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1、英语专业八级写作指导(forstudents)WritingDirections: Marks will be awarded for content, organization, grammand appropriateness. Failure to follow the above instructions may result a loss of marks 英 语.专八作文评分标准评价一篇八级作文的得分多少，大致可以参照以下四个标准来确定:内容(content、)组织(organization、)语法(grammar)和得体性(appropriateness这).四个标准中，前两个标

2、准是关于内容结构的，属于谋篇布局部份，后两个是关于语言的，属于表达部份。在八级考试的作文评阅中，普通将作文分为五个等级：第五级：化秀作文(effective munication with accur这c样ies的)作丈观点清晰， 结构合理，内容充实，语言运用得体，基本没有语言错误.得分在18-20分。第四级：良好作文(good munication with few inaccurac这ie羊s)的作 文观点明确，结构合理，内容充实，语言运用较得体，稍有语言错误。得分在 15-17 分。第三级： 尚可作文(passable munication with some inaccura这i样s)

3、的作文观点明确，结构完整，内容尚可，语言运用的得体性普通，语言错误不少，影响到作文的理解.得分在14-12分。To err is human, to forgive, divine.a. I am in favor of equal rights for women. I think women should especially havethe right to pete with men for jobs on equal terms. They should get the same pay as men for the same job. They should also have e

4、qual opportunities for promotion.b. I am in favor of equal right for women, especially the right to p with men for jobs on equal terms, the right to get the same pay as men f the same job, and the right to equal opportunities for promotion.a. The nationwide controversy over the current reforms will

5、test the courage of our people. Through the controversy we can also see the determination of our governmentb. The nationwide controversy over the current reforms will test the courage of our people and the determination of our government.a. For the first time in history Chinese citizens held such po

6、wer inown hands. In the past they have never been allowed such vigorous and unrestrained debate on politics.b. Never before in history have Chinese citizens held such power in their own hands. Never before in history have they been allowed such vigorous and unrestrained debate on politics.建议：一定要背会一些

7、常见句型，以减少语法错误。考生要在短短 40分钟内写出200词的作文，如果考前不做准备，考试中紧张，自然写 出的作文索然无味，还多语法错，而如果考生已经背了一部份固定的语句，临场再加进与内容相关的一部份，就胜券在握了。1. There is no denying th毋t庸置疑2. It is univsally acknowledged 普th遍at认为3. It goes without saying t不a言t而喻4. Nowadays, with the rapid development of science andtechnology (modern civilization, m

8、arket economy), there is a growing concern over ( awareness of).5. . Never before in history has t。 h beeinssiuree ofevident than now.6. When it es to, peopslen,otions vaiy from one to another.Recently a sensational debate has taken place as to whether or .7. is a classic example of success, (is a c

9、ase in point.) I cannot think ofno better illustrations than the following ones.8. . Generally speaking, there are three primary factors accountingfor the change.9. Why does this phenomenon take place? People tend to focuson(concentrate) three fundamental factors.10. Taking into account all the abov

10、e factors, we can safely draw a conclusion that11. On the basis of the above analyses, we can confidentlypredict the future tendency. There is no denying thatwill continue in the better direction (will be on the rise). 12. It is essential to heed warnings of potentially catastrophic consequences ass

11、ociated with and, inturn, to attach top priority in finding effective solutions to ensure a brighter future.11种段落起始段1话题引出段2现状说明段3图画图表描述段扩展段4观点对照段5利弊说明段6举例说明段7原因列举段8意义阐释段结论段9归纳结论段10预测趋势段11建议措施段建议：把各种段落模式烂熟于心，以不变应万变。专四满分作文Newconcepts always penetrate our daily lives without being noticed.When most of

12、us are accustomed to spending the spare time reading, more and more college students begin to take part-time job either inside or outside the campus. It is my constant belief that its pros outweighcons; by that I mean, it has far more potential advantages than disadvantages that can be minimized.Fir

13、stly, a part-time job provide a student with a chance to practice what he has learned from books, especially in the fields such as economi engineering and teaching. Practicemakes perfect. Secondly, it can help the students to be economically independent of their parents, although sometimes just part

14、ially. On the one hand, parents may have a lighter burden of the college tuitions and miscellaneous expenses of their sons or daughters than they used to have On the other hand, we students will realize that money es not as easily we think, thus develop good habits of not wasting it. And finally, if

15、 we balance the time spent on both the study and the work, it wont e the cause of failure in academic study. Whats more, a part time job may ma our campus life more exciting.In view of the proceeding paragraph, I would like to mend that every student take a part-time job, if possible.专八满分作文Writing T

16、ask (45mins) 20% (2022)Joseph Epstein, a famous writer, once said, We decide what is important and what is trivial in life. We decide (so) that what makes us significant is either what we do or what we refuse to do. But no matter how indifferent the universe may be to our choices and decisions, thes

17、echoices and decisions are ours to make. We decide. We choose. And as we decideand choose, so are our lives formed. In the end, forming ou own destiny is what ambition is about.5 Do you agree or disagree with him? Write an essay about 400 words entitled:Ambitionthe word ambition so vividly and accur

18、ately defined than in Joseph Epsteins ment that “in the end, forming our own destiny is what ambit is about. A cosmetic definition as it seems, however, Epsteins words on the whole, be interpreted and summarized into one sentence: to be ambitious is to strive for our own personal goals set upon our

19、own value regardless of the possible e and controversy, visualizing your personal goals instead of drifting among the mass is, undoubtedly, the veryprerequisite of the fulfillment of your aims. The reason for this is simple. We ourselves are the best judges of our capabilities and potent And the sam

20、e voice is echoed in that we decide what is important and what is trivial in life. Madame Currie could never have achieved so ma honors and breakthroughs in science and the discovery of radium if she took the same path as majority of the women in her time. It was her decision to devote her time and

21、energy to science not household chores that made her stand out so prominently. On the other hand, she might have been just as plain and mundane as other women if she did not match herself with her personal aspirations and goals. Therefore, having yourown goals is essential to the realization of ambi

22、tion.goals. Again Epstein gave a perfectnetpid)a that “but no matterhow indifferent the universe may be to our choices and decisions, these decisions and choices are ours to make. An excellent statement. There times when we give up our beliefs and aims simply because of a different perspective of so

23、meone else and第 二级： 问 题作文（problematic munication with frequent inaccuracie这s)样的作丈观点不甚明确，结构不完整，内容匮乏，语言得体性较差，语 言错误较多，影响到作文的理解.得分在11-9分。第一级：失败作文 (almost no municatio这n)样的作丈基本没有达到写作要求，几乎无结构和内 容可言，通篇充斥语言错误，无语言得体性可言，作文难以理解得分在8- 6分或者以下。全球化 globalization高科技产品 high-tech products盗版 pirated products可持续发展 susta

24、inable development素质教育 education for all-round developmentquality-oriented education学生减负 to reduce study load上网 get on line / surf the net网民 netizen ( net citizen )加入 China5 s entry into WTO申办奥运会 bid for the Olympic Games小康 relatively fortable living standard安居工程 housing project for low-e urban resi

25、dents再就业工程 reemployment project假冒伪劣商品fake modities腐败现象 corruption phenomenon信息化 information-based; infbrmationizat下io岗职工 laid-off workers资源枯竭 resources exhaustion环保意识 environmental awareness美容手术 cosmetic surgery如要表示我，认为，不要仅依靠I think:I believe I suppose I maintain I claim I argue Tm convinced that, t

26、he opinion that, I hold the view thatAs for me, As far as Tm concerned, As far as 如I要 速n示see重要 的”，不要仅依靠 important:significant, vital, essential, crucial, be of great importance, figu prominently/largely Ito isthat counts.play a key role, should be taken seriously, attach great importance 如要表示关于”, 不要

27、仅依靠aboutconcerning, regarding, as regards, as to, with regard towith reference to, relevant to, related to, involve , have connectio with, have something to do wi如th要表示说“明，不要仅依靠show:indicate, reveal, demonstrate, convey, suggest, i 如 11 更te使“”不,要仅依靠 make:a. This society still makes women unable to e

28、njoy equal rights.b. Women are still denied equal rights.a. The incident made me recall one of my past experiences.b. The incident reminded me of one of my past experiences.如要表达 越来越，不要只使用more and more:a. More and more students find learning English has e more and more difficult.b. Students in growin

29、g numbers find learning has e increasingly difficult.a. More and more teenagers smoke cigarettes in recent years.b. Teenage smoking is on the rise in recent years.a. More and more teachers are demanded with the development of economy.b. There is an increasing demand for teachers with the development

30、 of economy.如要表达大，多数”，不要一味使用mosta. Most students take part-time job after class.b. The vast majority of students take a part-time job after class.a. Most people take part in sports of different kinds.b. The considerable proportion of people takes part in sport of different kinds.a. Most college stud

31、ents take a negative attitude towards smoking.b. The large percentage of college population take a negative attitu towards smoking如要表达不“仅，而且”，不要只使用not only but also: a. The factors for a rise in teenage smoking are not onlysocial but also psychological.c. The factors for a rise in teenage smoking ar

32、e psychological as w as social.a. Taking a part-time job can not only earn a little money, but als have an opportunity to contact with society.b. Taking a part-time job means more than a little money you can earn. It also means an opportunity to contact with society.a. Old people go to park not only

33、 to do exercise but also to make friends.b. Old people go to park as much for panionship as for exercise.不要总是以有生命的名词和人称代词开头(受汉语表达习惯的影响，不少考生总喜欢以 I, People, We等开头)，a. Many people think birth control is quite necessary inChina.c. It is widely(monly,generally)thought/believed/held/accepted that birth co

34、ntrol is quite necessary in China.a. More and more people agree (realize/are aware) that women should enjoy full equality with men.b. There is a growing agreement (realization/awareness) that womenshould enjoy full equality with men.a. Many Chinese people have gone to the United States in the past 1

35、5 years.b. The past 15 years have brought many Chinese people to United States.a. We almost forget this event.b. This event is now almost fading from our memory.a. Students should certainly make continuous efforts, b. Continuous efforts on the part of students are certainly required.a. We easily dre

36、w the conclusion through theinvestigation.b.The investigation easily led us to the con不cl要us千io篇n律的使用 主动态(英语中被动结构的使用频率远高于汉语)，a) We are making great efforts to improve our English, b) Great effo are being made to improve our English.a) We know very little about the nature of human beings, b) Little i

37、 known about the nature of human beings.a) Because of social demands, there appear many evening schools, b) Many evening schools are called into existence by social demands. Social demands give rise to the emergence of many evening schools.a) We may think more of the elderly who live apart from thei

38、r children.b) More thought may be given to the elderly who live apart from thei children.不要总是用if(如果),because(因为),when (当)等口语意味较重的句 子，要注意使用书面语体的句子，a) If you pare bicycles with cars carefully, you will find bicycles superior to cars.b) Careful parison of bicycles with cars will show the superiority o

39、former over the latter.a) If we only apply book knowledge, we will not get good results.b) The application of book knowledge alone wont bring you good results.a) If we can better understand the greater pressure of population growth, we will have a correct attitude towards family planning.b) A better

40、 understanding of the greater pressure of population growth is essential to a correct attitude towards family planning.a) When a woman sees that she is going to be laid off, she begins to worry all day and night.b) The mere prospect of lay-off would set a woman to worry all day and night.a. When our

41、 teacher had left, the heated discussion then endedb. The departure of our teacher brought the heated discussion to an end.a) Only when we make continuous efforts, can we seize an opportunity when it occurs.b) Continuous efforts must be made before it is possible for us to seize an opportunity when

42、it occurs.a) Because we cannot apply book knowledge to practice, we cannot handle real problems in society.b) The inability to apply book knowledge to practice prevents us fro handling real problems in society.a) Because the decision recognizes the right of students, so they al it.b) Students all e

43、the decision which recognizes their rights.不要对动词过分依赖；要学会用名词结构来表达意思.a) The style of living has e more and more popular and accepted by more and more young people.b) The style of living has found its growing popularity and acceptanc among young people.a) It is time for us to revise educational system

44、and then provide it our society.b) It is time for us to provide our society a revised educational sysa) If we are watching too much TV, our reading ability will be seriou affected.b) Heavy exposure to TV will exert a negative effect on our readingability.a) If we dont recognize the serious problem o

45、f growing population, we will make a big mistake.b) Failure to recognize the seriousness of growing population will 1 to a big mistake. 不要总是用肯定句来表达，要学会用否定句来表达肯定的意思a) Every young boy and girl wants to earn a little money to help cov higher college cost.b) There is hardly a young boy and girl who does

46、nt want to earn a little money to help cover higher college cost.a) Whenever you pick up a newspaper, you will always find advertisements.b) It is impossible to pick up a newspaper without finding advertisements.a) Gathering around and listening to mother or father read a good story is the best past

47、imes to bring a family closer together.b) Few pastimes bring a family closer together than gathering around and listening to mother or father read a good story.a) Food is the most basic issue to individual and national survival, b) No issue is as basic to individual and national survival as food.恰当的使用排比、平行句