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1、七年级英语下册Module 5写作指导【写作目标】用英语写一篇短文，说明超市购物的利弊。【写作任务】你班下节英语口语课的话题是“超市购物的利弊”。请你用英语写一篇短文，为英语口语课做准备。【指点迷津】本次写作任务要求用英语写一篇短文说明超市购物的利弊，其写作要点如下：(1) 内容：首先总体概述超市购物；然后分别从其优点和缺点两个方面具体阐述；最后总结全文，表达自己对超市购物的感受。(2) 人称：以第二人称和第三人称为主。(3) 时态：一般现在时。(4) 文体：说明文。【谋篇布局】总体概述(1) 超市购物不难。你需要选择你购物清单上的东西。你为它们付钱之后就可以把它们带回家。Supermarke

2、t shopping is not difficult.You need to _ _ _ on your shopping list.You can take themhome after you pay for them具体阐述优缺点(2) 超市购物有一些优点。你可以看见产品。你可以邀请你的朋友们和你一起购物。你在超市付款安全。There are some advantages of supermarket shopping.You can _ _ _.You can invite your friends toshop with you.Its safe for you to pay a

3、t the supermarket.(3) 超市购物也有一些缺点。你无法随时购物。有时你需要排队等很长时间才能付钱。There are some disadvantages of supermarket shopping.You cant shop _ _ _.Sometimes you haveto wait in line for a long time to pay.表达感受我认为在超市购物有趣。I think shopping at a supermarket is fun.【巧衔接】在对超市购物进行总体概述时，可用表示顺序的词 first 和then来衔接。在介绍超市购物的优点时，可

4、用表示列举的词 first、second和third来衔接。在介绍完超市购物的优点要引出缺点时，可用 but来衔接，使文章过渡自然、行文连贯。【连句成文】同学们，根据【谋篇布局】的练习，赶快动笔完成这篇短文吧！【收藏夹】A 超市中常见商品的英文表达fruit:apples, bananas, lemons, strawberries.vegetables: carrots,potatoes.meat and seafood:beef, chicken,mutton(羊肉), fish,prawns(虾).dairy(乳制品):milk, ice cream,yoghurt(酸奶) .snack

5、s(零食):chocolate,biscuits, candies.drinks:cola,juice,coffee.household items(家居用品):toilet paper(卫生纸),garbage(垃圾)bags.B 店铺促销活动的英文表达10% offAll beef has 10% off.牛肉全部打九折。half offThe fruit is half off.水果打五折。a20% discountWe can give you a20% discount.我们可以给您八折优惠。buy one get one freeThis week for all hamburge

6、rs buy one get one free!这周所有的汉堡包都是买一送一！half priceDrinks are sold at half price at weekends.周末饮品半价。【小试身手】假如你叔叔在北京某住宅区附近开了一家名为Star Supermarket的超市，为了吸引更多外国顾客的光顾，请帮他用英语写一则促销广告。Sale!答案：【谋篇布局】(1) choose the things(2) see the products(3) at any time【连句成文】Supermarket shopping is not difficult.First, youneed

7、 to choose the things on your shopping list.Thenyou can take them home after you pay forthem.There are some advantages of supermarketshopping.First, you can see the products.Second, you can invite your friends to shop withyou.Third, its safe for you to pay at thesupermarket.Butthere are some disadva

8、ntages ofsupermarket shopping.You cant shop at anytime.Sometimes you have to wait in line for along time to pay.I think shopping at a supermarket is fun.【小试身手】One possible version:Sale!Come and buy at the Star Supermarket!Everything here is on sale! Do you need to buyvegetables? We have many kinds of vegetables,such as potatoes and carrots.They all have 20%off.Do you want to buy seafood like prawns? Wegive you a 30% discount.How much is a bag oftoilet paper? Only 10yuan!All things here are at a good price.We arewaiting for you to shop here!2