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1、02记叙文之记事型叙事性的记叙文（Narration）:叙事性的记叙文的主要内容的概括主要抓住记叙文的几个要素：时间、地点、人物、事件和 影响或后果。记叙文的重点在于“述说“和“描写”，因此一篇好的记叙文要叙述条理清楚，描写生动形象。 下面就谈谈英语记叙文的特点和写好记叙文的基本要领。【写作注意事项】记叙文它包括“六大要素”：时间、地点、人物、事件的起因、经过和结果（即when, where, who, why, how, what）。写记叙类文章时应该把这六大要素交代明白,同时还应注意以下三点。（1）叙述方式：主要有顺叙、倒叙和插叙三种，英语记叙文主要以顺叙为主。（2）时态上：记叙文主要记述

2、过去发生的事情，所以常用一般过去时、过去进行时、过 去将来时等时态。（3）人称上：常用第一人称和第三人称。用第一人称表示的是由叙述者亲身经历的事情。 用第三人称是通过作者和读者之外的第三者把故事的具体情节呈现在读者面前。【写作方法】第一段：开门见山，交代事件的大体情况，如时间、地点、人物、事件等；第二段：详细叙述事件发展的过程、原因或结果等；第三段：评价该事件：表明自己的看法、感受等。写好叙事类文章的开头的四种方式1 .”开门见山”式开头一般来说，文章的开头应尽量做到“开门见山”，即要用简单明了的语言引出文章的话 题，使人一开始就能了解文章要说明的内容。对于叙事类的文章，可以在开头把人物、时间

3、、事件和环境交代清楚。如” A Trip to Huangshan（黄山之旅）”的开头可以是：Last month, my family went to Huangshan by train. It took us ten hours to get there. What a long and tiring journey! We were tired but the beautiful scenery excited us.2 .回忆性开头在描述事件或游记类的文章中，采用回忆性的开头往往更能吸引人的眼球。这种类型的 开头中通常含有描述自己心情或情绪的词汇，如never forget（永远无法

4、忘记）、remember （记 得）、unforgettable（难以忘怀的）、exciting（令人激动的）、surprising（令人惊讶的）、sad （难过 的） 如A Trip to Huangshan（黄山之旅）”的开头还以这样写：I will never forget my first trip to Huangshan. 或 It was really an unforgettable experience I had.3 .疑问性开头4 .（2022浙江衢州中考真题）每一次经历都是学习的体验，成长的积淀。近期你校英语社团将举办以“在学习中成长” 为主题的征文活动。请以“T。Le

5、arn, To Grow”为题写一篇英语短文。内容包括:1 .介绍你在文化、艺术、体育等方面的一次活动经历；2 .谈谈你的感受。 注意：1 .文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等信息；2 .词数:90-110；3 .可适当发挥，使内容充实、行文连贯。参考词汇：activity, pleasure, improve, experience【答案】例文To Learn, To GrowEvery experience is a learning experience, and we can always learn something valuable from it.Last term, there

6、was an English speech contest in my school. I decided to take part in it, because I thought I was good at speaking English and I had some experience in giving speeches. I was sure I could win the contest easily, so I spent little time practicing. Did I win? Of course not. The winner was Jim, one of

7、my classmates, who had practiced after school every day.Practice makes perfecf as the saying goes. No one can succeed without hard work. This is what I learned from my failure. If theres another chance, ril take it seriously and do my best.【详解】1 .题干解读：本文要求以“To Learn, To Grow”为题，结合提示内容进行写作。写作 前，可以提前列

8、举出可能需要用到的单词、短语和句型等；写作时注意写作手法要符合英语 的表达方式；写作后注意检查。2.写作指导：这是一篇材料作文，时态以一般现在时和一般过去时为主，在描述过去的经历 时用一般过去时。例文采取三段式的写作手法：第一段引出话题；第二段介绍自己的经历; 第三段描述自己的感受。5. （2022.湖北武汉.中考真题）假如你是李欣，你与Bob叔叔及其家人约定了一起去北京旅行。请你给Bob叔叔写一封英 文电子邮件，告知你的旅行安排。内容要点如下：1.6月30日下午2:00机场见；2 .酒店已预订好，直接前往；3 .第二天观看升旗仪式；4 .游长城，吃北京烤鸭；5 .补充一两点与旅行有关的信息或

9、想法。注意：文中不得透露个人真实姓名和学校；词数6080；开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词 数。参考词汇：book v.预订directly adv.直接地 flag-raising ceremony升旗仪式FROM: | Li XinTO：Uncle BobSUBJECT: The trip planDear Uncle Bob,，Im so glad to hear from you about visiting Beijing. Heres the trip plan.Look forward to meeting all of you in Beijing.Li XinI【答案】例文：De

10、ar Uncle Bob,Im so glad to hear from you about visiting Beijing. Heres the trip plan. Well meet at the airport at 2 p.m. on June 30th. We can go to the hotel directly to have a rest as Ive already booked the rooms. The next day well watch the flag-raising ceremony at Tiananmen Square early in the mo

11、rning. It must be amazing! What about the Great Wall? Its worth visiting and youll be impressed. As for dinner, well have the delicious food, Beijing duck. Honestly, I am getting excited about the trip.Look forward to meeting all of you in Beijing.Li Xin【详解】1 .题干解读：题目要求根据内容要点及参考词汇给Bob叔叔回一封邮件，告知Bob叔叔

12、自己对旅行的安排。2.写作指导：邮件的开头和结尾已给出，写作时要补全正文内容，要以第一人称为主，时态 多用一般将来时。邮件可分为两段式：第一段介绍具体的计划；第二段表达自己的期待。要 做到要点齐全，无单词拼写和语法错误。6 .(2022广西桂林中考真题)图作文：自从2021年党中央颁布“双减”政策以来，孩子们的课余生活变得丰富多彩了。 请看下面这张照片，这是大明一家在公园里度周末时照的。假如你是照片中画画的男孩大明 (Darning),请以“A H叩py Family Day”为题，写一篇英语短文，准备在班里作文课上展示。1 作要求：1.短文要包含照片中的主要内容，可适当发挥，增加一些细节，写

13、成一篇连贯、 通顺的文章；2 .文章80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数；3 .文中不得出现真实的校名和姓名。参考词汇：Family membersActivitiesgrandma, dad, mum, Darning, brother, sistertake pictures/photos 照相paint/draw a picture 画画sit on the grassland 坐在草地上drink/have tea 喝茶ride a bike骑自行车read a book 看书play with (toys/a pet)玩(玩具/宠物)A Happy Family DayHi, eve

14、ryone. Tm Darning. I feel happy because we have lesshomework now.【答案】例文A Happy Family DayHi, everyone. Tm Darning. I feel happy because we have less homework now. So I went to the park with my family last Sunday. Look! This is a picture of my family in the park. My father was taking pictures. My mot

15、her was reading. My grandpa and grandma were sitting on the grass and drinking tea. The little boy who was drawing is me. My brother was riding a bike. My sister was playing with her toys. We enjoyed ourselves in the park.【详解】总体分析题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为看图作文；时态：时态为“一般过去时和过去进行时二提示：写作要点已给出，要求根据图片，结合提示内容进行写作，适当添加

16、细节，并突出 写作重点。写作步骤第一步，表明写作意图。借用“简单介绍周末活动”来引出重点介绍的内容； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。要分别介绍每位家庭成员做了什么； 第三步，书写结语。表达“玩得很开心”的感受。亮点词汇a picture of 一张的照片sit on the grass坐在草地上enjoyed ourselves 玩得开心 高分句型I feel happy because we have less homework now. (because 引导的原因状语从句)The little boy who was drawing is me. (who 引导的定语从句)7 . (2022

17、天津中考真题)假如你是李华，请你给美国笔友David写一封信，讲述你班同学王红回家路上做的一件好事, 并谈谈感受。(1)上周五，一棵树被大风吹倒，挡住了道路。(2)王红看到后，捡起地上的树枝，又去移动树干。(3)树干太沉，她搬不动。(4)人们过来帮忙。(5)你认为参考词汇：被吹倒be blown down挡住block树枝branch树干trunk 要求：(1)词数：80100个。(2)开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。(3)要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。Dear David,How are you? Id like to share a story with you.Last Friday,

18、Do you have a story to tell? Hope to hear from you.Yours,Li Hua【答案】例文Dear David,How are you? Id like to share a story with you.Last Friday, on Wang Hongs way home, she saw a big tree was blown down by wind and it blocked the way. After Wang Hong saw it, she picked up the branches on the ground and t

19、hen moved the trunk again. But the trunk was so heavy that she couldnt move it by herself. When other people saw what she was doing, they were moved by her and came to help her. Finally, they succeeded in moving the trunk away.I think she is a very kind person. And from this story, I learn that we s

20、hould offer to help when someone needs help. It not only helps others, but also makes ourselves happy.Do you have a story to tell? Hope to hear from you.Yours,Li Hua 【详解】L题干解读：本文要求根据题干中的提示内容讲述你班同学王红回家路上做的一件 好事，并谈谈感受，可适当增加细节。2.写作指导：本文以一般过去时为主，人称以第三人称为主第一段和最后一段已给出，第 二段具体描述她做好事的过程；第三段描述自己的感受。写作时运用不同的句式

21、和短语使文 章层次清晰、逻辑清楚，做到无单词拼写和语法错误。学处背范文Writing 1 (2022山东邹城市第H一中学二模)请你根据以下内容提示，以“The Story/Li Hua”为题，为学校广播站英语专栏写文，介绍发 生在你班同学李华身上的一件事。上周五放学后李华乘公交车回家，看到有人在吃橘子，并把橘皮扔在车上；李华把橘皮捡起，放进垃圾桶；乘客用手机拍了照片，发布到网上；老师知道后表扬了李华，李华说这是他应该做的；(5)你觉得参考词汇：橘子皮orange peel；垃圾桶dustbin；发布post；表扬praise；谦虚的humble 要求:词数:80-100词；(2)短文的题目和开

22、头已给出，不计入总词数；要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。The Story of Li HuaLast Friday, when my classmate Li Hua took a bus back home from school,【答案】例文：The Story of Li HuaLast Friday, when my classmate Li Hua took a bus back home from school, he saw that someone was eating an orange. To his surprise, that man just threw the o

23、range peel on the ground after he had it. Without thinking twice, Li Hua picked up the orange peel and threw it into the dustbin directly. All of the process was taken photos and posted on the Internet by a passenger. As a result, our teacher knew his good behavior and praised him because of what he

24、 did on the bus. Li Hua was very humble and said he just did what he should do. We were all impressed by his words.As far as Tm concerned, the man who threw the orange peel around was not a good example, but luckily Li Hua set a good one for us. We are supposed to mind our behaviors and protect the

25、environment around us all the time.【详解】总体分析题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；时态:时态为“一般过去时”;提示：写作要点已部分给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“内容提示”中的过程细节，并且要合理 运用参考词汇。写作步骤第一步，根据提示要点陈述事件发生过程；第二步，表达自己对这件事的看法。亮点词汇as a result结果as far as Im concerned 就我而言高分句型As far as Im concerned, the man who threw the orange peel around was not a good example.（w

26、ho引导的定语从句）All of the process was taken photos and posted on the Internet by a passenger.（般过去时的 被动语态）Writing 2 （2022河北石家庄市第二十八中学二模）体育中考结束了，这对每个同学而言都是一次难忘的经历。请结合以下提示，谈谈你的 收获。提示：1 .What do you learn from the experience?2 .How can they help with your study?参考词汇：health; courage; strong will要求：1.文章包括提示内容并

27、适当发挥；3 .文章中不得涉及真实的人名、校名和地名；4 .词数80个左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。Recently, the P. E. exam has been over.【答案】例文Recently, the P. E. exam has been over. Through this exam, I learned a lot. I used to be fat. I was tired when I ran. But for the exam, I exercise with my friends every day. After half a years efforts, I

28、 am very healthy now. And Im not tired at all. I like running and sports very much. It also makes me understand that as long as I work hard, there is nothing I cant do. And through exercise, I can sleep well every day and I can have enough energy to study the next day. My learning efficiency has als

29、o improved. In the future, no matter how busy I am, I will actively exercise.【详解】总体分析题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；时态：时态为“一般现在时”； 提示：根据所给英文问题提示介绍你体育中考的经历以及你的收获。写作步骤第一步，介绍你从这次的经历中学到了什么；第二步，介绍这次的经历对你的学习有什么帮助。亮点词汇used to be过去是not.at all 一点也不make sb do sth使某人做某事高分句型It also makes me understand that as long as I work

30、 hard, there is nothing I cant do.（that 弓导的 宾语从句和as long as引导的条件状语从句）In the future, no matter how busy I am, I will actively exercise. （no matter how 弓I 导的让步,犬 语从句）Writing 3 （2022- ill 东济宁二模）艺术陶冶情操，涵养生命。你喜欢的艺术形式是什么，有过怎样的经历，用英语写一篇短文。注意：1 .词数90左右，短文开头已给出2 .表达中请勿提及真实校名及姓名。Art plays an important role in

31、 our life.【答案】例文Art is an important part of our life. My favourite art is making kites.According to my grandparents, I looked forward to flying. One year, my grandfather made a kite for me. That made me quite excited. When I held a line to let my kite fly into the sky, I knew my dream of fliying cam

32、e true.As Im growing older, I will leave my parents. But I know the line is still in my parents hand. With them behind me, I can fly farther and farther.Art teaches us a lot. It makes our life rich and colourful.【详解】总体分析题材：本文是一篇记叙文；时态：采用一般现在时和一般过去时；提示：根据图片内容，阐述自己最喜欢的艺术以及怎样的经历。写作步骤第一步，阐述自己最喜欢的艺术形式；第二

33、步，阐述自己的经历； 第三步，总结艺术的魅力。 亮点词汇look forward to 期盼；make sb adj.使某人；come true实现高分句型When I held a line to let my kite fly into the sky, I knew my dream of fliying came true, （when 引导时间状语）With them behind me, I can fly farther and farther, （with 复合结构）Writing 4 （2022山东聊城三模）请根据以下提示以“Experience”为题介绍Jim的经历。主要内

34、容包括：吉姆现在和他的爸爸住在埃及(Egypt),他去过埃及的许多地方，他已经学 了一点阿拉伯语(Arabic)。一周前他爸爸的公司要求他回美国工作，吉姆很高兴。注意：1 .词数：80词左右。2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯，但短文中不能出现真实的人名、地名。3 .字迹工整，语言流畅。【答案】范文：ExperienceJim lives in Egypt now, because his father works there.Jim has visited many places in Egypt. For example, he has seen the Pyramids and has

35、visited the ancien palaces of the kings and queens of Egypt. Jim has learnt a little Arabic, and when he speaks it, he often mixes it with German, French and Chinese. But he feels really funny.The company asked Jims father to return to the United States to work one week ago. Jim is very happy about

36、this. He is counting down the days.【详解】总体分析题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文。时态：时态为“一般过去时和一般现在时”。提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示内容，适当增加细节描写，使行文连贯。 写作步骤第一步，介绍吉姆和爸爸住在埃及；第二步，介绍吉姆在埃及的生活经历；第三步，介绍吉姆爸爸公司要求他回美国工作的事情。亮点词汇a little 一点mixwith与混合count down倒数高分句型Jim lives in Egypt now, because his father works there. （because 引导的原因状语从句）

37、when he speaks it, he often mixes it with German, French and Chinese, （when 引导的时间状语在叙事类或论述性的文章中，都可采用疑问型开头，这样既可以吸引阅卷者的注意又容 易抓住中心。如Planting Trees（种树）”的开头可以是：Have you ever planted trees? Dont you think planting trees is .再如“ Traveling Abroad（出国之旅）”的开头可 以是：If you have an opportunity to travel abroad, wh

38、y not consider Singapore?4 .倒叙式开头在有的文章，特别是叙事类的文章中，可以采用倒叙的写作手法，先写出事件的结果, 再陈述过程。如Catching Thieves （捉贼）”的开头可以这样写:I lay in bed in the hospital. I smiled at my friends even though my legs hurt. Do you want to know what happened to me? Let me tell you. Its a . story.典例赏析：（2022新疆中考真题）初中生活即将结束，静坐在考场中的你，回想三年

39、的学习和生活，一定有许多事情给你 留下美好的记忆，请选择一件你最难忘的事情写一篇短文。例如：1 .一次难忘的旅行2 .一次难忘的比赛3 .一次难忘的志愿服务 要求：1.语句通顺，意思连贯，内容详实，语法正确，书写规范；4 .文中不得出现真实人名、校名：5 .词数：80-120,开头已给出，开头及标点符号不计入总词数。Looking back at these past three years, I had a lot of sweet memories.【答案】例文Looking back at these past three years, I had a lot of sweet memo

40、ries.Last summer vacation, I decided to learn to swim. At first, I was afraid of swimming in the从句）Writing 5 （2022.山东临沂.二模）童话是人类文化的瑰宝，一直深受孩子们的喜爱，你读过哪一些呢？最喜欢哪一个？请以 “My favorite story/storybook”为题，根据以下提示，把你印象最深的用英语写一篇不少于80 词的短文。提示:1. Whafs the name of it?2. Whafs the story about?3. Why do you like it?

41、要求：1 .语言通顺，条理清楚，书写规范；2.文中不要出现任何真实人名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。My Favorite【答案】例文My favorite storyI love reading and I have read many books. My favorite story is The Three Little Pigs.There were three little pigs in the story. They built their own houses. The first built a straw house. The second built a woode

42、n house. The third built a brick house. Then a wolf hit the straw house and the wooden house. But he couldnt hit the brick house because it was very strong. At last, the three pigs killed the wolf.This is my favorite story, because it is interesting and it teaches us to be hard-working. There are al

43、so many colorful pictures in the book.【详解】总体分析题材：本文是一篇记叙文；时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”； 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，以第三人称为主。写作步骤第一步，介绍最喜欢的故事的名字； 第二步，具体阐述这个故事的内容； 第三步，最后是叙述喜欢的原因。亮点词汇There be 有At last最后teach sb to do sth教某人做某事高分句型 But he couldnt hit the brick house because it was very strong, （because 弓| 导原因状语从句） T

44、his is my favorite story, because it is interesting and it teaches us to be hard-working.（because 引导原因状语从句，and连接两个并列句）Writing 6 （2022,辽宁辽阳一模）良好的运动习惯是生活的重要组成部分。请你根据以下内容要点提示，以“Sports Make Me Strong and Energetic”为题，写一篇短文，可以适当发挥。1）每天早晨6: 30按时起床，运动半小时，晚饭后运动一小时左右；2）骑自行车或步行上下学；3）主动上体育课，积极参加课外活动；4）身体强健，精力充

45、沛，保持运动习惯。要求：开头部分已给出，不计入总词数；内容合理，要点齐全，句子及篇章结构正确连 贯，书写规范；不得出现姓名校名等个人信息。Sports Make Me Strong and EnergeticEverybody, men or women, young or old, should have a good habit of doing sports. As teenagers, we should play sports often.【答案】例文Sports Make Me Strong and EnergeticEverybody, men or women, young o

46、r old, should have a good habit of doing sports. As teenagers, we should play sports often.In the morning, I usually get up at 6:30 on time, and do morning exercises for half an hour. After breakfast, I ride or walk to school, which is also a kind of exercise. In the school, I take an active part in

47、 PE. Sometimes we play football or volleyball, and sometimes we play basketball, table tennis or badminton. Football is my favorite sport. I also take part in some after-class activities. I have never been absent from them. In the evening after supper, I often take a walk along the street near my house for an hour either with my parents or with my friends.I like sports, which makes me healthy, strong and energetic. So I often get the first prize in the sc