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1、八年级英语下册易考作文讲解Unit 1请假条【写作任务】假如你是孙菲，在美国上中学。你感冒了，不能上学，想请两天假(星期二和星期三)。请你给Miss Brighton写一张请假条，说明自己的情况。词数70左右。参考词汇：病假sick leave_【思路点拨】1.审题：(1)本写作任务要求写一张请假条，属于应用文。请假条的格式和书信的格式很相似，通常包括日期、称呼、正文、结束语、签名等。(2)正文部分重点阐述请假的原因，具有一定的发挥空间。(3)对自己病情的描述要真实具体，语气要诚恳。2.布局：写请假条时要做到开门见山，内容简短，用词通俗易懂。开头(称呼)Dear Miss Brighton正文

2、(首先阐述请假的原因，其次谈谈病好后的打算)Im sorry to tell you that .I caught a cold .to help me with .结尾(结束语、签名)Thank you .【学生习作】Tuesday morningDear Miss Brighton,Im sorry to tell you that I cant go to school today and tomorrow.I caught a bad cold last night, which caused a fever and a terrible headache.My mother took

3、 me to see the doctor this morning.The doctor said I had to take some medicine and stay in bed for days.Now Im writing to ask for two days sick leave.Im sorry to miss your classes, and I will ask my friend Lucy to help me later.Thank you.Yours,Sun Fei【习作点评】1.文章格式正确，表述得体，语气委婉，是一篇优秀的写作范例。2.作者按照任务要求告知老

4、师自己需要请假，并陈述请假理由，合情合理。在陈述理由时，作者适当增加了一些细节，增强了文章的可读性。正文中包括请假后找朋友帮忙补上所缺的课程，由此可看出作者学习态度端正，同时也更加反衬其态度的恳切。3.行文中作者恰当地使用了复合句，如which引导的非限制性定语从句，提升了语言的表达档次。Unit 2志愿者自荐信【写作任务】(Section B 3b)某养老院正在招募一批志愿者。假如你是Bob，你想成为其中的一员，请你给该服务机构写一封自荐信。【思路点拨】1.定基调体裁：应用文(自荐信)；信的主体部分为说明文时态：一般现在时人称：第一人称2.谋布局、写句子3.巧衔接本文要求写一封自荐信。在写个

5、人优势时，我们可用Im .和I can .的平行结构，这是一种很好的衔接手段，这样能使文章节奏匀称，紧致。4.成篇章Dear Sir or Madam,_ _Yours truly,Bob答案2.谋布局、写句子(1) I would like to stay with old people(2) I can look after / care for them well(3) Im good at telling stories and jokes(4) I can do / wash the dishes and clean rooms(5) Im free to be a voluntee

6、r4.成篇章Dear Sir or Madam,Im writing to you about volunteering in your old peoples home.I would like to stay with old people.Imin good health andImvery strong, soI canlook after them well.Imkind and outgoing, soI canget on well with them.I want to help out as a volunteer in your old peoples home becau

7、seImgood with old people.Imgood at telling stories and jokes.Imstrong in giving performances.I canwash the dishes and clean rooms and so on.I canuse different ways to cheer them up.Imfree to be a volunteer on weekends and during the holidays, so I think I am right for this job.Yours truly,BobUnit 3写

8、作导引【写作任务】(Section B 3b)杂志Sunday Mail就“孩子在家应不应该做家务”这个话题征集稿件。请你写一篇英语短文向该杂志投稿。【思路点拨】1.定基调体裁：议论文时态：一般现在时人称：第一人称和第三人称2.谋布局、写句子3.巧衔接本文在表明观点后，需要阐述支撑观点的理由，为此，我们可以先用Here are three reasons来承上启下，使文章过渡自然。然后具体的理由可以用first, second, third来衔接，以使行文条理清晰、紧密相连。4.成篇章Dear Sir or Madam,_ _Yours truly,Eric答案2.谋布局、写句子(1) the

9、y will be very tired(2) its unfair for parents to do all the housework(3) they should clean their bedrooms or make their beds(4) can also help (to) develop childrens independence4.成篇章Dear Sir or Madam,I think children should do chores at home.Here are three reasons.First, parents work hard outside a

10、nd if they do all the housework at home, they will be very tired.Second, children live in one house with their parents, so its unfair for parents to do all the housework.At least, children should do simple chores.For example, they should clean their bedrooms or make their beds.Third, doing chores ca

11、n help to develop childrens spirit of working hard and it can also help to develop childrens independence.Its good for their future.So I believe that children should do chores at home.Yours truly,EricUnit 4【写作任务】某杂志就“孩子该不该上课外班”对几位家长进行了采访，他们都同意孩子上，你对此持什么态度呢？假如你是Tom，请你向该杂志写一封信表达你的观点。【思路点拨】1.定基调体裁：应用文(

12、书信)；信的主体部分为议论文时态：一般现在时人称：第一人称和第三人称2.谋布局、写句子3.巧衔接本文表达自己的观点时，可以用同义表达in my opinion, I think和I believe，这样既避免重复又能使文笔生动。4.成篇章Dear Sir or Madam,_Yours truly,Tom答案2.谋布局、写句子(1) taking after-school classes(2) childrens health and happiness are more important(3) I dont think parents should push their children

13、so hard(4) They should give their children enough time to relax(5) how to learn4.成篇章Dear Sir or Madam, Idontthinkthat children should take after-school classes. Most parents hope that their children can improve their grades by taking after-schoolclasses but they dont realize their children can get g

14、ood grades by listening to the teacher carefully in class and finding a good way of learning. Learning from a young age is important butin my opinion, childrens health and happiness are more important.Idontthinkparents should push their children so hard.They should give them enough time to relax.Chi

15、ldren need to be successful but they also need to be happy. All in all, to be a successful person,I believehow to learn and how to be a happy learner are more important than taking after-school classes.Yours truly,TomUnit 5写作导引【写作任务】(Section B 3b)在生活中，一定有重大的事件让你难以忘怀，该事件发生时你身在何处，正在做什么。请你用英语写一篇短文描述当时的

16、情景。【思路点拨】1. 定基调体裁：记叙文2. 时态：过去进行时和一般过去时3. 人称：第一人称和第三人称2.谋布局、写句子3.巧衔接 简述重大事件发生时用一般过去时作为背景，介绍事件发生时你和家人的活动时用过去进行时，这两种时态的配合建立起上下文的逻辑联系。4.成篇章An important event that I remember well was_答案:2.谋布局、写句子(1) It happened on August 8th, 2017(2) some people lost their lives(3) I was watching TV in the living room(4

17、) while Mom was making dumplings(5) my good friend Daming and his family were taking vacations(6) I kept calling Daming4.成篇章An important event that I remember well wasJiuzhaigou Earthquake.It happenedon August 8th, 2017.During the earthquake many peoplewere hurtand some peoplelosttheir lives.When I

18、heard the news of the earthquake, Iwas watchingTV in the living room.My dad and mom were at home, too.Dadwas readingbooks while Momwas makingdumplings.I remember this event well because my good friend Daming and his family were taking vacations in Jiuzhaigou.I was worried about them.I kept calling h

19、im.When I heard that they were alive and safe, I was very excited.Unit 6写作导引【写作任务】班里进行英语写作比赛，要求将小红帽的故事用英语写出来。请写一篇短文参加比赛。【思路点拨】1. 定基调体裁：记叙文2. 时态：一般过去时3. 人称:第三人称2.谋布局、写句子3.巧衔接讲述故事时，可按照时间顺序展开。如可用表示时间的词语once upon a time, one day引入故事；用when, then, as soon as叙述故事的发展；用in the end引出故事的结尾。这些词语的使用使故事情节紧凑、脉络清晰。4

20、.成篇章_答案2.谋布局、写句子(1) She went to see Grandma alone(2) The wolf was so hungry that he wanted to eat the girl and her grandma(3) he put on Grandmas clothes and lay in her bed(4) He shot the wolf4.成篇章Once upon a time, there was a girl called Little Red Riding Hood.One dayher grandma was sick.Her mom was

21、 very busy.She went to see Grandma alone.Whenshe was walking in the forest, she met a wolf.She didnt know he was bad.She told him about Grandma.The wolf was so hungry that he wanted to eat the girl and her grandma.Thenthe wolf came up with an idea.He asked the girl to pick flowers for Grandma while

22、he went to Grandmas house to eat her.After that, he put on Grandmas clothes and lay in her bed.As soon asLittle Red Riding Hood arrived, the wolf suddenly caught her and ate her.In the end, a hunter passed by and saw this.He shot the wolf and saved Little Red Riding Hood and Grandma.Unit 7写作指导【写作任务】

23、(SectionB3b)鲸是生活在海洋里的一种大型动物，但它的一些种类已濒临灭绝。请写一篇短文介绍鲸并呼吁人们保护鲸。【思路点拨】1.定基调体裁：说明文时态：一般现在时人称:第三人称2.谋布局、写句子3.巧衔接(1)本文介绍鲸时，重点从它的体型、种类、特征三方面进行，这是通过语义相关的方式使全文语义具有明显的统一性和连贯性。(2)介绍鲸的特征时用到了平行结构One interesting fact is that .Another interesting fact is that .这样可以使行文整齐、有序。4.成篇章_答案2.谋布局、写句子(1) They look like fish bu

24、t they are not fish(2) The longest whale is more than thirty meters long(3) whales can jump very high out of the water(4) Now some kinds of whales are in danger(5) not putting rubbish into the sea4.成篇章Whales live in oceans.They are very huge animals.They look like fish but they are not fish.The long

25、est whale is more than thirty meters long.There are about ninety-eight kinds of whales in the world.One interesting fact is thatwhales can jump very high out of the water.Another interesting fact is thatthey can “talk” to each other with a high noise.Now some kinds of whales are in danger because pe

26、ople kill them for their meat, fat and oil.Whales are also in danger from water pollution.I think we should learn more about whales and protect whales by making laws on whale protection and by not putting rubbish into the sea.Unit 8你最喜欢的歌手【写作任务】 (SectionB3b)请你写一篇英语短文，介绍一下你最喜欢的歌手。【思路点拨】1. 定基调体裁：说明文 时

27、态：一般现在时和现在完成时人称：第一人称和第三人称2.谋布局、写句子3.巧衔接在介绍自己最喜欢的歌手的成长经历时可按时间顺序介绍，比如文中用到了in 1987，that time, in 1989, ever since then这些表示时间的词语，这样使行文脉络清晰。4.成篇章_答案2.谋布局、写句子(1) He is an American country music singer(2) has been one of the most popular musicians(3) He has sold more than 170 million records(4) his songs a

28、re full of feelings(5) When I listen to his songs, I always feel happy4.成篇章My favorite singer is Garth Brooks.He is an American country music singer.In 1987, Garth Brooks came to Nashville.That timehe wasnt popular.In 1989, his first album came out and it enjoyed great success.Ever since then, Garth

29、 Brooks has been famous and has been one of the most popular musicians in America.He has sold more than 170 million records.I like Garth Brooks music because his songs are full of feelings.They remind me of the best things in life friends, family, the beauty of nature and the countryside.When I list

30、en to his songs, I always feel happy and full of energy.Unit9介绍你游览过的一个地方【写作任务】(Section B 3b)请写一篇英语短文介绍你游览过的一个地方。【思路点拨】1.定基调体裁：说明文时态：以一般现在时为主人称：第二人称和第三人称2.谋布局、写句子3.巧衔接(1)介绍一个地方时，通常是从概况(包括位置、面积、历史、人口和天气)、景点和美食这几个方面介绍，这是通过语义相关联的方式来实现全文连贯。(2)本文介绍悉尼时，开始用名词Sydney，后面提到时可以用人称代词it和地点指代词there与前文进行照应，这也是使文章保持连

31、贯的一种衔接手段。4.成篇章_答案2.谋布局、写句子(1) is a good place to take a holiday(2) a population of about five million(3) its the best time to visit it(4) Therere many interesting places to visit(5) you can try lots of good seafood4.成篇章Ive been toSydney.It is a good place to take a holiday.Sydneyis on the east coast

32、 ofAustralia.Its about 12,367.7 km2in size.Itis a young country with over 200 years history and a population of about five million.Sydneyhas four seasons.Its coldest month is usually July.Its warmest month is usually January so its the best time to visitit.Therere many interesting places to visit su

33、ch as the Sydney Opera House andBondiBeach.Sydneyis also a good place to eat delicious food.There, you can find food from around the world.And you can try lots of good seafood.If you like traveling, you should gothere.You can try new foods and have lots of fun.Unit 10【写作任务】(Section B 3b)请用英语写一篇短文介绍你

34、童年时候最喜欢的一件物品。【思路点拨】1. 定基调体裁：记叙文时态：一般过去时、一般现在时和现在完成时人称:以第一人称为主2.谋布局、写句子3.巧衔接文中说明喜欢的原因时，用到了平行结构I like .because .，运用这样的衔接手段使得行文整齐、紧凑。4.成篇章My favorite thing from childhood is_答案2.谋布局、写句子(1) Ive had it for 12 years(2) it can make sounds(3) The toy bear has given me many sweet memories(4) They hardly had

35、time to stay with me(5) it was talking to me4.成篇章My favorite thing from childhood isa toy bear.Ive had it for 12 years.My grandma gave it to me when I was three.I likemy toy bear so muchbecauseits beautiful and it can make sounds.I likeit alsobecauseit was my third birthday gift from my grandma.The

36、toy bear has given me many sweet memories.I remember when I was seven, my parents were busy.They hardly had time to stay with me.My grandma went toBeijingto help my aunt look after her baby.During that time I was often alone at home but I didnt feel lonely because I felt like it was talking to me when it was making sounds.I want to say thanks to my toy bear.I love it and will keep it forever!10