高中英语作文复习：我父亲的儿子（自我成长类）课件.pptx

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1、读后后续写精写精讲精精练 我父亲的儿子一篇续写的内容留存一篇续写的内容留存1.题目页题目页（考完试后留好，讲完后贴到笔记本上）【要求】【要求】（1）题目重点信息勾画（2）空白处写：-所属类别：-识别问题：-解决途径：（3）在两段段首句的后面，写每段的阶段结局（二）思（二）思思路提示思路提示1:我过去的梦想是什么？我过去的梦想是什么？我想做个英雄思路提示思路提示2:为什么我会有那样的梦想？为什么我会有那样的梦想？让我爸爸为我骄傲（二）思（二）思思路提示思路提示3:我现在的梦想是什么？我现在的梦想是什么？我想当作家思路提示思路提示4:是什么给我的自信？是什么给我的自信？写作比赛获奖了思路提示思路提

2、示5:根据上面四个问题，尝试总结：根据上面四个问题，尝试总结：我参加写作比赛前后，什么变了？什么没变？我参加写作比赛前后，什么变了？什么没变？我的梦想变了让爸爸自豪的初衷没有变（二）思（二）思思路提示思路提示6:这篇文章的主题是（结尾是）？这篇文章的主题是（结尾是）？思路提示思路提示7:写作比赛获奖的人需要干嘛？写作比赛获奖的人需要干嘛？1.我意识到，不是成为英雄才能使爸爸骄傲。2.我感到从未有过的自信。需要当众读自己的作文思路提示思路提示8:当听众听到我没写爸爸的宇航员故事时，听众会是什么反应当听众听到我没写爸爸的宇航员故事时，听众会是什么反应？惊讶（二）思（二）思思路提示思路提示9:第一段

3、段首句，为啥我会第一段段首句，为啥我会I shrugged and then the first prize winner Ellen was announced.思路提示思路提示10:为啥为啥Ellen会获一等奖？会获一等奖？因为我并没有写爸爸作为宇航员的事情编我是靠感情牌赢的比赛，所以Ellen要和我不一样，所以Ellen可以靠写爸爸的职业才获胜的，比如说医生、警察、消防员之类的。Step3:确定主题确定主题所属类别识别问题问题解决解决途径人与自我我想让爸爸为我骄傲我不自信爸爸哭了，说为我骄傲我感到从未有过的自信写作比赛获奖，当众读，感动爸爸Step1:确定后续故事的大致走向（二）思（二）

4、思Ellen演讲结束，观众鼓掌我期盼下一个是我爸爸为我骄傲我感到自信Step2:确定每段的具体情确定每段的具体情节一篇续写的内容留存：一篇续写的内容留存：2.笔记16K/A4笔记本折成1:1:2:2:2五部分。详细记录每个微情节的：1.情节发出者2.与之前情节的衔接点3.动作描写4.情感描写 的中文+英文语料Para1:I shrugged and then the first prize winner Ellen was announced.发出者发出者与之前情节衔接点与之前情节衔接点动动情情1I事件：看到我的朋友走向舞台see my friend heading towards the s

5、tage沮丧+失望feel a mixture of frustration and disappointment勉强挤出一个微笑manage a smile2Ellen事件：Ellen获得第一名并不奇怪It came no surprise that Ellen won the first prize.原因：因为她的写作能力和对她父亲的生动描绘owing to her competence in writing and vivid description of her father发出者发出者与之前情节衔接点与之前情节衔接点动动情情3Ellen+观众众事件：她刚读完这篇文章she finis

6、hed reading her essay文章的内容是她父亲作为一名警察的奉献精神，以及他逮捕罪犯时的几次危险情况the essays content was about her fathers dedication as a police and several risky situations he encountered when arresting criminals全场观众就站起来鼓掌the whole audience stood up and clappedNo sooner.than.发出者发出者与之前情节衔接点与之前情节衔接点动动情情4I事件：我转向父亲I turned to

7、 my father心理语言：要是舞台上的是我就好了!If only it were me on the stage!从他的眼睛里感觉到他对我朋友的钦佩/赞赏sense his admiration for my friend from his eyesPara2:The second prize winner was announced next It was me.发出者发出者与之前情节衔接点与之前情节衔接点动动情情1I听到我的名字hear my name激动I was seized by a strong sense of excitement.深吸一口气take a deep brea

8、th走上舞台step onto the stage带着颤抖的声音with my voice shaking/with a shaking voice我开始读文章发出者发出者与之前情节衔接点与之前情节衔接点动动情情2观众众3Dad当我讲述父亲为我做的那些小而有爱的事情时when I narrated those small but loving things my dad did for me听众的脸上闪现出惊讶Astonishment flashed across the listeners faces.我看到了我的父亲I caught sight of my father感动擤鼻子blow

9、his nose擦眼泪wipe away his tears发出者发出者与之前情节衔接点与之前情节衔接点动动情情2观众众3Dad我的演讲结束观众鼓掌My speech ended up with thunderous applause breaking out in the hall.我回到座位上后After I went back to my seat为我骄傲清了清嗓子clear his throat把手放在我的肩膀上put his hand on my shoulder“儿子，我真为你骄傲!”“Son,I am so proud of you!”发出者发出者与之前情节衔接点与之前情节衔接点

10、动动情情4I那一刻at that moment我感到前所未有的自信和成就感I felt an unprecedented sense of confidence and accomplishment我笑了My face expandedwith a big smile.Para1：看到我的朋友走向舞台，我勉强挤出了一个微笑，感到既沮丧又失望。爱伦获得第一名并不奇怪，因为她的写作能力和对她父亲的生动描绘。文章的内容是她父亲作为一名警察的奉献精神，以及他逮捕罪犯时的几次危险情况。她刚读完这篇文章，全场观众就站起来鼓掌。我转向父亲，从他的眼睛里感觉到他对我朋友的钦佩，这是我渴望已久的。要是舞台上的是

11、我就好了!Seeing my friend heading towards the stage,I managed a smile,feeling a mixture of frustration and disappointment.It came no surprise that Ellen won the first prize,owing to her competence in writing and vivid description of her father.No sooner had she finished reading her essay,whose content w

12、as about her fathers dedication as a police and several risky situations when he arrested criminals,than the whole audience stood up and clapped.I turned to my father and sensed his admiration for my friend from his eyes,something that I desired for a long time.If only it were me on the stage!Para2：

13、一听到我的名字，我就被一种强烈的兴奋感所笼罩。我深吸了一口气，走上舞台。带着颤抖的声音，我开始读我的文章。起初，当我讲述父亲为我做的那些小而有爱的事情时，听众的脸上闪现出惊讶。然后，我看到了我的父亲，他正在擤鼻子擦眼泪。我的演讲结束时，大厅里爆发出雷鸣般的掌声。我回到座位上后，爸爸清了清嗓子，把手放在我的肩膀上。“儿子，我真为你骄傲!”那一刻，我感到前所未有的自信和成就感，脸上绽开了灿烂的笑容。Upon hearing my name,I was seized by a strong sense of excitement.Having taken a deep breath,I steppe

14、d onto the stage.With my voice shaking,I began to read my essay.At first,astonishment flashed across the listeners faces when I narrated those small but loving things my dad did for me.And then,I caught sight of my father,who was blowing his nose and wiping away his tears.My speech ended up with thunderous applause breaking out in the hall.After I went back to my seat,my dad cleared his throat and put his hand on my shoulder.“Son,I am so proud of you!”At that moment,I felt an unprecedented sense of confidence and accomplishment,with my face expanding with a big smile.