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1、优点英语专题01 生活态度 兴趣爱好 精神品格（人与自我）2023年高考读后续写话题分类写作技巧与高级词句【读后续写】1（2023春广东江门高三校联考开学考试）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。When I was a child, my mother told my sister, who had a 10-inch very obvious scar (伤疤) on her arm, “Nancy, if you ignore the scar, other people will ignore it. It does not mean they w

2、ill not notice it, but it means it will not matter to them if it doesnt matter to you.”It never occurred to me that something like this would happen to my son years later. Sending a child off to college can certainly be stressful for concerned parents. It was 2018 that my son went off to college. He

3、 rarely contacted us. I couldnt help asking about other aspects, which sometimes made him complain that I didnt treat him as an adult. To be honest, my son is excellent. Some of my friends always tell me that they admire my sons characters and they hope their sons could have some of them. Unexpected

4、ly, it was 4 oclock in the morning in 2020, when I received the phone call. “This is the emergency room calling and your son was just brought in with severe burns on his face, neck and arms. We have called for an aircraft and are going to fly him to the burn unit in Seattle.” Seattle was 350 miles f

5、rom his college, so we knew immediately this was serious. The doctor described the reason, which caused the burns. At 6 am, my son and his friends decided to barbecue hamburgers in the courtyard of their apartment. When they lit the charcoal, it burst into flames because they had sprayed too much ga

6、soline. The flames caught my sons shirt tail and shot from his waist to well over his head. Fortunately, one of the boys who was quick-minded grasped my son and rolled him on the grass. While it saved his life, it was not in shape to save him from severe burns and the terrible scars. After he recove

7、red from the treatments, the doctors told him they would not do plastic surgery for 6 months because it takes that long for the skin to stop shrinking and wrinkling. 注意：1. 续写词数应为150左右;2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。The doctors suggested he return to college with scars of severe burns temporarily. _So I told h

8、im about Nancys childhood. _【答案】参考范文：The doctors suggested he return to college with scars of severe burns temporarily. Although I knew that there were going to be storms in life, it was hard for me to imagine that a handsome and sunny boy would return to his classmates with scars. I really didnt kn

9、ow how to comfort him. After all, the scars were on him. Not all of us could be able to turn that particular page successfully. It was at this time that I remembered what my mother said to my sister. It was those words that enabled her to overcome her psychological barriers and lead a smooth life. S

10、o I told him about Nancys childhood. I passed the wisdom on to my son. Realizing my complex feelings, he smiled and comforted me instead. He took my advice to heart and returned to school with his head held high. By the end of the six-month waiting period, he decided that the scars did not matter. S

11、o he made the decision to give up any plastic surgery. We all have “scars” that we believe will keep people away from us. Put your imperfections out of your mind and concentrate on what you value within yourself, and your beauty will shine through.【导语】本文是以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者小时候听到母亲告诉妹妹南希要以乐观的态度去面对自己的伤疤，而作

12、者儿子也经历烧伤事故而留下伤疤，作者把妹妹的经历告诉自己的儿子鼓励他勇敢面对。从故事中感悟我们学会把不完美抛诸脑后，专注于自己看重的东西，自己的美丽就会散发光芒。【详解】由第一段首句内容“医生建议他暂时带着严重烧伤的伤疤回到大学。”可知，第一段可描写作者想到自己的儿子要承受别人异样眼光的难过的心理活动以及对儿子的鼓励的做法。由第二段首句内容“于是我告诉他南希的童年。”可知，第二段可描写作者为了帮助儿子告诉他妹妹南希的经历之后，他儿子的转变。2.续写线索：难过考验安慰鼓励改变感悟3.词汇激活行为类.想象：imagine/picture/think of.安慰：comfort/quiet/soot

13、he.克服：overcome/rise above/get over sth情绪类.微笑：smile/beam on.珍惜：value/cherish【点睛】高分句型1.Although I knew that there were going to be storms in life, it was hard for me to imagine that a handsome and sunny boy would return to his classmates with scars.（由连接词although引导让步状语从句）高分句型2.Put your imperfections ou

14、t of your mind and concentrate on what you value within yourself, and your beauty will shine through.（由祈使句以及what引导的宾语从句）2（2023全国高三专题练习）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。Surviving Mount RainierBad luck and poor timing left Kart and three climbers stuck on Mount Rainier for several long days. They

15、faced mountain climbings toughest tests. One man suffered altitude sickness; ice and rockfall rained down at night; cold nights in a tent that got torn left them hypothermic(体温过低的). Calm confidence, skill and the courage to continue up the route, despite illness and injury, likely saved their lives.

16、The climbers set out on a Friday, camping low on the route the first night because they were concerned about rockfall after a climber had recently died in an accident at the routes typical high camp. On Saturday, at about 10,500 feet, one of the climbers became sick from the altitude, which began to

17、 slow them down. They needed to keep moving, so they put him in the lead so he could move at a pace he was comfortable with. By Sunday evening, the ill climber was exhausted, and they had to make an unplanned camp on steep snow. They were in a bad placeon a platform about the size of a table under a

18、n ice cliff. The wind got stronger during the night, ripping the tent and snapping the poles. They tried to secure it by placing their packs and rocks around the edges. Finally, they just stuck their feet between the rocks and held the tent with their bodies. It was a cold night.注意：1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左

19、右;2. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好;Paragraph 1:On Monday, they managed to call 911 but forgot to ask how to communicate with the rangers (护林员) before losing signal. _Paragraph 2On Wednesday, they gathered everything and decided to carry on with their climb. _【答案】One possible version:On Monday, they managed t

20、o call 911 but forgot to ask how to communicate with the rangers (护林员) before losing signal. They set up what was left of the tent as best they could and stayed where they were, praying for the early arrival of their salvation. But for several days, they watched beyond all hope as high winds prevent

21、ed the rangers attempts at a helicopter rescue. Their food was running out and they shared a single bottle of snow melt each day. Then an icefall buried their tent platform and squeezed them together. It was impossible to climb down. On Wednesday, they gathered everything and decided to carry on wit

22、h their climb. They climbed up slowly and carefully, resting when they were weak. It didnt take long until the wind froze them in place. That was the scariest moment. Their spirits began to sink and they started to doubt if they could continue. Kart thought of all the people who loved him, and it re

23、ally hit him they must be worried. As he tried to climb again and again, he just kept yelling out to his friends, “We have to get there.”However, as they got onto the final slope to the summit, the weather cleared. Suddenly, a helicopter appeared out of nowhere. They were rescued.【导语】本篇书面表达是读后续写，文章讲

24、述了Kart和三位被困雷尼尔山登山者的遭遇。故事按照时间顺序展开。他们在周五出发，周六，一位队员的高原反应减缓他们的速度，让他们在周日不得不更换临时扎营地点在冰崖下一个桌子那么大的平台上。糟糕的帐篷的选址以及恶劣的天气使他们帐篷严重受损，让他们度过寒冷的一晚上。周一他们联系上911，但是恶劣天气让救援无法到达，食物要耗尽，此时也无法下山。因此，周三他们聚集所有物品决定继续向上攀登上山，历经艰辛与危险，终于爬到山顶，天气放晴，他们得救了。【详解】1. 段落续写：由第一段首句内容“周一，他们设法拨打了911，但在失去信号之前忘记询问如何与护林员沟通。”可知，第一段可描写他们只能在原地等待救援，但是

25、恶劣的天气让救援人员和直升飞机过不来，食品也要耗尽，冰崩让他们本来就很小的地方无法立足，也无法下山。由第二段首句内容“星期三，他们收集了所有东西，并决定继续攀登。”可知，第二段可描写他们向上攀登，虽然中途遇到困难，仍然坚持到最后，爬上山顶，得救了。2. 续写线索：等待救援希望落空决定继续攀登困难重重克服困难爬到山顶得救3. 词汇激活：行为类：期盼：pray for/expect/hope for尽最大努力做某事：try to do/spare no effort to do大声喊：yell out /shout out/speak in a loud voice情绪类：失去信心：lose he

26、art/ their spirits begin to sink积极：positive attitude/act positively害怕：scared/frightened 【点睛】【高分句型1】They set up what was left of the tent as best they could and stayed where they were, praying for the early arrival of their salvation. (由what引导宾语从句、where引导的地点状语从句和非谓语动词作做伴随状语)【高分句型2】It didnt take long

27、until the wind froze them in place.(until引导的时间状语从句)【高分句型3】It was his brave heart and strong faith that could make something unusual happen finally. (由It was.that结构引导的强调句型) 3（2022秋江苏南通高三统考阶段练习）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。Thin, average, and undisciplined, I was the underdog of the boys basket

28、ball tryouts (选拔赛) in seventh grade. Making the team was very important to me. Although I was extremely nervous, I truly thought I would make the team. But I went in overly optimistic, and quickly faced a cruel reality check.When on the court, I huffed and puffed like an old man on his last legs; cl

29、early, I was out of shape and having trouble keeping up. When it hit me that this was only the first day, and that there was a second to follow, I realized I would have to step it up in order to gain a spot on the team.Unfortunately, day two went exactly like day one: I missed shots, passed badly li

30、ke an out-of-breath fool. Hoping the coach was not watching all my bad moves, I had trouble keeping a positive attitude. Finally, Coach-who at five-foot-four usually seemed small, posted the lists of the Boys A and B Teams. Everybody quickly ran to catch a glimpse of the chosen few.After scanning th

31、e list once, twice, three times, my name was nowhere. Although I had predicted the disaster that had now settled on me, with my head hanging. I slowly walked to the car. This experience definitely had not gone as I planned.On the way home, I complained “How could that foolish boy is a better choice

32、than me? And”“Adam!” my mom cut me off. “Why dont you realize maybe you need a little more practice? Youd better go to basketball camps next summer.”Although I did not want to believe her, I knew it was true. Failing to make the team was nobodys fault but mine. Right then and there, in the middle of

33、 my anger, I realized I had to get my act together.注意：1.续写词数应为150左右：2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Paragraph 1: Then I threw myself into as many basketball opportunities as I could find._Paragraph 2: When I took part in the eighth-grade basketball tryouts,I was moderate,swift and strong._【答案】Then I threw mysel

34、f into as many basketball opportunities as I could find. Every day, I insisted on running 10 kilometers and jumping ropes 1000 times after school to increase my energy level and physical strength. Additionally, I practiced passing, dribbling and shooting with my friends every day to improve my baske

35、tball skills. When the summer holidays came, I signed up for a basketball camp, where I got a lot of professional basketball knowledge and training from the coaches. Gradually, I found myself making great progress.When I took part in the eighth-grade basketball tryouts, I was moderate, swift and str

36、ong. When on the court, I kept running without any trouble, dribbling freely and passing the basketball accurately. As long as I got the chance, I would try to shoot. One, two, three I scored ten goals at last. There was no doubt that I succeeded in becoming a member of the basketball team. It was m

37、y determination and efforts that helped me achieve my dream.【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者七年级时参加男子篮球队选拔赛，从最初的盲目自信，到认清现实的过程。作者从选拔赛中发现了自己的不足和差距，从而开始努力训练、学习技术，最终取得了巨大的进步，一年后顺利地通过了八年级的选拔赛。【详解】1. 段落续写： 由第一段首句内容“然后我把自己投入到我能够找到的尽可能多的练习篮球的机会。”可知，第一段可描写作者是如何来练习篮球，提高自身技术和体能水平的。 由第二段首句内容“当我参加八年级篮球选拔赛时，我表现得温和、敏捷、强壮。”可知，第

38、二段可描写作者在八年级选拔赛上的表现，以及最终成功入选。2. 续写线索：开始自我训练-参加篮球夏令营-体能提升、技术进步-参加八年级选拔赛-表现突出-成功入选-感悟点题3.词汇激活行为类坚持：insist on/stick to增加、增长：increase/boost提高、改善：improve/enhance参加：take part in/join in情绪类温和的、适中的：moderate/temperate没有疑问：no doubt/ no question【点睛】高分句型1When the summer holidays came, I signed up for a basketbal

39、l camp, where I got a lot of professional basketball knowledge and training from the coaches.（运用了以连词when引导的时间状语从句和关系副词where引导的非限制性定语从句。）高分句型2 It was my determination and efforts that helped me achieve my dream.（运用了强调句。）4（2023秋广东高三校联考期末）阅读下面材料, 根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段, 使之构成一篇完整的短文。Morty was checking out hi

40、s library books when it caught his eye-a poster for Adventure Rocks Kids Camp. “Check this out!” Morty called to Ben and Fred as he grabbed three brochures and dashed to catch up with his best buddies. They all stopped, books in hands, to stare at the pictures of kids flying above canyons suspended from zip lines. They instantly b