2020年新高考Ⅱ卷+Ⅰ卷 07 读后续写--高考真题全方位解析+二次开发 (教师版).pdf

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1、 1/5 读后续写-高考真题全方位解析+二次开发(教师版)2020 年新高考卷 图例：人物(绿)时间、地点(黄)情节(红)情感(蓝)The Meredith family lived in a small community.As the economy was in decline,some people 衰退，下降衰退，下降 in the town had lost their jobs.Many of their families were struggling to make ends meet.People 失去工作失去工作 使收支平衡使收支平衡 were trying to hel

2、p each other meet the challenges.Mrs.Meredith was a most kind and thoughtful woman.She spent a great deal of time visiting 许多，大量许多，大量 the poor.She knew they had problems,and they needed all kinds of help.When she had time,she would bring food and medicine to them.One morning she told her children ab

3、out a family she had visited the day before.There was a man sick in bed,his wife,who took care of him and could not go out to work,and their little boy.The 照顾照顾 外出工作外出工作 little boy his name was Bernard had interested her very much.“I wish you could see him,”she said to her own children,John,Harry,an

4、d Clara.“He is such a help to his mother.He wants very much to earn some money,but I dont see what he can do.”赚一些钱赚一些钱 After their mother left the room,the children sat thinking about Bernard.“I wish we could help him to earn money,”said Clara.“His family is suffering so much.”“So do I,”said Harry.“

5、We really should do something to assist them.”For some moments,John said nothing,but,suddenly,he sprang to his feet and cried,“I have a 一跃而起一跃而起 有个好主意有个好主意 great idea!I have a solution that we can all help accomplish(完成).”The other children also jumped up all attention.When John had an idea,it was s

6、ure to be a good one.“I tell you what we can do,”said John.“You know that big box of corn Uncle John sent us?Well,we can make popcorn(爆米花),and put it into paper bags,and Bernard can take it around to the 带着它四处走带着它四处走 houses and sell it.”2/5 文本分析 人物(绿)主要人物 Mrs.Meredith：一个特别善良体贴的女人 John,Harry,and Clar

7、a：Mrs.Meredith 的三个孩子 次要人物 Bernard：困难家庭的小孩，并且想赚一些钱 Bernards father：卧病在床 Bernards mother：为照顾 Bernards father，不能外出打工 时间(黄)一天早晨 地点(黄)在一个小社区里 情节(红)Mrs.Meredith 遇到一个有困难的家庭，并告诉了她的三个儿子，希望他们能够帮助这个困难家庭，最后 John 想出了一个好办法卖爆米花。情感(蓝)Mrs.Meredith：善良且很有想法，乐忠于帮助贫困家庭，听闻 Bernard 一家遭遇困难，告知孩子们想帮助其赚点钱，但没有想到合适的办法。John：善良且聪

8、明，听闻 Bernard 一家遭遇的困境，想要帮助其摆脱困境，想出了卖爆米花的好主意。思路构建 构思框架 丰富内容 Para 1 When Mrs.Meredith heard of Johns idea,she thought it was a good one,too.根据首句关键词提出问题：对问题做出解答：How did John do it?John assigned tasks to each person.How did the Meredith family carry out Johns idea?They bought a popcorn machine and some p

9、aper bags.John prepared sugar and oil and they made a lot of popcorn.What did the Meredith family tell Bernard?They rushed to his home and told him how to sell the popcorn.What was Bernards reaction to the idea?Bernard felt very grateful.Para 2 With everything ready,Bernard started out on his new bu

10、siness.根据首句关键词提出问题：对问题做出解答：Who were Bernards customers?He took the popcorn around to the houses and sold popcorn to people.How did Bernards business go?The popcorn was sold out.What was the result of the plan?Bernard earned a lot of money.点题升华：Years later,Bernard grew up to be a remarkable businessm

11、an.He did not forget the help of Merediths family,and he also did what he could to help those in need.3/5 作文评价 评价标准 作文练习 Para1 首句后文是否完美衔接了他们如何实施这个想法？是否有多个有描写动作、心理活动或神态的词，如：get prepared、rush、grateful、well up.Para1 尾句是否写到了一切就绪，目光回到 Bernard 身上，能够与 Para2 的首句进行衔接。When Mrs.Meredith heard of Johns idea,she

12、 thought it was a good one,too.John assigned tasks to each person immediately.They went to the local supermarket.They bought a popcorn machine and some paper bags for popcorn.Meanwhile,John prepared something like sugar and oil.When they got prepared,they made a lot of popcorn and put it in the bags

13、.They rushed to Bernards home,and told Bernard how to sell the popcorn.Bernard and his parents were very grateful,with tears welling up in their eyes.Para2 首句后文是否完美衔接了Bernard 开始卖爆米花 是否用到了多样且恰当的语法结构，如：副词做状语/定语从句/时间地点状语/非谓语动词/宾语从句.Para2 结尾部分是否是圆满大结局并升华了文章，是否点出感恩并传递善意。With everything ready,Bernard star

14、ted out on his new business.He took the popcorn around to the houses and fortunately,people were willing to buy it.Bernard sold all his popcorn and he earned some money,which was enough to help the family survive for a week.But that was not enough for him to be self-dependent.Therefore,he asked Mrs.

15、Meredith to teach him how to make popcorn.After that,he was able to make popcorn himself and support the family.Years later,Bernard grew up to be a remarkable businessman.He did not forget the help of Merediths family,and he also did what he could to help those in need.4/5 拓展练习 一、词块积累 1.in decline 衰

16、退，下降 2.lost ones job 失去工作 3.make ends meet 使收支平衡 4.earn some money 赚一些钱 5.have a good idea 有一个好主意 二、介、副词填空 1.许多，大量 a great deal of 2.照顾 take care of 3.外出工作 go out to work 4.一跃而起 spring to his feet 5.带着四处走 take around 三、词形变化 1.think v.认为 过去式 thought 过去分词 thought n.想法 thought adj.考虑周到的 thoughtful 2.as

17、sist v.帮助 n.帮助 assistance n.助理 assistant 3.solution n.解决方案 v.解决 solve 4.accomplish v.完成 n.成就；才艺 accomplishment adj.才华高的；熟练的accomplished 四、一词多义（请根据句意猜测划线词的词义）end 1.b Its the end of an era.2.a They are prepared to use violence in pursuit of their ends.a.n.目的；目标 b.n.终结；结尾 c.v.结束；终止 3.c They ended the p

18、lay with a song.deal 1.c They deal in antiques.2.a It took a great deal of time.3.d They were hoping for a better pay deal.4.b Whose turn is it to deal?a.n.大量；很多 b.v.发牌 c.v.经营 d.n.协议 care 1.c She chose her words with care.2.b Medical care is necessary.3.a He genuinely cares about his employees.a.v.关

19、心；关怀 b.n.照顾；护理 c.n.小心；谨慎 spring 1.c He was born in the spring of 1944.2.d The mattress has lost its spring.3.b I found a mountain spring.4.a The cat crouched ready to spring.a.v.跳跃 b.n.泉水 c.n.春天 d.n.弹性 5/5 五、作文素材积累 1.原因状语的使用：As the economy was in decline,some people in the town had lost their jobs.译

20、文：由于经济衰退，镇上有些人失去了工作。仿写：由于你不在，所以我留了一张字条儿。As you were out,I left a message.2.定语从句的使用：There was a man sick in bed,his wife,who took care of him and could not go out to work,and their little boy.译文：有一个男人卧病在床，他的妻子照顾他和他们的小男孩，不能出去工作。仿写：昨天打来电话的人想买这座房子。The man who called yesterday wanted to buy the house.3.非谓语动词的使用：After their mother left the room,the children sat thinking about Bernard.译文：母亲离开房间后，孩子们坐在那里想着伯纳德。仿写：听到这个消息，他们立刻出发了。Hearing the news,they immediately set off.