2024年读后续写沉浸式步步写作专题07如何替换高分词汇.docx

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1、专题07 如何替换高分词汇要增添读后续写的表达效果，让学生写出内容具体的续写，须有一定词汇量的积累，特别要注意避免使用泛泛而谈的上义词，应该多使用具体的下义词使表达更加准确到位。当别人的人物对话全文say，而你的人物对话用的是yell, murmur, add，不仅高下立判能让老师眼前一亮，还比那些优美的句子来得实用！一、身体动作词汇头部的动作词 【点头】nod ones head The one in charge nodded his head.负责的那个人点了点头。【摇头】shake ones head He shook his head in disapproval.他摇了摇头，表示反

2、对。眉眼的动作词【皱眉】frown Paula frowned, suddenly wary. 宝拉皱了皱眉头，突然警惕起来。【看】notice 注意，observe 观察， stare 盯，glance 一瞥，gaze 凝视注视，glare 怒视 She glared at me. 她眼睛瞪着我。For hours she sat gazing the stars. 几个小时她坐着凝视着天上的星星。【眼睛闪烁+某种情感色彩】shine/ sparkle/ twinkle with+ excitement/ joy/ pride 等表示感情色彩的名词，表示眼睛闪烁着xx情绪。Her eyes

3、sparkled with excitement. 她的眼睛由于兴奋而发亮。Her eyes twinkled with delight. 她的眼睛闪烁着喜悦的光芒。【瞪大眼睛】ones eyes widened Her eyes widened and she put a hand over her mouth.她瞪大双眼，捂住嘴巴。鼻口的动作词【闻，擤鼻涕】smell 闻，sniff 嗅、擤鼻涕The dog sniffed suspiciously at the stranger. 狗疑惑地嗅着那个陌生人。She buried her face in her handkerchief a

4、nd sniffed loudly.她把脸埋在手帕里，大声地擤着鼻子。【哭】howling(嚎哭)， sob, weep, burst into tears, burst out crying. (ones eyes) brim with/be filled with tears1. A lump came to his throat.2. Her eyes were red from crying.3. Her eyes brimmed with tears.4. Tears coursed/trickled/streamed/ran down her cheeks.【问答】ask 询问，a

5、nswer 回答，reply 回复I am not a weary, mother. The little girl replied. “我还不累呢，妈妈。”那小姑娘回答说。【大声说，叫喊】yell大喊，shout大喊，cry out 喊叫，give a cry喊叫一声，scream尖叫 You are a coward. Mr. Brown cried out. 布朗先生喊道：“你是个胆小鬼。”【小声说，低语】whisper 耳语，murmur嘀咕，mumble 含糊地说Thanks, Granddad. she whispers and runs into her room. “谢谢外公。

6、”她悄悄说，然后转身跑进自己房间。【建议道】offer，propose，suggestPretend to break your leg. Hermione suggested. “假装把腿摔断。”赫敏建议道。【其他口部的动作词】announce 宣布，add补充说道，continue 继续说道，explain 解释，agree 同意地说，blurt out 脱口而出，cheer 鼓舞， sigh 叹气，cough 咳嗽，yawn 打哈欠I shouldnt tell you that! he blurted out. “我不应该把这个告诉你们的! ”他脱口说道。When I suggeste

7、d a drink, she coughed disapprovingly. 我提议喝一杯时，她咳了一下表示反对。“Its hard learning a new language at my age.” He sighed. “到我这个年纪再学一门外语就难了”，他叹气道。手的动作词【击打】hit 打击撞击，tap/ pat 轻拍轻打，pound/ punch 猛击，beat 连续击打、敲打，slap 掌击掌掴She was hitting them with her umbrella. 她当时正在用她的雨伞打他们。【抓】seize/ grasp/ grab/ clutch 拿、抓，take

8、hold of 握住， catch hold of 抓住、占有，hold on to 紧紧抓住，坚持I managed to grab her hand. 我设法抓住了她的手。Gill seized my hand and shook it heartily. 吉尔突然抓住我的手, 热情地和我握手。【其他的手部动作词】pull 拉，push 推，drag 拽，pinch 捏，wipe 擦，rub 揉，hug/ embrace 拥抱，press 按压，roll 摇，pick up 捡起 type 打字，pack 打包，throw 投掷，wave 挥动，tie 系，clean 清理，pass/ h

9、and 递给，point 指，fold 折叠，unfold 打开I want to pinch him because he is so adorable! 因为他太可爱，我很想捏他。Just press the button, like this. 按这个按钮就可以了，像这样。First, you take a bit of paper, fold it in half, fold it again, unfold it.首先拿一些纸，对折，再次对折，打开。When he sees the police, he waves to the police.当他看见警察，他向警察挥挥手。脚&腿的动

10、作词【站】be on ones feet 站起来，rise to ones feet 站起来，spring/ jump to ones feet 腾的站起来， struggle to ones feet 挣扎着站起来I jumped to my feet, completely thunderstruck. 我像是受到惊雷轰击一般，一下子就站立起来。【走】drag ones feet 慢吞吞地走，pace 来回走踱步，stagger out/ stumble 跌跌撞撞地走，move 移动，stroll/ wander 散步漫步She strolled in the sunshine. 她在阳光

11、下漫步。【跑】jog 慢跑 ，trot 小跑、快步走，turn tail掉头就跑、逃跑He saw them turn tail and disappear back into the cool trees. 他看见他们掉头就跑，消失在阴凉的树丛中。【其他的腿脚动作词】dash/ rush 冲，kneel down跪下，get down on ones knee 单膝跪地，slip 滑到，crawl 爬、匍匐前进，kick 踢Our baby is just starting to crawl. 我们的宝宝刚开始会爬。Each team tries to kick the ball into

12、the other teams net.每组都试图把球踢到另一对的球网里。其他的动作词【耸肩】shrug ones shoulder I didnt say anything. I shrugged my shoulders.我什么也没说，只是耸了耸肩。【背部动作】lie 躺，fall 倒下，crowd 挤，tremble 颤抖，lean 倚靠，hide 藏 He leaned his back against the wall.他背靠在墙上。Wilbur trembled when he heard this speech.威尔伯听到这番话，浑身都发抖了。二、心理动作词汇【害怕】horror

13、, frightened, scared, speechless, in(a)panic, in a cold sweat, be filled with terror, rooted to the spot, freeze, ones knees feel weak, (hands)sweat 1. She was too frightened to tell her family what had happened.2. His heart was pounding, as if he were frightened.3. Liza was so frightened that she c

14、ouldnt make a sound.4. I bowed my head timidly and dared not look at my fathers cloudy face.5. My brain is blank. I just want to leave this horrible place.【高兴、激动】（动词）dance, jump/leap with joy, feel a surge of joy/ excitement, whistle, overcome with happiness/ delight /joy / excitement, (ones eyes) t

15、winkle,(ones heart) beat/ pound wildly;(形容词）delighted, overjoyed, excited, thrilled, wild with joy1. When she knew. . .she felt excited/thrilled.2. When she knew. . .her eyes twinkled with excitement.3. When she knew. . . her heart was pounding with wild joy.4. When she knew. . .a wild excitement to

16、ok hold of her.6. Knowing.she felt a surge of excitement.【伤心、痛苦】 feel a surge of sadness, (sadness) surge within sb. , ones heart ache, overcome with sadness 1. A sadness came over her.2. Her heart ached, tears streaming down her cheeks.3. Numb with grief, she became speechless.4. Feeling a surge of

17、 sadness, she couldnt help crying bitterly.5. Sadness surging within her, she burst into tears.【生气、愤怒】felt/ get angry/furious, feel a surge of anger/rage/fury, eyes blaze, storm out of/into/off, storm/say angrily, sth. makes sb. s blood boil, sth. makes sb. extremely angry, clasp ones fists/teeth, s

18、b. s blood is up1. Sam stood rooted to the spot, his eyes blazing with anger.2. He felt so angry that he stormed out of the room, slamming the door furiously behind him.3. Boiling with rage, he shook his fist at me.4. Filled with fury, she was unable to utter a single word.【鼓起勇气】pluck up/take/gather

19、/summon up ones courage 1. He summoned up his courage and lodged a protest with his father.2. I finally plucked up the courage to ask her for. .【毫不犹豫】without even thinking, without delay, without hesitation, without a second thought 1. She could hardly wait to. . .3. Hardly thinking/Without even thi

20、nking, he ran to. . .【欣慰】breath a sigh of relief, sigh with relief, to ones relief 1. It seemed as if/that someone was coming to save us.2. Oftentimes our tears of remorse reveal a glimmer of hope.3. A wave of relief flooded through me. . .4. A wave of relief washed over him. . .1.ltsuddlyoccur1【徒劳】

21、in vain, no use, without success1. But bad luck for me, I failed in my attempt to persuade her.2. She closed her eyes tightly in a vain attempt to hold back the tears.3. All our efforts were in vain.【茫然】at a loss, at sea, blankly, be lost in a fog1. She kept pacing, wondering what to do next.2. With

22、 tears streaming down her face, she didnt know what to do next.3. With tears streaming down her face, she was unsure of what to do next.4. She was at a loss what to do.5. He was in a dilemma about whether to do or not.【想法】occur to, hit, strike, flash into ones mind, crowd in ones mind, dawn on1. It

23、suddenly occurred to him that.2. It hit me that I had a choice.3. A thought struck her that. . .4. It dawned that. . .5. An idea occurred/came to me that6. A ludicrous thought/idea flashed/came through Harrys mind.【惊讶】to ones surprise, strangely enough【领悟】realize, echo, linger, whisper in ones mind,

24、 down deep in ones heart直到意识到倒装句：Not until+时间状语did sb. realize/notice that+从句强调句：It was only+时间状语that sb. realized that+从句还记得某人的话：1. Ones words echoed/rang out in ones ears.2. Ones words/voice/lingered/whispered in ones mind/head3. Ones head was still full of. . .经历与教训1. What a/an valuable/useful/gr

25、eat/painful lesson she taught me/I learned from her!2. What a/an enjoyable/pleasant/wonderful/unforgettable/memorable/valuable experience I had!3. Down deep in my heart, it was an interesting experience I had ever had.三、逻辑关系词汇【首先.其次.此外.】first/ firstly to start with; to begin with; in the first place

26、second/ secondly in the second place; next; in the next placethird/ then/ besides whats more; furthermore; in addition; moreoverfirst.second.third. One is. Another relates to. A third +n.One is that the content of online courses is varied. Another relates to the flexibility of online classes, the ti

27、me and place of online classes are not limited. A third advantage concerns its convenience, students and teachers are very convenient to attend classes. The content of the explanation is also convenient to record.首先是网课的内容丰富多样。其次是关于网课的灵活性，网课的时间和地点不受限制。第三个优点是关于便利性，学生与老师上课都很方便，讲解内容也方便记录。【因为】because due

28、 to; on account of; on the grounds of+词语/ that+句子Hume refused to pay on the grounds that he hadnt consented. He hadnt hired the painter.休谟拒绝支付帐单，因为他并没有签订协议，没有雇用那个油漆匠。【目的是为了.】because due to; on account of; on the grounds of+词语/ that+句子Hume refused to pay on the grounds that he hadnt consented. He had

29、nt hired the painter.休谟拒绝支付帐单，因为他并没有签订协议，没有雇用那个油漆匠。【所以】so= , as a result,. .therefore,. .consequently,.【尽管】although= .admitting that,.【反复】again and again=重复地 repeatedly，over and over，time and time again【最后】finally，at last= 迟早，最终 eventually，sooner or later，ultimately【在我看来】In my opinion= 在我看来，就我而言 in

30、my view，in my belief，as far as I can see，in my mind，as far as I am concerned【事实上】 in fact=事实上 in reality，in effect，as a matter of fact，practically，virtually，actually【如果】 if= 只要as long as.四、常见动作词汇【建议】suggest recommend; propose; advise I would strongly recommend that you set some practical and specifi

31、c goals. 我强烈建议你设定一些实际和具体的目标。【帮忙，帮助】help do sb. a favor; give sb. a hand; help sb. OutId like you to do me a favor.我想请你帮我一个忙【认为，觉得】think be convinced that; hold the view that; take the attitude that; It is ones view/ belief that.I hold the view that it is in students interest to allow them to have pa

32、rt-time jobs. 我认为让学生们做兼职工作对他们有利。【为.做好准备】be ready for make full preparations for; pave the way for; lay a solid foundation for; lay the groundwork forTrump sent his new secretary of state, Mike Pompeo, to Pyongyang to lay the groundwork for a meeting.特朗普指派新任国务卿迈克蓬佩奥前往平壤，为双方会谈做准备。【参加】join; attend part

33、icipate in; get involved in; take an active part inGet involved in activities you enjoy outside school, whether those are sports, art classes, dancing classes, or whatever triggers your interest. 参加你喜欢的校外的活动，不管他们是体育项目、艺术班、舞蹈班或者其他任何能激起你兴趣的东西。【能够做】can; be able to be capable of doing sth.; have access

34、to; be competent to do; have the ability to do; be equipped with the ability to doWe must ensure that all patients have access to high quality care. 我们必须确保所有的病人都能够得到高质量的护理。【意识到】realize be aware of; be conscious of; arouse ones awareness of sth.We hope it can arouse students awareness of the water cr

35、isis. 我们希望这个活动能激起学生们对水资源的危机意识。【应该做】should do; need to do be supposed to; ought to; it couldnt be better if you could doYou ought to eat some salad instead.你应该吃一些沙拉。【吸引注意力】get ones attention capture/grab/attract ones attention; catch ones eyesHis dedication to science and academics during his teenage

36、 years grabbed the attention of some prominent people.在他的少年时代，他对科学和学术的投入吸引了几位杰出人士的注意。【提高，增强】improve enhance; promote; boostInter learning is the process of mixing multiple subjects to enhance your ability to learn.交叉学习是将多个科目混合在一起，以提高学习能力的过程。【努力】高分: spare no effort to do sth. ; make great efforts to

37、do sth.均分: do ones best to do sth. ; try ones best to do sth.The government has made great efforts to control water pollution.政府在水污染防治方面做了很大的努力。【考虑】高分: take account of; take. . . into account/consideration均分: think about; considerOne must take the audience into account when making speeches.人们在演讲时必须要

38、考虑听众。【试图, 设法】高分: seek/attempt to do; make an attempt to/at均分: try to doThe team made an attempt to climb/at climbing the mountain.这个队尝试着爬上那座山。【解决】Solve resolve; settle; deal/do/cope with; handleNo matter how complicated the situation was, he could cope with it successfully.不论情况多么复杂, 他都能应对自如。【发生】happ

39、en occur; take place; come aboutThis years event will take place on June 19th, a week earlier than usual. 今年的活动将于6月19日举行, 比往年提前一周。【关心】高分: concern; be concerned about/for均分: worry; careWhat have you been doing recently? I have been concerned about you since I heard you got injured in an accident. 你最近

40、在做什么? 自从听说你在事故中受伤以来, 我一直很担心你。【承认】高分: acknowledge均分: accept; admitHe is acknowledged as/to be one of the greatest pianists.他被认为是杰出的钢琴家之一。【实现目标】高分: fulfil ones ambition; achieve ones goal均分: realise ones dreamShe fulfills her ambition of becoming a famous writer.她实现了当一名著名作家的理想。【保持; 保存; 保护】高分: preserve

41、; maintain; hold均分: keep; protectThese eighteenth century oil paintings are preserved so well that the visitors are greatly amazed.这些18世纪的油画保存得这么好, 使参观者大为惊叹。【拓宽视野】高分: broaden ones horizon均分: open ones eyesFew would disagree that travel broadens ones horizon. 旅游有助于开阔眼界, 很少有人会不同意这一点。【拜访; 参观】高分: pay a

42、visit to; drop in on/at均分: see; visitWill you drop in on us tomorrow evening for a talk? 你明晚顺便来和我们谈谈好吗?【投入/花费时间】高分: devote ones time/life to doing sth. ; commit sth. to (doing) sth.均分: spend time doing; take time to doShe devoted all her life to medical work for Chinese women and children. 她为中国的妇女儿童

43、医疗事业贡献了毕生精力。【感谢】高分: appreciate (sb. ) doing sth. ; show gratitude to; be grateful to; acknowledge(公开感谢)均分: thankWe are grateful to you for what you did for us. 我们对你为我们所做的一切深表感谢。【掌握】高分: have a command of; have a good knowledge of均分: grasp/masterApplicants will be expected to have a good command of En

44、glish.申请者必须精通英语。【想要做; 期待做; 愿意】高分: long/desire/intend to do; be willing to; be dying/longing for; anticipate均分: want to doAre you willing to do public service work without pay?你愿意义务做公共服务工作吗?【理解; 弄明白】高分: figure out; make sense of均分: understand; knowHe figured out how to guess the right answers, so he

45、got good grades.他弄清楚了如何猜对答案, 所以得了高分。【记得; 记住】高分: keep/bear. . . in mind; keep/bear in mind that. . .均分: rememberIt is as well to bear in mind that laughter is a great releaser of tension. 你最好记住笑是消除紧张情绪的良方。【导致, 引起】高分: generate; lead to; bring about; result in; contribute to; give rise to均分: causeAlcoh

46、ol contributes to 100, 000 deaths a year in the U. S.在美国, 酒精每年造成10万人死亡。【提到】高分: refer to均分: talk about/of; speak of; mentionThe scientist referred to global warming at least three times in his speech. 那位科学家在演讲中至少3次提到了全球气候变暖。【后悔; 遗憾】高分: regret doing sth. /that/wh-从句/to say (tell, inform. . . )均分: be s

47、orry to/for/about/thatI regret that I didnt follow your advice.我真后悔没听你的劝告。【注意; 重视】高分: attach importance to; lay/place emphasis on; take. . . seriously均分: pay attention to; focus onLearning strategies, to which teachers attach importance/significance, havent drawn enough attention of students.老师认为重要的学习策略还没有引起学生们足够的重视。【忽视】高分: neglect; pay no attention to均分: ignoreIf you are not carefu