FY2024人教版新七年级英语暑假课-第17讲 英语写作 （教师版）.docx

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1、第17讲英语写作衔接导图英语写作简单介绍自己及与自己有关的 生活主要写记叙文.时杰侧重一般 时写作话题由自己的生活扩展到 更多方面学会写书信、启事等简单的应用 文，写作时四种时态都有涉及温故要点例1根据表格的信息用英语写一段话，介绍你和你的朋友Ken的情况.不少于50词NameAgeFromClassGradeTelephone NumberWang Lei10Shanghai34239-1814Ken12England115901-2675【答案】My name is Wang Lei. I am ten years old. I am from Shanghai. I am in Clas

2、s Three, Grade Four. Mytelephone number is 239-1814.T have a good friend. His name is Ken. He is twelve years old. He comes fromEngland. He is in Class Eleven, Grade Five. His telephone number is 901-2675.【思路解析】根据表格信息描述人物的基本情况，这是小学阶段常见的题型，难度较小.写作时要注意人称分别选用第一人称和第三人称,时态要用一般现在时,要注意将表格中提供的人物的基本情况写清楚，同时要

3、注意书写和标点.回顾总结小学阶段写作话题有描述人物的基本情况（姓名、年龄、国籍、长相、职业、兴趣爱好等）、人物的日常活动情况;有时也谈论最喜爱的动物等.文章的体裁以记叙文为主，时态以一般现在时为主.衔接知新知识清单1 .七年级写作要求3 .文中不得出现真实姓名、校名和地名；4 .词数:70词左右.（开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数）Dear Tom,Wang Yang【答案】例文Dear Tom,In our school, there are many interesting activities this year.In January, we have English Day. I read

4、 English books and talk with my classmates in English. The Art Festival is in May. I like drawing and T am good at singing. I think its really an exciting day. And also the school trip is in October. I can play games and do many interesting things. So its my favorite month.I think we can always have

5、 a good time at school.Wang Yang【详解】题干解读:本文是一篇书信作文，来信中明确写出要介绍学校的活动.写作指导:本文主要以第一人称写作，时态主要为一般现在时.可以使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等;语 言的表述要符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯;层次要分明、条理要清晰.（三）（2022.辽宁营口.统考中考真题）假如你是李明，你的朋友Jack给你发邮件请求你的帮助.请根据邮件内容进行 回复.要求：逻辑清晰，内容完整，书写规范；回复内容至少包含三条建议；词数:30左右,开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数.Dear Li Ming,I spend all my w

6、eekends playing computer games and my mother is very angry with me about it. I want to make a change. Could you give me some advice?JackDear Jack,I hope my advice can be helpful to you.Li Ming【答案】例文Dear Jack,Im glad to help you. I think youd better finish your homework first. If you like, you can he

7、lp do housework.Its a good idea to do some outdoor activities or read some books.I hope my advice can be helpful to you.Li Ming【详解】L题干解读:本文是一篇电子邮件，根据Jack的邮件内容，针对他的问题提出建议.2 .写作指导:本文时态采用一般现在时;人称以第一人称和第三人称为主.注意建议要不少于三条，同时要看清 题目字数要求:词数在30左右.写作时力求语句通顺，无单词语法错误.（2021 .辽宁营口统考中考真题）初中学习已接近尾声，作为学长，请你为学弟学妹们提出5条

8、学习、行为规范等 方面的建议.【答案】例文：You should listen to the teacher carefully in class and review your notes after class. You should listen to English news and read English newspapers every day. You should keep diaries in English. You should go to school on time, not be late or leave early. You should obey the t

9、raffic rules on your way to school.【详解】1.题干解读:题目要求写出学习或行为中的5条建议，可以适当的发挥,写作时要运用正确的英语表 达,要选用恰当的词汇和短语.2 .写作指导:写作时可以使用情态动词should提出建议用第二人称来写作，提出较好的建议，要做到无单词拼 写和语法错误.能够用书信的形式写文章;能用所学句型写促销广告、寻物启事和招领启事:运用所学句型及方位词简单描述房间内物品的准确位置;会写介绍自己或他人一日三餐饮食、喜好的短文;能简单介绍自己及他人的生H;能简单介绍自己某天的课程表和所喜爱的学科并说明原因.2 .英语写作技巧(1)写作思路:一审

10、，二写，三连，四改“一审”即审题.主要是看清楚题日要求，读懂题目所表达的含义，抓住要点，注意文体,准备写作的人称和时 态.如果是日记和故事，宜采用过去时态;如果是简介之类的，宜采用现在时态.“二写”即写提纲.主要是考虑所要选用的单词、词组、句型，要能根据自己的英语水平，尽量扬长避短，避难 就易如果发现想要使用的单词、句型记得不太牢固,要及时查对;考试时最好用意思相同(近)的单词或另外的 同义句代替，不要心存侥幸使用没有把握的单词、句型.“三连”即连句成文,根据短文的内容要求,确定先写什么，后写什么，按照表述内容的情节发展和实际需要, 重新排列组合已写成的句子，划分必要的段落.“四改”即修改润色

11、全文.看全文符不符合题目要求，行文是否流畅，有没有遗漏要点:语法是否正确，单词的 拼写、大小写及标点符号等是否正确.(2)写作结构:三段论文章一般分为开头、正文和结尾三段.开头概括性要强，最多用两句话引入主题;正文层次要清晰,要有过 渡性的连接词，所写内容尽量不超过三个方面;结尾要紧扣主题,两句话内结束，尽量升华.(3)常用的连词、词组和句型英语作文中运用连词,能使文章前后语意更连贯;恰当地运用词组和句型，表 达能更生动、更地道.常用的连词:first 首先，第一,second 其次、第二,on the one hand.on the other hand.一方面另一方 面,but但是,how

12、ever然而,because因为,等等.常用的词组:for example/such as例如,be good/bad for sb.对某人有好处/坏处,as we all know众所周知,in fact事实上,in a word总而言之,等等.常用的句型:This is.这是.1 like doing.我喜欢做.His favourite. is.他最喜欢的是.There is.有.3 .书信的格式River Road 321Guangdong ProvinceMarch 5thDear Li Xiao,Best wishes.Yours,Jimmy过关检测典题精讲例2根据下面的要求，完成

13、请假条假如今天（4月21日），你（王琳）因病不能上学，请给李老师写个请假条.要求请假三天，并附上医生证明（enclose a doctors certificate）.请假条中的部分内容已给出.LeaveMr. Li,I enclose a doctors certificate.Wang Lin【答案】April 21stLeaveMr. Li,I am ill today and cant go to school. I am writing to ask for three days* leave.I enclose a doctors certificate.Yours,Wang Li

14、n【思路解析】此题要求写一个请假条，但题目给的请假条格式书写不全，缺少日期和落款.“日”要用序数词，落款 处可写上 your student 或 yours.注意请三天假用 have three days off 或 ask for three days* leave 这一结构. 走出误区写英语作文，一定要抓住要点.这道题共有5个要点一得分点:April 21st;I am ill today; cant go to school; I am writing to ask for three days* leave; your student（或yours）,只有把这几个得分点交代清了，作文才

15、能表达清 楚.例3假如你是Jim,请向你的朋友John写信描述一下你的上一个周末日期上午下午晚上Saturday做作业和打扫房间和朋友一起踢足球待在家里看电视Sunday早早起床并读英语书和我的妈妈购物并看望了我的奶奶玩半小时电脑游戏后早早上床睡觉Dear John,How are you? I had a very busy weekend last weekend.Please write soon and tell me about your weekend.Yours,Jim【答案】Dear John,How are you? I had a very busy weekend las

16、t weekend. On Saturday morning, I did my homework first. After that, I cleaned my room. In the afternoon, I played football with my friends, and on Saturday evening, I stayed at home and watched TV. On Sunday morning, I got up early and read my English book. In the afternoon, I went shopping with my

17、 mother and visited my grandma. In the evening, I played computer games for half an hour at home, then I went to bed early.Please write soon and tell me about your weekend.Jim【思路解析】这是一篇书信格式的文章，格式已给出，降低了一定的难度.从题意来看，要求描述的是上一个周 末的事，可以确定时态要用一般过去时，因此，要牢固掌握一般过去时的句子结构:主语+动词的过去式.动词的 过去式有规则和不规则两种，写作时要注意正确使用.

18、走出误区写这篇文章时，要特别注意两点:要正确书写动词的过去式.stay at home待在家里,stay的过去式不要写 成staied, get up起床,get的过去式是got, read English book读英语书jead的过去式是read.作并列谓语的两 个谓语动词都要用动词的过去式.为避免动词过去式的书写错误,平时要多注意积累不规则动词的过去式. 即时演练1 .根据下面的要求写一封信假设你是刘岩，你生病的时候,你的同学李芳经常来看望你，并帮助你复习各门功课.最后，你在考试中成绩 优异.你很感动，因此想给李芳写一封信.注意:要表达你对李芳的感谢;(2)要简述感谢李芳的原因，适当举例

19、，并谈谈你的感受.提示t词语:thank you, give, at last, have to, stay at home, kind, forget, woiry about, fall behind, help.with, because of【答案】Dear Li Fang,Thank you for your help. You give me so much help, I will never forget. Last week, I had a bad cold and had to stay at home for a week. I worried about the le

20、ssons. You came to my home after school and helped me with every subject. With your help, I didnt fall behind at last, I got an A in the test because of you. I am very happy to have a good friend like you.Thank you again. I wish you are happy.Liu Yan2 .根据要求写一段话星期天的晚上，你全家人都在家里，爷爷正在读报纸，爸爸正在和奶奶一起做饭，妈妈在

21、扫地，哥哥在看电视,你在擦桌子.请用现在进行时描述你们一家人的活动.【答案】On Sunday evening, my family are at home now. My grandpa is reading newspapers. My father is making dinner with my grandma, and my mother is sweeping the floor. I am cleaning the table. We are all busy, but my brother is watching TV.3 .写一次难忘的周末或假期请你写出一次难忘的周末或假期.

22、文章内容要包括:假期活动，难忘的原因，感受.（可以选用下面的提示）weekendvacationactivities（活动）do homework, watch TV, play sportsvisit aunt in New York, go to the beachreasons（原因）busy, tired but kind of funinteresting, relaxing and excitingfeelings（感受）want to have more interesting weekendsgreat vacation【答案】Last week, I went on vaca

23、tion. I had fun. First, I visited my aunt in New York. Then we went to the beach. I liked the beach, because it was interesting, relaxing and exciting. I was very happy. I think it is a great vacation. I like this vacation. I hope the next vacation will come soon.领先训练强化基础1 .请你根据下表提供的信息写一篇以“My Father

24、”为题的英语作文年龄40外貌又高又胖，短黑的头发，大眼睛职业（数学）教师，（工作努力，爱讲有趣的故事）性格诚实，善良爱好打兵乓球My Father【答案】My FatherMy father is a 40-year-old math teacher. He is tall and fat with short black hair and big eyes. He always works hard. He likes telling interesting stories. He is an honest and kind man. He often helps others. He li

25、kes playing ping-pong. We often play together on Sundays.I love my father very much.领先巩固2 .请以“My Dream”为题,写一篇英语作文泌须包括以下三部分内容DreamI want toReasonsBe interested inWays to achieve my dreamStudy hard at school【答案】My DreamWhen we talk about the future, I will feel happy. Because I want to be a teacher wh

26、en I grow up. I am interested in teaching. I think it is happy to talk with children. And I think I will be a very good teacher. I will be nice to my students. I will take them to the park.For my dream, I must study hard at school. I hope my dream can come true.培优挑战3 .请根据以下问题和答案的提示并结合你的实际情况，以“My Eng

27、lish Learning”为题写一篇80词左右的英语短文,要求至少涉及三个问题,并且不能出现真实的姓名、校名提示：(l)When did you start learning English?(in./.years ago)(2)How do you learn English?(你是怎样学英语的？)(listen carefully, study with a group, read English every day.)(3)What is difficult to learn?(难学的是什么?listening, grammar.)(4) What other helpful ways

28、 do you know to learn English well?(你知道其他对学英语有帮助的方式有什 么？)(watch English movies, sing English songs.)【答案】My English LearningI like English. I started learning English when I was ten years old. I learn English by listening practice, such as listening to tapes, watching English TV show. It helped me a

29、lot. In fact, there are some more helpful ways to learn English well.For example, I like singing English songs and I want to join an English club.中考链接酹(一)(2022.辽宁丹东,统考中考真题)在动物园里，你遇见了一个外国老爷爷，他想去看熊猫，根据图示,请你为他指出 去熊猫馆的路，文中不得出现真实姓名，校名，地名，词数30词左右.【答案】例文You can walk along the Main Street and turn right at

30、the East Road. You can see a shop on your left. The Panda House is behind the shop. You wont miss it.【详解】1 .题干解读:本文是一篇看图作文.要求根据图片内容，介绍去熊猫馆的路.注意要点齐全,可适当发挥.2.写作指导:写作时要以第二人称来行文，时态用一般现在时.作文要介绍清楚图片中的路线，可使用祈使句指 路.要保证语言连贯,无语法和拼写错误.（二）（2022.辽宁丹东.统考中考真题）假如你是王阳，收到好友Tom的一封邮件,请根据邮件内容进行回复.Dear Wang Yang,Hows it going? I have good news to tell you. Til go to your school as an exchange student. Tm interested in school activities. What activities are there in your school? Can you tell me something about them?Tom写作要求：1 .语言表达准确，语意通顺连贵;2 .书写工整规范；