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1、 1、动作+情绪：五官神态 独立主格：身体部位+固定动词非谓语，sb do sth,(with+情绪名词/声线)Tears welling up his eyes,he thanked the police with a trembling voice.定语从句：主句，whose+五官/情绪/神态描写.Eagerly,the twins gazed at mother whose eyes were filled with tears of thrill.2、动作+分解：动作链 V-ing，主句|主句，V-ing|Having done sth,主句 V-ed(情绪形容词),主句,V-ing

2、To do sth,主句 (前加目的)3、动作+时间状语从句：时空转换 主宾分离（加动作/加地点）：Sb do sth-改成：When sth.,sb do sth 加五感：Sb do sth-改成：When sb saw/thought.,sb do sth 加情绪：情绪/无灵主语句子+as/the moment/when sb do sth动作描写：写法3种读后续写 语料库动作描写万能动词 高分替换 各部位描写 1、写法3种 动作+情绪：五官神态 动作+分解：动作链 动作+时间状语从句：时空转换2、动词语料库 万能动词短语（如何扩写sb do sth）常用动词 （高分替换词）各部位动作 （

3、动作描写，超全汇总，看这里够了）语料库：动作描写 1、动作+情绪：五官神态 独立主格：身体部位+固定动词非谓语，sb do sth,(with+情绪名词/声线)Tears welling up his eyes,he thanked the police with a trembling voice.定语从句：主句，whose+五官/情绪/神态描写.Eagerly,the twins gazed at mother whose eyes were filled with tears of thrill.2、动作+分解：动作链 V-ing，主句|主句，V-ing|Having done sth,

4、主句 V-ed(情绪形容词),主句,V-ing To do sth,主句 (前加目的)3、动作+时间状语从句：场景转换 主宾分离（加动作/加地点）：Sb do sth-改成：When sth.,sb do sth 加五感：Sb do sth-改成：When sb saw/thought.,sb do sth 加情绪：情绪/无灵主语句子+as/the moment/when sb do sth动作描写：写法3种 动作+情绪 五官神态Bilibili：艾米英语角看脸!?动作+情绪：五官独立主格：身体部位+动词非谓语，sb do sth,(with+情绪名词/声线)Tears welling up

5、his eyes,he thanked the police with a trembling voice.Extremely tired,my spirits sank,tears streaming down my cheeks.Eyes filled with regretful tears,sb do sth.(眼里满含着.)Eyes glittering with relief/joy,sb do sth.(眼里闪着.)Eyes widening in+joy/ecstasy/surprise/fear(情绪名词),sb do sth (眼睛.地睁大)Eyes burning wit

6、h(燃烧着)/blazed with(闪耀着)/sparked with(闪烁着)+情绪n.Face blushing scarlet,he apologized for what he had done.(羞愧脸红，道歉)Her heart burning/filled with frustration,she.(她的心充满沮丧)Sbs heart pounding/beating with happiness,sb.(某人的心因.而怦怦直跳)My arms/legs/muscles aching and knees shaking/trembling,I did sth.动作+情绪神态：1

7、、独立主格：身体部位+固定动词非谓语，sb do sth,(with+情绪名词)Tears welling up his eyes,he thanked the police with a trembling voice.Tears streaming down my cheeks,I did sth.Eyes widening in+joy/ecstasy/surprise/fear(情绪名词),sb did sth(眼睛.睁大)Face blushing scarlet,he apologized for what he had done.(羞愧脸红，道歉)My arms/legs/mus

8、cles aching and knees shaking/trembling,I did sth.2、定语从句：主句，whose+五官+谓语动词.Mother hugged the twins tightly,whose faces were glowing with excitement.Eagerly,the twins gazed at mother whose eyes were filled with tears of thrill.John,whose heart was racing wildly,stepped onto the stage and began his spe

9、ech.动作分解 动作链Bilibili：艾米英语角 动作+分解：动作链 (扩写可加:do sth like；情绪短语；介短)V-ing，主句|主句，V-ing|Having done sth,主句Considering the threat of the bear,we stayed far away from it.Feeling ecstatic,she dashed out of the room like a wind.V-ed(情绪形容词),主句,V-ing (前加情绪）Relieved and overjoyed,we yelled at the helicopter,tryin

10、g to catch its attention.To do sth,主句（前加目的）To distract the bear,we threw a piece of bread far away.V1,V2,and V3 （分解动作）(可换成：V-ding,sb do sth,V-ing)We rose from the seat,walked out of the hall,and left the cinema.(离开电影院)Seeing the helicopter,we cried out“Help!”,waving our hands like mad.场景转换 动作+时间状语从句

11、Bilibili：艾米英语角 动作+时间状语从句：场景转换 (while/when/as/the moment.)句式 1：主宾分离（加动作/加地点）：Sb do sth-改成：When sth.,sb do sth句式 2：加五感：Sb do sth-改成：When sb saw/thought.,sb do sth句式 3：加情绪：情绪/无灵主语句子+as/the moment/when sb do sthu可组合 (常组“句式1+句式2”)原句：Mary发现一个信封(普通：Suddenly,Mary found an envelop)While Mary was thinking,she

12、 caught sight of an item on the table.She walked towards it and found an envelope.玛丽在思考时，突然看到 桌子上有件物品。她走过去，找到一个信封。She got down to tidying up the sofa when an envelop lying on it came into her eyes.她正准备收拾沙发时，沙发上的一个信封映入了她的眼帘。动作/五感+主/宾分离+造个地点 动作+时间状语从句：场景转换 总结：When/As/the moment sb1/sth.,sb2 do sth2.(当

13、.时，某人做某事)u写法&句式 (可创造性模仿)：句式1：主语宾语画面分离（动作/地点）：When sth.,sb do sth句式2：加五感：When/As sb saw/thought/found/heard.,sb do sthWhen/As sb was thinking,sb caught sight of sth.(在思考时,突然看到)Sb got down to doing sth when/as/while sth came into sbs eyes.(正.时,sth映入眼帘)句式3：加情绪：情绪/无灵主语句子+as/the moment sb do sthUncontrol

14、lably,a wave of remorse enveloped me as I heard the bad news.万用动词短语Bilibili：艾米英语角 万用动词短语 u“某人做某事 sb do sth”扩写：manage to do 想方设法做某事succeed in doing sth 成功地做了某事achieve/accomplish sth 实现/完成某事原句:Steve saved Magaritto.扩写：Steve managed to save Magaritto.Steve succeeded in saving Magaritto.Steve achieved t

15、he rescue of Margaritto.万用动词短语 u“某人做某事 sb do sth”扩写：manage to do 想方设法做某事succeed in doing sth 成功地做了某事achieve/accomplish sth 实现/完成某事struggle to do sth 努力做某事make efforts to do sth 努力做某事(make an effort to do sth)make every effort to do sth 竭尽全力做某事endeavor to do 努力做某事strive to do sth/strive for sth(过去式st

16、rove)努力/奋力做某事cant help doing sth/feel like doing sth 忍不住做某事/想做某事take actions to do 采取行动去做 get down to doing sth 开始做/着手做（尤指需花费精力之事）万用动词短语u句首加词：Almost without thinking,sb do sth 几乎想都没想，某人做了某事Without much thinking,sb do sth Without hesitation/delay,.毫不犹豫地,.Knowing/Realizing what had happened,sb do sth

17、知道发生什么后，某人做某事u句末加词：(修饰动作)as.as.:do sth as.as.He ran as fast as he could.like+adj./n.:do sth like mad/crazyThe fierce animal pushed the fence like crazy.He dash out of the room like a wind 像一阵风一样冲出房间 万用动词短语：(考纲适合用于续写的)pretend to do sth 假装做某事pretend to be doing sth 假装正在做某事consider doing sth 考虑做某事 (sta

18、rt considering doing sth)Sb considered doing sth and so he/she did.某人考虑做某事并确实做了escape doing sth 逃脱做某事admit(to)doing sth 承认做了某事regret doing sth 后悔做过某事If only sb had not done sth.(要是 没有做某事 就好了)sb shouldnt have done sth.(不应该做、但是做了某事)万用动词短语：(考纲适合用于续写的)keep doing sth 保持做某事go on doing sth 继续做某事carry on do

19、ing sth 继续做某事force sb to do sth 迫使某人做某事 (sb was forced to do sth)persuade sb into doing sth 说服某人做某事talk sb into doing sth 说服某人做某事allow/enable sb to do sth 使某人能够做某事cannot help doing sth 禁不住做某事imagine doing sth 想象做某事 cast light onbe curious about.catch sight of be busy with catch a glimpse of be cover

20、ed with lay emphasis onbe ready/prepared for make the most of be surprised/amazed(at)take advantage of be excited about suffer from sth be angry with be involved in sth be mad at be exposed to sth be satisfied with be devoted to sth be regarded/treated as 万用动词/形容词短语：固定搭配 cast light on 阐明某事be curious

21、 about.对.好奇 catch sight of 看见be busy with 忙于.catch a glimpse of 瞥见;窥见be covered with 被.覆盖 lay emphasis on 强调be ready/prepared for 为作好准备 make the most of 充分利用 be surprised/amazed(at)对感到惊讶 take advantage of 利用 be excited about 激动于.suffer from sth 遭受.be angry with 愤怒于.be involved in sth 参与/专心投入 be mad

22、at 疯狂于.be exposed to sth 暴露/面临/接触 be satisfied with 对.满意 be devoted to sth 投身于/致力于 be regarded/treated as 被视为.万用动词/形容词短语：固定搭配 高分替换词Bilibili：艾米英语角 万用动词短语：替换u替换“cannot do sth 无法做某事”:fail to do sthsbs doing sth was a failurebe unable to do sthprevent sb from doing sth 原句：At the sight of the snake,he wa

23、s so scared that he couldnt move.按需替换：Extremely scared,he failed to move at the sight of the snake.Enormous scare prevented him from moving at the sight of the snake.His attempt to move was a failure at the sight of the snake.万用动词短语：替换u替换“decide to do sth 决定做某事”：be determined to do sth 下定决心做某事make u

24、p ones mind to do sth 下定决心做某事u替换“want to do 想做某事”：intend to do sth/aim to do sth;feel like doing sth 想要做某事;plan/prepare to do sth 预备/准备做某事u替换“make sb want to do sth 使某人想.”:remind sb to do sth 提醒某人做某事encourage sb to do sth 鼓励/使某人做某事motivate/drive sb to do sth 激励/推动某人做某事urge sb to do sth 促使某人做某事 一整套动词

25、“某人做某事”终极扩写：出现问题/需求-直面问题-寻求方法-采取行动-获得结果Bilibili：艾米英语角 difficulties 困难/troubles 麻烦 problems 问题/issues 问题 difficulties 困难/troubles 麻烦 problems 问题/issues 问题knotty tasks 棘手的任务a challenging task 有挑战性的任务 difficulties 困难/troubles 麻烦 problems 问题/issues 问题knotty tasks 棘手的任务a challenging task 有挑战性的任务challenge

26、s 挑战obstacles 障碍/困难hardships 困难/艰辛setbacks 挫折/阻碍/逆流hurdles 障碍/困难(可用 and/or 进行叠加并列)meet/face/be faced with come across 遇到/面对be confronted with 面临(困难)encounter/suffer from 遭遇(困难)difficulties 困难/troubles 麻烦 problems 问题/issues 问题knotty tasks 棘手的任务a challenging task 有挑战性的任务challenges 挑战obstacles 障碍/困难har

27、dships 困难/艰辛setbacks 挫折/阻碍/逆流hurdles 障碍/困难(可用 and/or 进行叠加并列)meet/face/be faced with come across 遇到/面对be confronted with 面临(困难)encounter/suffer from 遭遇(困难)difficulties 困难/troubles 麻烦 problems 问题/issues 问题knotty tasks 棘手的任务a challenging task 有挑战性的任务challenges 挑战obstacles 障碍/困难hardships 困难/艰辛setbacks 挫

28、折/阻碍/逆流hurdles 障碍/困难(可用 and/or 进行叠加并列)rise to 奋起应对 address 应对(一词多义用法)fight against 对抗deal with/cope with/handle 处理go about(doing)着手处理get down to(doing)开始认真处理 meet/face/be faced with come across 遇到/面对be confronted with 面临(困难)encounter/suffer from 遭遇(困难)difficulties 困难/troubles 麻烦 problems 问题/issues 问

29、题knotty tasks 棘手的任务a challenging task 有挑战性的任务challenges 挑战obstacles 障碍/困难hardships 困难/艰辛setbacks 挫折/阻碍/逆流hurdles 障碍/困难(可用 and/or 进行叠加并列)rise to 奋起应对 address 应对(一词多义用法)fight against 对抗deal with/cope with/handle 处理go about(doing)着手处理get down to(doing)开始认真处理overcome 克服/conquer 征服/defeat/beat 击败succeed

30、in doing sth 成功地.manage to do sth 设法做到某事.造句效果Bilibili：艾米英语角 万用动词短语：替换rise to the challenge 奋起应对挑战/接受挑战address challenges(problems/hardship/setbacks/hurdles)应对挑战/困难rise to the challenge and manage to do sth 迎接挑战并设法做某事address the challenge and succeed in doing sth 迎接挑战，成功做某事Fight against the challenge

31、,take actions,and reap the harvest.迎难而上，行动起来，收获满满Eg:The home team rose to the challenge and managed to win the championship.主队迎难而上，成功夺冠。仿写：2022深圳一模 (代替Steve reached the truck)Difficult as it is,Steve rose to the challenge and managed to reach the truck.尽管困难重重，Steve还是接受了挑战，并设法到了卡车。look for/seek for/s

32、earch for 寻找help/assistance 帮助 look for/seek for/search for 寻找help/assistance 帮助explore 探索/come up with 想出methods/approaches/solutions 方法 look for/seek for/search for 寻找help/assistance 帮助explore 探索/come up with 想出methods/approaches/solutions 方法make/craft/design/formulate 制定strategies 策略/plans 计划 loo

33、k for/seek for/search for 寻找help/assistance 帮助explore 探索/come up with 想出methods/approaches/solutions 方法make/craft/design/formulate 制定strategies 策略/plans 计划work out a solution to the problem 解决问题figure out a way to do sth 想出方法做某事attempt to find a way out 试图找到解决方法carry out plans 执行计划/take actions 采取行动

34、/make efforts to do努力 look for/seek for/search for 寻找help/assistance 帮助explore 探索/come up with 想出methods/approaches/solutions 方法make/craft/design/formulate 制定strategies 策略/plans 计划work out a solution to the problem 解决问题figure out a way to do sth 想出方法做某事attempt to find a way out 试图找到解决方法carry out pla

35、ns 执行计划/take actions 采取行动/make efforts to do努力struggle/endeavor/strive to(keep practicing)奋斗/努力/努力(坚持练习)stick to doing sth/persist in doing sth/persevere in doing sth 坚持做 look for/seek for/search for 寻找help/assistance 帮助explore 探索/come up with 想出methods/approaches/solutions 方法make/craft/design/formu

36、late 制定strategies 策略/plans 计划work out a solution to the problem 解决问题figure out a way to do sth 想出方法做某事attempt to find a way out 试图找到解决方法carry out plans 执行计划/take actions 采取行动/make efforts to do努力struggle/endeavor/strive to(keep practicing)奋斗/努力/努力(坚持练习)stick to doing sth/persist in doing sth/perseve

37、re in doing sth 坚持做例句：The fast-flowing water was the biggest hurdle,because of which Steve struggled to keep himself safe by using the rope.Difficult as it is,Steve rose to the challenge and managed to reach the truck.2022深圳一模 look for/seek for/search for 寻找help/assistance 帮助explore 探索/come up with

38、想出methods/approaches/solutions 方法make/craft/design/formulate 制定strategies 策略/plans 计划work out a solution to the problem 解决问题figure out a way to do sth 想出方法做某事attempt to find a way out 试图找到解决方法carry out plans 执行计划/take actions 采取行动/make efforts to do努力struggle/endeavor/strive to(keep practicing)奋斗/努力

39、/努力(坚持练习)stick to doing sth/persist in doing sth/persevere in doing sth 坚持做例句：The fast-flowing water was the biggest hurdle,because of which Steve struggled to keep himself safe by using the rope.Difficult as it is,Steve rose to the challenge and managed to reach the truck.2022深圳一模 动作描写：各部位Bilibili：

40、艾米英语角 he buried his face in his hands he rubbed his hands together he folded his arms/hands over his chest She raised/lifted her head/chin/hands She held her breath/held sth in hands moved forward/backwards/towards/closer to he shivered/trembled/shook she stepped away/forward dash to/rush to/sprint

41、to grab/grasp/seize 动作描写：各部位-常用动词总结 he buried his face in his hands 他把脸埋在手里 he rubbed his hands together 他使劲揉/搓着双手 he folded his arms/hands over his chest 他把双臂/双手交叉在胸前 She raised/lifted her head/chin/hands 抬头/抬起下巴/举手 She held her breath/held sth in hands 她屏住呼吸/手里拿着东西 moved forward/backwards/towards/

42、closer to 前进/后退/朝向/靠近 he shivered/trembled/shook 他颤抖 she stepped away/forward 她走开/向前 dash to/rush to/sprint to 冲向/冲向/冲刺 grab/grasp/seize 抓住动作描写：各部位-常用动词总结 he shivered/trembled his body shook she flinched she straightened/she stretched she rose from her seat he pulled away/he pushed away he turned aw

43、ay he turned around she stepped away she drew nearer动作描写：“肢体1”he shivered/trembled 他颤抖着 his body shook 他的身体颤抖着 she flinched 她退缩了 she straightened/she stretched 她挺直了/她伸展 she rose from her seat 她从座位上站起来 he pulled away/he pushed away 他拉开/他推开 he turned away 他转身离开 he turned around 他转身 she stepped away 她走

44、开了 she drew nearer 她走近了动作描写：“肢体1”he leaned closer he paced she dragged her feeta she pumped a fist she punched the air she rested her chin on her palm he yawned she scratched her nose/head he leaned against the wall she bounced on her toes动作描写：“肢体2”he leaned closer 他靠得更近了 he paced 他踱步 she dragged he

45、r feeta 她拖着脚 she pumped a fist 她挥了挥拳头 she punched the air 她打了空气 she rested her chin on her palm 她把下巴放在手掌上 he yawned 他打了个哈欠 she scratched her nose/head 她挠了挠鼻子/挠头 he leaned against the wall 他靠在墙上 she bounced on her toes 她踮起脚尖动作描写：“肢体2”he shook/nodded his head she was breathing hard she took in a deep

46、breath she took in a sharp breath she held her breath he let out a harsh breath he sighed she rubbed her shoulder she played with her hair she tossed her hair动作描写：“肢体3”he shook/nodded his head 他摇了摇头/点头 she was breathing hard 她呼吸困难 she took in a deep breath 她深吸了一口气 she took in a sharp breath 她倒吸一口凉气

47、she held her breath 她屏住呼吸 he let out a harsh breath 他重重地吐了一口气 he sighed 他叹了口气 she rubbed her shoulder 她揉了揉肩膀 she played with her hair 她玩弄她的头发 she tossed her hair 她甩了甩头发动作描写：“肢体3”glance at stare at gaze at catch sight of/catch a glimpse of he observed she peered she gaped he glared he gawked he leere

48、d 动作描写：“看”glance at 朝看了一眼 stare at 盯着.看 gaze at 盯着/注视/凝视 catch sight of/catch a glimpse of 瞥见 he observed 他观察 she peered 她凝视着 she gaped 她目瞪口呆 he glared 他瞪着 he gawked 他目瞪口呆 he leered 他斜视动作描写：“看”his eyes widened his eyes lit up his eyes narrowed she winked/blinked her eyes sparkled her eyes twinkled h

49、is eyes gleamed his eyes burned with her eyes blazed with her eyes sparked with动作描写：“眼睛”his eyes widened 他的眼睛睁大了 his eyes lit up 他的眼睛亮了 his eyes narrowed 他的眼睛眯了起来 she winked/blinked 她眨了眨眼 her eyes sparkled 她的眼睛闪闪发光 her eyes twinkled 她的眼睛闪烁 his eyes gleamed 他的眼睛闪闪发光 his eyes burned with 他的眼睛燃烧着 her e

50、yes blazed with 她的眼睛闪耀着 her eyes sparked with 她的眼睛闪烁着动作描写：“眼睛”_ glowed in his eyes tears filled/flooded her eyes tears shimmered/shone in her eyes he was fighting back tears tears ran down her cheeks his eyes closed/he shut his eyes she squeezed her eyes shut his brows knitted his eyebrows rose she