, a blush of shame crept to her cheeks, as many lit

29、tle acts of selfishness and unkindness came back to her memory. She resolved that for the future, both in great things and small. she would remember and follow the Golden Rule. It was not long after this that an opportunity occurred, which tried Susans principles. One Saturday evening when she went,

30、 as usual, to Mr. Thompsons inn, to receive the money of her mothers washing for him, which amounted to five dollars, she found Mr. Thompson apparently in a terrible rage with some horse dealers with whom he had been bargaining. He held in his hand an open pocketbook (钱袋子) , full of bills and scarce

31、ly noticing Susan as she made her request, except to swear at her for troubling him when he was busy, he handed her a banknote. Glad to escape so easily, Susan hurried out of the gate. Pausing to put the money safely in her purse, she discovered that he had given her two bills instead of one. She lo

32、oked around; nobody was near and her first impulse was joy at the unexpected prize. “It is all mine,” said she to herself. “I will buy my mother a new coat with it, and she can give her old one to my sister Mary, and then Mary can go to the Sunday school with me next winter. I wonder if I can buy a

33、pair of shoes for my brother Tom, too.”At that moment she remembered that he must have given it to her by mistake. But again the voice of the tempter whispered, “He gave it, and how do you know that he did not intend to make you a present of it? Keep it! He will never know it, for he had too many su

34、ch bills in that great pocketbook.”注意：1. 续写词数应为150左右;2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。This conflict was going on in her mind between good and evil. _“Sir, you paid me two bills instead of one,” she handed him the extra note. _5 （2023安徽高三校考阶段练习）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。During the summer vacation, a m

35、other planned an exciting trip with her two children. They were set to explore a famous tourist spot, famous for its breath-taking landscapes and attractions. Little did they know that their adventure would take an unexpected turn.As they arrived at the destination, they were greeted by a sea of people. The place was overflowing with tourists from all over the globe. Excitement filled the air as families began their sightseeing adventures, creating a lively and vibrant atmosphere.Eager to begin their own adventure, the mother, holding the hands of her two c