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1、天空英语工作室天空英语工作室续写接话的构思与设计续写接话的构思与设计天空英语工作室天空英语工作室/112第一部分第一部分微观技巧概述微观技巧概述天空英语工作室天空英语工作室/113技巧1用副词显现做出动作反应时的时间特征等用副词显现做出动作反应时的时间特征等例如：(2016.10浙江卷)Para1：But no more helicopters came and it was getting dark again.Immediately,an absolute darkness ruled the forest.【分析】用时间时间副词承接所给首句中的“it getting dark again

2、”，同时衔接后文的环境描写“the darkness ruled the forest”。副词衔接自然、顺畅。天空英语工作室天空英语工作室/114技巧2用形容词（短语）凸显人物的情感情绪用形容词（短语）凸显人物的情感情绪例如：（1）(2016.10浙江卷)Para 1:But no more helicopters came and it was getting dark again.Desperate and hopeless,Jane knelt down,tears streaming down her face.【分析】用形容词短语“Desperate and hopeless”凸显了

3、人物的情绪状态，与后面的动作“knelt down”一起再现了情境中的人物的精神状态。天空英语工作室天空英语工作室/115技巧2用形容词（短语）凸显人物的情感情绪用形容词（短语）凸显人物的情感情绪例如：（2）(2016.10浙江卷)Para 2:It was daybreak when Jane woke up.Weak as she was,she struggled to her feet,continuing searching for assistance.【分析】用“状态形容词+as/though 引导的倒装句”结构体现了人物早上起来后的精神状态。天空英语工作室天空英语工作室/116

4、技巧2用形容词（短语）凸显人物的情感情绪用形容词（短语）凸显人物的情感情绪例如：（3）(2018.06浙江卷)Para 1:Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse.Afraid that I might hurt the lovely small creature,I automatically let out a cry to stop my horse.【分析】用“情绪形容词+从句”结构阐释了人物见到兔子后的心理反应。天空英语工作室天空英语工作室/117技巧2用形容词（短语）凸显人物的情感情绪用形容词（短语）凸显人物

5、的情感情绪例如：（4）(2018.06浙江卷)Para 2:We had no idea where we were and it got dark.Exhausted and hungry,I wondered if we could find our way back.【分析】用并列的表示心理状态的形容词，体现了人物心力交瘁的状态。天空英语工作室天空英语工作室/118技巧3用分词（短语）体现人物的心理变化等用分词（短语）体现人物的心理变化等例如：（1）(2016.10浙江卷)Para1:But no more helicopters came and it was getting dark

6、 again.Feeling disappointed,Jane had to stay alone for another night.【分析】用“现在分词+情绪形容词”结构体现了人物失望的心理状态。天空英语工作室天空英语工作室/119技巧3用分词（短语）体现人物的心理变化等用分词（短语）体现人物的心理变化等例如：（2）(2016.10浙江卷)Para 2:It was daybreak when Jane woke up.Feeling refreshed,she continued to walk along the stream to find the way out.【分析】用“现在

7、分词+状态形容词”结构传递了人物早上醒来后的精神状态。天空英语工作室天空英语工作室/1110技巧4用直接引语增强情境效果用直接引语增强情境效果例如：(2017.06浙江卷)Para 1:The car abruptly stopped in front of him.Get into the car.Paul shouted at Mac.【分析】用含有祈使句的直接引语与首句提示中的“abruptly stopped”形成呼应，进一步烘托了紧张的情境。天空英语工作室天空英语工作室/1111技巧5添加背景描写以烘托场景添加背景描写以烘托场景例如：(2017.11浙江卷)Para 2:We dro

8、ve through several states and saw lots of great sights along the way.I looked out of the car window,winding rivers,lofty mountains,sunny beaches and deep valleys holding me entirely in their fascination.【分析】用“视觉+环境描写+拟人修辞”结构与首句提示语中的“lots of great sights”遥相呼应，再现了美丽风景对视觉的冲击效果。天空英语工作室天空英语工作室/1112技巧6引入新

9、动作创造新的情境引入新动作创造新的情境例如：(2017.11浙江卷)Para 1:The next day we remembered the brand-new tent we had brought with us.Dad exchanged a glance with me.Why not camp to satisfy Mom?【分析】用“动作描写+问句衔接”结构承接首句提示语创造了一个新的情境，即“露营”。天空英语工作室天空英语工作室/1113技巧7借助声音效果增强描写功效借助声音效果增强描写功效例如：BOOM,CRASH!The wind was howling outside o

10、f my house.We were having a terrible thunder storm.I was very scared.【分析】用“howling”这一声效进一步拓展了首句所设定的情境效果。天空英语工作室天空英语工作室/1114技巧8用疑问句引出新的话题或对事件的新的看法用疑问句引出新的话题或对事件的新的看法例如：Why does trouble always follow me around?Do I have a kick me sign on my back or something?【分析】用一般疑问句承接首句的特殊疑问句，进一步凸显了作者对“trouble”的看法。

11、天空英语工作室天空英语工作室/1115第二部分第二部分实战演练示例实战演练示例天空英语工作室天空英语工作室阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。A MOTHERS DAY SURPRISE The twins were filled with excitement as they thought of the surprise they were planning for Mothers Day.How pleased and proud Mother would be when they brought her breakfast in bed.They

12、planned to make French toast and chicken porridge.They had watched their mother in the kitchen.There was nothing to it.Jenna and Jeff knew exactly what to do.The big day came at last.The alarm rang at 6 a.m.The pair went down the stairs quietly to the kitchen.They decided to boil the porridge first.

13、They put some rice into a pot of water and left it to boil while they made the French toast.Jeff broke two eggs into a plate and added in some milk.Jenna found the bread and put two slices into the egg mixture.Next,Jeff turned on the second stove burner to heat up the frying pan.Everything was going

14、 smoothly until Jeff started frying the bread.The pan was too hot and the bread turned black within seconds.Jenna threw the burnt piece into the sink and put in the other slice of bread.This time,she turned down the fire so it cooked nicely.Then Jeff noticed steam shooting out of the pot and the lid

15、 starting to shake.The next minute,the porridge boiled over and put out the fire.Jenna panicked.Thankfully,Jeff stayed calm and turned off the gas quickly.But the stove was a mess now.Jenna told Jeff to clean it up so they could continue to cook the rest of the porridge.But Jeffs hand touched the ho

16、t burner and he gave a cry of pain.Jenna made him put his hand in cold water.Then she caught the smell of burning.Oh dear!The piece of bread in the pan had turned black as well.注意：1.续写词数应为 150 左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。As the twins looked around them in disappointment,their father appeared The twins ca

17、rried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up.试题再现 It took place in a teachers family.One day,Ben was playing basketball in the living room after school,when he accidentally threw the ball at a vase sitting on the shelf.The vase dropped to the floor and a large piece broke off.What made Ben

18、more upset was that the vase was not a common decoration but an antique,which was handed down through generations from the 18th century.It was also his mothers favourite possession.To cover his terrible action,the terrified boy glued the pieces together hastily(匆忙地)and put the vase back to its place

19、.As the mother herself dusted the vase every day,she naturally noticed the cracks(裂纹)that evening.To her surprise,the repair work was actually very good.At dinner time,she asked her boy if he broke the vase.Fearing punishment,the suddenly inspired boy said that a neighbours cat jumped in from the wi

20、ndow and he couldnt drive it away no matter how hard he tried.It raced around the living room and finally knocked the vase off its shelf.His mother was quite clear that her son was lying,for all the windows were closed before she left for work each morning and opened after she returned.However,in th

21、e face of her sons nervous eyes and the suspicious(表示怀疑的)looks of the other family members,Bens mother remained calm.She realized she shouldnt just simply blame and punish her son for lying.She came up with another idea.Before going to bed,the boy found a note from his mother in his room,asking him

22、to go to the study at once.The boy thought he would no w be punished but,as he had already lied,he was determined to deny everything to the end,no matter how angry his mum became.In the study,calmly bathed in the light,his mothers face showed no sign of anger.On seeing her son push open the door and

23、 cautiously enter,she took a chocolate box out of a drawer and gave him one.注意：注意：1.续写词数应为 150 左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。The mother said,“This chocolate is a reward for your imagination:a window-opening cat!”_ Now with some chocolates in hand,the boys bad attitude disappeared._阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，

24、使之构成一篇完整的短文。阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。天空英语工作室天空英语工作室阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。A MOTHERS DAY SURPRISE The twins were filled with excitement as they thought of the surprise they were planning for Mothers Day.How pleased and proud Mother would be when they brought her breakfast in

25、 bed.They planned to make French toast and chicken porridge.They had watched their mother in the kitchen.There was nothing to it.Jenna and Jeff knew exactly what to do.The big day came at last.The alarm rang at 6 a.m.The pair went down the stairs quietly to the kitchen.They decided to boil the porri

26、dge first.They put some rice into a pot of water and left it to boil while they made the French toast.Jeff broke two eggs into a plate and added in some milk.Jenna found the bread and put two slices into the egg mixture.Next,Jeff turned on the second stove burner to heat up the frying pan.Everything

27、 was going smoothly until Jeff started frying the bread.The pan was too hot and the bread turned black within seconds.Jenna threw the burnt piece into the sink and put in the other slice of bread.This time,she turned down the fire so it cooked nicely.Then Jeff noticed steam shooting out of the pot a

28、nd the lid starting to shake.The next minute,the porridge boiled over and put out the fire.Jenna panicked.Thankfully,Jeff stayed calm and turned off the gas quickly.But the stove was a mess now.Jenna told Jeff to clean it up so they could continue to cook the rest of the porridge.But Jeffs hand touc

29、hed the hot burner and he gave a cry of pain.Jenna made him put his hand in cold water.Then she caught the smell of burning.Oh dear!The piece of bread in the pan had turned black as well.注意：1.续写词数应为 150 左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。As the twins looked around them in disappointment,their father appeared Th

30、e twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up.理解材料根据你对原材料的理解，判断以下表述是正确（根据你对原材料的理解，判断以下表述是正确（T）还是错误（）还是错误（F）。）。1.Ben broke the vase that had been in the family for hundreds of years.2.An antique specialist did a perfect job at repairing the vase.3.Bens mother was so angry that she p

31、unished him for lying.TFF天空英语工作室天空英语工作室阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。A MOTHERS DAY SURPRISE The twins were filled with excitement as they thought of the surprise they were planning for Mothers Day.How pleased and proud Mother would be when they brought her breakfast in bed.They planned to mak

32、e French toast and chicken porridge.They had watched their mother in the kitchen.There was nothing to it.Jenna and Jeff knew exactly what to do.The big day came at last.The alarm rang at 6 a.m.The pair went down the stairs quietly to the kitchen.They decided to boil the porridge first.They put some

33、rice into a pot of water and left it to boil while they made the French toast.Jeff broke two eggs into a plate and added in some milk.Jenna found the bread and put two slices into the egg mixture.Next,Jeff turned on the second stove burner to heat up the frying pan.Everything was going smoothly unti

34、l Jeff started frying the bread.The pan was too hot and the bread turned black within seconds.Jenna threw the burnt piece into the sink and put in the other slice of bread.This time,she turned down the fire so it cooked nicely.Then Jeff noticed steam shooting out of the pot and the lid starting to s

35、hake.The next minute,the porridge boiled over and put out the fire.Jenna panicked.Thankfully,Jeff stayed calm and turned off the gas quickly.But the stove was a mess now.Jenna told Jeff to clean it up so they could continue to cook the rest of the porridge.But Jeffs hand touched the hot burner and h

36、e gave a cry of pain.Jenna made him put his hand in cold water.Then she caught the smell of burning.Oh dear!The piece of bread in the pan had turned black as well.注意：1.续写词数应为 150 左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。As the twins looked around them in disappointment,their father appeared The twins carried the brea

37、kfast upstairs and woke their mother up.理解材料阅读完材料，试着完成下面的故事山吧！阅读完材料，试着完成下面的故事山吧！Mother told Ben the chocolate was a reward for his imagination 1.OpeningBen accidentally broke his mothers favorite antique vase,but he glued the pieces together.Mother noticed the cracks and asked Ben about them.Ben lie

38、d and blamed the neighbours cat for the accident.Mother asked Ben to go to the study and gave him a piece of chocolate.Bens bad attitude disappeared 2.Build-up3.Climax4.Resolution5.Ending天空英语工作室天空英语工作室阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。A MOTHERS DAY SURPRISE The twins were filled with excitement a

39、s they thought of the surprise they were planning for Mothers Day.How pleased and proud Mother would be when they brought her breakfast in bed.They planned to make French toast and chicken porridge.They had watched their mother in the kitchen.There was nothing to it.Jenna and Jeff knew exactly what

40、to do.The big day came at last.The alarm rang at 6 a.m.The pair went down the stairs quietly to the kitchen.They decided to boil the porridge first.They put some rice into a pot of water and left it to boil while they made the French toast.Jeff broke two eggs into a plate and added in some milk.Jenn

41、a found the bread and put two slices into the egg mixture.Next,Jeff turned on the second stove burner to heat up the frying pan.Everything was going smoothly until Jeff started frying the bread.The pan was too hot and the bread turned black within seconds.Jenna threw the burnt piece into the sink an

42、d put in the other slice of bread.This time,she turned down the fire so it cooked nicely.Then Jeff noticed steam shooting out of the pot and the lid starting to shake.The next minute,the porridge boiled over and put out the fire.Jenna panicked.Thankfully,Jeff stayed calm and turned off the gas quick

43、ly.But the stove was a mess now.Jenna told Jeff to clean it up so they could continue to cook the rest of the porridge.But Jeffs hand touched the hot burner and he gave a cry of pain.Jenna made him put his hand in cold water.Then she caught the smell of burning.Oh dear!The piece of bread in the pan

44、had turned black as well.注意：1.续写词数应为 150 左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。As the twins looked around them in disappointment,their father appeared The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up.首句精研Para.1:The mother said,“This chocolate is a reward for your imagination:a window-opening cat!”

45、Q1:How did Ben feel upon hearing his mothers words?Nervous?Surprised?Embarrassed?Q2:How can we write anything in Para.1 to show Bens“bad attitude”mentioned in Para.2?Q3:Why did Ben have some chocolates in his hand in Para.2?What other rewards might be mentioned in Para.1?在构思第一段的续写内容时，务必参照第二段首句，寻找续写线

46、索。在构思第一段的续写内容时，务必参照第二段首句，寻找续写线索。研读两段给出句，想想它们给我们提供了哪些续写线索？研读两段给出句，想想它们给我们提供了哪些续写线索？天空英语工作室天空英语工作室阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。A MOTHERS DAY SURPRISE The twins were filled with excitement as they thought of the surprise they were planning for Mothers Day.How pleased and proud Mother would be w

47、hen they brought her breakfast in bed.They planned to make French toast and chicken porridge.They had watched their mother in the kitchen.There was nothing to it.Jenna and Jeff knew exactly what to do.The big day came at last.The alarm rang at 6 a.m.The pair went down the stairs quietly to the kitch

48、en.They decided to boil the porridge first.They put some rice into a pot of water and left it to boil while they made the French toast.Jeff broke two eggs into a plate and added in some milk.Jenna found the bread and put two slices into the egg mixture.Next,Jeff turned on the second stove burner to

49、heat up the frying pan.Everything was going smoothly until Jeff started frying the bread.The pan was too hot and the bread turned black within seconds.Jenna threw the burnt piece into the sink and put in the other slice of bread.This time,she turned down the fire so it cooked nicely.Then Jeff notice

50、d steam shooting out of the pot and the lid starting to shake.The next minute,the porridge boiled over and put out the fire.Jenna panicked.Thankfully,Jeff stayed calm and turned off the gas quickly.But the stove was a mess now.Jenna told Jeff to clean it up so they could continue to cook the rest of